Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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Distorted reflection
Looking in the mirror and my reflection seems distorted as if it's been tampered with.
I used to be able to shrug off your verbal abuse, but somehow my eyes morphed your lies into truthful flaws.
It was as if I was a canvas and every day another mistake appeared until the beautiful blank slate was burried beneath several layers of paint.
I used to be able to shrug off your verbal abuse, but somehow my eyes morphed your lies into truthful flaws.
It was as if I was a canvas and every day another mistake appeared until the beautiful blank slate was burried beneath several layers of paint.
#emptiness
#hurt
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Rock, Paper, Scissors and salt in the wound
At first glance you seem harmless and fragile,
but like paper you sliced me with your words.
Leaving behind and invisible mark that stings from deep within.
You appeared to be unique and wonderful,
but like a rock you weighed me down with your hands.
Causing me to drag my feet and loose my breath attempting to carry you around.
I noticed how you shined and seemed to be reliable,
but just like scissors you decieved me and cut me with your fake love.
Forcing me to and loose my trust and push people away with the fear of betrayl.
...
but like paper you sliced me with your words.
Leaving behind and invisible mark that stings from deep within.
You appeared to be unique and wonderful,
but like a rock you weighed me down with your hands.
Causing me to drag my feet and loose my breath attempting to carry you around.
I noticed how you shined and seemed to be reliable,
but just like scissors you decieved me and cut me with your fake love.
Forcing me to and loose my trust and push people away with the fear of betrayl.
...
#betrayal
#hurt
#deception
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2 Comments
Rana Niejta daughter of the sun
Our silhouette
deformed
and bended
healing
death mimicry
a strategy to survive
used by animals
and people
tsunami wind
has risen the omniscient
force of thought
forest voice
stillness
drawn in antlers
Neolithic hunter
elk and deer
fish and seal
all swept
into history
under the coat
of a selkie
tundra tell me
place of origins
coexistence
in evolution
words ...
deformed
and bended
healing
death mimicry
a strategy to survive
used by animals
and people
tsunami wind
has risen the omniscient
force of thought
forest voice
stillness
drawn in antlers
Neolithic hunter
elk and deer
fish and seal
all swept
into history
under the coat
of a selkie
tundra tell me
place of origins
coexistence
in evolution
words ...
#mythology
#magic
#tradition
18 reads
4 Comments
Echoes In Songs
The shadow is a window to my soul
with an echo of an evening's song
through a dark tunnel spiraling
descending to forever's eternity
listening to the gods' conspiracy
with an echo of an evening's song
through a dark tunnel spiraling
descending to forever's eternity
listening to the gods' conspiracy
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
32 reads
8 Comments
Condemned

#dark
#murder
#death #graveyard
#death #graveyard
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Aging With Ink
..following shadow's fingerprints
through Goya's mind
with the fear of getting old
and growing mad
feeling the darkness of death
in my solitude of a deaf man
devouring my son
on canvas
a mural of my soul...
through Goya's mind
with the fear of getting old
and growing mad
feeling the darkness of death
in my solitude of a deaf man
devouring my son
on canvas
a mural of my soul...
#dark
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
40 reads
7 Comments
Depression is my Lover
Sick
Twisted
Bent
Depraved
Lost
Beauty
Depression
BDSM
Self
Turned
Inward
Bleak
Anxious
Postmodern
Antidepressants
Chained
Hope
Twisted
Bent
Depraved
Lost
Beauty
Depression
BDSM
Self
Turned
Inward
Bleak
Anxious
Postmodern
Antidepressants
Chained
Hope
#depression
#dark
#apathy
32 reads
10 Comments
Darkness Prevails
Want to write love
Dark clouds on the horizon
Want to write erotic
Dark desires tie and bind
Want to write observation
Moodiness and clouds comfort
Dark is the only arena left
Bathing in your black aura
That's the love ...
Dark clouds on the horizon
Want to write erotic
Dark desires tie and bind
Want to write observation
Moodiness and clouds comfort
Dark is the only arena left
Bathing in your black aura
That's the love ...
#dark
37 reads
8 Comments
No one but us knew why
It was as if the world stoped.
Noise turned to silence.
Words turned to whispers in the wind.
The light faded away behind a dark Dreary sky,
and no one but us knew why.
Your life was so important that even the sky had to cry.
Noise turned to silence.
Words turned to whispers in the wind.
The light faded away behind a dark Dreary sky,
and no one but us knew why.
Your life was so important that even the sky had to cry.
#grief
#heartbroken
#death #Christian
#death #Christian
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2 Comments
Sonnet to Anger
It might surprise how some mere current thought
can produce a line or two of a rhyme
and follow it through as round mind words sought
without padding and without wasting time.
This so simple act of writing stuff down
has more effect than those sharp razor blades
or angry burns turning a crusty brown
generated as my idle brain raves.
There's calmness but, something else, sneaking up
as, I frantic, scribble down on this page
grateful hands reaches for something to cup
to calm this infernal internal rage.
...
can produce a line or two of a rhyme
and follow it through as round mind words sought
without padding and without wasting time.
This so simple act of writing stuff down
has more effect than those sharp razor blades
or angry burns turning a crusty brown
generated as my idle brain raves.
There's calmness but, something else, sneaking up
as, I frantic, scribble down on this page
grateful hands reaches for something to cup
to calm this infernal internal rage.
...
#sonnet
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2 Comments
My Heart is Black
Listen up Fuck Bags
Yeah you
I'm talking to you
Sally Queen of Hearts
Bobby King of Love
All these poems I read
At the end
It's often a fucking love fest
All these symbols of love
Gets kinda nauseating
Wouldn't a simple X be sufficient
Get your goddam love elsewhere
Cheap motel by hour if necessary
My heart is black
Just saying
🖤
Yeah you
I'm talking to you
Sally Queen of Hearts
Bobby King of Love
All these poems I read
At the end
It's often a fucking love fest
All these symbols of love
Gets kinda nauseating
Wouldn't a simple X be sufficient
Get your goddam love elsewhere
Cheap motel by hour if necessary
My heart is black
Just saying
🖤
#anger
#funny
#emotions
44 reads
20 Comments
Kafkaesque
metamorphosis
hopefully not a cockroach
pity poor Gregor
hopefully not a cockroach
pity poor Gregor
#anxiety
#senryu
22 reads
4 Comments
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