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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 7:15pm
25th Apr 2025 7:15pm
Tranny/ Woman / Man / Other
I need you
I'm different
I'm your kind of woman
Or not
I'm sexy
That's what guys want
I'm emotional
They don't want that
I'm complicated
Some want that
I'm fucked up
They change the subject
Flesh
Give me your flesh
I'll blow you away
I'm sexy
I'm different
I cry sometimes
Chorus:
He is a she
She is a he
I'm different
SCREAMS
DEAL WITH IT
DEAL WITH IT
DEAL WITH IT
I'm different
I'm your kind of woman
Or not
I'm sexy
That's what guys want
I'm emotional
They don't want that
I'm complicated
Some want that
I'm fucked up
They change the subject
Flesh
Give me your flesh
I'll blow you away
I'm sexy
I'm different
I cry sometimes
Chorus:
He is a she
She is a he
I'm different
SCREAMS
DEAL WITH IT
DEAL WITH IT
DEAL WITH IT
#LGBT
#men
#transgender
#TruthOfLife
#women
91 reads
15 Comments
Nodrax_tepes
nodrax
nodrax
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 9:50pm
22nd Apr 2025 9:50pm
Mireya
I saw a bird
,lil birdy chirping song ,
no wrong no rights the sun don't shine if the night don't exist
Lil bird singing a song
So I sat down the tree my cowboy hat at ease a guitar on my hip started playing along
Mireya mireya
My pockets gon fill tonight
Mireya mireya
Grace and braces right ny wrongs tonight
Lil bird started dancing as the guitar played right
It looked at me and sang along
Son you read the bible never read it right Greater is he in you ,you pray for miracles when you should perform the miracles
The...
,lil birdy chirping song ,
no wrong no rights the sun don't shine if the night don't exist
Lil bird singing a song
So I sat down the tree my cowboy hat at ease a guitar on my hip started playing along
Mireya mireya
My pockets gon fill tonight
Mireya mireya
Grace and braces right ny wrongs tonight
Lil bird started dancing as the guitar played right
It looked at me and sang along
Son you read the bible never read it right Greater is he in you ,you pray for miracles when you should perform the miracles
The...
#grief
#hope
28 reads
0 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 7:19am
18th Apr 2025 7:19am
IT'S THE BEST WAY
Verse:1
A talented hand
Is a talented brain
Ink so fresh like words that stand
Beautiful gestures that attain....
Verse: 2
I love to express
Like I do my dress
Precious heart that tries to confess
The struggle of my huge stress
Verse: 3
Flowers dance
With aroma immense
Petals with colors that caress
As they fall.They leave a mess.. but still the best
CHORUS:
It's the best way of the rest "Of the rest"
The way life shows...
A talented hand
Is a talented brain
Ink so fresh like words that stand
Beautiful gestures that attain....
Verse: 2
I love to express
Like I do my dress
Precious heart that tries to confess
The struggle of my huge stress
Verse: 3
Flowers dance
With aroma immense
Petals with colors that caress
As they fall.They leave a mess.. but still the best
CHORUS:
It's the best way of the rest "Of the rest"
The way life shows...
#LifeCycle
#lyrics
#metaphor
#MyInspiration
#PowerOfWords
81 reads
2 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 9:13am
10th Apr 2025 9:13am
D Minor
Candlelight flickers against a dark ceiling
Another tequila shot with a beer backer
Writing blunt words forecasting a feeling
This ink that stains the page like lacquer
Miserable vibes eating from the inside out
Spiraling deeper into famine and drought
Penning poetry in the chord of D minor
Reflecting what’s going on in this fragile heart
Always the opening act to the headliner
Knowing who’s real or just acting the part
Different kind of cat running through lives
An open book with a stubborn streak
When...
Another tequila shot with a beer backer
Writing blunt words forecasting a feeling
This ink that stains the page like lacquer
Miserable vibes eating from the inside out
Spiraling deeper into famine and drought
Penning poetry in the chord of D minor
Reflecting what’s going on in this fragile heart
Always the opening act to the headliner
Knowing who’s real or just acting the part
Different kind of cat running through lives
An open book with a stubborn streak
When...
#philosophical
147 reads
19 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 9:49pm
9th Apr 2025 9:49pm
Song Lyrics inspired by Muse Xx
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
In love
I gave you
Vodka
Lime
Mind
Grime
Out of time
Thought
Caught
Haute
Wrought
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
Make you mine
Even if ....
You're going prime
Medium
Rare
I stare
I don't care
Catch me
Report me
Slash me
Cash me
Flash me
It's a dare
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
In love
I gave you
Vodka
Lime
Mind
Grime
Out of time
Thought
Caught
Haute
Wrought
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
Make you mine
Even if ....
You're going prime
Medium
Rare
I stare
I don't care
Catch me
Report me
Slash me
Cash me
Flash me
It's a dare
#crush
#lover
#lyrics
#music
#PopCulture
156 reads
23 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 12:15pm
9th Apr 2025 12:15pm
Let's Go
Maybe it was a rash decision
Maybe just a case of blurry vision
For some reason, she thought I was hot
Hey, I gotta mirror, I know that I'm not
This girl was way outa my league
Was she nuts? I was intrigued
Everything can change in the blink of an eye
I know what all of you think, and so do I
She musta escaped from a mental institution
Maybe had a debt to the nerd restitution
All I knew was I'm not going to say no
noooooo way
I said "C'mon girl, let's play"
Her angelic voice filled the room with...
Maybe just a case of blurry vision
For some reason, she thought I was hot
Hey, I gotta mirror, I know that I'm not
This girl was way outa my league
Was she nuts? I was intrigued
Everything can change in the blink of an eye
I know what all of you think, and so do I
She musta escaped from a mental institution
Maybe had a debt to the nerd restitution
All I knew was I'm not going to say no
noooooo way
I said "C'mon girl, let's play"
Her angelic voice filled the room with...
#FallingInLove
86 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 7:27am
3rd Apr 2025 7:27am
Bound To Rust
Fucking circus just pulled into town
Flimflam ringmaster wants to burn it down
Unelected sidekick dancing like a clown
Psychotic logic a smile conceals a frown
How much more has to happen?
To wake them from perpetual sleep?
Disappearing those humans they hate
When it’s the billionaires inflicting pain
This self-induced fall from grace
Turning heel as the world watches in disgust
Pulling the rug while rigging the race
Without allies our foundation is bound to rust
Make America ignorant while killing hope ...
Flimflam ringmaster wants to burn it down
Unelected sidekick dancing like a clown
Psychotic logic a smile conceals a frown
How much more has to happen?
To wake them from perpetual sleep?
Disappearing those humans they hate
When it’s the billionaires inflicting pain
This self-induced fall from grace
Turning heel as the world watches in disgust
Pulling the rug while rigging the race
Without allies our foundation is bound to rust
Make America ignorant while killing hope ...
#philosophical
152 reads
17 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 9:39pm
28th Mar 2025 9:39pm
The Upbringing
Your parents have a problem and you live in constant pain
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what they tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what they tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
#LifeStruggles
#lyrics
#parent
#religion
#rhyming
113 reads
8 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 6:47pm
28th Mar 2025 6:47pm
Standing On Love
I long for the synergy
of our combined love energy
Two souls spinning in a swirl
in a new spiritual world
Living in our own Eden
on an island in Sweden
Feeling the glory of heaven above
just us-Standing on Love
Our entanglement is on a quantum level
and in the joy of this we revel
With you as a Co-polit at the helm
We seek a new metaphysical realm
No longer constrained by this reality
we seek immortality
The fantasy that I dreamt of
we two-Standing on Love
...
of our combined love energy
Two souls spinning in a swirl
in a new spiritual world
Living in our own Eden
on an island in Sweden
Feeling the glory of heaven above
just us-Standing on Love
Our entanglement is on a quantum level
and in the joy of this we revel
With you as a Co-polit at the helm
We seek a new metaphysical realm
No longer constrained by this reality
we seek immortality
The fantasy that I dreamt of
we two-Standing on Love
...
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
165 reads
0 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 3:53pm
22nd Mar 2025 3:53pm
Give U My Love
I am so sorry
My tongue won't play it's part
wish you could to listen my heart
I was hooked from the start
you are both beautiful and smart
when you run to the mini-mart
it feels like years of being apart
my emotions are so strong
i think about you all day long
I want to give you my love
it's all I have been dreaming of
(repeat)
I wake up everyday
about you to the Lord i pray
hoping you will feel the same way
and forever together we...
My tongue won't play it's part
wish you could to listen my heart
I was hooked from the start
you are both beautiful and smart
when you run to the mini-mart
it feels like years of being apart
my emotions are so strong
i think about you all day long
I want to give you my love
it's all I have been dreaming of
(repeat)
I wake up everyday
about you to the Lord i pray
hoping you will feel the same way
and forever together we...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#hope
#love
122 reads
0 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 2:16pm
12th Mar 2025 2:16pm
Emotional
My emotions are much bigger than me
I try to keep them in, but they spill out eventually
Flooding and dragging me into the ground
And they can’t even see what keeps me down
You can’t even see how you’ve hurt me now
Oh
You can’t even see you’ve hurt me now
Every comment cuts a little more
You’re joking that I’m crazy
but that’s how you made me
You love that I’m insecure
Holding back on the loving
So I’ll take your nothing
and I don’t deserve more
The current gets stronger and stronger
Increasing in violence...
I try to keep them in, but they spill out eventually
Flooding and dragging me into the ground
And they can’t even see what keeps me down
You can’t even see how you’ve hurt me now
Oh
You can’t even see you’ve hurt me now
Every comment cuts a little more
You’re joking that I’m crazy
but that’s how you made me
You love that I’m insecure
Holding back on the loving
So I’ll take your nothing
and I don’t deserve more
The current gets stronger and stronger
Increasing in violence...
#feminism
#ignorance
#manipulation
#weakness
#women
110 reads
1 Comment
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 8:58pm
11th Mar 2025 8:58pm
Sketch Lines (Full version)
I know we are young
I know we have no idea
Where we’ll end up
We’re just finding our way
We won’t stay the same
And I don’t want to
Neither do you
I am hiding in the minutes, the seconds
That I get to kiss you
Some day will come, when we break up
And I have to miss you
Cause we’ll fight, come undone
Too many bullets in our guns
To stay safe
To stay this way
We are just sketching out the lines
Too much is still undefined
So hold me tighter
Than you’ve ever done before
Please come...
I know we have no idea
Where we’ll end up
We’re just finding our way
We won’t stay the same
And I don’t want to
Neither do you
I am hiding in the minutes, the seconds
That I get to kiss you
Some day will come, when we break up
And I have to miss you
Cause we’ll fight, come undone
Too many bullets in our guns
To stay safe
To stay this way
We are just sketching out the lines
Too much is still undefined
So hold me tighter
Than you’ve ever done before
Please come...
#bittersweet
#fear
#heartbroken
#love
#teens
84 reads
0 Comments
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