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CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
Today 1:54am
Today 1:54am
Of the Devil & Baphomette #5
On the banks of the River Styx
White flowers wait to greet you
Your smile the only sweetness
Reflected in the souless depths
Nearby them they dread
You are the only sunshine
In a place that has forgotten light
You are the precious goatling
Of their forbidden pastures...
The colourful thrush
That sings them out
of the arms of damnation......
Your beauty
The majesty found in the garden of Hades
bearing such an influence there
It is so powerful
That your face
Is sculpted in the dark...
White flowers wait to greet you
Your smile the only sweetness
Reflected in the souless depths
Nearby them they dread
You are the only sunshine
In a place that has forgotten light
You are the precious goatling
Of their forbidden pastures...
The colourful thrush
That sings them out
of the arms of damnation......
Your beauty
The majesty found in the garden of Hades
bearing such an influence there
It is so powerful
That your face
Is sculpted in the dark...
#lust
#beauty
#evil
#spiritual
#pagan
25 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:04pm
Yesterday 10:04pm
Outrageous
Oh by what next shall I be offended
When drops again the expectation ball
Sure to see my stable thoughts upended
As serenity by the caterwaul
From mossbacked minions of mediaeval gripe
So stung that they as well must pay some tax
When all their neighbors won't believe their hype
And choose instead to cast their vote with facts;
Intercepted, like many honest votes
By Diebold chads of Cossack distortion
Boiled up from baneful demagogue throats
Pitching a body politic abortion
To the riff raff rabble hoi polloi...
Who need aristo...
When drops again the expectation ball
Sure to see my stable thoughts upended
As serenity by the caterwaul
From mossbacked minions of mediaeval gripe
So stung that they as well must pay some tax
When all their neighbors won't believe their hype
And choose instead to cast their vote with facts;
Intercepted, like many honest votes
By Diebold chads of Cossack distortion
Boiled up from baneful demagogue throats
Pitching a body politic abortion
To the riff raff rabble hoi polloi...
Who need aristo...
#politics
#morality
#responsibility
#rebellion
#deception
19 reads
0 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:00pm
Yesterday 9:00pm
Have a second drink on me...
Oh, the streams of blood running from between my legs
as you immerse me in the darkness, punishing me for lies.
The ones you love to hear on bitten lips, running red
Stimulating the lust for the endless night...
A body gasping while taking the last breath is so thrilling.
Clawing at soft hips now adorned in crimson stripes
Your darkness opening up inside me on full thrust.
And the soul burns it's last light tonight...
The muddiness of darkness forever polluting my mind.
These blood soaked clothes are so seductive ...
as you immerse me in the darkness, punishing me for lies.
The ones you love to hear on bitten lips, running red
Stimulating the lust for the endless night...
A body gasping while taking the last breath is so thrilling.
Clawing at soft hips now adorned in crimson stripes
Your darkness opening up inside me on full thrust.
And the soul burns it's last light tonight...
The muddiness of darkness forever polluting my mind.
These blood soaked clothes are so seductive ...
#lust
#dark
#evil
#vampires
#sexy
50 reads
14 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:09pm
Yesterday 8:09pm
bruising on an otherwise pretty body
I lust for you
It's not a day here or there
It's EVERYDAY
It's OBSESSION
I'm REPRESSED
You're a songbird
Flowing in vibe and heat
I'm an outsider
A Loner
A dark cloud hoping for rain
I paint
I do that for you
Do you feel it ?
Do you feel soft allure?
Watercolor
Pastels
Sometimes I'm so lonely
My lust turns negative
Then bruises babe
That's also for you ...
It's not a day here or there
It's EVERYDAY
It's OBSESSION
I'm REPRESSED
You're a songbird
Flowing in vibe and heat
I'm an outsider
A Loner
A dark cloud hoping for rain
I paint
I do that for you
Do you feel it ?
Do you feel soft allure?
Watercolor
Pastels
Sometimes I'm so lonely
My lust turns negative
Then bruises babe
That's also for you ...
#lust
#dark
#BDSM
#OCD
#obsession
71 reads
17 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:57am
Yesterday 2:57am
Mar-a-Lago
Men drown themselves within a sea
Full of scripture and psychosis
Bequeathing all humanity
Comprehension in necrosis.
But that is not the sea for me
Nor any coral reef thereof...
Where all the swimmers disagree
On what it means to truly love...
Or what is best for all who swim,
To chop a crop of tasty kelp,
Or harvest krill by skillful skim
Whenever baleen whales need help!
I think instead I'll sit and wait
And watch the world fall apart,
Since to be great...we must hate,
Poor people trying to be smart...
In a...
Full of scripture and psychosis
Bequeathing all humanity
Comprehension in necrosis.
But that is not the sea for me
Nor any coral reef thereof...
Where all the swimmers disagree
On what it means to truly love...
Or what is best for all who swim,
To chop a crop of tasty kelp,
Or harvest krill by skillful skim
Whenever baleen whales need help!
I think instead I'll sit and wait
And watch the world fall apart,
Since to be great...we must hate,
Poor people trying to be smart...
In a...
#lies
#greed
#manipulation
20 reads
0 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
5th Jul 2022 11:26pm
5th Jul 2022 11:26pm
Ah Funny My Breath Ah Smells
#lesbian
#gay
#sex
#erotic
#dirty
22 reads
0 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
5th Jul 2022 11:04pm
5th Jul 2022 11:04pm
Breath
#lust
#dark
#evil #seductive
#evil #seductive
24 reads
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Jul 2022 10:52pm
5th Jul 2022 10:52pm
the girl and the witch
the bruja laughed
spit in the blood and mixed it in her pot
with a few words fervently uttered
a look heavenward and she was done
her incantation a powerful one
she smiled within herself
the powers that be were looking out for her
she felt the night shift as the winds took her prayers away
her hex would stick
deep in the depths of the soured souls
turning the tides she stood in the rift
fighting dragons it was another day in her neighborhood
she mend the gap between the old ways and the new
the young girl would...
spit in the blood and mixed it in her pot
with a few words fervently uttered
a look heavenward and she was done
her incantation a powerful one
she smiled within herself
the powers that be were looking out for her
she felt the night shift as the winds took her prayers away
her hex would stick
deep in the depths of the soured souls
turning the tides she stood in the rift
fighting dragons it was another day in her neighborhood
she mend the gap between the old ways and the new
the young girl would...
#love
#dark
#witches
60 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Jul 2022 5:27pm
5th Jul 2022 5:27pm
Reality Check
If only men had a thought in their head
Above and beyond the stories they tell
About all the things that rise from the dead
On the bat wing flaps they issue in hell;
Doled like the buckets of bullets and bombs
Feeding the beast of perpetual war,
Surely issuing the grieving of moms
As the soundtrack of an entropic chore;
Counterproductive to the Nth degree,
As if creation were placed in reverse,
To spit in the eye of all who agree
That counter production defines what is worse...
The same way the fabled paradise snake
Would...
Above and beyond the stories they tell
About all the things that rise from the dead
On the bat wing flaps they issue in hell;
Doled like the buckets of bullets and bombs
Feeding the beast of perpetual war,
Surely issuing the grieving of moms
As the soundtrack of an entropic chore;
Counterproductive to the Nth degree,
As if creation were placed in reverse,
To spit in the eye of all who agree
That counter production defines what is worse...
The same way the fabled paradise snake
Would...
#tragedy
19 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Jul 2022 2:03am
5th Jul 2022 2:03am
Furnace of Rapacity
Oh how widely swing all human moods
Even in the course of a single day
When beset by cumbersome attitudes
The unchallenged thinker won't send away
To henceforth be oblivion banished
Along with all our unwanted fears
Rather than the hearty sap now vanished
Into puddles of perpetual tears
Watering the roots of a future hate
Instead of something like Vaudeville laughs
Leaving a soul in the jocund state,
Too poorly measured by the charts and graphs
Of computation yoked to obsessions...
Where people matter less than possessions!
Even in the course of a single day
When beset by cumbersome attitudes
The unchallenged thinker won't send away
To henceforth be oblivion banished
Along with all our unwanted fears
Rather than the hearty sap now vanished
Into puddles of perpetual tears
Watering the roots of a future hate
Instead of something like Vaudeville laughs
Leaving a soul in the jocund state,
Too poorly measured by the charts and graphs
Of computation yoked to obsessions...
Where people matter less than possessions!
#politics
#consumerism
18 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
4th Jul 2022 5:38pm
4th Jul 2022 5:38pm
hell
the oppression of the place fell down on me like lead
everyone walked hunched over closer to the sidewalk
the alleys stank of beer and piss
and the apartment courtyard was cloying with the mingling scents
roaches scurried along the place
there were soldiers of a sort there
gang members who bullied through the demons attending the despair
it oozed from the place like an open sore
everyone was high it was the only way to survive the poverty
we didn't eat all day
nighttime we pooled together to make a meal
it...
everyone walked hunched over closer to the sidewalk
the alleys stank of beer and piss
and the apartment courtyard was cloying with the mingling scents
roaches scurried along the place
there were soldiers of a sort there
gang members who bullied through the demons attending the despair
it oozed from the place like an open sore
everyone was high it was the only way to survive the poverty
we didn't eat all day
nighttime we pooled together to make a meal
it...
#anxiety
#dark
#PTSD
55 reads
2 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
4th Jul 2022 4:45pm
4th Jul 2022 4:45pm
Tied Up
#dark
#identity
#war
#gothic
#revenge
17 reads
0 Comments
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