Poems About Vulnerability by Top Critiquers
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Poems about vulnerability by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:05pm
26th Jan 2025 1:05pm
Broken Hearts
I sail the seas with pride
You can't hide your heart
You shouldn't deny your love
You can't hide your heart
You shouldn't deny your love
#love
#sea
#senryu
#shadows
#vulnerability
97 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:21am
24th Dec 2024 1:21am
Sessions Part 1
Memory distorts
Memory heals
Memory contorts
Memory steals
Not all memories comforts
The whole morning went by in a blur. The two couples I had sessions with had been challenging lately. Whenever I felt that they have moved forward on a particular topic, one of them would bring up something from the past that reverts the whole situation backward. ...
Memory heals
Memory contorts
Memory steals
Not all memories comforts
The whole morning went by in a blur. The two couples I had sessions with had been challenging lately. Whenever I felt that they have moved forward on a particular topic, one of them would bring up something from the past that reverts the whole situation backward. ...
#LifeStruggles
#vulnerability
164 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 4:50pm
11th Sep 2024 4:50pm
inappropriate behavior
acute, spin the feeling
a metaphor bleeding, without ceasing
internal strife appears as a dragon
impossible he's wild and can't be tamed
it is your very own spirit
tugging on the chains that bind you
the societal norm is very strange to me
why cancel culture
it's one of the most beautiful aspects of us
sharing of culture makes more sense
then there is no place to express our anger
if you get angry you're crazy
that is inappropriate behavior
and don't buy that red car you wanted
let's all drive white ones
...
a metaphor bleeding, without ceasing
internal strife appears as a dragon
impossible he's wild and can't be tamed
it is your very own spirit
tugging on the chains that bind you
the societal norm is very strange to me
why cancel culture
it's one of the most beautiful aspects of us
sharing of culture makes more sense
then there is no place to express our anger
if you get angry you're crazy
that is inappropriate behavior
and don't buy that red car you wanted
let's all drive white ones
...
#LifeStruggles
#vulnerability
110 reads
0 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2023 11:58am
23rd Dec 2023 11:58am
Unleash
Dark and fractured, I set forth.
Unbelievable confessions
evolve into the origin of obsession.
Unshed tears are an onyx ocean,
sea salted with fears.
Sought by monsters of the deep soul.
Unremembered dreams
tug at sanity's jagged seams.
Pleading, plaguing for recall.
I want to profusely believe,
cry with abandon,
as I remember it all in tandem.
I'm fragile and hard,
Rebuilt from broken shards.
A glitter glue to bind the scars.
Memories remain haunted stars.
Visceral when they occur ...
Unbelievable confessions
evolve into the origin of obsession.
Unshed tears are an onyx ocean,
sea salted with fears.
Sought by monsters of the deep soul.
Unremembered dreams
tug at sanity's jagged seams.
Pleading, plaguing for recall.
I want to profusely believe,
cry with abandon,
as I remember it all in tandem.
I'm fragile and hard,
Rebuilt from broken shards.
A glitter glue to bind the scars.
Memories remain haunted stars.
Visceral when they occur ...
#vulnerability
202 reads
16 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 3:59pm
3rd Dec 2024 3:59pm
Business Models
Now it seems the law is just for suckers
thanks to the win at all cost white boy votes
who everyone else knows are the fuckers
snorting winner's dope on their motor boats
in their cultural affirmation vice
where they bitch about crime, but do the drugs,
snuck through that border to reduce the price
by some fossil fuel motorhead thugs
whose motivation is to be in charge,
so they can knock down those pesky rules
preventing illicit sales at large,
especially in the public schools...
because they love the Jeffrey Epstein plan...
thanks to the win at all cost white boy votes
who everyone else knows are the fuckers
snorting winner's dope on their motor boats
in their cultural affirmation vice
where they bitch about crime, but do the drugs,
snuck through that border to reduce the price
by some fossil fuel motorhead thugs
whose motivation is to be in charge,
so they can knock down those pesky rules
preventing illicit sales at large,
especially in the public schools...
because they love the Jeffrey Epstein plan...
#corruption
#deception
#oppression
#politics
#vulnerability
152 reads
6 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
18th May 2024 2:00pm
18th May 2024 2:00pm
Vulnerable
the current world
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
#butterfly
#vulnerability
291 reads
24 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 7:36pm
18th Oct 2024 7:36pm
Vulnerability and Hellfire
Sometimes
Your give me your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
Your give me your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
#fire
#narrative
#storm #vulnerability
#storm #vulnerability
255 reads
44 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
26th Jan 2023 11:41pm
26th Jan 2023 11:41pm
The days, so...
Poetry, Rock and Roll, Voodoo
Saturday
the little wing
that you opened over me,
had feathers,
had all my feathers
and I, distracted,
I uncrossed my legs
and let you touch me
in the most intimate chakras.
Me and My Me, Online Readings, Poetry, Rock and Roll, Voodoo
Tuesday
the landscape (green)
still imprisoned
in the eyes (brown)
of him, the landscape follows
as follow
the spots (brown)
in the fur of giraffes
and the iris (chestnut)
from his eyes.
his...
Saturday
the little wing
that you opened over me,
had feathers,
had all my feathers
and I, distracted,
I uncrossed my legs
and let you touch me
in the most intimate chakras.
Me and My Me, Online Readings, Poetry, Rock and Roll, Voodoo
Tuesday
the landscape (green)
still imprisoned
in the eyes (brown)
of him, the landscape follows
as follow
the spots (brown)
in the fur of giraffes
and the iris (chestnut)
from his eyes.
his...
#mirror
#myself
#vulnerability
197 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
11th Aug 2024 12:34pm
11th Aug 2024 12:34pm
disarmament
took me decades
to assemble my full armor
layers intricately woven
links fused by smothering pain
lightning flashes of agony
broken trust infusing each plate
all this...poured into its making
until it glowed with inner flames
it is...formidable
so when I disrobe...
removing it
...piece
by
piece...
baring my scarred vulnerability...
it is...
...no...
...small thing
approach...accordingly
to assemble my full armor
layers intricately woven
links fused by smothering pain
lightning flashes of agony
broken trust infusing each plate
all this...poured into its making
until it glowed with inner flames
it is...formidable
so when I disrobe...
removing it
...piece
by
piece...
baring my scarred vulnerability...
it is...
...no...
...small thing
approach...accordingly
#confessional
#vulnerability
218 reads
14 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
25th Apr 2024 3:39am
25th Apr 2024 3:39am
black and blue
like the conductor of
a train moving backwards
the unsure movement
of words in your mouth
the blind eye of a needle
the moon hanging from
the noose of the night
sky
the eloquence of a cat
napping on a winters
day
the gift of not sharing
with others what is
rightfully yours
the knowledge that the
war to end all wars was
only the prelude to a
greater war
walking sullenly through
pasture trying not to
step in cow shit
ignoring the sun ...
a train moving backwards
the unsure movement
of words in your mouth
the blind eye of a needle
the moon hanging from
the noose of the night
sky
the eloquence of a cat
napping on a winters
day
the gift of not sharing
with others what is
rightfully yours
the knowledge that the
war to end all wars was
only the prelude to a
greater war
walking sullenly through
pasture trying not to
step in cow shit
ignoring the sun ...
#vulnerability
160 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 1:06am
30th Aug 2024 1:06am
a simple puppet
look, I live on a hill
sometimes I can walk up it
but sometimes I can’t
help falling down
sometimes I can walk up it
but sometimes I can’t
help falling down
#MentalHealth
#nightmares
#vulnerability
114 reads
3 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2022 7:04am
3rd Oct 2022 7:04am
Poised
#BDSM
#emotions
#vulnerability
423 reads
14 Comments
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