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MELTED WAX
I saw your heart tonight
when it skipped onto the stage;
having never played the role before;
it was fluttering and excited.
The ethos was beyond Thespianism,
the lines were divine, terrestrial
you invited me on to the stage
our eyes locked like two magnets
Our hearts embraced for a magicsl dance,
fused by passion and bodies becoming one ;
the celestial music was new, erotic
having never been played before.
As our lips slowly touched
fireworks envied by pyrotechnics exploded
a million brilliant colors engulfed us ...
when it skipped onto the stage;
having never played the role before;
it was fluttering and excited.
The ethos was beyond Thespianism,
the lines were divine, terrestrial
you invited me on to the stage
our eyes locked like two magnets
Our hearts embraced for a magicsl dance,
fused by passion and bodies becoming one ;
the celestial music was new, erotic
having never been played before.
As our lips slowly touched
fireworks envied by pyrotechnics exploded
a million brilliant colors engulfed us ...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#respect
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Whispering Adieu
Autumn leaves whisper adieu
putting on their red and gold
as light as balloons on strings
pirouetting in crisp moonlight
a requiem for Autumn dance
as the birds have flown away
rekindling the withering winds
falling from the acorn tree
like ghosts without eyes
whispering adieu
putting on their red and gold
as light as balloons on strings
pirouetting in crisp moonlight
a requiem for Autumn dance
as the birds have flown away
rekindling the withering winds
falling from the acorn tree
like ghosts without eyes
whispering adieu
#inspirational
#nature
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rural sunday
Rural Sunday
I sat on a milk ramp by a road
that has not suffered the indignity
to be covered in a black trickle
Sunday!
the sky was eternally blue
I could
standing up, see the sea
the water was azure as well
is azure deeper blue than the sky
or is it a word used by poets in
the hope he will sound romantic?
Fed up sitting there, but I sat
wanted to see a drifting cloud
the immaculate sky
a tall ship crosses the ocean for a while
balance on the horizon
sailing upside down
till it sank under the weight...
I sat on a milk ramp by a road
that has not suffered the indignity
to be covered in a black trickle
Sunday!
the sky was eternally blue
I could
standing up, see the sea
the water was azure as well
is azure deeper blue than the sky
or is it a word used by poets in
the hope he will sound romantic?
Fed up sitting there, but I sat
wanted to see a drifting cloud
the immaculate sky
a tall ship crosses the ocean for a while
balance on the horizon
sailing upside down
till it sank under the weight...
#admiration
#courage
#forgiveness #gratitude
#forgiveness #gratitude
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Keep Going Please
some days
are long and lonely
tomorrow will be better
don’t stop writing
walking
running
teaching
learning
hating
loving
suffering
living
just don’t
STOP
are long and lonely
tomorrow will be better
don’t stop writing
walking
running
teaching
learning
hating
loving
suffering
living
just don’t
STOP
#hope
#motivational
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Hugger-muggery
22/30
Hugger-muggery
I can tell now, not carved with a pocket knife
haphazardly agog, etched in granite
the only Family I’ve left, moving out of
an umbrella of skin searing heat . . .
No enigma there, however, one exists
Received a box of frozen foods
(I guess their freezer is not empty)
what I don’t understand is why
there’s labels & dates on gravys,
assorted vegetables, bacon
but not on a huge block of meat
Mystery Meat!
Remained my conundrum until I put it in
my...
Hugger-muggery
I can tell now, not carved with a pocket knife
haphazardly agog, etched in granite
the only Family I’ve left, moving out of
an umbrella of skin searing heat . . .
No enigma there, however, one exists
Received a box of frozen foods
(I guess their freezer is not empty)
what I don’t understand is why
there’s labels & dates on gravys,
assorted vegetables, bacon
but not on a huge block of meat
Mystery Meat!
Remained my conundrum until I put it in
my...
#food
#mystery
#NaPoWriMo2024
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rainbow nation
Rainbow nation
It rained and rained, fine rain but persistent
mountains dissolved, and rocks turned into sand
When the rain stopped, a smooth landscape
of peace and camel dung
Before the deluge, people who had sinned were
stoned to death since this was no longer
possible the sinner had to eat a kilo of carrots
until they turned orange and
were not invited to dinner
or supervised at the supermarket
The authorities thought this was a good idea and
made a color program,
to better classify
left-wingers
and...
It rained and rained, fine rain but persistent
mountains dissolved, and rocks turned into sand
When the rain stopped, a smooth landscape
of peace and camel dung
Before the deluge, people who had sinned were
stoned to death since this was no longer
possible the sinner had to eat a kilo of carrots
until they turned orange and
were not invited to dinner
or supervised at the supermarket
The authorities thought this was a good idea and
made a color program,
to better classify
left-wingers
and...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
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Breathe
vigils, 3 am
silver sounds
beyond dusk I dawned
I exist where everything
is made from silence
through cosmic navel cords
let language float into
early morning
foundations of I am
in mountain tones aired
there are no thirsts to quench
I lack nothing
o how I blossom
a nettle stings
pain walks in streets
builds houses of cards
o how I blossom
death you are aret not art
nor obsolete
death you are of living ...
silver sounds
beyond dusk I dawned
I exist where everything
is made from silence
through cosmic navel cords
let language float into
early morning
foundations of I am
in mountain tones aired
there are no thirsts to quench
I lack nothing
o how I blossom
a nettle stings
pain walks in streets
builds houses of cards
o how I blossom
death you are aret not art
nor obsolete
death you are of living ...
#motivational
#uplifting
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What It's All About
elevating consciousness
breathing in and out
sitting by a river
bullrushes all about
blowing in a gentle breeze
bending, letting go
a transcendent moment,
going with the flow
penetrating consciousness
within the all around
where life is manifesting
even underground
and too in the atmosphere
as well in between
everything that's coming
and everything that's been -
becoming one with everything
in and out and in
rhythmically vibrating
simply breathing in
sitting by a...
breathing in and out
sitting by a river
bullrushes all about
blowing in a gentle breeze
bending, letting go
a transcendent moment,
going with the flow
penetrating consciousness
within the all around
where life is manifesting
even underground
and too in the atmosphere
as well in between
everything that's coming
and everything that's been -
becoming one with everything
in and out and in
rhythmically vibrating
simply breathing in
sitting by a...
#meditation
#uplifting
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troll tree
tell me does your bark
skin each scorn
from this land
under leaf
riddle sun
dims
riven
your
ample presence
fleeting light flickers
rustic ardent arms open
welcoming
in
dim
riddled sun
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skin each scorn
from this land
under leaf
riddle sun
dims
riven
your
ample presence
fleeting light flickers
rustic ardent arms open
welcoming
in
dim
riddled sun
copyrights © owned by Ri
#magic
#trees
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IT IS STILL WAITING
PATIENCE
is a challenging
virtue.
Its practice is
related to
persons, things,
events, time, and
experience.
YOUR
prize is waiting
for YOU to
explore, examine,
and imagine how it
will be when
you posses it
and enjoy it to he
fullest
THE
"All-In-One-Gym"
will be a great enhancer
for your health.
We can use it TOGETHER!!
is a challenging
virtue.
Its practice is
related to
persons, things,
events, time, and
experience.
YOUR
prize is waiting
for YOU to
explore, examine,
and imagine how it
will be when
you posses it
and enjoy it to he
fullest
THE
"All-In-One-Gym"
will be a great enhancer
for your health.
We can use it TOGETHER!!
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
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EXPECTANCY GROWS
I nightly sleep with you
and you are not here;
my arms are filled with
new precious memories.
of you and your sweetness.
My eyes are staring at you
but you are far away;
my lips gently touch yours
but it is only a dream.
The moon shines in my eyes
the night winds whisper in my ears
the blessing of loving you
makes every wish stronger.
I awaken with sighs knowing
you aren't here
and my expectancy grows.
Oh how wonderful is this expectancy.
and you are not here;
my arms are filled with
new precious memories.
of you and your sweetness.
My eyes are staring at you
but you are far away;
my lips gently touch yours
but it is only a dream.
The moon shines in my eyes
the night winds whisper in my ears
the blessing of loving you
makes every wish stronger.
I awaken with sighs knowing
you aren't here
and my expectancy grows.
Oh how wonderful is this expectancy.
#gratitude
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
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The Comet And The Phoenix
Have you ever witnessed a comet?
Hurtling across an onyx sky?
Out-shining billions
of stars and galaxies
quilting the heavens,
knowing where she came from,
unsure of her terminus,
relentless in her trajectory.
Her luminous train fluidic
as a space-dust wedding dress;
Shedding encumbrances
imposed for an age,
the beauty of her tragedy,
hugged as the corona
of a fading sun.
During the precipice of her decent,
crashing through the ozone
of an alien world,
impacting its surface
with...
Hurtling across an onyx sky?
Out-shining billions
of stars and galaxies
quilting the heavens,
knowing where she came from,
unsure of her terminus,
relentless in her trajectory.
Her luminous train fluidic
as a space-dust wedding dress;
Shedding encumbrances
imposed for an age,
the beauty of her tragedy,
hugged as the corona
of a fading sun.
During the precipice of her decent,
crashing through the ozone
of an alien world,
impacting its surface
with...
#hope
#inspirational
#LifeChangingMoment
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