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deadly melody
Its a deadly melody well with me i'm oh so conciedied its non fiction listen i dont rock skinny jeans im from the old school i dont got 2chains but i pull 2 triggers im a lansing nigga dont like detroit never have so fuck em on my behalf Tru life shit get ya in true life shit benden rimz in ah benz friends how many of us have them friends niggas you can depend on but fuck that cuz friend crossed me now i cant get my trust back i roast ah nigga like biggavel tsunami that wave let me pave the way tell you bout a bitch i use to date tried to play me in got played thinking she was watching my moves be some ol colombo mutha phucka like bitch we have reason to believe your lien on the pussy sell more cookies than nabisco boogie man snatchen up bitchs in frisco then head to the town stay mac dre down one of the realist niggas around i do it movin richy da kid all in ah hoes mouth i miss mgm ca$h&klyde i be fuckin with the east and west side no studio gangsta i dont gang bang shit let me explain got real respect for the c's b's g's latin kings disciples vice lords hellz angels cuz they live that shit nothin you can pretend puttin in work doing dirt been to the pen get with them niggas aint for pretend
Published 10th Jul 2016
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10th Jul 2016 10:09pm
11th Jul 2016 12:44pm
11th Jul 2016 12:50pm
@chump, i think if it pissed you off or offended you, it served dakids intent. Plus I know the parts da kid is coming from, there's pockets of these all over the world. @richydakid spit it bro, let that shit out, you can't let these streets consume you brotha, and like you said "it's rap".
Love and peace bro, may we never again have to pull that piece...
Love and peace bro, may we never again have to pull that piece...
15th Jul 2016 4:47am
11th Jul 2016 11:20pm
i am a vulgar ass. i dont get offended.... i have and will again brawl over the n word..... if all people dont stop using it there will be more violence because of it......leave off an r if you want every one knows what it means ... any one who would be pissed if a white dude called them one should stop using it ... when someone says it around me i say it back to them no mater what color they are.... most dont like it and taste their blood..
11th Jul 2016 11:25pm
man cant say id beat your ass while your safe at home but if i could it wouldnt be over the n word you can say what you want id probably beat you up because your a ass hole chump
11th Jul 2016 11:29pm
Im going to give you tip tough guy go brawl at your favorite rap club since you like rap you shouldnt be ryhming on this site if you dont understand the culture you should be making poems about your shit faced life
11th Jul 2016 11:31pm
you dont know me.. i spar every day...when is the last fight you didnt get your ass beat...i am an ass i said that. i live in okc....wanna come over and find out....
11th Jul 2016 11:33pm
i dont give a shit about rap... its for people that cant sing.... my problem with you is just over your use of the word....
I spar too you dont have a problem with me im in michighan come get me no one elected you to have a problem with me so i suggest you move on
12th Jul 2016 00:22am
Ya know chump speak your mind im not gonna get down on you want a altercation if you have a problem with me you have problem with black society in thats your problem honestly this is america you have freedom of speech so vice versa you badgering me or me you no ones gonna budge
12th Jul 2016 00:28am
One more thing chump if calling me a nigga nigger will make your day and end this thing go ahead trust im not going to loose sleep you would just be calling me ignorant in that case i've shown more common sense in my pinky then this conversation
12th Jul 2016 1:28am
@richydakid dismiss this angry gentleman, it is easy to be a tough guy over the internet, express yourself how you feel, that is why forums like this are created. Dont waste your time with anger that is obviously not going to have any effect on the recipient. @chump you have some anger problems buddy, maybe put down the beer and think a bit more and you wouldn't feel the repression of the people that you seem to be so defensive of. But that's just an opinion, to each is own. I bid you adieu sir, and I hope to never have another interaction with you again. Peace and love to both of you, may you both find it through your writing.
12th Jul 2016 1:38am
bummer about the distance. guess we ll never know. you missed my point about the word i dont need to call you one or want to or have a problem with blacks ... read my poems i want the bullshit to stop. but it wont with every other rap song using it in the lyrics... if we want the animosity to go away we need to stop using it .... all colors... blacks saying it and whites having to fight if they do is no different than a white only water fountain...you want equality or just your turn at oppression....you want to say it... then let us with no bull shit..... you dont want to hear it stop saying it....or do what our dickhead government and the cops want ....us at each others throats...
12th Jul 2016 2:57am
@richydakid dismiss this angry gentleman, it is easy to be a tough guy over the internet, express yourself how you feel, that is why forums like this are created. Dont waste your time with anger that is obviously not going to have any effect on the recipient. @chump you have some anger problems buddy, maybe put down the beer and think a bit more and you wouldn't feel the repression of the people that you seem to be so defensive of. But that's just an opinion, to each is own. I bid you adieu sir, and I hope to never have another interaction with you again. Peace and love to both of you, may you both find it through your writing.
12th Jul 2016 1:41am
what anger bean boy..... i said nothing angry you just cant handle my calm logic and are in denial
12th Jul 2016 1:46am
why is it that the best most people can do as an insult is say something about the beer in my hand.... do i sound drunk?
12th Jul 2016 1:53am
just for the record.... the bad ass rapper with pudgy cheeks and a candycane striped poloshirt his mom bought him was the one who said he would beat my ass... i never threatened him.. i only invited after he mentioned us fighting
12th Jul 2016 12:56pm
12th Jul 2016 10:46pm
Lots of tensions running high, all over the place with social and ethnic groups under fire, either on the giving or receiving end. Let's keep it in check here at DUP--no need to have an online brawl/war of words--we monitor that stuff and do take corrective action if it gets out of hand.
Thank you, and write on....
Thank you, and write on....
25th Jul 2016 00:05am
