Wife Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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wife seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 8:03pm
1st Apr 2025 8:03pm
My apologies to you
#confessional
#murder
#wife
51 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 11:18pm
16th Mar 2025 11:18pm
She loves the taste of scrotum
#dirty
#food
#marriage
#orgasm
#wife
195 reads
4 Comments
SunflowerShares
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 2:23pm
16th Mar 2025 2:23pm
Dear future husband
In realms of faith, where hearts entwine,
I envision us, a love divine.
Though we have not met, my soul can see,
A bond of Christ, you and me.
Our love will flourish, rooted deep,
In prayer and scripture, our hearts will keep.
We'll walk together, hand in hand,
Through life's joys and challenges, on holy ground we'll stand.
Our conversations, a sweet, sweet sound,
Will echo with laughter, tears, and hearts unbound.
We'll speak of Jesus, our hearts' desire,
And how His love, our love, will set on fire.
In your eyes,...
I envision us, a love divine.
Though we have not met, my soul can see,
A bond of Christ, you and me.
Our love will flourish, rooted deep,
In prayer and scripture, our hearts will keep.
We'll walk together, hand in hand,
Through life's joys and challenges, on holy ground we'll stand.
Our conversations, a sweet, sweet sound,
Will echo with laughter, tears, and hearts unbound.
We'll speak of Jesus, our hearts' desire,
And how His love, our love, will set on fire.
In your eyes,...
#FallingInLove
#husband
#ILoveYou
#respect
#wife
119 reads
0 Comments
RPM1on1
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:05pm
28th Feb 2025 9:05pm
Lost In Thought
#beauty
#orgasm
#sexy #wife
#sexy #wife
213 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 11:44am
6th Feb 2025 11:44am
A problem occured while fisting my girl
#dirty
#girlfriend
#orgasm
#porn
#wife
260 reads
11 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 5:36am
27th Jan 2025 5:36am
My Better Angel
No femme fatale rocks a housecoat as well
as my beloved of thirty-five years,
since with it she bolstered me, truth to tell,
far beyond the phonemes of sonneteers
or any bunny in a magazine
shorn of their drapery mysterium
so notorious at setting the scene
for male gaze fever delirium...
which was always the wealth I truly craved
when often I had surplus love to spend
and she so fervent by that to be laved,
both inside and out, and at either end...
where even becoming fifty-seven
she comes across as a piece of heaven!
as my beloved of thirty-five years,
since with it she bolstered me, truth to tell,
far beyond the phonemes of sonneteers
or any bunny in a magazine
shorn of their drapery mysterium
so notorious at setting the scene
for male gaze fever delirium...
which was always the wealth I truly craved
when often I had surplus love to spend
and she so fervent by that to be laved,
both inside and out, and at either end...
where even becoming fifty-seven
she comes across as a piece of heaven!
#admiration
#birthday
#love #wife
#love #wife
184 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 12:42pm
18th Jan 2025 12:42pm
Cum here and watch
#girlfriend
#orgasm
#sex
#uplifting
#wife
296 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
The DUP Court
Ladies and Gentlemen
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
#ForbiddenLove
#girlfriend
#husband
#lust
#wife
253 reads
8 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 00:02am
1st Jan 2025 00:02am
Is there a GOD
I’m standing in line at the children’s graveyard
I look for my lost son and my beautiful wife
Stand among the most inhumane condition
But im looking for family to set me free
See a sneaker that looks like his
Pull up a rock I’ve found my buried son
Dig like a dog you cant stop me
When i get to him he’s not breathing
I wail out and scream and say is there a GOD
If there is i cant see him
I look for my lost son and my beautiful wife
Stand among the most inhumane condition
But im looking for family to set me free
See a sneaker that looks like his
Pull up a rock I’ve found my buried son
Dig like a dog you cant stop me
When i get to him he’s not breathing
I wail out and scream and say is there a GOD
If there is i cant see him
#children
#death
#war #wife
#war #wife
95 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 10:57am
14th Dec 2024 10:57am
It feels good, so who really cares
When he would get off from work he would come home to his wife and her irritable old mother
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
#anger
#frustration
#orgasm
#parent
#wife
141 reads
10 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 3:20am
13th Dec 2024 3:20am
A Friend's One Christmas Nightmare
Eric saw Santa opening gifts.
One gift contains his wife's naked corpse.
He saw Santa's a skeleton.
One gift contains his wife's naked corpse.
He saw Santa's a skeleton.
#Christmas
#death
#fiction
#sex
#wife
119 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 4:52pm
11th Dec 2024 4:52pm
Marriage Life
I'm use to spending my days in bad weather.
Hot, cold, sleet, snow, whiteouts it didn't matter.
Pushing myself to the limits because I hated to see you sick.
Who would have thought that the moments away would be the reason that we'd eventually split.
Thank God you made it through and now the kids are grown.
The only down fall is I'm sitting at this table eating breakfast all alone.
When just 10 years ago I was singing to a different tune.
I can't say I hate you because yes I understand you, even though sometimes I wish it wasn't true.
On the outside...
Hot, cold, sleet, snow, whiteouts it didn't matter.
Pushing myself to the limits because I hated to see you sick.
Who would have thought that the moments away would be the reason that we'd eventually split.
Thank God you made it through and now the kids are grown.
The only down fall is I'm sitting at this table eating breakfast all alone.
When just 10 years ago I was singing to a different tune.
I can't say I hate you because yes I understand you, even though sometimes I wish it wasn't true.
On the outside...
#husband
#love
#marriage
#separation
#wife
121 reads
0 Comments
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