Upbeat Inspirational Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Happy, positive, motivational and inspirational poetry written by the DU Poetry top critiquers
(members who have given lots of useful comments to other poets this month)
Medinda
Poem Published
11th Oct 2018 6:07pm
11th Oct 2018 6:07pm
Puppy Love
Sweet and loyal
Kind and true
Even though his eyes
Say he's sad
Through and through
He's always there waiting
Excited when I'm back
Wants to know
How much I love him
Always afraid
I won't come back
Sometimes he's silly
Loves to make me laugh
When he sees me crying
He's always got my back
So every day I pet him
Taking care of my boo
Giving him my loving
When I can see he's blue
But he's not man's best friend
Because to him the world
Was cruel And mean
And yet he means
So...
Kind and true
Even though his eyes
Say he's sad
Through and through
He's always there waiting
Excited when I'm back
Wants to know
How much I love him
Always afraid
I won't come back
Sometimes he's silly
Loves to make me laugh
When he sees me crying
He's always got my back
So every day I pet him
Taking care of my boo
Giving him my loving
When I can see he's blue
But he's not man's best friend
Because to him the world
Was cruel And mean
And yet he means
So...
#love
#friendship
62 reads
14 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Snaggy
Snaggy
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 7:45am
13th Oct 2018 7:45am
Chasing Rainbows
Watch how those rainbows float in the sky,
Reach for the beauty that they supply.
But don't chase the colours, they might run away,
You'll never quite catch them but maybe one day!
Watch how those rainbows soar up above,
And colours merge like they're falling in love.
You'll never see such a more beautiful sight,
Reminds me of how you're looking tonight.
Soft pastel shades of red, yellow, green,
Likely to be the best you have seen.
Whenever you find you're drifting away,
Look to the sky for that sunny array.
...
Reach for the beauty that they supply.
But don't chase the colours, they might run away,
You'll never quite catch them but maybe one day!
Watch how those rainbows soar up above,
And colours merge like they're falling in love.
You'll never see such a more beautiful sight,
Reminds me of how you're looking tonight.
Soft pastel shades of red, yellow, green,
Likely to be the best you have seen.
Whenever you find you're drifting away,
Look to the sky for that sunny array.
...
#rainbow
26 reads
2 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
14th Oct 2018 6:24pm
14th Oct 2018 6:24pm
Luminous Days
The darkness has finally passed, and the sun is rising
The journey is a struggle, but I’m still climbing
I long to see the light and feel the warmth on my face
The sunlight twinkles as I’m caught in its embrace.
I’ve finally found the luminous days
Emotions fill me and I’m in awe
That tiny ray of light helped me find my way
This unbridled joy I feel is completely raw.
Whether it’s day or night, there’s always light
Spending my days here feels absolutely right
I don’t know if I even deserve this
Yet the sun reassures with its...
The journey is a struggle, but I’m still climbing
I long to see the light and feel the warmth on my face
The sunlight twinkles as I’m caught in its embrace.
I’ve finally found the luminous days
Emotions fill me and I’m in awe
That tiny ray of light helped me find my way
This unbridled joy I feel is completely raw.
Whether it’s day or night, there’s always light
Spending my days here feels absolutely right
I don’t know if I even deserve this
Yet the sun reassures with its...
#happiness
#hope
#sun
#rhyming
#uplifting
30 reads
14 Comments
snugglebuck
Poem Published
9th Oct 2018 11:45pm
9th Oct 2018 11:45pm
INK THINK
visual poem for fifty words
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
29 reads
flowergirl
Poem Published
Today 4:48am
Today 4:48am
Take All Of Me
I lay here naked
not just bared skin
but with an open heart and soul
spread wide across your bed
begging you to take all
take time to feel each touch
feel not just my naked flesh
beneath your fingertips
let my heartbeat set the mood
relax your trembling nerves
lay your head upon my breast
listen to our luv song
forever sang for eternity
from my heart to yours
never shall it skip a beat
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
not just bared skin
but with an open heart and soul
spread wide across your bed
begging you to take all
take time to feel each touch
feel not just my naked flesh
beneath your fingertips
let my heartbeat set the mood
relax your trembling nerves
lay your head upon my breast
listen to our luv song
forever sang for eternity
from my heart to yours
never shall it skip a beat
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
#romantic
#beauty
#FallingInLove #respect
#FallingInLove #respect
20 reads
3 Comments
eswaller
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:18am
Yesterday 6:18am
Another Day Closer
What is going on in that messy, but beautiful head of yours?
I just hope that you know you have so many days and years
Ahead of you. Rest your soul and ease your mind. You will
Live to see another morning and a beautiful sunrise. A thrill
That runs through your veins will never diminish and fade
Into the background like a forgotten memory. You weighed
An option to run away, but you have people who care about
You a lot. Just know you have come back from the drought
And you cannot let old insecurities take you back to a place
Where you did not...
I just hope that you know you have so many days and years
Ahead of you. Rest your soul and ease your mind. You will
Live to see another morning and a beautiful sunrise. A thrill
That runs through your veins will never diminish and fade
Into the background like a forgotten memory. You weighed
An option to run away, but you have people who care about
You a lot. Just know you have come back from the drought
And you cannot let old insecurities take you back to a place
Where you did not...
#memories
#acceptance
18 reads
4 Comments
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