Wife Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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wife seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Beatrice and Arthur
Arthur comes down in a robe, pajama and slippers because it is 5:30 in the morning, and the damn blender is going off in the kitchen. And here's how that conversation went.
Beatrice
Ohh thank goodness you're awake. I was waiting until you rose. I need your assistance on this
Arthur
B, you woke me up at this godforsaken hour. For what reason?
Beatrice
You know I said I was starting my whole exercise regime. You said you would assist me with anything I ask of you. And I need your...
Beatrice
Ohh thank goodness you're awake. I was waiting until you rose. I need your assistance on this
Arthur
B, you woke me up at this godforsaken hour. For what reason?
Beatrice
You know I said I was starting my whole exercise regime. You said you would assist me with anything I ask of you. And I need your...
#erotic
#husband
#wife
107 reads
18 Comments
No Whoopie For Me
I'm not in the mood
I have a headache, good night
You sound like my wife
I have a headache, good night
You sound like my wife
#girlfriend
#satirical
#senryu
#sex
#wife
59 reads
6 Comments
Spooning, Knifing & Forking
My wife only wants me to spoon her when she's hammered
Any other time, she don't want me near
That's ok
I actually despise her and spooning
One night she came home incredibly drunk
She was all over the place
Stumbling, making no sense
Fell backwards into my cabinet
Breaking some heirloom figurines I had from my family
No apology, nothing
My blood was beginning to boil
I yelled at her, "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!!"
I was tired, so I went to bed
Few moments later she came into bed
She was frisky and...
Any other time, she don't want me near
That's ok
I actually despise her and spooning
One night she came home incredibly drunk
She was all over the place
Stumbling, making no sense
Fell backwards into my cabinet
Breaking some heirloom figurines I had from my family
No apology, nothing
My blood was beginning to boil
I yelled at her, "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!!"
I was tired, so I went to bed
Few moments later she came into bed
She was frisky and...
#food
#horror
#murder
#ShortStory
#wife
60 reads
2 Comments
he says
couldn’t make it up the hill without
you holding my hand -
and it’s not about the state of my knees,
it’s about love ..
you holding my hand -
and it’s not about the state of my knees,
it’s about love ..
#wife
#aging
#illness #MentalHealth
#illness #MentalHealth
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6 Comments
Brides of dread
Greatness all we are
And everything we've become
In this world
Of dying gracious flowers
Poisoned at the roots
Bound together they are
By their twisted tongues
Brides of dread
Damned sisters dancing around
To musical chaos
Two spectres fly tonight
The hover close to my window
My sleeping dreams
Slipping into their fatal embrace
Triangle of pain
This is lust, this is love
Whatever it is I see my death
By their lovely hands
My blood fades into their veins
All passion undone
And everything we've become
In this world
Of dying gracious flowers
Poisoned at the roots
Bound together they are
By their twisted tongues
Brides of dread
Damned sisters dancing around
To musical chaos
Two spectres fly tonight
The hover close to my window
My sleeping dreams
Slipping into their fatal embrace
Triangle of pain
This is lust, this is love
Whatever it is I see my death
By their lovely hands
My blood fades into their veins
All passion undone
#dark
#death
#gothic
#love
#wife
73 reads
6 Comments
Honey
#love
#romantic
#wife
269 reads
0 Comments
Plotting her demise
I may kill my wife
she causes me pain & strife
tells me I can't write
How will it be done?
maybe a knife or a gun
once done, time to run
she causes me pain & strife
tells me I can't write
How will it be done?
maybe a knife or a gun
once done, time to run
#anger
#LifeAsAWriter
#rhyming
#senryu
#wife
57 reads
4 Comments
Death is lurking
Hear the darkness breathe
Watching every step I take
Wish you were with me
Watching every step I take
Wish you were with me
#dark
#death
#senryu
#support
#wife
57 reads
4 Comments
It's Complicated
I am a guy
So some may ask why
I remain faithful and true
When technically I have no reason to
You aren't my girlfriend
But I want no one else to that end
I am following my own rule book
Nowhere else do I want to look
I will not window shop
No desire through other women to hop
I am solely investing in you
No one else will do
I want what we have to thrive
That won't happen if I'm always doing a test drive
No tinder, match, POF, or bumble
If I go there I would only fumble
Love is never meant to be a game
But...
So some may ask why
I remain faithful and true
When technically I have no reason to
You aren't my girlfriend
But I want no one else to that end
I am following my own rule book
Nowhere else do I want to look
I will not window shop
No desire through other women to hop
I am solely investing in you
No one else will do
I want what we have to thrive
That won't happen if I'm always doing a test drive
No tinder, match, POF, or bumble
If I go there I would only fumble
Love is never meant to be a game
But...
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#relationships
#romantic
#wife
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0 Comments
between the lines
Yet the deepest truths are best read between the lines, and, for
the most part, refuse to be written.”—Amos Bronson Alcott
and yet i read you,
glyph and word and line,
and contemplate you
as my book divine,
parsing you mornings
—e’en at dead of night!—
sifting fair warnings
from your naked light.
rude metaphors hide
underneath your eyes,
stripping all my pride
as deep longings rise.
giggle all you want
at my helplessness:
you know that i can’t
half your milk express;
...
the most part, refuse to be written.”—Amos Bronson Alcott
and yet i read you,
glyph and word and line,
and contemplate you
as my book divine,
parsing you mornings
—e’en at dead of night!—
sifting fair warnings
from your naked light.
rude metaphors hide
underneath your eyes,
stripping all my pride
as deep longings rise.
giggle all you want
at my helplessness:
you know that i can’t
half your milk express;
...
#husband
#learning
#love
#relationships
#wife
104 reads
2 Comments
Maybe she should have asked for cereal instead
Kind of sick of my wife
This marriage is getting the best of me
All she does is complain, nag, whine and bark orders
I could divorce her
I could up & leave
I'm just lazy I guess
I zone out most of the time
I'll escape by writing poems or stories
Other times I'll exercise or go for a walk or bike ride
I always keep myself busy
I'm a perfectionist
Our home is always clean, organized and neat
She knows how well I take care of everything and knows she don't need to lift a finger
The one thing she does is cook
Very good at...
This marriage is getting the best of me
All she does is complain, nag, whine and bark orders
I could divorce her
I could up & leave
I'm just lazy I guess
I zone out most of the time
I'll escape by writing poems or stories
Other times I'll exercise or go for a walk or bike ride
I always keep myself busy
I'm a perfectionist
Our home is always clean, organized and neat
She knows how well I take care of everything and knows she don't need to lift a finger
The one thing she does is cook
Very good at...
#FeelingTrapped
#fiction
#food
#wife
#satirical
83 reads
2 Comments
Sell Your Wife & Remodel Your Home
Across the street my neighbor was having his house updated
New siding, new windows, new roof, new garage door etc..
I said hey Scott
Your home is gonna look amazing
He said, "Thanks, Thanks!"
I said I haven't seen your wife
He said, "Yeah well, let's just say she went on a permanent vacation"
I said, "Really? Whereabouts?"
He said, "She went to visit family in California"
Oh OK
2 weeks later I find out from another neighbor, Phil that Scott sold his wife to the military
I said, "WHAT!!?" ...
New siding, new windows, new roof, new garage door etc..
I said hey Scott
Your home is gonna look amazing
He said, "Thanks, Thanks!"
I said I haven't seen your wife
He said, "Yeah well, let's just say she went on a permanent vacation"
I said, "Really? Whereabouts?"
He said, "She went to visit family in California"
Oh OK
2 weeks later I find out from another neighbor, Phil that Scott sold his wife to the military
I said, "WHAT!!?" ...
#aliens
#fiction
#greed
#scifi
#wife
70 reads
3 Comments
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