Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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adagio
Poem Published
30th Nov 2023 10:06pm
30th Nov 2023 10:06pm
Da Doo Ron Ron
Silencing me twilight with winds of a troubadour
shaking rocks of monotony over my grave
Da Doo Ron Ron no shadow too far
watching cornstalks stumble to greet
with no cud to wallow or cuttle to phone
freezing in this frigging indisposition
waiting for henchmen to free me from this bin
with a rusty old toolbar's jaws of life
now skating on formaldehyde's thin ice
listening to the sounds from the dead letter box
silencing me twilight with winds of a troubadour
Da Doo Ron Ron no shadow too far
shaking rocks of monotony over my grave
Da Doo Ron Ron no shadow too far
watching cornstalks stumble to greet
with no cud to wallow or cuttle to phone
freezing in this frigging indisposition
waiting for henchmen to free me from this bin
with a rusty old toolbar's jaws of life
now skating on formaldehyde's thin ice
listening to the sounds from the dead letter box
silencing me twilight with winds of a troubadour
Da Doo Ron Ron no shadow too far
#dark
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Nov 2023 4:40am
30th Nov 2023 4:40am
Where There’s A Will There’s A Way
I’ve always loved when a demoness shares the true meaning of her hatred façade behind a thesaurus slew of nursery rhymes
Hearing her own heartbeat, getting slowly sucked in the warp of a diabolical mind
Not mesmerized by the moment, the presence of self is on the winds of blurred time
The trick of the trade far outweighs the leverage of my kind
No weapons to boast, only the words as they flow
Blood shall spill when castrating the roots of a black and purplish rose
...
Hearing her own heartbeat, getting slowly sucked in the warp of a diabolical mind
Not mesmerized by the moment, the presence of self is on the winds of blurred time
The trick of the trade far outweighs the leverage of my kind
No weapons to boast, only the words as they flow
Blood shall spill when castrating the roots of a black and purplish rose
...
#war
#sun
#moon #spiritual
#moon #spiritual
109 reads
7 Comments
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
28th Nov 2023 10:37pm
28th Nov 2023 10:37pm
New start
I can feel winter blowing in
Bringing its frigid cold and blanket snow
To drift up and around my heart
I've weathered this bleakness before
With flaming fire and starved desire
Until spring arose from the dark
But somethings different this time around
I feel it in my broken will and poison pills
Heaven doesn't seem quite so far
The thought brings a relinquished relief
Tired of clinging to the past and hoping for happiness
This soul is ready for a new start
Bringing its frigid cold and blanket snow
To drift up and around my heart
I've weathered this bleakness before
With flaming fire and starved desire
Until spring arose from the dark
But somethings different this time around
I feel it in my broken will and poison pills
Heaven doesn't seem quite so far
The thought brings a relinquished relief
Tired of clinging to the past and hoping for happiness
This soul is ready for a new start
#sadness
#anxiety
#depression
#dark
#MentalHealth
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ReveresedSilver
Poem Published
28th Nov 2023 4:53pm
28th Nov 2023 4:53pm
So far out, But still together
I reached my hands out,
As my entire world seemed to spin around me,
I didn't comprehend what was happening,
This was all so sudden,
Why didn't I get a warning?
Something could have prevailed,
But again why nothing?
My breaths are so heavy,
I feel tied down to the floor,
My eyes are running like water
And burning like hell,
I sound so silent,
But my thoughts are so loud,
What is happening
I'm now looking at that hole in the ground,
I'm watching as you're being lowered,
But in a way I know I'm in...
As my entire world seemed to spin around me,
I didn't comprehend what was happening,
This was all so sudden,
Why didn't I get a warning?
Something could have prevailed,
But again why nothing?
My breaths are so heavy,
I feel tied down to the floor,
My eyes are running like water
And burning like hell,
I sound so silent,
But my thoughts are so loud,
What is happening
I'm now looking at that hole in the ground,
I'm watching as you're being lowered,
But in a way I know I'm in...
#depression
#grief
#dark
#death
#suicide
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adagio
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 6:32pm
26th Nov 2023 6:32pm
Who's On First
Tangoing with mangoes
dark quill revelation
dripping the ink's cider
rotting and decaying
sealed within your heart
but I am only your ghost
a Slinky without stairs
and then comes the fauna
of speckled old prose
tangoing with mangoes
from my mind's rocking chair
dark quill revelation
dripping the ink's cider
rotting and decaying
sealed within your heart
but I am only your ghost
a Slinky without stairs
and then comes the fauna
of speckled old prose
tangoing with mangoes
from my mind's rocking chair
#dark
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adagio
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 11:18pm
25th Nov 2023 11:18pm
Winds of Rendezvous
Hearing the winds of rendezvous
chilling the blanket of snow
colder than the heart of my soul
beneath the heels of this earth
a mound of dirt turned to salt
clinging to stone shrouding bones
hearing the winds of rendezvous
chilling the blanket of snow
colder than the heart of my soul
beneath the heels of this earth
a mound of dirt turned to salt
clinging to stone shrouding bones
hearing the winds of rendezvous
#dark
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 10:43pm
25th Nov 2023 10:43pm
Your Stench Is Reeking Abyzou (Part I of 30)
You have been forewarned my wild child
Now you are in my realm no Golden Sun shall shine
I will give as you wish
As my hounds of Hades shall shred the beast and the bitch
You may have your make believe throne
For any mortal who sits beside you, curses his own birthright, never to see daylight, and will never atone
You are my pet in the obscurity of darkness
This is a nightmare upon your skin felt
My deep lashes felt, acid stinging welts
...
Now you are in my realm no Golden Sun shall shine
I will give as you wish
As my hounds of Hades shall shred the beast and the bitch
You may have your make believe throne
For any mortal who sits beside you, curses his own birthright, never to see daylight, and will never atone
You are my pet in the obscurity of darkness
This is a nightmare upon your skin felt
My deep lashes felt, acid stinging welts
...
#dark
#moon
167 reads
3 Comments
ddit
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 00:51am
25th Nov 2023 00:51am
flower head
A flowers petals bloom out too fast to enjoy
they open to show their sticky red nectar
leaking and bubbling, overflowing
it seeps through the cracks between the petals
staining the curly fuzz on its edges
climbing up those bronze coil wires
eating through them
and they sink
because the weight of blood is too much
they open to show their sticky red nectar
leaking and bubbling, overflowing
it seeps through the cracks between the petals
staining the curly fuzz on its edges
climbing up those bronze coil wires
eating through them
and they sink
because the weight of blood is too much
#death
#flowers
#hurt
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adagio
Poem Published
24th Nov 2023 3:44pm
24th Nov 2023 3:44pm
The Breathing Idling
Whispering sweet Husqvarna
listening to the breathing idling
from the chain's lullabies
clinging to me my pathologist
with the whiskers of twilight
trimming the filet
dripping the marrow
before dragging the axle rod
whispering sweet Husqvarna
listening to the breathing idling
from the chain's lullabies
clinging to me my pathologist
with the whiskers of twilight
trimming the filet
dripping the marrow
before dragging the axle rod
whispering sweet Husqvarna
#dark
58 reads
2 Comments
ddit
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2023 6:02am
23rd Nov 2023 6:02am
The Caught Killer
And on the screen flashed a picture of a woman, whose face was all puffed up grotesquely. Blood dripped from the open roof of her mouth. Dismembered like a doll, by a ravenous child. But the killer, caught, looked different. He had blond hair, and a bloodied patch curling all around his neck, as if he’d just had a tattoo. His eyes were sunken deep into their sockets, and they reflected on the camera. Something about him, his appearance, his presence was off. I felt it. I could see through him, into the aligned reflection of my face. That man looked like he wanted to kill someone.
#MentalHealth
#confusion
#fear
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BrokenBeats
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2023 1:48pm
22nd Nov 2023 1:48pm
Barbwire Braille
Scraps of phrases
razor laced endearments
and sordid images
Shots
under cover
Tainted reality
stolen in back alleys
and dingy rooms
Flickering neon
Casting sinister implications
over sight
Stomach recoils
rebels
Contents strewn
upon grimy cement floor
What is learned
blinds
Knees crash upon glass
Shards cutting ...
razor laced endearments
and sordid images
Shots
under cover
Tainted reality
stolen in back alleys
and dingy rooms
Flickering neon
Casting sinister implications
over sight
Stomach recoils
rebels
Contents strewn
upon grimy cement floor
What is learned
blinds
Knees crash upon glass
Shards cutting ...
#dark
#lies
#betrayal
70 reads
1 Comment
adagio
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2023 11:33am
22nd Nov 2023 11:33am
Macabre's Schizophrenia
Deteriorating, listening to notes
chill my aorta, bleeding silence
the snow, cold winds blow
on my pale Viola whispering ghosts
with strings of debauchery's
mania, raising the hackles
of my macabre's schizophrenia
and anger in quotes
deteriorating, listening to notes
chill my aorta, bleeding silence
the snow, cold winds blow
on my pale Viola whispering ghosts
with strings of debauchery's
mania, raising the hackles
of my macabre's schizophrenia
and anger in quotes
deteriorating, listening to notes
#dark
58 reads
2 Comments
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