Poems About Water by Top Critiquers
#water
Poems about water by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Not Quite Haiku
III
Damp earth
between
toes
Fog rises
above the
face of
the pond
like ghost
escaping
daybreak
IV
Bowl full
of
cherries
Red sweet
memories
of us
covered
in pink
blossoms
Damp earth
between
toes
Fog rises
above the
face of
the pond
like ghost
escaping
daybreak
IV
Bowl full
of
cherries
Red sweet
memories
of us
covered
in pink
blossoms
#earth
#water
#gratitude
490 reads
4 Comments
Adam's ale
23/30
Adam's ale
this polar inorganic
can be hard or soft
drunk but sober
and wet
for some reason
it feels cooler during
extreme heat
even colder when
inside a bottle
shaken
I love the fact that
it’s not liquidy
for if it was
no one would be
able to swim in
a lake or pond
or sea
or tub
50 unique words
Adam's ale
this polar inorganic
can be hard or soft
drunk but sober
and wet
for some reason
it feels cooler during
extreme heat
even colder when
inside a bottle
shaken
I love the fact that
it’s not liquidy
for if it was
no one would be
able to swim in
a lake or pond
or sea
or tub
50 unique words
#NaPoWriMo2024
#water
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0 Comments
The Paisley River - and other poems of 2022
The Paisley River
The sun comes down to dance on the river
Its colours attract a band of nude bathers
Looking to wash the dirt
From their sweating sun-browned bodies
The river doesn’t discriminate
Like the righteous dead
Paisley currents spin and swirl
All the way from the Persian sand
Across the seas to California
They wanted to get closer to the gods
Before the sun falls behind the hills
The Leaves that fall and Grow back again
Do not sink when your sunshine fades
The joy you felt...
The sun comes down to dance on the river
Its colours attract a band of nude bathers
Looking to wash the dirt
From their sweating sun-browned bodies
The river doesn’t discriminate
Like the righteous dead
Paisley currents spin and swirl
All the way from the Persian sand
Across the seas to California
They wanted to get closer to the gods
Before the sun falls behind the hills
The Leaves that fall and Grow back again
Do not sink when your sunshine fades
The joy you felt...
#river
#sun
#water
456 reads
6 Comments
Spring Has Sprung
Spring Has Sprung
Jane and I lay on the yellow sandy creek beach looking at the pink glow of sunrise in the eastern sky. She reclines on her side facing me. I am supine in the sublimity of spring. We are both twenty and too old for wading in the creek. But spring has sprung and the desire to get more than our feet wet is strong. Jane’s irises are azure as glacial ice. Her complexion is that of French vanilla. Her hair is like fine corn silk which lusters in the summer sun. Her hair giggles when she walks.
At St. Catherine Creek the water appears on fire and sparkles...
Jane and I lay on the yellow sandy creek beach looking at the pink glow of sunrise in the eastern sky. She reclines on her side facing me. I am supine in the sublimity of spring. We are both twenty and too old for wading in the creek. But spring has sprung and the desire to get more than our feet wet is strong. Jane’s irises are azure as glacial ice. Her complexion is that of French vanilla. Her hair is like fine corn silk which lusters in the summer sun. Her hair giggles when she walks.
At St. Catherine Creek the water appears on fire and sparkles...
#erotic
#nature
#sensual
#spiritual
#water
82 reads
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Free wifi
There is so much to see here
There is a free wifi.
There is a free wifi.
#earth
#fire
#water
105 reads
4 Comments
Care To Join Me For A Swim?
Cody stepped outside the house.
He spotted Lisa standing by the pool.
She slid off her robe.
Lisa glanced over at Cody and smiled.
Then, she started with her skinny dipping.
He spotted Lisa standing by the pool.
She slid off her robe.
Lisa glanced over at Cody and smiled.
Then, she started with her skinny dipping.
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
#water
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DU Poetry : Poems About Water by Top Critiquers