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Black Cherry Vet
I’ve got miles and miles of heart
I’m going to live forever
But I’ve gotta take a step back
Before you kill me
Invisibility whispers doubt
Tempting a pointless race
From your mirror eyes
Without my reflection
Speeding away in my Black Cherry Vet
Music’s blazing trying to forget
Top down Black Cherry hair
Flying high whipping all around
Holding hands with the open road
Merging into the night
Cause I don’t want to fight
Got whiskey and coke on ice
Poured into my glass cup
Topped off at work by my boss
To down all my medications
In the rearview mirror
My vintage caramel face
No makeup on feeling toxic free
Red eyes staring back at me
Speeding away in my Black Cherry Vet
Top down Black Cherry hair
Flying high whipping all around
Like crazy ribbons without a care
My insane spirit’s lighter
Than a single white feather
I’m going to live for fucking ever
I’m going to live forever
But I’ve gotta take a step back
Before you kill me
Invisibility whispers doubt
Tempting a pointless race
From your mirror eyes
Without my reflection
Speeding away in my Black Cherry Vet
Music’s blazing trying to forget
Top down Black Cherry hair
Flying high whipping all around
Holding hands with the open road
Merging into the night
Cause I don’t want to fight
Got whiskey and coke on ice
Poured into my glass cup
Topped off at work by my boss
To down all my medications
In the rearview mirror
My vintage caramel face
No makeup on feeling toxic free
Red eyes staring back at me
Speeding away in my Black Cherry Vet
Top down Black Cherry hair
Flying high whipping all around
Like crazy ribbons without a care
My insane spirit’s lighter
Than a single white feather
I’m going to live for fucking ever
Published 9th Jan 2023
Author's Note
Welp - Here's to the New Year!! hahahaha
Listening to Lana Del Rey - Cruel World
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNT8USozqoo
Listening to Lana Del Rey - Cruel World
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNT8USozqoo
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9th Jan 2023 5:54am
Dear A,
Righteous! Rock on! Hell to the yeah you are! (Going to live forever that is!) Keeping it real and raw in this write. I appreciate the message and am always blown away by the style in which its delivered. Great piece. H🌷
Righteous! Rock on! Hell to the yeah you are! (Going to live forever that is!) Keeping it real and raw in this write. I appreciate the message and am always blown away by the style in which its delivered. Great piece. H🌷
10th Jan 2023 1:18am
Hi H!!
Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment!!
Rock on amiga. You know I gotta make it
dramatic. It's the female in me. I can't help it!!! Literally. hahaha
Thanks for the RL and your Righteous comment!
Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment!!
Rock on amiga. You know I gotta make it
dramatic. It's the female in me. I can't help it!!! Literally. hahaha
Thanks for the RL and your Righteous comment!
9th Jan 2023 10:28am
Was waiting for this write
Emboldened
Fever pitch whiskey confidence
Was waiting for this write
Reborn in sin
Speeding through history
Blacktop mega death avoided
Was waiting for this write
Whiskey and Coke
Cough syrup no fear
Was waiting for this write
You hit it outta the park
Wait no more
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
Emboldened
Fever pitch whiskey confidence
Was waiting for this write
Reborn in sin
Speeding through history
Blacktop mega death avoided
Was waiting for this write
Whiskey and Coke
Cough syrup no fear
Was waiting for this write
You hit it outta the park
Wait no more
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
10th Jan 2023 1:25am
Hi PS
Love your comment. Holy crap. hahaha!!
Was in a moment that passed. No biggie:)
Thanks for stopping by amigo!!
I will be sending you an email about some art!!!
Love your comment. Holy crap. hahaha!!
Was in a moment that passed. No biggie:)
Thanks for stopping by amigo!!
I will be sending you an email about some art!!!
9th Jan 2023 12:20pm
10th Jan 2023 1:27am
Hi Her!
What an awesome comment.!
We just high fived each over the screen:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting.
What an awesome comment.!
We just high fived each over the screen:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting.
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10th Jan 2023 1:29am
You just gave me the most humongous smile with this
comment:))) Thank you so much. You always make me
blush with your flirty self. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by and commenting buddy.
Glad to see you!
comment:))) Thank you so much. You always make me
blush with your flirty self. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by and commenting buddy.
Glad to see you!
9th Jan 2023 2:56pm
10th Jan 2023 1:33am
Hey Tim,
I have a long commute daily to and from work.
I do a lot of driving! lol
Sexy good - huumm
I'll take it!!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
I have a long commute daily to and from work.
I do a lot of driving! lol
Sexy good - huumm
I'll take it!!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
9th Jan 2023 3:27pm
10th Jan 2023 1:36am
Hi NG,
So glad you loved this.
Was in a mood that wanted to drive
and keep going.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by!
So glad you loved this.
Was in a mood that wanted to drive
and keep going.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by!
9th Jan 2023 11:53pm
You need someone who will treat you with Kindness and Respect. The ladies always come first. Keep on writing.
10th Jan 2023 1:39am
Hey Sisco,
This is me being female and dramatic while in a mood. LOL
It disappeared as soon as I finished writing.
Thank you so much for your kind words in this comment.
It is very much appreciated:)
This is me being female and dramatic while in a mood. LOL
It disappeared as soon as I finished writing.
Thank you so much for your kind words in this comment.
It is very much appreciated:)
10th Jan 2023 2:32am
Ain't nobody hurting our Del! Send me his picture, (or IP address, etc) I got this!
Btw, J-Lo just walked off stage in shame. Your look just retired hers.
I obviously sensed the blur of frustration within your write. I hope you succeeded in outrunning it? But it did give you some awesome ammo to use in this write! Our emotions make great fuel for writing. You tore this one up!
I like seeing this type of energy from you. Perhaps not the perceived negative vibes you were feeling. But the pure rawness of it. It's pretty eye opening!
You used it to your advantage, for sure. Well written, speed racer.
Btw, J-Lo just walked off stage in shame. Your look just retired hers.
I obviously sensed the blur of frustration within your write. I hope you succeeded in outrunning it? But it did give you some awesome ammo to use in this write! Our emotions make great fuel for writing. You tore this one up!
I like seeing this type of energy from you. Perhaps not the perceived negative vibes you were feeling. But the pure rawness of it. It's pretty eye opening!
You used it to your advantage, for sure. Well written, speed racer.
10th Jan 2023 2:54am
Hello Styx,
I use my writing for a lot of things. As we should as writers.
Even our yuck - who is this person writing yuck. haha
It did give me some ammo - I'm just glad it's gone.
No no no - I love my J-Lo - but thank you:)
thanks for the RL and stopping by!
I use my writing for a lot of things. As we should as writers.
Even our yuck - who is this person writing yuck. haha
It did give me some ammo - I'm just glad it's gone.
No no no - I love my J-Lo - but thank you:)
thanks for the RL and stopping by!
10th Jan 2023 2:59am
10th Jan 2023 3:04am
From the pieces I've read since I bumped into you here I've found from my perspective that you have a really dynamic energy, play jazz with the medium, I think it's really cool and I look forward to the energy of it and wondering at the meanings your metaphors evoke.
Happy New Year I hope it's a wonderful one for you, full of purpose, peace and passion. 💖🙏
Happy New Year I hope it's a wonderful one for you, full of purpose, peace and passion. 💖🙏
10th Jan 2023 3:31am
Hi Daniel!!
Play jazz with a medium!!!
No one has ever told me that.
I read your whole comment but that stuck in my mind.
Truly flattered that your perspective pieced that phrase together:)
Thank you so much for stopping by
and making my evening!!
Happy New Year to you too and thank you for stopping by:)
Play jazz with a medium!!!
No one has ever told me that.
I read your whole comment but that stuck in my mind.
Truly flattered that your perspective pieced that phrase together:)
Thank you so much for stopping by
and making my evening!!
Happy New Year to you too and thank you for stopping by:)
10th Jan 2023 3:35am
Aw thank you it means a lot to me too that I could bring you a positive feeling. That's mostly why I come here when I'm not writing my really damn long poems and working hours editing the audio poems, it's so hard without a sound studio I have to nip out all these background noises lol
10th Jan 2023 3:46am
I totally get it!
My son records himself playing guitar and occasionally in
the background you hear the bathroom door being shut. hahah
My son records himself playing guitar and occasionally in
the background you hear the bathroom door being shut. hahah
10th Jan 2023 4:30am
Lol snores doors dogs nip nip nip I record at around midnight and it's still noisy
10th Jan 2023 5:57pm
14th Jan 2023 1:17am
Hi Bk:)
I am defiant til the very bitter end!! hahaha
So glad you enjoyed my punk side:)
I love her to pieces. LOL
I am defiant til the very bitter end!! hahaha
So glad you enjoyed my punk side:)
I love her to pieces. LOL
12th Jan 2023 00:33am
Nothing like a fast car, the open road, and that invincible feeling of youth and beauty that flow through your words like air through a scooped intake
I hope you do live forever and keep writing like this
Thank You
I hope you do live forever and keep writing like this
Thank You
14th Jan 2023 1:21am
Hey FB
I love me a fast car. And a corvette is the bomb!!
Thank you for this comment on my write. I had
to take a couple of scooped intakes while writing!
And you are most welcome:)
I love me a fast car. And a corvette is the bomb!!
Thank you for this comment on my write. I had
to take a couple of scooped intakes while writing!
And you are most welcome:)
12th Jan 2023 10:03pm
Black Cherry Vet! hell yeah girl!
I am kind of partial to Midnight Blue.
You definitely have miles and miles of heart.
I love that you are going to live forever. lol
But if you have a lead foot like me then yeah...
You might have to step back so it doesn't kill you.
Invisibility, ah what an interesting power that would be.
Mirror eyes, your imagery is always so delightful.
What music would be playing? just curious.
Black cherry hair to match is so beautiful.
Whipping all around, I can definitely see that. :p
I love driving at night in the mountains...
Merging into it so peaceful...
Booze and medications. Oh boy!
Vintage caramel face... No makeup needed. ;)
Oooo red eyes staring back is kind of creepy. I like it.
"I'm going to live for fucking forever"
I love the confidence, so perfect... so sexy... you are badass! ;)
I am kind of partial to Midnight Blue.
You definitely have miles and miles of heart.
I love that you are going to live forever. lol
But if you have a lead foot like me then yeah...
You might have to step back so it doesn't kill you.
Invisibility, ah what an interesting power that would be.
Mirror eyes, your imagery is always so delightful.
What music would be playing? just curious.
Black cherry hair to match is so beautiful.
Whipping all around, I can definitely see that. :p
I love driving at night in the mountains...
Merging into it so peaceful...
Booze and medications. Oh boy!
Vintage caramel face... No makeup needed. ;)
Oooo red eyes staring back is kind of creepy. I like it.
"I'm going to live for fucking forever"
I love the confidence, so perfect... so sexy... you are badass! ;)
14th Jan 2023 1:38am
Hey Kristina:)
I have a long commute to and from work.
I'm always hauling ass in the morning but in the evening
on the way back I take my time. It's also great for my
writing. It's weird how it can clear your mind and help you
think on things too.
Humm what music would be playing??
Queens of the Stoned Age
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ol8eMfmzpe0
Metric
https://youtu.be/eR0OqJ2nAUA
Brodie Dalle
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFMRJjsZU-4
Just a few songs I love!!!. LOL
And the one about booze and the boss
Well yeah - that is an actual very true statement. hahaha
Enough said!!
Thank you so much for the love chica!!
You are quite the bad ass yourself:)
I have a long commute to and from work.
I'm always hauling ass in the morning but in the evening
on the way back I take my time. It's also great for my
writing. It's weird how it can clear your mind and help you
think on things too.
Humm what music would be playing??
Queens of the Stoned Age
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ol8eMfmzpe0
Metric
https://youtu.be/eR0OqJ2nAUA
Brodie Dalle
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFMRJjsZU-4
Just a few songs I love!!!. LOL
And the one about booze and the boss
Well yeah - that is an actual very true statement. hahaha
Enough said!!
Thank you so much for the love chica!!
You are quite the bad ass yourself:)
14th Jan 2023 1:47am
14th Jan 2023 2:03am
