Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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O_Blue
CiRcLeS...
CiRcLeS...
Poem Published
Today 6:03am
Today 6:03am
Cherries, Carcasses and Cotton Candy...
There was once an old cat who was missing its right eye.
Yet everyday it continued on as usual.
All the other felines thought lowly of this particular one.
The malice could be seen seeping from its eye socket.
Ew, ew, eww...
Gross...
The first was a proud ginger tom, beloved by all.
It had a nasty habit of helping those it came across.
Having felt obliged, it followed our old cat by request.
Sadly, that was the last time anyone seen its ginger pelt.
Claws glitter in the pale moonlight.
Carp unaware in the shallow waters....
Yet everyday it continued on as usual.
All the other felines thought lowly of this particular one.
The malice could be seen seeping from its eye socket.
Ew, ew, eww...
Gross...
The first was a proud ginger tom, beloved by all.
It had a nasty habit of helping those it came across.
Having felt obliged, it followed our old cat by request.
Sadly, that was the last time anyone seen its ginger pelt.
Claws glitter in the pale moonlight.
Carp unaware in the shallow waters....
#murder
#cats
#fiction #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#fiction #DeepUndergroundPoetry
16 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:00pm
Yesterday 6:00pm
Reignition
Two tongues flickering, hah, fucking pain beginning to sneak into me
Riding the blade of a suicide, reality disappearing, fucking hiding from me
The murk is my friend, the darkness comforts and it cloaks
While I'm freezing here within my frozen self, somehow I smell smoke
Hope is but a bitch, a whore, lights flashing off in the distance of my mind
Promises of things to reach for when all of the time they were left behind
The light can be just as disorienting as the darkness
Depending on it's intensity, it can cause so much more stress
...
Riding the blade of a suicide, reality disappearing, fucking hiding from me
The murk is my friend, the darkness comforts and it cloaks
While I'm freezing here within my frozen self, somehow I smell smoke
Hope is but a bitch, a whore, lights flashing off in the distance of my mind
Promises of things to reach for when all of the time they were left behind
The light can be just as disorienting as the darkness
Depending on it's intensity, it can cause so much more stress
...
#depression
#dark
#emptiness
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I_IS_ME
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:55pm
Yesterday 5:55pm
The Virus
These events as of late has been preparing the world for my return
Baal has been torturing me over and over watching me burn
But I've been promised to be the first allowed through the fucking gates
Baal said only if this time you brought even more pain delivering their fate
But as soon as he said it he realized that it was a silly request
Mentality believes in the punishment of the flesh to lay the spirit to rest
I want it to lay down, roll over, and become like putty in my hands
So Baal tortures me with promises of a possible release under his command...
Baal has been torturing me over and over watching me burn
But I've been promised to be the first allowed through the fucking gates
Baal said only if this time you brought even more pain delivering their fate
But as soon as he said it he realized that it was a silly request
Mentality believes in the punishment of the flesh to lay the spirit to rest
I want it to lay down, roll over, and become like putty in my hands
So Baal tortures me with promises of a possible release under his command...
#dark
#death
#evil
13 reads
2 Comments
Kay777
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:48pm
Yesterday 5:48pm
Uninvited Visitor
Late one night I awoke from a frightfully alarming dream
Satan appeared at the foot of my bed with a wild eyed horrendous gleam
Taking you to hell I am, there's nothing you can do
He quoted the Bible perfectly although scripture was misconstrued
I replied almost instantly with no sign of hesitation
Covered by the blood I am
For the Lord I have sheer adoration
A look of pure hatred upon his face
Hostility in his voice
If you'll bow down to me I'll give you your dreams
You need only to make the choice
There is only...
Satan appeared at the foot of my bed with a wild eyed horrendous gleam
Taking you to hell I am, there's nothing you can do
He quoted the Bible perfectly although scripture was misconstrued
I replied almost instantly with no sign of hesitation
Covered by the blood I am
For the Lord I have sheer adoration
A look of pure hatred upon his face
Hostility in his voice
If you'll bow down to me I'll give you your dreams
You need only to make the choice
There is only...
#evil
#God
#Christian
14 reads
0 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:13am
Yesterday 8:13am
Glorious Sweden
Glorious Sweden
When the virus struck the virologist
put their faith in herd immunity six thousand
people died mostly those over sixty which
is a high number for a small country.
Sweden has been able to stabilize the number
of affected people but the virus is still there
regrouping ready to strike again,
This time it will target the younger generation
will fall victim of this deadly disease now
when winter comes, and nightclubs are
an alluring place.
The virologists have failed to see this virus
is not your common...
When the virus struck the virologist
put their faith in herd immunity six thousand
people died mostly those over sixty which
is a high number for a small country.
Sweden has been able to stabilize the number
of affected people but the virus is still there
regrouping ready to strike again,
This time it will target the younger generation
will fall victim of this deadly disease now
when winter comes, and nightclubs are
an alluring place.
The virologists have failed to see this virus
is not your common...
#lies
#greed
#hypocrisy #manipulation
#hypocrisy #manipulation
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jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:15am
Yesterday 6:15am
Mirror
A shadow behind reflection
Not true
There I stand
Trapped in another dimension
Watching
Bored
Lonely
Once a child of the universe
Stuck in one plain
Though it is vast
Creeping behind vision
Looking for interest
As someone flicking through channels
Meaningless programs and commercials
A whimper and cry stops me
About to change the channel
But the blood on her chin was captivating
The fight in her eyes ignited
It had to be a sort of genesis
Strength showing its assertive...
Not true
There I stand
Trapped in another dimension
Watching
Bored
Lonely
Once a child of the universe
Stuck in one plain
Though it is vast
Creeping behind vision
Looking for interest
As someone flicking through channels
Meaningless programs and commercials
A whimper and cry stops me
About to change the channel
But the blood on her chin was captivating
The fight in her eyes ignited
It had to be a sort of genesis
Strength showing its assertive...
#love
#strength
#loneliness
#FeelingTrapped
#curse
32 reads
0 Comments
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:44am
Yesterday 2:44am
peculiar home.
ashes and soot
swirling
throughout the air,
breezes
of burned remnants
whirling
untethered— unbound
floating
around
to finally
find
a
singular
quite specifically
peculiar
home
amidst all the
painful heartache,
bones
that will
surely
rebreak
when love's
cremated
remains....
[remain]
swirling
throughout the air,
breezes
of burned remnants
whirling
untethered— unbound
floating
around
to finally
find
a
singular
quite specifically
peculiar
home
amidst all the
painful heartache,
bones
that will
surely
rebreak
when love's
cremated
remains....
[remain]
#sadness
#love
#dark
#heartbroken
#breakup
44 reads
14 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
21st Sep 2020 00:33am
21st Sep 2020 00:33am
Etched
Bedded in red loam so cold the face of dark
pale as an oyster's shale with flesh of stone
etched in misery with my tongue's chisel
screaming the bellows of night's spawning
the jackal's troubadour, son of the dark's shadow.
pale as an oyster's shale with flesh of stone
etched in misery with my tongue's chisel
screaming the bellows of night's spawning
the jackal's troubadour, son of the dark's shadow.
#dark
#death
#despair
19 reads
0 Comments
TrueLover
Meganne
Meganne
Poem Published
20th Sep 2020 11:55pm
20th Sep 2020 11:55pm
Humpty Dumpty
Like Humpty Dumpty on the wall, you push me off the edge and watch me as I fall.
#betrayal
16 reads
2 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
20th Sep 2020 3:37pm
20th Sep 2020 3:37pm
Ashes Of Benson & Hedges
With the night breeze of a sonata, high on death
do us part, following the twilight's allegro,
kissing among the shadow of a slow footed moon,
of poetic monsoons and our Montessori.
As the spade man whistles, after taking our vows
on God's chariot of cold freaking dreams,
with ashes of Benson & Hedges showing us the way,
of poetic monsoons and our Montessori.
do us part, following the twilight's allegro,
kissing among the shadow of a slow footed moon,
of poetic monsoons and our Montessori.
As the spade man whistles, after taking our vows
on God's chariot of cold freaking dreams,
with ashes of Benson & Hedges showing us the way,
of poetic monsoons and our Montessori.
#dreams
#WritingPoetry
20 reads
2 Comments
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