Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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EdibleWords
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:09pm
Yesterday 3:09pm
Pollyanna-Me
Today seems more objective about yesterday
Yet also quite
as subjective
for the moment
I feel like I'm stuck
in a b-movie
wanting to deeply
rewrite this plot
of tragic insanity
Isolation was not a cure
for my condition
it was a palliative
with dangers
for a
tender pair of
agoraphobes
with each their own
polyianna-modes
of faith in theology
so close in kind
enough to share
the yoke of love
yet not strong enough in
harsh isolation
...
Yet also quite
as subjective
for the moment
I feel like I'm stuck
in a b-movie
wanting to deeply
rewrite this plot
of tragic insanity
Isolation was not a cure
for my condition
it was a palliative
with dangers
for a
tender pair of
agoraphobes
with each their own
polyianna-modes
of faith in theology
so close in kind
enough to share
the yoke of love
yet not strong enough in
harsh isolation
...
#loneliness
#hope
#despair
21 reads
4 Comments
Countrygirl96
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:27am
Yesterday 5:27am
Outbreak
There is something going around that is reeking havoc
Spreading faster and faster and getting stronger and stronger
Infusing people with it's sick and twisted germs through their blood
Causing death and suicide on a daily basis more and more
There's a elephant in the room and it's name is depression
Depression isn't something you can cure by a vaccine
You can't nurse a depressed individual back to health within days
It lingers and embeds it's way into the victims minds
It corrupts their brain and their soul and you can always see it
It's a disease...
Spreading faster and faster and getting stronger and stronger
Infusing people with it's sick and twisted germs through their blood
Causing death and suicide on a daily basis more and more
There's a elephant in the room and it's name is depression
Depression isn't something you can cure by a vaccine
You can't nurse a depressed individual back to health within days
It lingers and embeds it's way into the victims minds
It corrupts their brain and their soul and you can always see it
It's a disease...
#depression
#dark
#emptiness
32 reads
1 Comment
Skyblue2
Poem Published
16th Nov 2019 8:03pm
16th Nov 2019 8:03pm
Fame
When you've been marked and filed away
and blades of grass replace legions
of euphoric faces,
the only unfettered applause left
will be rustling of trees above.
But you'll not hear it
as you lie at arms-length forever
next to a stranger
more familiar with soil than stars.
and blades of grass replace legions
of euphoric faces,
the only unfettered applause left
will be rustling of trees above.
But you'll not hear it
as you lie at arms-length forever
next to a stranger
more familiar with soil than stars.
#death
27 reads
2 Comments
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Poem Published
16th Nov 2019 6:40pm
16th Nov 2019 6:40pm
Arched inked lines
You are of my blood
though I will not
bleed
for you
As torn threads
shed pain(less)
Too many tears
If not too few
moistened my eyes
stopped these ghosts
from growing
Night returns me
Scented thoughts
pathology lies
Too much salt
won't kill you
though I will not
bleed
for you
As torn threads
shed pain(less)
Too many tears
If not too few
moistened my eyes
stopped these ghosts
from growing
Night returns me
Scented thoughts
pathology lies
Too much salt
won't kill you
#grief
#dark
31 reads
3 Comments
Whipped
Diz
Diz
Poem Published
16th Nov 2019 6:10pm
16th Nov 2019 6:10pm
I just heard
I'm sorry for your loss
Be prepared
It doesn't get any easier from here
Cherish the times that you have
Or remember the times you had
You'll see their face a million places
Look again and see no traces
Hearing their voices carry on the wind
Don't be scared it takes time
Every second you've ever had plays like a movie in your head
Every warning every wish
Maybe a goodbye kiss
Before the light extinguishs
Life seams like forever
Every hour everyday.....
Then one day god gives up
And just turns the...
Be prepared
It doesn't get any easier from here
Cherish the times that you have
Or remember the times you had
You'll see their face a million places
Look again and see no traces
Hearing their voices carry on the wind
Don't be scared it takes time
Every second you've ever had plays like a movie in your head
Every warning every wish
Maybe a goodbye kiss
Before the light extinguishs
Life seams like forever
Every hour everyday.....
Then one day god gives up
And just turns the...
#ghosts
33 reads
1 Comment
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
16th Nov 2019 3:01am
16th Nov 2019 3:01am
Merging
Hahaha you think that you know submission, but don't know what submission is
Playing games of torture and torment, but imagine this as a way you truly living
Pleasure through pain, pain seeking pleasure, a fractured arm falling from the crib
A few more falls add up to a broken jaw and two broken ribs
Deprivation suits, imagine forced deprivation being three and locked in a closet
You're so fucking scared and all of hell knows it
One by one they come to visit you all through out the night
By the time Satan visits he's like a ray of sunlight
...
Playing games of torture and torment, but imagine this as a way you truly living
Pleasure through pain, pain seeking pleasure, a fractured arm falling from the crib
A few more falls add up to a broken jaw and two broken ribs
Deprivation suits, imagine forced deprivation being three and locked in a closet
You're so fucking scared and all of hell knows it
One by one they come to visit you all through out the night
By the time Satan visits he's like a ray of sunlight
...
#dark
#abuse
#bullying #evil
#bullying #evil
46 reads
3 Comments
Countrygirl96
Poem Published
15th Nov 2019 7:52pm
15th Nov 2019 7:52pm
His Eyes
Looking out into the night I can feel his eyes
Staring and following my every twist and turn
Keeping me within arms length at all times
Sending alarming chills up my spine
Seeing them glowing eyes staring at me
His dark mind sending sinister thoughts through my mind
Stalking me everyday like I'm some sort of prey
What does he want from me besides my loyalty
I know there was the devil in his dark eyes
He taunted and haunted me until I couldn't succumb the pain
Breaking and stealing my soul every hour of every day
Why me why...
Staring and following my every twist and turn
Keeping me within arms length at all times
Sending alarming chills up my spine
Seeing them glowing eyes staring at me
His dark mind sending sinister thoughts through my mind
Stalking me everyday like I'm some sort of prey
What does he want from me besides my loyalty
I know there was the devil in his dark eyes
He taunted and haunted me until I couldn't succumb the pain
Breaking and stealing my soul every hour of every day
Why me why...
#depression
#dark
#suicide
47 reads
1 Comment
DevilsChild
Poem Published
15th Nov 2019 9:29am
15th Nov 2019 9:29am
Frankenstina
into her arms with everyday embrace
I always felt wanted around her
she gives new meaning to rebirth
taking out the bad feelings and inserting in good
cutting out pieces of broken heart and replacing with a new
no more horrific thoughts now that I have a fully functioning brain
others see me as a monster, but it is she who comforts me
loving me as the women who took me on
not an easy battle fighting those that shun us
we become targets for their relentless hate
but I fight for her as the crazy experiment they say I am ...
I always felt wanted around her
she gives new meaning to rebirth
taking out the bad feelings and inserting in good
cutting out pieces of broken heart and replacing with a new
no more horrific thoughts now that I have a fully functioning brain
others see me as a monster, but it is she who comforts me
loving me as the women who took me on
not an easy battle fighting those that shun us
we become targets for their relentless hate
but I fight for her as the crazy experiment they say I am ...
#love
#dark
51 reads
8 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 9:23pm
13th Nov 2019 9:23pm
Scorched Earth Day
Black and crunching
beneath my feet
I speak to charred blood puddles
and what once was bone
At the grey sky
scarred with tar fires
I speak to the restless
Spirit-children
of a countless number of failed lives
I seek a nurse
for my sick child soldier
But between predators
and their prey
No one can hear
my pleas to rescue
The champions
of our battles
Does that mean
there are no survivors?
beneath my feet
I speak to charred blood puddles
and what once was bone
At the grey sky
scarred with tar fires
I speak to the restless
Spirit-children
of a countless number of failed lives
I seek a nurse
for my sick child soldier
But between predators
and their prey
No one can hear
my pleas to rescue
The champions
of our battles
Does that mean
there are no survivors?
#anxiety
#hope
#death
39 reads
4 Comments
Lothbrok
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 9:00pm
13th Nov 2019 9:00pm
The Pale Horse Waltz In [Part one]
What have you done?" He whispered
As the candlelight kissed his face
'Nothing you wouldn't have done'
As she provoked the worst in him
"Then Hell must be filling up quickly"...
Forged beyond the gates of hell
Those eyes and that gaze cut through everything
Sins covered his skin and scarred hers after life became their fight
He was her favorite devil in disguise
And she was his favorite Angel caressed by the night.
Voodoo lips and words that incited violence, the switchblade knife
hid beneath her eyelids,
she...
As the candlelight kissed his face
'Nothing you wouldn't have done'
As she provoked the worst in him
"Then Hell must be filling up quickly"...
Forged beyond the gates of hell
Those eyes and that gaze cut through everything
Sins covered his skin and scarred hers after life became their fight
He was her favorite devil in disguise
And she was his favorite Angel caressed by the night.
Voodoo lips and words that incited violence, the switchblade knife
hid beneath her eyelids,
she...
#dark
29 reads
1 Comment
Lothbrok
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 8:17pm
13th Nov 2019 8:17pm
The Sinful King
I use to feel death would set me free
But there's nothing about death that's free
Even in hell they capitalize on it,
Charon the uber driver has a fee
Luckily for me I always have my two cents...
I'm alone in this hell I'm in
Trapped
beneath the heavy words
And your flat emotion again
Stolen,
your Grace is from the Angels it seems
And I the
Fiend,
As always I with the charisma of a king
A God may have his enemies
but even so
He cannot find the strength
to help you out...
But somberly I sit...
But there's nothing about death that's free
Even in hell they capitalize on it,
Charon the uber driver has a fee
Luckily for me I always have my two cents...
I'm alone in this hell I'm in
Trapped
beneath the heavy words
And your flat emotion again
Stolen,
your Grace is from the Angels it seems
And I the
Fiend,
As always I with the charisma of a king
A God may have his enemies
but even so
He cannot find the strength
to help you out...
But somberly I sit...
#WritersBlock
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0 Comments
Depressingpoetry
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 4:10am
13th Nov 2019 4:10am
Let my scars bleed
Let my scars bleed and my bones fall apart,
I fucked up too many times I don't get a new start,
I'm flying away on my own,
To a place of serenity a place unknown,
I'm by myself hiding from the storm,
Let my scars bleed they keep me warm,
My heart can be cold, colder than ever,
[b]My thoughts are disconnected I need to bring them together,
Let my scars bleed and leave behind a mess,
The sad melody makes me more depressed
I used to be a lonesome angry beast,
Now I am possessed I need a priest,
My raging soul needs...
I fucked up too many times I don't get a new start,
I'm flying away on my own,
To a place of serenity a place unknown,
I'm by myself hiding from the storm,
Let my scars bleed they keep me warm,
My heart can be cold, colder than ever,
[b]My thoughts are disconnected I need to bring them together,
Let my scars bleed and leave behind a mess,
The sad melody makes me more depressed
I used to be a lonesome angry beast,
Now I am possessed I need a priest,
My raging soul needs...
#dark
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1 Comment
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