Dark Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
Today 7:08pm
Today 7:08pm
Vile Soup of the Witch (Cauldron Kill Series)
Out of the window she saw another victim stumble from the dark wood
Screaming for help that made the terror sound so beautifully good,
“In the back of the victim’s mind she heard the word ‘come’
Towards a green smoking dwelling where a minute ago there was not one,
“The evil unicorn ended its hunt when his prey reached the front stair
Not a fool to confront the evil which resided within there,
“Releasing purple lightning in anger the evil unicorn ran away in fright
At Godspeed to avoid being in the wicked area before the fall of night,...
Screaming for help that made the terror sound so beautifully good,
“In the back of the victim’s mind she heard the word ‘come’
Towards a green smoking dwelling where a minute ago there was not one,
“The evil unicorn ended its hunt when his prey reached the front stair
Not a fool to confront the evil which resided within there,
“Releasing purple lightning in anger the evil unicorn ran away in fright
At Godspeed to avoid being in the wicked area before the fall of night,...
#dark
#evil
19 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:35am
Yesterday 11:35am
f**king Hell
For those I despise
Fucking hell
Beneath the skin
An open wound
Thirsty for blood, hunger for flesh
Scattered carnage
Wriggling torsos
Pungent, infested disease
Brain candy for dessert
Vomiting repugnance
To die again
Fucking hell
Beneath the skin
An open wound
Thirsty for blood, hunger for flesh
Scattered carnage
Wriggling torsos
Pungent, infested disease
Brain candy for dessert
Vomiting repugnance
To die again
#dark
#death
#evil #fiction
#evil #fiction
44 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:30am
Yesterday 11:30am
Necroslut
She’s a speed freak
A psychotic whore
Often called a horny hag
She’ll fuck-face the dead
Necroslut
Multiple lobotomies
Doomsday inside her head
Swimming in torment
Suicide
Releasing her from anguish
A psychotic whore
Often called a horny hag
She’ll fuck-face the dead
Necroslut
Multiple lobotomies
Doomsday inside her head
Swimming in torment
Suicide
Releasing her from anguish
#dark
#dirty
#lust
#sex
#suicide
47 reads
9 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 11:44pm
15th Sep 2024 11:44pm
The Soul lingers on
Ignorance, as painful and as ugly
As the grin before the boot
Kicks the stomach
The goose-step grin
Stomach strapped and relentless
Laughing at the horror
Swinging from the tree
With a spicy joint
Blown away on the wind
Screams itself to sleep
The painted shells
And wicker sheep
Are sold as art
To gutless freaks
Ignorance, blissfully cruel
Rips through towns like influenza
Smiles from the cell
Fearfully rotten and under control
Like out of tune music
Unable to read
Dies...
As the grin before the boot
Kicks the stomach
The goose-step grin
Stomach strapped and relentless
Laughing at the horror
Swinging from the tree
With a spicy joint
Blown away on the wind
Screams itself to sleep
The painted shells
And wicker sheep
Are sold as art
To gutless freaks
Ignorance, blissfully cruel
Rips through towns like influenza
Smiles from the cell
Fearfully rotten and under control
Like out of tune music
Unable to read
Dies...
#anger
#dark
#fear #sadness
#fear #sadness
48 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 6:09pm
15th Sep 2024 6:09pm
Void singularities
In the depths where stars dare not gleam
A void where silence reigns supreme
Eternal dark, a yawning maw
Bends space and time to unseen law
No sound, no breath, no life to trace
In the heart of the endless space
Where matter folds and dreams dissolve
And all that is, begins to evolve
The aether trembles, pale and frail
As light itself begins to fail
In mirrored dark, the threads unwind
A singularity confined
The cosmic fabric splits in two
Reflections fractal, strange, and new
Dimensions twist and backward...
A void where silence reigns supreme
Eternal dark, a yawning maw
Bends space and time to unseen law
No sound, no breath, no life to trace
In the heart of the endless space
Where matter folds and dreams dissolve
And all that is, begins to evolve
The aether trembles, pale and frail
As light itself begins to fail
In mirrored dark, the threads unwind
A singularity confined
The cosmic fabric splits in two
Reflections fractal, strange, and new
Dimensions twist and backward...
#astronomy
#scifi
#shadows
#stars
#universe
36 reads
0 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 9:27pm
14th Sep 2024 9:27pm
teenage sluts
sordid fiend I am usure who I am
there are so many identities within me
craving their own way
it hasn't always been true
I heard only one voice as a baby
if the others were there I blocked them out
romance a lover who won't covet me in a jealous nature
I'm a writer and I love to interact with the souls of people
some of the spirits get major crushes on the people I talk to
but they in the immortal sense are fifteen years old
they sometimes add their two cents to the whole nine yards
I am content to listen to their chatter ...
there are so many identities within me
craving their own way
it hasn't always been true
I heard only one voice as a baby
if the others were there I blocked them out
romance a lover who won't covet me in a jealous nature
I'm a writer and I love to interact with the souls of people
some of the spirits get major crushes on the people I talk to
but they in the immortal sense are fifteen years old
they sometimes add their two cents to the whole nine yards
I am content to listen to their chatter ...
#fate
#steampunk
46 reads
2 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 4:11pm
14th Sep 2024 4:11pm
Autumn in the Suburbs
Sometimes I think I'm just a murderer,
obsessed with one season,
stalking the red-gold woods and streets
with gloved hands and an ambition
to stain an oak tree red with blood
and thereby bring balance to creation.
Such absolute beauty
as autumn in the suburbs must
be paid for with a sacrifice.
I learned this holy fact when I was twelve
and hiding in the trees
I saw a man garrotte his love,
and leave it underneath a shroud
of crunchy, fallen leaves.
The lonely October unfurls,
a maid upon her silken bed. ...
obsessed with one season,
stalking the red-gold woods and streets
with gloved hands and an ambition
to stain an oak tree red with blood
and thereby bring balance to creation.
Such absolute beauty
as autumn in the suburbs must
be paid for with a sacrifice.
I learned this holy fact when I was twelve
and hiding in the trees
I saw a man garrotte his love,
and leave it underneath a shroud
of crunchy, fallen leaves.
The lonely October unfurls,
a maid upon her silken bed. ...
#dark
#fall
#fear #night
#fear #night
53 reads
1 Comment
HadesRising
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 5:57am
14th Sep 2024 5:57am
SATANICO PANDEMONIUM
"And now, for your viewing pleasure, the Mistress of the Macabre, the Epitome of Evil, the most sinister woman to ever dance on the face of this Earth. Bow your head. Kneel and worship at the feet of Santanico Pandemonium."
My heart flutters to the beat of your leathery wings
Will you take me to the moon and stars?
Suspend my beliefs in God and the death he brings
As we map the midnight sky with scars
She - Satanico Pandemonium
Shall take me to the other side
She - Satanico Pandemonium
Suck me dry for another life
...
My heart flutters to the beat of your leathery wings
Will you take me to the moon and stars?
Suspend my beliefs in God and the death he brings
As we map the midnight sky with scars
She - Satanico Pandemonium
Shall take me to the other side
She - Satanico Pandemonium
Suck me dry for another life
...
#admiration
#vampires
35 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 10:54pm
13th Sep 2024 10:54pm
gizzards
interesting hateful and not listening
hardcore I don't give a fuck
a curse on the tip of my tongue
burns my lips as it tumbles out
shimmering mirage with depths
you haven't met me yet
pluck your insincerity and hex it
my tears are mine to collect
a beauty of a witch too bad
I had to be hurt
I'm not thug hard
but I've been around enough to hold my ground
for the life of me I don't know why
5150 attracts people from me
until the dark horde attacks
from the mist running in the background ...
hardcore I don't give a fuck
a curse on the tip of my tongue
burns my lips as it tumbles out
shimmering mirage with depths
you haven't met me yet
pluck your insincerity and hex it
my tears are mine to collect
a beauty of a witch too bad
I had to be hurt
I'm not thug hard
but I've been around enough to hold my ground
for the life of me I don't know why
5150 attracts people from me
until the dark horde attacks
from the mist running in the background ...
#vampires
#witches
55 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 4:52pm
13th Sep 2024 4:52pm
water
a sweet sister in sin has emerged from the shadows
to tell me some secrets to make me wise
she will not be so careless as to tell me her name
she is here to bring my soul some rest
I've always told the powers that be to masquerade when they come
and veil their minds to protect our thoughts and identity
once I'm sure we have a private wavelength
I tell her to send the information it will go straight to my mind
there are so many levels in the mind
all the knowledge she sent is high-clearance access
she says the word among the powers...
to tell me some secrets to make me wise
she will not be so careless as to tell me her name
she is here to bring my soul some rest
I've always told the powers that be to masquerade when they come
and veil their minds to protect our thoughts and identity
once I'm sure we have a private wavelength
I tell her to send the information it will go straight to my mind
there are so many levels in the mind
all the knowledge she sent is high-clearance access
she says the word among the powers...
#dark
#heartbroken
#mythology #spiritual
#mythology #spiritual
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ChloesPoeticInk
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 9:46am
13th Sep 2024 9:46am
Living for Others While Losing Myself
I'm live for your milestones,
For your birthdays, your vows, your smiles.
I count your moments like stars in the sky,
But my own road stretches for miles.
I stay for your child’s first steps,
For the joy that blooms in your eyes.
Yet when I turn to search for mine,
All I see are empty skies.
I’m here to witness your laughter,
To clap when you reach the peak.
But when I try to find my voice,
I realise I’ve forgotten how to speak.
I live in the shadow of your joy,
Waiting, just waiting,...
For your birthdays, your vows, your smiles.
I count your moments like stars in the sky,
But my own road stretches for miles.
I stay for your child’s first steps,
For the joy that blooms in your eyes.
Yet when I turn to search for mine,
All I see are empty skies.
I’m here to witness your laughter,
To clap when you reach the peak.
But when I try to find my voice,
I realise I’ve forgotten how to speak.
I live in the shadow of your joy,
Waiting, just waiting,...
#emptiness
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
47 reads
4 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 6:22am
13th Sep 2024 6:22am
Ancient Pact of Iron
Through argent smoke and sigil’s glow
The iron spirits writhe in pain
Summoned forth from the deep below
Through rites of ash and binding chain
The magus chants with fervent zeal
Inscribed in glyphs of ancient lore
His voice a key, the arcane seal
To bend the wraiths and bar the door
Through spheres of Netzach’s twisted light
They coil ‘round rods of mystic lead
In shadows black as endless night
The rites are carved, the spirits bled
Unseen currents of ether pull...
The iron spirits writhe in pain
Summoned forth from the deep below
Through rites of ash and binding chain
The magus chants with fervent zeal
Inscribed in glyphs of ancient lore
His voice a key, the arcane seal
To bend the wraiths and bar the door
Through spheres of Netzach’s twisted light
They coil ‘round rods of mystic lead
In shadows black as endless night
The rites are carved, the spirits bled
Unseen currents of ether pull...
#curse
#magic
#mythology
#sacrifice
#spiritual
32 reads
0 Comments
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