Wife Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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wife seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Lemniscate (infinite)
No number larger or greater,
The number with limitless power,
Curved as a lazy eight,
or better known as the lemniscate,
It can be odd or even if applied to a rose curve,
What you put in is what you deserve,
If n is odd the number of petals is n,
If n is even then the number of petals is 2n,
Even the end, for you and I because we are infinite,
With even rose curves that’s keeps us preoccupied,
This equation will always involves 2,
(2x+2y) 2=x2-y2, two ex to match two why it had to be me and you,
The circle...
The number with limitless power,
Curved as a lazy eight,
or better known as the lemniscate,
It can be odd or even if applied to a rose curve,
What you put in is what you deserve,
If n is odd the number of petals is n,
If n is even then the number of petals is 2n,
Even the end, for you and I because we are infinite,
With even rose curves that’s keeps us preoccupied,
This equation will always involves 2,
(2x+2y) 2=x2-y2, two ex to match two why it had to be me and you,
The circle...
#happiness
#kindness
#wife
#gratitude
#respect
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An Unbreakable Bond
Dedicated to Chelsea
You weren’t my biological daughter, but you lit up my world.
Where did this extraordinary filial love come from?
I’m indebted to you because you made me feel like a father.
There seems to be an unbreakable bond between us.
I can’t explain it, but we’re somehow connected to each other.
My wife and I wanted to nurture and train you as our daughter.
Your mom asked you, “Do you want to live with them?”
You jumped and clapped your hands and said, “Yes! Yes! I’ll go!”
I know why your loving parents didn’t allow us to...
You weren’t my biological daughter, but you lit up my world.
Where did this extraordinary filial love come from?
I’m indebted to you because you made me feel like a father.
There seems to be an unbreakable bond between us.
I can’t explain it, but we’re somehow connected to each other.
My wife and I wanted to nurture and train you as our daughter.
Your mom asked you, “Do you want to live with them?”
You jumped and clapped your hands and said, “Yes! Yes! I’ll go!”
I know why your loving parents didn’t allow us to...
#love
#mother
#father
#wife
#daughter
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Comparing The Penis To The Dolphin
#wife
#husband
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my wife, when I met her
she’s as beautiful now as ever she was wonderful then, but now, she’s even better ..
#love
#wife
#aging
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your very short dress
yeah I know we’re old,
but I still think you’ve
got beautiful legs,
a great figure, and a very
attractive face it, I said,
I still love you, and what
first attracted me
was always your legs ..
but I still think you’ve
got beautiful legs,
a great figure, and a very
attractive face it, I said,
I still love you, and what
first attracted me
was always your legs ..
#love
#wife
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Empty.
when i’m busy pouring life into everyone
who’s pouring back into me?
who’s filling me back up?
who’s making me whole?
who gives a fuck?
about me?
me
the one person i’ve turned my back on..
i give
give
give
give
you take
he takes
she takes
they take
that’s what life is right?
give and take?
for fuck’s sake
can i get a break?
can i get back to me?
a happy me
a healed me
not a fake smile or laugh
the real me
a me when i look in the mirror
and know exactly who...
who’s pouring back into me?
who’s filling me back up?
who’s making me whole?
who gives a fuck?
about me?
me
the one person i’ve turned my back on..
i give
give
give
give
you take
he takes
she takes
they take
that’s what life is right?
give and take?
for fuck’s sake
can i get a break?
can i get back to me?
a happy me
a healed me
not a fake smile or laugh
the real me
a me when i look in the mirror
and know exactly who...
#wife
#motherhood
#LifeStruggles #emptiness
#LifeStruggles #emptiness
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cant fake that
I hear those un tethered sound
only provoked by my intrduction
thought pleasure not to used
labor ex-hauls and moans
urge me on to that goal
to that trio that you explode
then you smile
your turn my love
let me feel you let go
that hot rush that warms me so
only provoked by my intrduction
thought pleasure not to used
labor ex-hauls and moans
urge me on to that goal
to that trio that you explode
then you smile
your turn my love
let me feel you let go
that hot rush that warms me so
#love
#wife
#romantic
#beauty
#obsession
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A distant drum
The desired heart
A longing beat
That of past memories
Fingers play the rhythm
In that primal room
Making your body move
A longing still
Even deeper need
A more personal approach
One with a longer stroke
More penetrating you seek
Only I can take you there
Beyond the physical plane
To the gates of heaven
Nirvana exquisite plains
Every time you open that door
A longing beat
That of past memories
Fingers play the rhythm
In that primal room
Making your body move
A longing still
Even deeper need
A more personal approach
One with a longer stroke
More penetrating you seek
Only I can take you there
Beyond the physical plane
To the gates of heaven
Nirvana exquisite plains
Every time you open that door
#wife
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#beauty
#obsession
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Worthless Tenants
Chapter 1
Electricity Bills
Mr. Perry brought some important issues to the attention of the worthless woman who shared the house with him. Firstly, he talked about the electricity bills. He said that the utility company had his wife’s phone number and the company had been sending the electricity bills to her phone, but that edition of the electricity bills only showed the total amount that was to be paid and the due date. Mrs. Perry and her husband could not rely on that insufficient information to pay the electricity bills.
The woman shared electricity...
Electricity Bills
Mr. Perry brought some important issues to the attention of the worthless woman who shared the house with him. Firstly, he talked about the electricity bills. He said that the utility company had his wife’s phone number and the company had been sending the electricity bills to her phone, but that edition of the electricity bills only showed the total amount that was to be paid and the due date. Mrs. Perry and her husband could not rely on that insufficient information to pay the electricity bills.
The woman shared electricity...
#children
#parent
#wife
#home
#money
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Her Take - Number 48
It was ten years ago when I almost lost her
I prayed to God and the Universe to give us more time
I even made an offer, an exchange my life for hers
I just knew I wanted to be with for the rest of my life
This is her take, number forty-eight, happy and healthy
Life has a more profound meaning, I can see it in her smile
And while I try my best to make her laugh daily, gaily ;-)
God knows we’ve had our shares of difficulties and trials
But that’s what made our bond stronger, longer and solid
The depth and understanding that love doesn’t...
I prayed to God and the Universe to give us more time
I even made an offer, an exchange my life for hers
I just knew I wanted to be with for the rest of my life
This is her take, number forty-eight, happy and healthy
Life has a more profound meaning, I can see it in her smile
And while I try my best to make her laugh daily, gaily ;-)
God knows we’ve had our shares of difficulties and trials
But that’s what made our bond stronger, longer and solid
The depth and understanding that love doesn’t...
#love
#wife
#birthday
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Married to a Goddess
This marriage, a cage build of flesh.
Unescapable prison built to last.
Yet, I hold the keys to this confinement.
A lock that was placed by my past.
I can open the lock but I can’t escape.
Till death do us part, that was the promise.
Yes, was my answer at the altar,
Forever in service to my goddess.
I will never break my vows,
I can’t, I won’t, I wish I could.
I love her with all my heart,
Though I never understood.
Unescapable prison built to last.
Yet, I hold the keys to this confinement.
A lock that was placed by my past.
I can open the lock but I can’t escape.
Till death do us part, that was the promise.
Yes, was my answer at the altar,
Forever in service to my goddess.
I will never break my vows,
I can’t, I won’t, I wish I could.
I love her with all my heart,
Though I never understood.
#depression
#wife
#UnrequitedLove
#FeelingTrapped
#hurt
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Letty and Skeem
Letty and her husband Skeem were the proud owners of a large tenement house in St. Elizabeth. The couple had no children and they did not adopt a child, but they had nieces and nephews. They rented apartments to two tenants and Letty personally collected the rent from them. Skeem was a skilled carpenter. He earned a good salary, but he was careless with money. Every time he collects his pay, he would gamble away most of it in the casino and take home a small amount. He was also a drunkard and he spent a lot of money on liquor, especially white rum. The good things about him were that he did...
#wife
#husband
#money
#alcohol
#funny
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