Upbeat Inspirational Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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faithmairee
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 4:58pm
7th Jan 2025 4:58pm
Let Me
Let me be clear
I hate nothing
About you
I never stop
Thinking about you
It's so easy to say
I most certainly love
Everything there is
about you
I hate nothing
About you
I never stop
Thinking about you
It's so easy to say
I most certainly love
Everything there is
about you
#happiness
#love
#passion
122 reads
9 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2019 2:11pm
3rd Sep 2019 2:11pm
We Are Stardust
Every part of me, every single particle in me,
From my heart and soul I know
I’m connected to the stars,
With each twinkling light in the night sky,
I am joined to their past.
Through every single galaxy,
Through each cluster and constellation,
My spirit flies amid them with joy,
And it goes on forever,
The universe has no end.
You and I are their children,
Only for a brief moment here on earth,
And when we dwell amid majestic giants,
Then we will understand that like them,
We are stardust.
Journey...
From my heart and soul I know
I’m connected to the stars,
With each twinkling light in the night sky,
I am joined to their past.
Through every single galaxy,
Through each cluster and constellation,
My spirit flies amid them with joy,
And it goes on forever,
The universe has no end.
You and I are their children,
Only for a brief moment here on earth,
And when we dwell amid majestic giants,
Then we will understand that like them,
We are stardust.
Journey...
#universe
#spiritual
826 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
Love it or lump it
Fear is your death
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#philosophical
67 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 12:29pm
6th Jan 2025 12:29pm
Real communications
They say that real communication between two people, is a give and take kind of a mental stimulation, of the mind and heart. 💖 For we each have our own opinions, on the things that are involved in creating a mutual, event of understand between two people's.
FOR sure it's not a debate thing it's a conversation, with someone on a positive and intellectual conversation. FOR sure we may Agree and Disagree but yet that is what a real relationship does for us, as it helps one another as we exchange thoughts and insight and spiritual, subconsciousness of our lives together as one. For...
FOR sure it's not a debate thing it's a conversation, with someone on a positive and intellectual conversation. FOR sure we may Agree and Disagree but yet that is what a real relationship does for us, as it helps one another as we exchange thoughts and insight and spiritual, subconsciousness of our lives together as one. For...
#emotional
#philosophical
#respect
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
98 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 12:18pm
6th Jan 2025 12:18pm
New year's last lest list lost lust
Next year I definetly
will try to acomplish
some dear dreams:
Buy more bubble wrap
and
Count each star in the night sky
and
Learn to converse with cats.
Learn how to juggle
and
chase butterflies in the park
and
wear mismatched socks daily.
Talk in pirate slang
and
master the art of yodeling
and
adopt an imaginary friend.
Speak only in haikus.
will try to acomplish
some dear dreams:
Buy more bubble wrap
and
Count each star in the night sky
and
Learn to converse with cats.
Learn how to juggle
and
chase butterflies in the park
and
wear mismatched socks daily.
Talk in pirate slang
and
master the art of yodeling
and
adopt an imaginary friend.
Speak only in haikus.
#astrology
#funny
#mirror
#NewYear
#SelfDiscovery
95 reads
8 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 5:11pm
5th Jan 2025 5:11pm
Step-by-Step
It takes STEP BY STEP,
You don't have to RUSH,
Just take your TIME,
POSITIVITY IS A PLUS!!!
Just go about it GRADUALLY, and
Take it DAY BY DAY,
If you keep this up then,
You will be on your MERRY WAY!!!
JUST TAKE THINGS SLOWLY,
and IN DEGREES,
Once you have ADJUSTED,
you WILL FEEL AT EASE.
It will be MELLOW and
It will BE A BREEZE,
You got it now, and
YOU AIM TO PLEASE!!!
BE COURAGEOUS and
ENCOURAGE YOURSELF,
YOU HAVE ONE BODY, and
HEALTH IS WEALTH!!!
JUST...
You don't have to RUSH,
Just take your TIME,
POSITIVITY IS A PLUS!!!
Just go about it GRADUALLY, and
Take it DAY BY DAY,
If you keep this up then,
You will be on your MERRY WAY!!!
JUST TAKE THINGS SLOWLY,
and IN DEGREES,
Once you have ADJUSTED,
you WILL FEEL AT EASE.
It will be MELLOW and
It will BE A BREEZE,
You got it now, and
YOU AIM TO PLEASE!!!
BE COURAGEOUS and
ENCOURAGE YOURSELF,
YOU HAVE ONE BODY, and
HEALTH IS WEALTH!!!
JUST...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
85 reads
2 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 5:08pm
5th Jan 2025 5:08pm
Stop Doubting Yourself
MY FIRST POEM OF 2025,
LET'S GET IT, LET'S GO!!!!!
Your NEW YEAR RESOLUTIONS IS TO:
"TAKE HEED TO THESE WORDS, and
SO WILL I!!!"
STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF,
YOU'LL be surprised at
what you COULD DO!!
There's a PURPOSE IN YOUR LIFE,
HE DIDN'T BRING YOU THIS FAR
TO LEAVE YOU,
You're going through SOME STRUGGLES
HE WILL DEFINITELY see you THROUGH,
You Also have TRIALS and TRIBULATIONS,
HE'LL know just what to DO
Don't worry about the whereabouts,
who, what, where and...
LET'S GET IT, LET'S GO!!!!!
Your NEW YEAR RESOLUTIONS IS TO:
"TAKE HEED TO THESE WORDS, and
SO WILL I!!!"
STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF,
YOU'LL be surprised at
what you COULD DO!!
There's a PURPOSE IN YOUR LIFE,
HE DIDN'T BRING YOU THIS FAR
TO LEAVE YOU,
You're going through SOME STRUGGLES
HE WILL DEFINITELY see you THROUGH,
You Also have TRIALS and TRIBULATIONS,
HE'LL know just what to DO
Don't worry about the whereabouts,
who, what, where and...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
70 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:52am
5th Jan 2025 11:52am
We all got a story to tell
Through this life we all have gone through somethings, that will affect us in ways that we have to learn, to understand how to navigate through the process of rebuilding our lives. For it's true that no one is sent to you by chance or accident 🤔 For sure we all have had our share of things, that weren't true about love and happiness only to find, out that it doesn't exist, but yet it does exist in the right one that we choose, to be with in honesty and truth and trust. Yet we sometimes we find ourselves involved, with someone who doesn't even have a glue of what love really, is truly...
#hope
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals
79 reads
4 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 7:32pm
4th Jan 2025 7:32pm
The Voice of Abiding Gratitude I Shall Ever Raise
Grace and mercy
I shall ever implore
as my soul
yields to boundless passions
crosses lines
and in dire straits
found lost.
The Hand of God
I shall ever beseech
to touch my heart
turn hate into compassion
envy into contentment
vanish vanity into modesty
and to raise me up
as I fall.
The blessings of His Holiness
I shall ever pray for
a voice of truth
a valiant spirit
wearing the night to meet the dark
a beauty
oozing from deep within
seeping into souls' hearts.
The voice of...
I shall ever implore
as my soul
yields to boundless passions
crosses lines
and in dire straits
found lost.
The Hand of God
I shall ever beseech
to touch my heart
turn hate into compassion
envy into contentment
vanish vanity into modesty
and to raise me up
as I fall.
The blessings of His Holiness
I shall ever pray for
a voice of truth
a valiant spirit
wearing the night to meet the dark
a beauty
oozing from deep within
seeping into souls' hearts.
The voice of...
#gratitude
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#NewYear
92 reads
5 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 1:09pm
4th Jan 2025 1:09pm
Great Catch! (Lapping it up)
What a great catch,
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
#admiration
#lust
#seductive
#temptation
#romantic
283 reads
23 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 9:30am
4th Jan 2025 9:30am
Saturday Night (The Curse Of The Club)
Saturday night, into Town
City lights, hold me down
Half beauties, prop up bars
Chicken fillets, push up bras
Dance floor calls, come n' dance
Night fever, crazy pants
Corny lines, necking wine
Last waltz, yours or mine?
Sweating, stop! I've slept with a minger
Not to mention, a dodgy finger
The curse of the club stripped me clean
If it was light, I could of seen
City lights, hold me down
Half beauties, prop up bars
Chicken fillets, push up bras
Dance floor calls, come n' dance
Night fever, crazy pants
Corny lines, necking wine
Last waltz, yours or mine?
Sweating, stop! I've slept with a minger
Not to mention, a dodgy finger
The curse of the club stripped me clean
If it was light, I could of seen
#funny
81 reads
15 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
Stay
Rest your weary feet
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
98 reads
12 Comments
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