Dark Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
TrueLover
Meganne
Meganne
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:39pm
Yesterday 6:39pm
I believed all the lies
I fell for your fake love like Humpty Dumpty falling off the wall.
I dealt with your constant abuse and gave you the power to make me feel small.
Why did I do that to myself?
I ate up your lies like Alice in wonderland,
But you had no warning label and I ate more than my stomach could withstand.
Why did I do that to myself?
I was consumed with a desire to touch you like sleeping beauty lead by a curse.
I feared that the next time I left the house would be in a hearse.
Why did I do that to myself?
You...
I dealt with your constant abuse and gave you the power to make me feel small.
Why did I do that to myself?
I ate up your lies like Alice in wonderland,
But you had no warning label and I ate more than my stomach could withstand.
Why did I do that to myself?
I was consumed with a desire to touch you like sleeping beauty lead by a curse.
I feared that the next time I left the house would be in a hearse.
Why did I do that to myself?
You...
#heartbroken
#breakup
8 reads
2 Comments
SLYMBEKQUEEN
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:22pm
Yesterday 4:22pm
1st Degree Murder
#revenge
#bittersweet
20 reads
7 Comments
SLYMBEKQUEEN
Poem Published
19th Jun 2021 6:58pm
19th Jun 2021 6:58pm
f**k you sir
#anger
#disappointment
42 reads
14 Comments
DeVaughnStation
Poem Published
19th Jun 2021 7:46am
19th Jun 2021 7:46am
Locked Away
Entropy arriving again when I try to thrive in my skin.
I thought he was locked away.
She asked if I was okay.
I guess I’m lying again. I’m hiding from him;
that man I never wanted to see today.
His heart hard, veins so cold from the ice.
Skin rough and scarred from the blade,
his tongue tough from touching teeth that used to be white.
That dark man, that dark man lying in wait,
with wine weakening his gait. I tried avoiding that fate.
She asked if I’m alright.
I have to lie once more. Yes, I’m doing okay.
Tears, dropping harder than...
I thought he was locked away.
She asked if I was okay.
I guess I’m lying again. I’m hiding from him;
that man I never wanted to see today.
His heart hard, veins so cold from the ice.
Skin rough and scarred from the blade,
his tongue tough from touching teeth that used to be white.
That dark man, that dark man lying in wait,
with wine weakening his gait. I tried avoiding that fate.
She asked if I’m alright.
I have to lie once more. Yes, I’m doing okay.
Tears, dropping harder than...
#depression
#loneliness
#conflict #SelfHarm
#conflict #SelfHarm
34 reads
0 Comments
eswaller
Poem Published
19th Jun 2021 2:30am
19th Jun 2021 2:30am
Surviving the Darkness
Let me save you, but I was already too far
Gone and in depression’s murky depths
I was not worth saving. Darkness is a scar
That would not heal as I tried to take steps
Forward and into the light where I would
Feel like a new person, but heavy chains
Kept dragging me backwards. I should
Have fought harder to release the rain’s
Anguish and let it pull me higher instead of
Giving up completely, but I let it crush my
Spirits and hope. Let me cherish and love
You unconditionally, the girl and butterfly
With the...
Gone and in depression’s murky depths
I was not worth saving. Darkness is a scar
That would not heal as I tried to take steps
Forward and into the light where I would
Feel like a new person, but heavy chains
Kept dragging me backwards. I should
Have fought harder to release the rain’s
Anguish and let it pull me higher instead of
Giving up completely, but I let it crush my
Spirits and hope. Let me cherish and love
You unconditionally, the girl and butterfly
With the...
#depression
#strength
#hope #dark
#hope #dark
19 reads
1 Comment
adagio
Poem Published
18th Jun 2021 4:17pm
18th Jun 2021 4:17pm
Poetic Troubadour
A fantasy of tomorrow's shadow
making me smile at your soft skin
pale in blue chiffon
with five pieces of my grin
enchanting a full night tease
as a poetic troubadour
giving up to the throat
making me smile at your soft skin
pale in blue chiffon
with five pieces of my grin
enchanting a full night tease
as a poetic troubadour
giving up to the throat
#erotic
#gothic
31 reads
6 Comments
CherryDEmoKid
Poem Published
18th Jun 2021 12:54pm
18th Jun 2021 12:54pm
Morning Star
Numb it all
Drift me a stray
There i will stay
Take me far
To the morning star
Leave me to drift away
Consume my soul
For you to hold
I will never see the light of day
Drift me a stray
There i will stay
Take me far
To the morning star
Leave me to drift away
Consume my soul
For you to hold
I will never see the light of day
#sadness
#death
#evil
#nightmares
#curse
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0 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
18th Jun 2021 4:16am
18th Jun 2021 4:16am
The Window's Satchel
Bound by webs of frost
At the window's satchel
Haphazardly at times, I ramble
Without a thought, just naught
With a splash of self-importance
And a twitch in my roguish quiche
Squandering a queue
Letting my pen dribble
Resting on poetic laurels
Screening my itinerary
In a codpiece of my evidentiary
Scratching my itch
As your lust ignites my fires
Feeling dark's desperados
Stroking my linchpin
At the window's satchel
At the window's satchel
Haphazardly at times, I ramble
Without a thought, just naught
With a splash of self-importance
And a twitch in my roguish quiche
Squandering a queue
Letting my pen dribble
Resting on poetic laurels
Screening my itinerary
In a codpiece of my evidentiary
Scratching my itch
As your lust ignites my fires
Feeling dark's desperados
Stroking my linchpin
At the window's satchel
#dark
#gothic
26 reads
0 Comments
EphemeralRose
Poem Published
17th Jun 2021 5:51pm
17th Jun 2021 5:51pm
Promises
Don't expect you to notice
Never given any signs
Wish I could've been happier
But all that's left is a faded smile
Don't recognize my own reflection
Never understood what's in my head
Living off of old promises
Hoping to forget
I'm already fading
And somehow I don't mind
Because once you forget about me
You won't ever have to cry
Maybe there will be a feeling
Like there is something you haved missed
Almost like a bittersweet melody
With missing lyrics
Don't expect you to notice
Maybe I...
Never given any signs
Wish I could've been happier
But all that's left is a faded smile
Don't recognize my own reflection
Never understood what's in my head
Living off of old promises
Hoping to forget
I'm already fading
And somehow I don't mind
Because once you forget about me
You won't ever have to cry
Maybe there will be a feeling
Like there is something you haved missed
Almost like a bittersweet melody
With missing lyrics
Don't expect you to notice
Maybe I...
#sadness
#depression
#friendship
24 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
17th Jun 2021 1:01pm
17th Jun 2021 1:01pm
Gates
The matchmaker came by today, but there was no match to be made
Loneliness was collecting debts and fate demanded he be paid
Before I arrived my life had been been mapped out
Fate only allowed me to live so that he could watch me tap out
How could there be so much joy and love to be had and I remain as I am
I walk the garden of Eden with no Eve, there is only me, I am man
Even I deserve something, the lowliest creature of the low
To have someone to hold them tight and say, "I love you so"
I would gladly give a rib, I would even give...
Loneliness was collecting debts and fate demanded he be paid
Before I arrived my life had been been mapped out
Fate only allowed me to live so that he could watch me tap out
How could there be so much joy and love to be had and I remain as I am
I walk the garden of Eden with no Eve, there is only me, I am man
Even I deserve something, the lowliest creature of the low
To have someone to hold them tight and say, "I love you so"
I would gladly give a rib, I would even give...
#love
#dark
#hell #hurt
#hell #hurt
25 reads
3 Comments
TrueLover
Meganne
Meganne
Poem Published
17th Jun 2021 6:41am
17th Jun 2021 6:41am
He left the house but not my soul
The thoughts only seem to come at night,
I want to express it all but haven’t been able to find the words to write.
I lay my head down but my mind only seems to race,
I close my eyes and see his face.
As I drift off to sleep I can feel the warmth of him next to me,
Tears fall as my body realizes its something that just can’t be.
When I wake I find his pillow tucked close to my heart,
As I set the pillow aside I feel the ache of my soul falling apart.
Getting out of bed sometimes is a struggle,
Praying for the strength to...
I want to express it all but haven’t been able to find the words to write.
I lay my head down but my mind only seems to race,
I close my eyes and see his face.
As I drift off to sleep I can feel the warmth of him next to me,
Tears fall as my body realizes its something that just can’t be.
When I wake I find his pillow tucked close to my heart,
As I set the pillow aside I feel the ache of my soul falling apart.
Getting out of bed sometimes is a struggle,
Praying for the strength to...
#heartbroken
#breakup
26 reads
3 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
17th Jun 2021 6:17am
17th Jun 2021 6:17am
a bluebottles tale
A bluebottle’s tale.
Flies, dark a biblical curse flew, over Alexandria
darkened the sky and hummed hell´s song.
This was not butterflies, in a summer glade.
A bluebottle got to a small hole in the window
they were bringing profanity upon the world.
I looked into its intelligent eyes a soldier drafted
to bring wars and hunger to the world,
(No, not a locust plaque that for its own sake
headless exists.)
to make wars and split nations into many pieces.
God had fated humans should remove each other,
he had made the error given...
Flies, dark a biblical curse flew, over Alexandria
darkened the sky and hummed hell´s song.
This was not butterflies, in a summer glade.
A bluebottle got to a small hole in the window
they were bringing profanity upon the world.
I looked into its intelligent eyes a soldier drafted
to bring wars and hunger to the world,
(No, not a locust plaque that for its own sake
headless exists.)
to make wars and split nations into many pieces.
God had fated humans should remove each other,
he had made the error given...
#marriage
#holiday
#aging
#luck
#fatherhood
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