Dark Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Forever Treacherous
Sinking into scorched earth
Fallout from the storm
In a garden evil gave birth
Bloodlust became the norm
Creatures stir within shadows
Master keeps them hidden
Mortals hang from the gallows
Free thought is forbidden
Enslaved by every nation
Residing in the belly of a beast
Created in man’s frustration
Wars are how machines feast
Sinful numbers on a chain
Master claims his brand
Ruling with fear and pain
Marking every human hand
Loyalty can keep us upright
Once already dead inside
Wondering...
Fallout from the storm
In a garden evil gave birth
Bloodlust became the norm
Creatures stir within shadows
Master keeps them hidden
Mortals hang from the gallows
Free thought is forbidden
Enslaved by every nation
Residing in the belly of a beast
Created in man’s frustration
Wars are how machines feast
Sinful numbers on a chain
Master claims his brand
Ruling with fear and pain
Marking every human hand
Loyalty can keep us upright
Once already dead inside
Wondering...
#war
140 reads
2 Comments
Drug
When did I make you my drug of choice?
I did not realize I had you so embedded
Until the withdrawal started
The constant wanting to talk
The pull that was never supposed to be
Withdrawal has started
Fine, don’t call
Don’t text
I am totally fine with silence
Withdrawal has started
To hell with it all
I’m sweating for what?
Withdrawal
Ok, I understand
This is too much
I can be too much
Withdrawal
Numb
I see clearly though
Gone
I did not realize I had you so embedded
Until the withdrawal started
The constant wanting to talk
The pull that was never supposed to be
Withdrawal has started
Fine, don’t call
Don’t text
I am totally fine with silence
Withdrawal has started
To hell with it all
I’m sweating for what?
Withdrawal
Ok, I understand
This is too much
I can be too much
Withdrawal
Numb
I see clearly though
Gone
#dark
93 reads
21 Comments
In love with an image
I'm sitting here waiting for you
You said you were coming over at 7 PM
No show...again
When will I wake up and tell myself, this isn't right?
When will I stop stressing over you?
You're not that great, but I still want you
Why is that?
Why am I so attracted to you?
I need to move on
When you would look at me, I'd get goosebumps and become nervous
I would want to show you how dedicated & in love I am with you
You know that, but you never accept it
I'm dancing around my own wants and desires for you but fall flat on my...
You said you were coming over at 7 PM
No show...again
When will I wake up and tell myself, this isn't right?
When will I stop stressing over you?
You're not that great, but I still want you
Why is that?
Why am I so attracted to you?
I need to move on
When you would look at me, I'd get goosebumps and become nervous
I would want to show you how dedicated & in love I am with you
You know that, but you never accept it
I'm dancing around my own wants and desires for you but fall flat on my...
#fiction
#MentalHealth
#obsession
#relationships
#ShortStory
46 reads
9 Comments
Realign
Midnight large
Your soul is mine
Echoes charge
Stealing time
Tonight the stars
Lose their shine
Heaven and hell
Realign
Your soul is mine
Echoes charge
Stealing time
Tonight the stars
Lose their shine
Heaven and hell
Realign
#ghosts
#monsters
#vampires #witches
#vampires #witches
106 reads
24 Comments
whited sepulcher
#karma
#secrets
#lies
#MentalHealth
#corruption
#politics
1380 reads
Cock Dinner
#horror
#karma
59 reads
22 Comments
A CHANGE IS COMING
As I continue to stand and tolerate, the deepness of the real things, that will affect the very foundation of the world. 🌍 AS we use to connect with it emotionally and physically and spiritually, but yet it's not the same situations that we have known in the past. WHEN things were good for the betterment of humanity and society. For sure we will face now more than ever truly bad times, living in a place that has changed in ways that we could never image. 🤨 For sure people that we thought we could trust, have now become the enemy of the state, with there wicked web...
#greed
#lies
#StreamOfConsciousness
#tragedy
#TruthOfLife
62 reads
6 Comments
Feast O’ demons
Blood sucking humans, we are all
Down to hell’s darkest we should fall
All our days are hollowed we ween
Killing in the name of love and of deen
Angles have left us to sing and pray
To the one who’s game we think we play
Beheading dreams of those we slay
Men, women, children of yesterday
Teeth digging deep in innocent hearts
Drinking blood as souls we rip apart
Night or day in darkness all the same
Standard bearing righteousness we think we claim
We don’t deserve to...
Down to hell’s darkest we should fall
All our days are hollowed we ween
Killing in the name of love and of deen
Angles have left us to sing and pray
To the one who’s game we think we play
Beheading dreams of those we slay
Men, women, children of yesterday
Teeth digging deep in innocent hearts
Drinking blood as souls we rip apart
Night or day in darkness all the same
Standard bearing righteousness we think we claim
We don’t deserve to...
#dark
#death
#hate
#morality
#war
105 reads
20 Comments
Dark
Don't even try to hide it.
The dark knows your fear.
Quite intimately my dear.
Upon the ghastly path to terror's pit.
Into the heart of horror,
the darkness will steer.
Your circuits to a safe reality blown.
Reality is really darkness's shadow.
Take you worst chilling fear,
and worsen it.
A beast in a maniac fit.
Not human or animal,
But a demonic bull.
The unfed dark hungers
with agony's ache.
A bloody beating heart
would surely satiate.
How about yours?
The dark knows your fear.
Quite intimately my dear.
Upon the ghastly path to terror's pit.
Into the heart of horror,
the darkness will steer.
Your circuits to a safe reality blown.
Reality is really darkness's shadow.
Take you worst chilling fear,
and worsen it.
A beast in a maniac fit.
Not human or animal,
But a demonic bull.
The unfed dark hungers
with agony's ache.
A bloody beating heart
would surely satiate.
How about yours?
#dark
#nightmares
69 reads
20 Comments
The Banquet Of Dread
The night is thick with whispered breath,
As I prepare this feast of death.
Witches slink from shadows deep,
Goblins crawl while mortals sleep.
The door creaks wide, they shuffle in,
With toothy grins and rotting skin.
I greet them all with eyes alight
Tonight, we dine in endless night.
The table’s draped in crimson thread,
A severed head, the centerpiece spread.
Ribs splayed open, hearts still beat,
Their hollow eyes, my gift...
As I prepare this feast of death.
Witches slink from shadows deep,
Goblins crawl while mortals sleep.
The door creaks wide, they shuffle in,
With toothy grins and rotting skin.
I greet them all with eyes alight
Tonight, we dine in endless night.
The table’s draped in crimson thread,
A severed head, the centerpiece spread.
Ribs splayed open, hearts still beat,
Their hollow eyes, my gift...
#evil
#horror
#monsters
120 reads
25 Comments
10 COMMANDMENTS FOR B&D PARTICIPANTS
I had heard of the
10 Commandments
given by Moses,
But never the
10 Commandments
for B&D practitioners,
which was on a card
given to me by a lady dressed
in black with heavy makeup
I met while browsing in
the B&D section in a bookstore.
The list started with the
advice that abuse, harm,
or physical injury must never
be the objective or tolerated.
The message was addressed
to a Dom or potential Dom.
THE LIST:
1. Thou shall not cause actual injury
2. Thou shall pre-agree to the limits ...
10 Commandments
given by Moses,
But never the
10 Commandments
for B&D practitioners,
which was on a card
given to me by a lady dressed
in black with heavy makeup
I met while browsing in
the B&D section in a bookstore.
The list started with the
advice that abuse, harm,
or physical injury must never
be the objective or tolerated.
The message was addressed
to a Dom or potential Dom.
THE LIST:
1. Thou shall not cause actual injury
2. Thou shall pre-agree to the limits ...
#lust
#sex
#erotic
#BDSM
#passion
485 reads
9 Comments
Dirty Ace of Hearts
Channeling you
Looking everywhere
Then suddenly
You appeared
A dirty version
Former self
Turned out
Struggling to survive
Your immaculate conception
Poisoned on the avenue
Splintered and struck
I had choices
Take you home
Bathe you in sanctity
Or leave you wounded
For the next John
To worship you
Make you into his likeness
Only to fail desperately
As he won't know
What I...
Looking everywhere
Then suddenly
You appeared
A dirty version
Former self
Turned out
Struggling to survive
Your immaculate conception
Poisoned on the avenue
Splintered and struck
I had choices
Take you home
Bathe you in sanctity
Or leave you wounded
For the next John
To worship you
Make you into his likeness
Only to fail desperately
As he won't know
What I...
#dark
#despair
#hurt
#LifeStruggles
#temptation
180 reads
40 Comments
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