Poems About Water by Top Critiquers
#water
Poems about water by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Sami Song
Hear the tale of the heart
that’s pure as the falling snow
there in the north the light
there the pale light glow
sing me a song to a passage
of a time when the shaman sing
and the eagles reply
and brother wolves howl
call the warriors of old
once more a dance
of victory on snowy shore
north of the wind
joik me a song of the falling rain
of reindeer in the wild
remember them who live before
time was counted in its ticking
let the children remember
the time of the Sami
when they...
that’s pure as the falling snow
there in the north the light
there the pale light glow
sing me a song to a passage
of a time when the shaman sing
and the eagles reply
and brother wolves howl
call the warriors of old
once more a dance
of victory on snowy shore
north of the wind
joik me a song of the falling rain
of reindeer in the wild
remember them who live before
time was counted in its ticking
let the children remember
the time of the Sami
when they...
#earth
#fire
#water
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9 Comments
Soul-Soothing and Satisfyingly Sweet
Water is still wet
and refreshing
Even when no one is drinking it
But when the sun is beating down like Vulcan's Hammer
A smart man knows just where to go to get exactly what he needs
Dark,
Strong,
and Mysterious
Still waters run deep
With effortless beauty
Stephanie's waters run sweet
Lady,
Whether taken as drink
to quench a soul-searing thirst
or dived into headfirst
in search of relief from the scorching heat of an unrelenting Sun,
You are a fountain of the sweetest waters the Lord...
and refreshing
Even when no one is drinking it
But when the sun is beating down like Vulcan's Hammer
A smart man knows just where to go to get exactly what he needs
Dark,
Strong,
and Mysterious
Still waters run deep
With effortless beauty
Stephanie's waters run sweet
Lady,
Whether taken as drink
to quench a soul-searing thirst
or dived into headfirst
in search of relief from the scorching heat of an unrelenting Sun,
You are a fountain of the sweetest waters the Lord...
#romantic
#water
#spiritual
249 reads
1 Comment
Free wifi
There is so much to see here
There is a free wifi.
There is a free wifi.
#earth
#fire
#water
80 reads
4 Comments
Aquarius Gypsy
Need to take a dive
Into a past life
So I'm taking a swim with
the Aquarius Gypsy
So she can unlock her
Crystal water ball
Part the sea of me
Peer into the water sides
Of ripples and laps
Past mistakes made
Scribbled on my
Endless water wall
Help me avoid the drown
Because I'm feeling lost
Inside my thoughts
Need a fast forward
My future's mystery
So I'm sitting down with
The Aquarius Gypsy
Take my hand with your
Painted garnet fingertips
Feel the letters of my ...
Into a past life
So I'm taking a swim with
the Aquarius Gypsy
So she can unlock her
Crystal water ball
Part the sea of me
Peer into the water sides
Of ripples and laps
Past mistakes made
Scribbled on my
Endless water wall
Help me avoid the drown
Because I'm feeling lost
Inside my thoughts
Need a fast forward
My future's mystery
So I'm sitting down with
The Aquarius Gypsy
Take my hand with your
Painted garnet fingertips
Feel the letters of my ...
#earth
#fire
#water
715 reads
25 Comments
Shower show
#water
#sexy
240 reads
0 Comments
Joining You And That Little Friend Of Yours
Brian, I see that you're still in the
shower... and rubbing on that hard
rod. I hope that you do not
mind me getting naked
and joining you and
that little friend
of yours for
some hot
love.
shower... and rubbing on that hard
rod. I hope that you do not
mind me getting naked
and joining you and
that little friend
of yours for
some hot
love.
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
#water
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You belong to Me
You belong to Me,
said earth to water
You yearn to kiss the sky;
ready to lose your identity for her
But does she even
care for you
even though you wear her
shades of blue?
The stars adorn her
like glitters on her face
and the moon woos her
with his silvery serenade
She is the queen of the cosmos
beyond your reach
but I'm the warmth that you seek;
pressing you onto my bosom
far and deep.
The sun and the wind conspire
to take you away from me, ...
said earth to water
You yearn to kiss the sky;
ready to lose your identity for her
But does she even
care for you
even though you wear her
shades of blue?
The stars adorn her
like glitters on her face
and the moon woos her
with his silvery serenade
She is the queen of the cosmos
beyond your reach
but I'm the warmth that you seek;
pressing you onto my bosom
far and deep.
The sun and the wind conspire
to take you away from me, ...
#love
#earth
#sky
#water
#nature
1431 reads
60 Comments
The coral, in venue
Safe in the waters
the fodder of fish
The salt in the pail
The tang of the swish
The coral, in venue
The sharks in the den
The squid’s in there making
The ink for my pen
The ocean’s a parlour
The sands are amiss
The seashells are clapping
Immersed in their bliss
The waves are contesting
All flocked in a flair
The mists are all churning
A malt in the air
In a sea
in a revel
In the mark of a bloom
And the land in a bevel
the ocean,
a womb
the fodder of fish
The salt in the pail
The tang of the swish
The coral, in venue
The sharks in the den
The squid’s in there making
The ink for my pen
The ocean’s a parlour
The sands are amiss
The seashells are clapping
Immersed in their bliss
The waves are contesting
All flocked in a flair
The mists are all churning
A malt in the air
In a sea
in a revel
In the mark of a bloom
And the land in a bevel
the ocean,
a womb
#sea
#water
132 reads
4 Comments
Irish Eamond
An old Irish man once told me......
A sweet spot is a place.
Where fairies pass over unseen.
Magic passes over too.
He looked like a sweet old fella. But!
Standing behind you, he'd cast spells.
Full of Jiggery pokery & clownish too.
A fan of Crowley & other bunkum.
Even now I miss the old fella,
Wish I'd been more relaxed, back then.
Listened to his tales of leprechauns.
Fairies pixies & puffs n stuff.
If someone asked him, so what do you do?
I'm a...
A sweet spot is a place.
Where fairies pass over unseen.
Magic passes over too.
He looked like a sweet old fella. But!
Standing behind you, he'd cast spells.
Full of Jiggery pokery & clownish too.
A fan of Crowley & other bunkum.
Even now I miss the old fella,
Wish I'd been more relaxed, back then.
Listened to his tales of leprechauns.
Fairies pixies & puffs n stuff.
If someone asked him, so what do you do?
I'm a...
#emotional
#fairies
#grief
#sea
#water
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DU Poetry : Poems About Water by Top Critiquers