Wife by Top Critiquers Poems
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wife by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
A fork, a knife and a spoon
My wife only wants me to spoon her when she's hammered
Any other time, she don't want me near
That's ok
I actually despise her and spooning
One night she came home incredibly drunk
She was all over the place
Stumbling, making no sense
Fell backwards into my cabinet
Breaking some heirloom figurines I had from my family
No apology, nothing
My blood was beginning to boil
I yelled at her, "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!!"
I was tired, so I went to bed
Few moments later she came into bed
She was frisky and...
Any other time, she don't want me near
That's ok
I actually despise her and spooning
One night she came home incredibly drunk
She was all over the place
Stumbling, making no sense
Fell backwards into my cabinet
Breaking some heirloom figurines I had from my family
No apology, nothing
My blood was beginning to boil
I yelled at her, "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!!"
I was tired, so I went to bed
Few moments later she came into bed
She was frisky and...
#wife
#murder
#food
#ShortStory
#horror
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14 Comments
Kiss Me
kiss me-
no, not there
but on the
side of my neck
like you used
to do to turn
me on and tell
me you love me
even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there
kiss me-
and tell me
i am still sexy
even though
its been years
since we
last made love
i have kept
myself up for you
waiting for
this very moment
just to be
with you once more
no, not there
but on the
side of my neck
like you used
to do to turn
me on and tell
me you love me
even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there
kiss me-
and tell me
i am still sexy
even though
its been years
since we
last made love
i have kept
myself up for you
waiting for
this very moment
just to be
with you once more
#love
#wife
#husband
#memories
#FirstLove
452 reads
10 Comments
Shooting Stars
we both gasped
looking toward the night sky
and pointing in opposite directions
relevant to the nature of our journey
separated by lack of communication
yet our inclinations brought us back together
to stand here in awe at the beauty
of a celestial show
stars showering in motion
across the horizon
drawing a line
to your heart from mine
tying us into an embrace
with fingers interlaced
looking toward the night sky
and pointing in opposite directions
relevant to the nature of our journey
separated by lack of communication
yet our inclinations brought us back together
to stand here in awe at the beauty
of a celestial show
stars showering in motion
across the horizon
drawing a line
to your heart from mine
tying us into an embrace
with fingers interlaced
#FallingInLove
#NaPoWriMo2024
#sky
#stars
#wife
78 reads
9 Comments
Husband / Wife Exchange
She offers to make eggs
She: do you want your eggs over easy ?
He: Yes, over easy, just like my women
She ( not spoken) : what an asshole
He ( not spoken ) : no lie
She: do you want your eggs over easy ?
He: Yes, over easy, just like my women
She ( not spoken) : what an asshole
He ( not spoken ) : no lie
#wife
#marriage
#funny
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
554 reads
32 Comments
AFRICAN BRIDE
(Not autobiographical)
I kiss the skin, as dark as earth,
Of she who'll give my children birth.
I gladly lose myself in her,
She bears the soul of Africa,
To be explored and not dismissed,
Her full lips are made to be kissed,
I see a vibrant sense of life
In she who I chose as my wife.
I kiss the skin, as dark as earth,
Of she who'll give my children birth.
I gladly lose myself in her,
She bears the soul of Africa,
To be explored and not dismissed,
Her full lips are made to be kissed,
I see a vibrant sense of life
In she who I chose as my wife.
#wife
#Africa
#rhyming
779 reads
5 Comments
Sleeping
Sleeping, dreaming, waking, wondering.
Although apart we try and drift into
sleep at the same time as if we are
together so we can share our dreams
and then, possibly, share our waking
so beginning a new day in harmony
perhaps making sweet love sharing
each touch and imbuing it with sweet
memories. Wondering what today will
bring and hoping our plans are what
we dreamt of last night and that today
will end with more peaceful sleep so
the cycle repeats
Although apart we try and drift into
sleep at the same time as if we are
together so we can share our dreams
and then, possibly, share our waking
so beginning a new day in harmony
perhaps making sweet love sharing
each touch and imbuing it with sweet
memories. Wondering what today will
bring and hoping our plans are what
we dreamt of last night and that today
will end with more peaceful sleep so
the cycle repeats
#wife
#romantic
#honesty #support
#honesty #support
543 reads
1 Comment
Sexpot Queen B-Day (4-13-16)
Sexpot Queen B-Day
She's young at heart
Waiting and Wanting
Her Pacifist to
awaken her core
Waiting on all fours
For her Pacifist to go
Doogie Style on her
Sweet Ass:
So awaken yourself
She's young at heart
Waiting and Wanting
Her Pacifist to
awaken her core
Waiting on all fours
For her Pacifist to go
Doogie Style on her
Sweet Ass:
So awaken yourself
#wife
#husband
#sex
#erotic
#dirty
437 reads
3 Comments
The Fortunate Morsel
Mother's Day 2016...Noon: A True Story.
Upon a May morning at breakfast
My lady dined on some scramblege of eggs.
Lovingly blent, so no longer fowl...
She then, with ease, enjoyed the repast.
Then from still drowsy lips fell unchewed dregs,
That stained her blouse and made her scowl.
"Why scowl?" quoth I. "Thy breast was but gently pressed".
Then she said she feared her raiment was wrecked
And tis true that's no way to start the day.
Then I, of the crises, wisely addressed...
"Blame not the morsel upon...
Upon a May morning at breakfast
My lady dined on some scramblege of eggs.
Lovingly blent, so no longer fowl...
She then, with ease, enjoyed the repast.
Then from still drowsy lips fell unchewed dregs,
That stained her blouse and made her scowl.
"Why scowl?" quoth I. "Thy breast was but gently pressed".
Then she said she feared her raiment was wrecked
And tis true that's no way to start the day.
Then I, of the crises, wisely addressed...
"Blame not the morsel upon...
#wife
#MothersDay
63 reads
4 Comments
Dutch Oven
I hear, the gases that you keep…
When you’re fartin’ in your sleep”
(So Romantic)
She told me that this morning
(Yeah, she got jokes too)
Then she let me have it
The whole truth and nothing butt
Now I don’t feel ass charming
Here I thought
If I kept it quiet and not toot around her
I was keeping some kind of mystery
Turns out in my sleep my Annie has been a suffering
(Is she OK?)
Talk about Misery
“You’ve Dutch Oven’d me countless times”
She said with...
When you’re fartin’ in your sleep”
(So Romantic)
She told me that this morning
(Yeah, she got jokes too)
Then she let me have it
The whole truth and nothing butt
Now I don’t feel ass charming
Here I thought
If I kept it quiet and not toot around her
I was keeping some kind of mystery
Turns out in my sleep my Annie has been a suffering
(Is she OK?)
Talk about Misery
“You’ve Dutch Oven’d me countless times”
She said with...
#love
#wife
#funny
120 reads
9 Comments
Slow Hands
Slow hands slow walks slow smiles .How slow time works . How you see everything it’s not just a flash in the pan . How you see the stars and the mediocrity just the same and take it . How you don’t get to carried away . Swept up into your own dreams and not face the reality . Love will one day be old and shuffle in bones that ache to hold their old time friend wife husband and walk side by side. And how they have learnt that slowing things down meant they never let the other feel behind of ahead as they waited on words spoken and replies a real communication with two . Who have now seen the...
#wife
#husband
#FallingInLove
#respect
#FirstLove
204 reads
2 Comments
Summer Solstice
I sip my coffee slowly
As I’m watching the waves crash
Here on a picnic bench, out by the beach
With eggs and hash
Got up before my wife
I left her sleeping in our bed
I’m doing what I love
Walking the streets, clearing my head
I made it to my breakfast stop
Before they opened up
They quickly made my order
My name scribbled on a cup
I decided to not wake her
She is usually by my side
But not today, woke up afraid
All these questions cloud my mind
Did I reach my full potential?
Did I...
As I’m watching the waves crash
Here on a picnic bench, out by the beach
With eggs and hash
Got up before my wife
I left her sleeping in our bed
I’m doing what I love
Walking the streets, clearing my head
I made it to my breakfast stop
Before they opened up
They quickly made my order
My name scribbled on a cup
I decided to not wake her
She is usually by my side
But not today, woke up afraid
All these questions cloud my mind
Did I reach my full potential?
Did I...
#wife
#husband
#FallingInLove
#gratitude
#support
92 reads
0 Comments
A Score of Months
#wife
#sex
#friendship #lover
#friendship #lover
163 reads
4 Comments
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