Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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scarletegret
Sasha Fenn
Sasha Fenn
Poem Published
Today 8:20am
Today 8:20am
Fallen Daydream
A fallen angel
and a fallen sky
a shard of glass
in a broken eye
a stream of blood
down a hill of bones
makes the giants laugh
while the children cry
If I surround myself
in a swamp of pain
no one will hear me scream
it's hard to hear
what you disdain
when you suffocate
in a sea of fear
A crack of dawn
spills out the tar
from the newnight sky
and it's unhealed scar
as it's torn in two
by hands of blue
tight and fast in the grip of
Exsanguination
If you wish to...
and a fallen sky
a shard of glass
in a broken eye
a stream of blood
down a hill of bones
makes the giants laugh
while the children cry
If I surround myself
in a swamp of pain
no one will hear me scream
it's hard to hear
what you disdain
when you suffocate
in a sea of fear
A crack of dawn
spills out the tar
from the newnight sky
and it's unhealed scar
as it's torn in two
by hands of blue
tight and fast in the grip of
Exsanguination
If you wish to...
#anxiety
#SelfHarm
#FeelingTrapped
#healing
#surreal
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1 Comment
PeaceFlpw
Peace Flow
Peace Flow
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:46pm
Yesterday 3:46pm
What is true Evil?
Imagine someone who is extremely internally suffering....Imagine some surrounding such individual; smiling, laughing, joking knowing there's a serious issue going on with such individual; imagine such individual wants to be isolated from people especially these people who but only pour "gasoline" awaiting an "explosion"....plenty excuses for terrorists to continue terrorism....what is life? what is one doing this for when all around seems like being lead to slaughter in the name of slight, spite, greed, etc. when one questions their existantance in an illusionary cycle disguised as anything...
#dark
#emptiness
#apathy
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ElusiveSleepfall
MatthewZ
MatthewZ
Poem Published
19th Feb 2019 7:22pm
19th Feb 2019 7:22pm
Hold Me Please For One More Day.
If I gave my heart to you,
Could you make it one from two?
And if I held you near, in pain
Could you shield me from the rain?
I live my life within your heart
Where golden drops of sunshine start
And every day without you near
Reveals a blue, despondent tear
What is black and what is white?
And is it even worth the fight?
Night's another shade of blue
When living with a heart this true
Walking on an emerald pass
Immune to touch from weathered glass
All alone with thoughts of you
With...
Could you make it one from two?
And if I held you near, in pain
Could you shield me from the rain?
I live my life within your heart
Where golden drops of sunshine start
And every day without you near
Reveals a blue, despondent tear
What is black and what is white?
And is it even worth the fight?
Night's another shade of blue
When living with a heart this true
Walking on an emerald pass
Immune to touch from weathered glass
All alone with thoughts of you
With...
#sadness
#love
#loneliness
#dark
#death
59 reads
26 Comments
Thedeadinme
Poem Published
19th Feb 2019 4:53pm
19th Feb 2019 4:53pm
As I Unravel
Pulling strings always seemed so dull
Until the seams gave way and unfurled woe onto the world
A new tomorrow bitter in its frailty gives way to absence
Darkness absorbs the sun
Vanguard silhouettes slowly caress all in noir
Seeping from my cracked soul
Rancid with disdain my disorder spawns and multiplies
A wave of offerings hinder not the reaping
Wreathed in remains the spectre walks alone
Absolution in devastation, haggard with lamenting
Worn out fingers grasp strings with apprehension
A new world ripe with shadows
...
Until the seams gave way and unfurled woe onto the world
A new tomorrow bitter in its frailty gives way to absence
Darkness absorbs the sun
Vanguard silhouettes slowly caress all in noir
Seeping from my cracked soul
Rancid with disdain my disorder spawns and multiplies
A wave of offerings hinder not the reaping
Wreathed in remains the spectre walks alone
Absolution in devastation, haggard with lamenting
Worn out fingers grasp strings with apprehension
A new world ripe with shadows
...
#dark
#MentalHealth
#despair
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Tenderloin
Poem Published
19th Feb 2019 2:27am
19th Feb 2019 2:27am
Let There Be No Illusion
Allow the candle to dim
and return from the possession
that so easily took you
abducting the integrity
that you held so close
before the slide ride
took you to addictive treasures
putting a fraudulent spin
on heroic escapades
that will never happen
retreating once again
to the bland, cruel
celibacy of flawed reality
shamed again
like the little kid
that let the older man
weave his way
into the wide-eyed innocence
of future potential
I am not always okay
to be unreasonably marked
by a...
and return from the possession
that so easily took you
abducting the integrity
that you held so close
before the slide ride
took you to addictive treasures
putting a fraudulent spin
on heroic escapades
that will never happen
retreating once again
to the bland, cruel
celibacy of flawed reality
shamed again
like the little kid
that let the older man
weave his way
into the wide-eyed innocence
of future potential
I am not always okay
to be unreasonably marked
by a...
#identity
#abuse
#shame
39 reads
9 Comments
Thedeadinme
Poem Published
19th Feb 2019 1:12am
19th Feb 2019 1:12am
Into Shadow
Odd sensations wash over me
Cure not the sickness for all is numb
A drop of poison for the trouble
Feed the need
Feed the need and all is well
Worthlessness devolves into nothing
"You were always better broken"
Whispers on the wind have always haunted me
Leading astray to barren paths
No footprints to guide me out
"Where were you in my torment?"
Pleas always fall upon deaf ears
Yet forked tongues rant constant
Ascend the ashes
Pipe dreams oft offer differing realities
Serve...
Cure not the sickness for all is numb
A drop of poison for the trouble
Feed the need
Feed the need and all is well
Worthlessness devolves into nothing
"You were always better broken"
Whispers on the wind have always haunted me
Leading astray to barren paths
No footprints to guide me out
"Where were you in my torment?"
Pleas always fall upon deaf ears
Yet forked tongues rant constant
Ascend the ashes
Pipe dreams oft offer differing realities
Serve...
#depression
#suicide
#despair
51 reads
1 Comment
corpselily2185
Poem Published
17th Feb 2019 8:50am
17th Feb 2019 8:50am
The Psyckotik's Prayer
#dark
#death
#evil
#scary
#nightmares
47 reads
1 Comment
Sky_dancer
Poem Published
16th Feb 2019 9:22pm
16th Feb 2019 9:22pm
Eris Discordia
Societies' fairest; a gathered ball, but Eris was not invited.
An apple sent, taste of contention, made of gold, on it inscribed:
ΤΗΙ ΚΑΛΛΙΣΤΗΙ
Long before that "Mirror mirror" incantation
"To the most beautiful" the challenge rose.
I, chaotic goddess, weave discord.
Demigods wage war, wield thunder, name swords.
A thousand years, a thousand more, the realm of form and desire
rage in long forgotten cause.
Bore children: ...
An apple sent, taste of contention, made of gold, on it inscribed:
ΤΗΙ ΚΑΛΛΙΣΤΗΙ
Long before that "Mirror mirror" incantation
"To the most beautiful" the challenge rose.
I, chaotic goddess, weave discord.
Demigods wage war, wield thunder, name swords.
A thousand years, a thousand more, the realm of form and desire
rage in long forgotten cause.
Bore children: ...
#revenge
52 reads
9 Comments
PeaceFlpw
Peace Flow
Peace Flow
Poem Published
16th Feb 2019 6:06pm
16th Feb 2019 6:06pm
Guillotine
guilt trips running through one's mind; knowing there's the axe to grind; karma knocked so many times; prepped up nooses, guillotines;
never meant to be that guy; causing one to feel denied; at times I feel deserved to die; tired, and ones bones are dry;
I'm dead inside, I'm dead inside; they track me as if I'm alive; my heart/brain has many parasites; just let me "live" until I die;
until I die, I'm getting by; this life was never really mine....
...
never meant to be that guy; causing one to feel denied; at times I feel deserved to die; tired, and ones bones are dry;
I'm dead inside, I'm dead inside; they track me as if I'm alive; my heart/brain has many parasites; just let me "live" until I die;
until I die, I'm getting by; this life was never really mine....
...
#regret
#dark
#MentalHealth #emptiness
#MentalHealth #emptiness
43 reads
2 Comments
exvso8m1
Poem Published
16th Feb 2019 6:04pm
16th Feb 2019 6:04pm
To Come No More...
To Come No More
†††
There is an evil kind of darkness here,
Where on your souls they tend to feed,
The screams you hear cannot be ignored,
Their hunger fed by their eternal greed...
†
Candles dominate the drift of the darkness,
And gives yet another chance to play,
Fear rides the scales of the madness adorned,
And the screams overheard as they take them away...
†
To a place where return is impossible at best,
The imagination ceases covertly to exist,
Impaled in the shadows of the evil inside,
Consumed by the soul with...
†††
There is an evil kind of darkness here,
Where on your souls they tend to feed,
The screams you hear cannot be ignored,
Their hunger fed by their eternal greed...
†
Candles dominate the drift of the darkness,
And gives yet another chance to play,
Fear rides the scales of the madness adorned,
And the screams overheard as they take them away...
†
To a place where return is impossible at best,
The imagination ceases covertly to exist,
Impaled in the shadows of the evil inside,
Consumed by the soul with...
#gothic
53 reads
0 Comments
Rubiksmind91
Courtney emm
Courtney emm
Poem Published
16th Feb 2019 5:20am
16th Feb 2019 5:20am
simplicity vs toxicity
In a chamber of despair,
I yearn to be sane
where I'm painfully aware
is inside of my brain.
Holding stains from my past
that I'm forced to relive,
These walls are the last
I expect to forgive.
Inside them are demons
that feed on mistakes.
And they taunt me with reasons
my heart often breaks.
My facade has been strong,
blending in just enough.
One that always belongs
and is worthy of love.
But now it's flimsy and thin,
so the darkness escaped.
Now...
I yearn to be sane
where I'm painfully aware
is inside of my brain.
Holding stains from my past
that I'm forced to relive,
These walls are the last
I expect to forgive.
Inside them are demons
that feed on mistakes.
And they taunt me with reasons
my heart often breaks.
My facade has been strong,
blending in just enough.
One that always belongs
and is worthy of love.
But now it's flimsy and thin,
so the darkness escaped.
Now...
#sadness
#loneliness
#dark #despair
#dark #despair
42 reads
4 Comments
RexDurkin
Poem Published
15th Feb 2019 3:04am
15th Feb 2019 3:04am
Down here in Australia
Down here in Australia
there's heaps of Poisonous snakes
That hang out in the undergrowth
especially around lakes
You gotta make sure you stomp real hard
so that they get scared off
‘Cos if you surprise ‘em mate
that’s when they get pissed off
So If you go bush walking down under
be careful ‘round long grass
‘Cos a Death adder might just jump out
and bite you on the arse
Down here in Australia
There’s heaps of...
there's heaps of Poisonous snakes
That hang out in the undergrowth
especially around lakes
You gotta make sure you stomp real hard
so that they get scared off
‘Cos if you surprise ‘em mate
that’s when they get pissed off
So If you go bush walking down under
be careful ‘round long grass
‘Cos a Death adder might just jump out
and bite you on the arse
Down here in Australia
There’s heaps of...
#animals
#rhyming
#funny
31 reads
4 Comments
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