Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror - Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
BurnBlck
Poem Published
Today 2:12am
Today 2:12am
Elysium
Here lies the coldest corner of my hell
On the day in which her angel fell
Our life together once open for us to create, now lies buried within the ashes of my hate
In loving memory of where I had lost my faith
I lay quiet and motionless amongst the lurid autumn light
While she turns to face the sky, awaiting the call of Heaven to save her from a world so lost in benight
Tears claim my sight, then began to take my life as I gradually drift away into a blackened haze
My heart stops to mourn with an angel's cry
As she gently carries away your soul,...
On the day in which her angel fell
Our life together once open for us to create, now lies buried within the ashes of my hate
In loving memory of where I had lost my faith
I lay quiet and motionless amongst the lurid autumn light
While she turns to face the sky, awaiting the call of Heaven to save her from a world so lost in benight
Tears claim my sight, then began to take my life as I gradually drift away into a blackened haze
My heart stops to mourn with an angel's cry
As she gently carries away your soul,...
#love
#depression
#dark
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Timagination543
Poem Published
Today 1:40am
Today 1:40am
The shadow of Emmet Till
You listen son, and you listen good.
Don't mention that boy,
is that understood?
None of us here will emit his name,
nor speak of that day, so do the same.
It's a peaceful town,
so keep it that way!
We've got nothin to do with guilt or shame.
That boy was a troublemaker,
I know that firsthand.
At your young age, I doubt you'd understand.
His vile negro mouth spewed disgusting chatter,
the boy went missing,
but nevermind the matter!
And the Tallahatchie River
where the huge tree stood......
Don't mention that boy,
is that understood?
None of us here will emit his name,
nor speak of that day, so do the same.
It's a peaceful town,
so keep it that way!
We've got nothin to do with guilt or shame.
That boy was a troublemaker,
I know that firsthand.
At your young age, I doubt you'd understand.
His vile negro mouth spewed disgusting chatter,
the boy went missing,
but nevermind the matter!
And the Tallahatchie River
where the huge tree stood......
#dark
#murder
13 reads
2 Comments
Sad_Poet99
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:52am
Yesterday 00:52am
"Pretty Pictures"
#depression
#SelfHarm
#MentalHealth
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EliW
Elina
Elina
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:29pm
Yesterday 12:29pm
Frenzy
There breathes a modern madness.
...
We think it all makes sense,
but its just another fence.
It's not a crowd I see,
only screaming souls reach out to me.
Those dark and damned city lives,
vailing through their deadened eyes.
Cluttering their golden chains
with wolfish poison in their veins.
Left for the web and lost online,
Up for sale is the sacred shrine.
Here in silence, I disappear.
I dare not to speak of the world I fear.
It's like a cross to bare...
Also known as...
...
We think it all makes sense,
but its just another fence.
It's not a crowd I see,
only screaming souls reach out to me.
Those dark and damned city lives,
vailing through their deadened eyes.
Cluttering their golden chains
with wolfish poison in their veins.
Left for the web and lost online,
Up for sale is the sacred shrine.
Here in silence, I disappear.
I dare not to speak of the world I fear.
It's like a cross to bare...
Also known as...
#LifeStruggles
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0 Comments
BurnBlck
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:40am
Yesterday 5:40am
Crimson Peak
I lie awake once again, to a hollow blue moon ascending to its starless monastery
Looking down on its kingdom laid to ash,
Brittle and cold, it holds no asylum for the living
Memories of those who stood against the light succumb to the affection to which the land was given
I suffocate amidst a thick halo of bitter sin, as it burns as acid through my skin
An orchard of rotting bone permeates the essence of still life in the air
Nurturing the befouled river of cinder, left to feed the disease with tender care
My life, my love, forever lost to the gaping...
Looking down on its kingdom laid to ash,
Brittle and cold, it holds no asylum for the living
Memories of those who stood against the light succumb to the affection to which the land was given
I suffocate amidst a thick halo of bitter sin, as it burns as acid through my skin
An orchard of rotting bone permeates the essence of still life in the air
Nurturing the befouled river of cinder, left to feed the disease with tender care
My life, my love, forever lost to the gaping...
#dark
#gothic
#death
12 reads
1 Comment
SoulzGirl69
Poem Published
17th Sep 2018 8:21pm
17th Sep 2018 8:21pm
Portraits of my hurt
As I walk through
These blurred,
Darkened walls
Displaying portraits of my hurts
Blood stains that gives
My memories a splash of colour
My hand prints clawing at my will
To reach toward the light
These blurred,
Darkened walls
Displaying portraits of my hurts
Blood stains that gives
My memories a splash of colour
My hand prints clawing at my will
To reach toward the light
#sadness
#grief
#loneliness #dark
#loneliness #dark
32 reads
10 Comments
BurnBlck
Poem Published
17th Sep 2018 6:11am
17th Sep 2018 6:11am
Beautiful Bloody Mary
As lonesome ghosts traverse through the labyrinth of white walls
My soul is beckoned by such beautiful calls
Blessed by the fire, the starlit path awakens my fallen angel
By the grace of God, her heart bears no blood
Arise my love and bleed no tears, for the day is dark and full of beautiful fears
Who is this girl that stares into the eyes of evil
Sing for me my love, those cries of torment that keep you from your eternal rest
Butcher them in their dreams for they indulge in sin without remorse, just as a rat indulges on a festered corpse
My vampire...
My soul is beckoned by such beautiful calls
Blessed by the fire, the starlit path awakens my fallen angel
By the grace of God, her heart bears no blood
Arise my love and bleed no tears, for the day is dark and full of beautiful fears
Who is this girl that stares into the eyes of evil
Sing for me my love, those cries of torment that keep you from your eternal rest
Butcher them in their dreams for they indulge in sin without remorse, just as a rat indulges on a festered corpse
My vampire...
#love
#depression
#dark
#gothic
#death
19 reads
1 Comment
BurnBlck
Poem Published
17th Sep 2018 6:00am
17th Sep 2018 6:00am
Sweet Little Dove
As the sun sets on the eve of this summer solstice, a horrid grave reveals a long lost fable, told by those born beyond the cradle
A V of black swans stand over still waters, bowing their heads in beautiful mourning.
For all those who stand before us in spirit, here lies my eternal love, touched by the darkness that shrouds my heart in mystery.
A love, once thought to be deceased, now nurtures new life upon us all
Murders of crows tear through the eerie silence and sing their mournings begging, foe the devil to answer their call.
She was the amber of my eye
The...
A V of black swans stand over still waters, bowing their heads in beautiful mourning.
For all those who stand before us in spirit, here lies my eternal love, touched by the darkness that shrouds my heart in mystery.
A love, once thought to be deceased, now nurtures new life upon us all
Murders of crows tear through the eerie silence and sing their mournings begging, foe the devil to answer their call.
She was the amber of my eye
The...
#love
#depression
#dark
#gothic
#death
12 reads
0 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
16th Sep 2018 10:17pm
16th Sep 2018 10:17pm
Confessions
Satan had returned wearing a dress
Pulling at my mental, but I'm not stressed
She tried to line me up with all the rest
But I'm a loner by nature unlike the rest
Offered to drink of her cup
A chalice filled to the brim with lust
"Sit down with me and please do sup"
I have tasted greed and know the disgust
She offered me conversation in front of the fire
We spoke of pride, envy, and of Hell's desire
The fire had grown, the heat was intense
We threw in gluttony for it's sulfurous scent
Our conversation was slow and...
Pulling at my mental, but I'm not stressed
She tried to line me up with all the rest
But I'm a loner by nature unlike the rest
Offered to drink of her cup
A chalice filled to the brim with lust
"Sit down with me and please do sup"
I have tasted greed and know the disgust
She offered me conversation in front of the fire
We spoke of pride, envy, and of Hell's desire
The fire had grown, the heat was intense
We threw in gluttony for it's sulfurous scent
Our conversation was slow and...
#dark
#sex
#erotic
#death
#evil
36 reads
2 Comments
Blackwolf
Poem Published
16th Sep 2018 1:49am
16th Sep 2018 1:49am
Overdrive Suicide
I Been So Gone I Did Not Know I Survived
I Been So Dead I Did Not Think I Revived
Resurrection Infection With Some Pre Direction
Election Without Any Self Determined Inspection
Or Schooling Of What Should Be By Me Correction
I Want To Choose From More Than This Selection
Or I May Feel What Is Described Is Still Unsatisfied
And Leaves Me Deprived Yet Still In Overdrive Suicide
I Been So Dead I Did Not Think I Revived
Resurrection Infection With Some Pre Direction
Election Without Any Self Determined Inspection
Or Schooling Of What Should Be By Me Correction
I Want To Choose From More Than This Selection
Or I May Feel What Is Described Is Still Unsatisfied
And Leaves Me Deprived Yet Still In Overdrive Suicide
#anxiety
#depression
#dark
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
30 reads
2 Comments
Blackwolf
Poem Published
16th Sep 2018 1:07am
16th Sep 2018 1:07am
Bad Ass Medicine
Black Heart Bitch You Got An Itch
Your Brain Seems To Have A Glitch
You Say Just Take Your Bad Medicine
Just Shows What State Your Head Is In
Emotional Turpitude Deadly Attitude
Some Just Might Think You Crude Rude
Your Split Personality Is Everyday Reality
I Know Your Nightmare Fatality Mentality
Should I Mention Your Past Life Detention
Or Is That Too Much Information Retention
If You Are Asked To Repent Would You Relent
Or Merely Claim Bent As Some Hell Spawn Sent
You Got Some Devotion To Retrograde...
Your Brain Seems To Have A Glitch
You Say Just Take Your Bad Medicine
Just Shows What State Your Head Is In
Emotional Turpitude Deadly Attitude
Some Just Might Think You Crude Rude
Your Split Personality Is Everyday Reality
I Know Your Nightmare Fatality Mentality
Should I Mention Your Past Life Detention
Or Is That Too Much Information Retention
If You Are Asked To Repent Would You Relent
Or Merely Claim Bent As Some Hell Spawn Sent
You Got Some Devotion To Retrograde...
#dark
#relationships
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
#hypocrisy
30 reads
7 Comments
BurnBlck
Poem Published
15th Sep 2018 9:46pm
15th Sep 2018 9:46pm
Until the Light Takes Us
The deepest sting of a frozen blade delves deepest into the mountains within the Carpathian forest.
Amongst the deathly aura emanating from a frost-stricken land - A most abhorrent display takes its place to infect all life
Such ravenous inception of all those who wither in its path to decay without hope under an adverse sapphire moon.
A silent river upon which gentle waters glisten under the weeping sun.
Singing soft voices to pronounce a new beginning to the Winter solstice
Forgotten mother whispers unto unborn child.
Why does one allow the shadows to seep...
Amongst the deathly aura emanating from a frost-stricken land - A most abhorrent display takes its place to infect all life
Such ravenous inception of all those who wither in its path to decay without hope under an adverse sapphire moon.
A silent river upon which gentle waters glisten under the weeping sun.
Singing soft voices to pronounce a new beginning to the Winter solstice
Forgotten mother whispers unto unborn child.
Why does one allow the shadows to seep...
#depression
#dark
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1 Comment
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