Upbeat Inspirational Poems by Top Critiquers
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Happy, positive, motivational and inspirational poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Nov 2019 5:00pm
5th Nov 2019 5:00pm
the dappled dawn
the dappled dawn stretched and yawn
as her warmth spread over the hazy morn
waking her children as she go
the trees heavily laden with dew
reached skyward for her first touch
she smiled inside herself she knew
they understood her the best
eagerly awaiting her presence to usher back the chill night
whispering words of encouragement to her sleepy children
they understood the language of the dawn
the mortals could not know
though they study her steps closely
she was alive
a part of all that draw breath ...
as her warmth spread over the hazy morn
waking her children as she go
the trees heavily laden with dew
reached skyward for her first touch
she smiled inside herself she knew
they understood her the best
eagerly awaiting her presence to usher back the chill night
whispering words of encouragement to her sleepy children
they understood the language of the dawn
the mortals could not know
though they study her steps closely
she was alive
a part of all that draw breath ...
#love
#beauty
#inspirational
#spiritual
#uplifting
511 reads
9 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
12th Mar 2023 7:22pm
12th Mar 2023 7:22pm
Pink Dawn Sky
Pink dawn sky.
Beneath the spell
of your nacreous eyes.
A galaxy of your fingerprints
scatter my thighs.
Your body is my alibi.
You.
Are the answer
to every single why....
Beneath the spell
of your nacreous eyes.
A galaxy of your fingerprints
scatter my thighs.
Your body is my alibi.
You.
Are the answer
to every single why....
#love
#lust
#passion
96 reads
18 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2022 2:30pm
22nd Aug 2022 2:30pm
Honoring Honoria
Dear H,
That's how I start my PM's to Honoria
We've had a long astonishing friendship
I can't think of anyone more well liked on DUP
She brings herself inside my poems
I'm sure yours too
Never judgemental
She always has positive comments
Witty too
She did me a favor
I promised her art
It's my pleasure
I speak for all I'm sure
WE LOVE YOU ❤
That's how I start my PM's to Honoria
We've had a long astonishing friendship
I can't think of anyone more well liked on DUP
She brings herself inside my poems
I'm sure yours too
Never judgemental
She always has positive comments
Witty too
She did me a favor
I promised her art
It's my pleasure
I speak for all I'm sure
WE LOVE YOU ❤
#love
#friendship
#gratitude
#admiration
#respect
245 reads
28 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
15th Dec 2021 10:19pm
15th Dec 2021 10:19pm
MOVE
The Machine is dry.
I hate it when that happens
It is enough to want to make you cry.
All you want to do is pour your heart out
Shout and scream
Voice your anger
At the injustice of it all.
But the right words refuse
To come forwards
And you lousy output sounds like
Me Me Me Me Me Me Me.
Nothing to make one laugh
At the irony, the craziness, the stupidity
Of it all.
Nothing to make one feel Sentiments,
Good, bad or indifferent.
Nothing to make a person laugh or cry
Also
Me Me Me Me Me Me Me.
Bland...
I hate it when that happens
It is enough to want to make you cry.
All you want to do is pour your heart out
Shout and scream
Voice your anger
At the injustice of it all.
But the right words refuse
To come forwards
And you lousy output sounds like
Me Me Me Me Me Me Me.
Nothing to make one laugh
At the irony, the craziness, the stupidity
Of it all.
Nothing to make one feel Sentiments,
Good, bad or indifferent.
Nothing to make a person laugh or cry
Also
Me Me Me Me Me Me Me.
Bland...
#courage
#motivational
#admiration
214 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
19th Mar 2023 1:21am
19th Mar 2023 1:21am
There is No Need... (Fahrenheit 451 Part 3)
There is no need for self-expression”
First they banned them then they burn them
Dystopian futures can be just signatures away
They don’t want the masses to dwell in knowledge
They are afraid the people will seize the day
“…There is no need for creativity…”
The battery runs smoothly behind the pit
The cityscape changes with each rudiment
The firemen chase and throw books away
Setting them ablaze through every movement
“…There is no need for enlightenment…”
Their faces are full of soot and sweat
But...
First they banned them then they burn them
Dystopian futures can be just signatures away
They don’t want the masses to dwell in knowledge
They are afraid the people will seize the day
“…There is no need for creativity…”
The battery runs smoothly behind the pit
The cityscape changes with each rudiment
The firemen chase and throw books away
Setting them ablaze through every movement
“…There is no need for enlightenment…”
Their faces are full of soot and sweat
But...
#music
#books
#art
43 reads
6 Comments
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
29th Jun 2020 6:49pm
29th Jun 2020 6:49pm
Untitled joys of manifest reciprocity
Slow bends at the knee,
1 2
&
1 2 3
And a steady arc over
The river
And on to the
Sea
Mask over my
Mouth,
But,
Eyes
Shining
And every eye
Sees
And smiles
Back
At me
It's that clear
It's that easy
I have the
Power
To
Choose
Joy
Surf pounds to a
Hissing
Retreat,
Ebullient
Energies
All around
And
Everything
Waters and lights
Meet,
In sparkling
Refraction
Reach a hand to ...
1 2
&
1 2 3
And a steady arc over
The river
And on to the
Sea
Mask over my
Mouth,
But,
Eyes
Shining
And every eye
Sees
And smiles
Back
At me
It's that clear
It's that easy
I have the
Power
To
Choose
Joy
Surf pounds to a
Hissing
Retreat,
Ebullient
Energies
All around
And
Everything
Waters and lights
Meet,
In sparkling
Refraction
Reach a hand to ...
#happiness
#love
#kindness
#strength
#nature
498 reads
15 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:46am
Yesterday 8:46am
Do we understand the nature?
Don't know how many natural
phenomenons happen around
us from waking up in the morning
till sleeping at night, but many
times we don’t understand all
these phenomenons.
But If the incidents happening
around us are read and heard in
the words of a poet/poetess,
then we can really enjoy those incidents.
Otherwise we can never understand
the real brightness of the rising sun and moon everyday.
Otherwise we would never have understood
the fickleness of a butterfly and the love of a bee for flowers. ...
phenomenons happen around
us from waking up in the morning
till sleeping at night, but many
times we don’t understand all
these phenomenons.
But If the incidents happening
around us are read and heard in
the words of a poet/poetess,
then we can really enjoy those incidents.
Otherwise we can never understand
the real brightness of the rising sun and moon everyday.
Otherwise we would never have understood
the fickleness of a butterfly and the love of a bee for flowers. ...
#motivational
#nature
#uplifting
50 reads
8 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
4th Mar 2023 11:35pm
4th Mar 2023 11:35pm
Day Star
Not too cloudy
and the snow wasn't crowding the sky.
Not rushing,
as if it was concert goers
to an average band,
with not many couples.
Mostly the bored, or the lonely
Meandering, towards music
because it blanketed their thoughts
and today was a good day
for a little more warmth.
The snow came down to melt itself
against the earth.
It doesn't die. It turns green
and comes back up, through the dirt.
Your bright green kite (plastic?)
Cutting an angled rectangle
through the perforated snowflakes ...
and the snow wasn't crowding the sky.
Not rushing,
as if it was concert goers
to an average band,
with not many couples.
Mostly the bored, or the lonely
Meandering, towards music
because it blanketed their thoughts
and today was a good day
for a little more warmth.
The snow came down to melt itself
against the earth.
It doesn't die. It turns green
and comes back up, through the dirt.
Your bright green kite (plastic?)
Cutting an angled rectangle
through the perforated snowflakes ...
#inspirational
92 reads
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
13th Oct 2022 5:14pm
13th Oct 2022 5:14pm
a dew development (haiku)
the night sheds it's tears
coating a layer of hope
drop by sacred drop
coating a layer of hope
drop by sacred drop
#love
#hope
#nature
#haiku
#uplifting
420 reads
60 Comments
Mrblack616
MrBlack
MrBlack
Poem Published
16th Mar 2023 12:17pm
16th Mar 2023 12:17pm
Deeply compare
Once upon a midnight dreary,
Pondered I upon a day so weary,
With the dull ache of summer's heat,
And fleeting youth that did not last complete.
As rough winds shake the buds of May,
And summers lease too quickly fades away,
So too do our days wither and die,
As time and fate weave their cruel lie.
But ah, sweet love, thou art more fair,
Thou art more temperate, and more rare,
For in thy eternal summer doth lie,
A beauty that shall never, ever die.
No death shall claim thee, nor shall fade,
The beauty that in...
Pondered I upon a day so weary,
With the dull ache of summer's heat,
And fleeting youth that did not last complete.
As rough winds shake the buds of May,
And summers lease too quickly fades away,
So too do our days wither and die,
As time and fate weave their cruel lie.
But ah, sweet love, thou art more fair,
Thou art more temperate, and more rare,
For in thy eternal summer doth lie,
A beauty that shall never, ever die.
No death shall claim thee, nor shall fade,
The beauty that in...
#WritingPoetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
53 reads
10 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
10th Aug 2022 5:03am
10th Aug 2022 5:03am
Crazy Happiness
Be the person you
want to be
By doing what
makes you happy
Be crazy sometimes
Have some fun
But always remember
Treat the Ladies
With Kindness and Respect
While being there
for them when
they need you
to comfort them
So don't worry
Be Happy
want to be
By doing what
makes you happy
Be crazy sometimes
Have some fun
But always remember
Treat the Ladies
With Kindness and Respect
While being there
for them when
they need you
to comfort them
So don't worry
Be Happy
#happiness
#kindness
#hope
#women
#respect
258 reads
11 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Snaggy
Snaggy
Poem Published
13th Feb 2023 9:25pm
13th Feb 2023 9:25pm
007 Heaven!
#romantic
#ValentinesDay
#seductive
102 reads
9 Comments
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