Poems About Vulnerability by Top Critiquers
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Poems about vulnerability by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 11:01am
13th Dec 2024 11:01am
Love...Forgotten
Bitterness
Your life in bitterness
Hatred
Hate consumes your every emotion
Your soul is engulfed with blackness
Putting your guilt upon others
Hate takes over your life
Hate takes over your mind
You feel your life slip away
When you live your life in hate
You seal your destiny
You've sealed your fate
Love... forgotten
Jealousy
Don't take your revenge against me
Pride
Your pride builds up inside
I've got no time for your ignorance
You live in your own complacency
You've made your...
Your life in bitterness
Hatred
Hate consumes your every emotion
Your soul is engulfed with blackness
Putting your guilt upon others
Hate takes over your life
Hate takes over your mind
You feel your life slip away
When you live your life in hate
You seal your destiny
You've sealed your fate
Love... forgotten
Jealousy
Don't take your revenge against me
Pride
Your pride builds up inside
I've got no time for your ignorance
You live in your own complacency
You've made your...
#breakup
#emptiness
#love
#sadness
#vulnerability
63 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:21am
24th Dec 2024 1:21am
Sessions Part 1
Memory distorts
Memory heals
Memory contorts
Memory steals
Not all memories comforts
The whole morning went by in a blur. The two couples I had sessions with had been challenging lately. Whenever I felt that they have moved forward on a particular topic, one of them would bring up something from the past that reverts the whole situation backward. ...
Memory heals
Memory contorts
Memory steals
Not all memories comforts
The whole morning went by in a blur. The two couples I had sessions with had been challenging lately. Whenever I felt that they have moved forward on a particular topic, one of them would bring up something from the past that reverts the whole situation backward. ...
#LifeStruggles
#vulnerability
102 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 7:36pm
18th Oct 2024 7:36pm
Vulnerability and Hellfire
Sometimes
Your give me your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
Your give me your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
#fire
#narrative
#storm #vulnerability
#storm #vulnerability
239 reads
44 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 4:50pm
11th Sep 2024 4:50pm
inappropriate behavior
acute, spin the feeling
a metaphor bleeding, without ceasing
internal strife appears as a dragon
impossible he's wild and can't be tamed
it is your very own spirit
tugging on the chains that bind you
the societal norm is very strange to me
why cancel culture
it's one of the most beautiful aspects of us
sharing of culture makes more sense
then there is no place to express our anger
if you get angry you're crazy
that is inappropriate behavior
and don't buy that red car you wanted
let's all drive white ones
...
a metaphor bleeding, without ceasing
internal strife appears as a dragon
impossible he's wild and can't be tamed
it is your very own spirit
tugging on the chains that bind you
the societal norm is very strange to me
why cancel culture
it's one of the most beautiful aspects of us
sharing of culture makes more sense
then there is no place to express our anger
if you get angry you're crazy
that is inappropriate behavior
and don't buy that red car you wanted
let's all drive white ones
...
#LifeStruggles
#vulnerability
89 reads
0 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
11th Aug 2024 12:34pm
11th Aug 2024 12:34pm
disarmament
took me decades
to assemble my full armor
layers intricately woven
links fused by smothering pain
lightning flashes of agony
broken trust infusing each plate
all this...poured into its making
until it glowed with inner flames
it is...formidable
so when I disrobe...
removing it
...piece
by
piece...
baring my scarred vulnerability...
it is...
...no...
...small thing
approach...accordingly
to assemble my full armor
layers intricately woven
links fused by smothering pain
lightning flashes of agony
broken trust infusing each plate
all this...poured into its making
until it glowed with inner flames
it is...formidable
so when I disrobe...
removing it
...piece
by
piece...
baring my scarred vulnerability...
it is...
...no...
...small thing
approach...accordingly
#confessional
#vulnerability
187 reads
14 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
18th May 2024 2:00pm
18th May 2024 2:00pm
Vulnerable
the current world
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
#butterfly
#vulnerability
244 reads
24 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2023 11:58am
23rd Dec 2023 11:58am
Unleash
Dark and fractured, I set forth.
Unbelievable confessions
evolve into the origin of obsession.
Unshed tears are an onyx ocean,
sea salted with fears.
Sought by monsters of the deep soul.
Unremembered dreams
tug at sanity's jagged seams.
Pleading, plaguing for recall.
I want to profusely believe,
cry with abandon,
as I remember it all in tandem.
I'm fragile and hard,
Rebuilt from broken shards.
A glitter glue to bind the scars.
Memories remain haunted stars.
Visceral when they occur ...
Unbelievable confessions
evolve into the origin of obsession.
Unshed tears are an onyx ocean,
sea salted with fears.
Sought by monsters of the deep soul.
Unremembered dreams
tug at sanity's jagged seams.
Pleading, plaguing for recall.
I want to profusely believe,
cry with abandon,
as I remember it all in tandem.
I'm fragile and hard,
Rebuilt from broken shards.
A glitter glue to bind the scars.
Memories remain haunted stars.
Visceral when they occur ...
#vulnerability
170 reads
16 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 3:59pm
3rd Dec 2024 3:59pm
Business Models
Now it seems the law is just for suckers
thanks to the win at all cost white boy votes
who everyone else knows are the fuckers
snorting winner's dope on their motor boats
in their cultural affirmation vice
where they bitch about crime, but do the drugs,
snuck through that border to reduce the price
by some fossil fuel motorhead thugs
whose motivation is to be in charge,
so they can knock down those pesky rules
preventing illicit sales at large,
especially in the public schools...
because they love the Jeffrey Epstein plan...
thanks to the win at all cost white boy votes
who everyone else knows are the fuckers
snorting winner's dope on their motor boats
in their cultural affirmation vice
where they bitch about crime, but do the drugs,
snuck through that border to reduce the price
by some fossil fuel motorhead thugs
whose motivation is to be in charge,
so they can knock down those pesky rules
preventing illicit sales at large,
especially in the public schools...
because they love the Jeffrey Epstein plan...
#corruption
#deception
#oppression
#politics
#vulnerability
127 reads
6 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 5:07am
1st Jan 2025 5:07am
new year (same issues)
here
it is,
a brand
new year,
and
unfortunately
i carried
with me
now
the same
pain that
i had
hoped
to leave
behind
with the
old year.
it is,
a brand
new year,
and
unfortunately
i carried
with me
now
the same
pain that
i had
hoped
to leave
behind
with the
old year.
#disability
#hurt
#illness
#vulnerability
#weakness
81 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
26th Jan 2023 11:41pm
26th Jan 2023 11:41pm
The days, so...
Poetry, Rock and Roll, Voodoo
Saturday
the little wing
that you opened over me,
had feathers,
had all my feathers
and I, distracted,
I uncrossed my legs
and let you touch me
in the most intimate chakras.
Me and My Me, Online Readings, Poetry, Rock and Roll, Voodoo
Tuesday
the landscape (green)
still imprisoned
in the eyes (brown)
of him, the landscape follows
as follow
the spots (brown)
in the fur of giraffes
and the iris (chestnut)
from his eyes.
his...
Saturday
the little wing
that you opened over me,
had feathers,
had all my feathers
and I, distracted,
I uncrossed my legs
and let you touch me
in the most intimate chakras.
Me and My Me, Online Readings, Poetry, Rock and Roll, Voodoo
Tuesday
the landscape (green)
still imprisoned
in the eyes (brown)
of him, the landscape follows
as follow
the spots (brown)
in the fur of giraffes
and the iris (chestnut)
from his eyes.
his...
#mirror
#myself
#vulnerability
178 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 10:08pm
17th Sep 2024 10:08pm
Mistake
no gate jeeper
in slips the grim reaper
just strip me bare
cut me without a care
in this mortuary joint
do you finally get the point
no longer wish to face the day
let this all fade away
jumping from the boat
with a lnife at my throat
there is little emotion
as i'm gathered by the ocean
in my mind i'm running up a hill
cause if i stand still
these dark rhoughts overtake
leaving me to make another suicide mistake
in slips the grim reaper
just strip me bare
cut me without a care
in this mortuary joint
do you finally get the point
no longer wish to face the day
let this all fade away
jumping from the boat
with a lnife at my throat
there is little emotion
as i'm gathered by the ocean
in my mind i'm running up a hill
cause if i stand still
these dark rhoughts overtake
leaving me to make another suicide mistake
#apathy
#dark
#emptiness
#LifeStruggles
#vulnerability
96 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2022 7:04am
3rd Oct 2022 7:04am
Poised
#BDSM
#emotions
#vulnerability
414 reads
14 Comments
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