Dark Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 3:46am
2nd Mar 2021 3:46am
origins of humility and understanding never saying never.
shades of bluish grey,
to almost black
traces of green and yellow
perhaps purple around the edges
colors morph
twisting into themselves
s p r e a d i n g o u t
spiderweb-like
a reminder of an inkblot
to be colored
like a Rorschach test
Ohh those questions....
What
can
you
make
of
this?
to almost black
traces of green and yellow
perhaps purple around the edges
colors morph
twisting into themselves
s p r e a d i n g o u t
spiderweb-like
a reminder of an inkblot
to be colored
like a Rorschach test
Ohh those questions....
What
can
you
make
of
this?
#abuse
#learning
#SelfDiscovery
#healing
#DomesticViolence
77 reads
28 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
5th Jan 2021 9:35pm
5th Jan 2021 9:35pm
10 COMMANDMENTS FOR B&D PARTICIPANTS
I had heard of the
10 Commandments
given by Moses,
But never the
10 Commandments
for B&D practitioners,
which was on a card
given to me by a lady dressed
in black with heavy makeup
I met while browsing in
the B&D section in a bookstore.
The list started with the
advice that abuse, harm,
or physical injury must never
be the objective or tolerated.
The message was addressed
to a Dom or potential Dom.
THE LIST:
1. Thou shall not cause actual injury
2. Thou shall pre-agree to the limits ...
10 Commandments
given by Moses,
But never the
10 Commandments
for B&D practitioners,
which was on a card
given to me by a lady dressed
in black with heavy makeup
I met while browsing in
the B&D section in a bookstore.
The list started with the
advice that abuse, harm,
or physical injury must never
be the objective or tolerated.
The message was addressed
to a Dom or potential Dom.
THE LIST:
1. Thou shall not cause actual injury
2. Thou shall pre-agree to the limits ...
#lust
#sex
#erotic
#BDSM
#passion
125 reads
9 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
15th Aug 2020 9:58pm
15th Aug 2020 9:58pm
Roux to You Too!
A pale roux of dead.
Its fatty content mixed with bread.
A poisonous dough floured with lead.
Kneaded and crafted so you’d be fed.
Your loathsome head and vile bust,
Turned to ashes then to dust.
Words of lust morphed into pleas
Stop. Don’t bother they’ll annoy the fleas.
Selfish and thoughtless, no larger crime,
When confused with love will turn on a dime.
You gave it your best ‘twas not enough.
Can’t wait to bury your memory and stuff.
Your come on’s at present,
Alluring at...
Its fatty content mixed with bread.
A poisonous dough floured with lead.
Kneaded and crafted so you’d be fed.
Your loathsome head and vile bust,
Turned to ashes then to dust.
Words of lust morphed into pleas
Stop. Don’t bother they’ll annoy the fleas.
Selfish and thoughtless, no larger crime,
When confused with love will turn on a dime.
You gave it your best ‘twas not enough.
Can’t wait to bury your memory and stuff.
Your come on’s at present,
Alluring at...
#dark
238 reads
32 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
18th Feb 2021 9:20pm
18th Feb 2021 9:20pm
Heavy drops of words (with reading)
Heavy drops of words
destroyed the world of sweet dreams,
They bang on the rooftops
and you can't hear yourself behind them,
In the rain among the houses
falling apart on the playground
Feeling a darkness in everyone
loneliness, cramps and contractions
Heavy drops of words
erupted on the dark city,
How can they describe
that words are powerless to limit
Ephemerality does not honor agonies
and the violence does not understand
The tighter I squeeze my palms
the more confidently they slip away
From...
destroyed the world of sweet dreams,
They bang on the rooftops
and you can't hear yourself behind them,
In the rain among the houses
falling apart on the playground
Feeling a darkness in everyone
loneliness, cramps and contractions
Heavy drops of words
erupted on the dark city,
How can they describe
that words are powerless to limit
Ephemerality does not honor agonies
and the violence does not understand
The tighter I squeeze my palms
the more confidently they slip away
From...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#PowerOfWords
#emptiness
#hurt
148 reads
28 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
29th Jan 2021 9:43am
29th Jan 2021 9:43am
Death
Death is looming
A matter of
An eyeblink.
A matter of
An eyeblink.
#dark
53 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
Today 12:54pm
Today 12:54pm
Depression is my Lover
Sick
Twisted
Bent
Depraved
Lost
Beauty
Depression
BDSM
Self
Turned
Inward
Bleak
Anxious
Postmodern
Antidepressants
Chained
Hope
Twisted
Bent
Depraved
Lost
Beauty
Depression
BDSM
Self
Turned
Inward
Bleak
Anxious
Postmodern
Antidepressants
Chained
Hope
#depression
#dark
#apathy
9 reads
0 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2021 11:44pm
23rd Feb 2021 11:44pm
Ashes of A Soul
Gaze
upon
an absent
haze-faced angel
searching safe embrace.
Guardian’s blind eye
brings forth disgrace.
Sinless soul
set to
blaze.
upon
an absent
haze-faced angel
searching safe embrace.
Guardian’s blind eye
brings forth disgrace.
Sinless soul
set to
blaze.
#sadness
#childhood
#abuse
#LifeStruggles
#WritingPoetry
56 reads
5 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
15th Oct 2020 9:23pm
15th Oct 2020 9:23pm
My Survival
I fight to survive certain
people in my family because
they cause my anger
to explode and sometimes
you want to kill them
but consequences are to high
for me so you write
poetry to get rid of
this anger inside your
soul which is causing
you pain and yes I know
they are family but
sometimes family
get on your nerves
So live life to the
fullest and the
Hell with the rest
people in my family because
they cause my anger
to explode and sometimes
you want to kill them
but consequences are to high
for me so you write
poetry to get rid of
this anger inside your
soul which is causing
you pain and yes I know
they are family but
sometimes family
get on your nerves
So live life to the
fullest and the
Hell with the rest
#anger
#anxiety
#men
#family
#evil
118 reads
7 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Feb 2021 7:00am
7th Feb 2021 7:00am
Just Two Blocks
My friend and I were playing soldiers
(Those little green plastic army men)
When we suddenly heard gun shots
I sprang to my feet because I knew then
I’d have to run home - just two blocks
But when I came to the intersection
I froze when I saw real army men
They were taking cover from the gunfire
And as they returned fire that’s when
I saw grandma calling me in great dire
I could see her yelling but I couldn’t hear
The shooting was loud I froze in fear
There I was, tense, hands over my ears
Waiting to see...
(Those little green plastic army men)
When we suddenly heard gun shots
I sprang to my feet because I knew then
I’d have to run home - just two blocks
But when I came to the intersection
I froze when I saw real army men
They were taking cover from the gunfire
And as they returned fire that’s when
I saw grandma calling me in great dire
I could see her yelling but I couldn’t hear
The shooting was loud I froze in fear
There I was, tense, hands over my ears
Waiting to see...
#soldiers
#war
#death
#scary
#memories
69 reads
13 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
5th Feb 2021 3:47am
5th Feb 2021 3:47am
Unfazed
Instead of a man of peace and love, I have become a man of violence and revenge.
Hiawatha
You are really boring me…with your, once upon a time nursery rhymes
I’m still waiting to hear your manifesto of how you gonna take me down
Claim my crown
Just when I thought I found my little Sub teasing clit
A renegade Hoe who talks like she got balls and in her pants a hard dick
Mm... let me see
You got your head buried in a book of make believe
My stiletto still on your neck, listening to you...
Hiawatha
You are really boring me…with your, once upon a time nursery rhymes
I’m still waiting to hear your manifesto of how you gonna take me down
Claim my crown
Just when I thought I found my little Sub teasing clit
A renegade Hoe who talks like she got balls and in her pants a hard dick
Mm... let me see
You got your head buried in a book of make believe
My stiletto still on your neck, listening to you...
#dark
71 reads
5 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
20th Oct 2020 1:19pm
20th Oct 2020 1:19pm
Halloween horrors
#dreams
#nightmares
94 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2020 1:17pm
23rd Feb 2020 1:17pm
whited sepulcher
#karma
#secrets
#lies
#corruption
#politics
#MentalHealth
644 reads
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