Uplifting by Top Critiquers Poems
#uplifting
uplifting by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
Collage - A New Calling
Pieces
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
#identity
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
#art
262 reads
28 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
10th Jan 2017 7:15pm
10th Jan 2017 7:15pm
Return To Life
take my hand
and let me lead you
back into the land
of the living
dry those tears
wipe off the dust
put that smile
back on
the past is
over and done
pick up the pieces
and glue them
together
they might
not fit like
they used to do
but it’s in the cracks
where the light enters you
and let me lead you
back into the land
of the living
dry those tears
wipe off the dust
put that smile
back on
the past is
over and done
pick up the pieces
and glue them
together
they might
not fit like
they used to do
but it’s in the cracks
where the light enters you
#hope
#uplifting
1501 reads
56 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 8:26pm
15th Aug 2024 8:26pm
Opportunity
Take it.
It's a break.
Stress relieving.
You're never late.
Open minded.
Never fake.
The lonely winner.
Unstable state.
First to finish.
Piece of cake.
Thoughts diminish.
Erratic trait.
Needless glory.
Uplifting fate.
It's a break.
Stress relieving.
You're never late.
Open minded.
Never fake.
The lonely winner.
Unstable state.
First to finish.
Piece of cake.
Thoughts diminish.
Erratic trait.
Needless glory.
Uplifting fate.
#uplifting
138 reads
11 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 12:56pm
19th Nov 2024 12:56pm
Lets Fight Together
Never let the darkness consume your light,
hold on to the whispers of hope,
embrace the strength within your soul
for you are needed, loved... cherished.
Never believe the lies of despair,
your existence is a beacon,
a guiding star in the night
shining brighter than you know.
Never forget the battles you've won,
each step forward is a victory,
your journey is a testament
to the resilience of your spirit.
Never surrender to the shadows,
for within you lies a fire,
a flame that will burn eternally...
hold on to the whispers of hope,
embrace the strength within your soul
for you are needed, loved... cherished.
Never believe the lies of despair,
your existence is a beacon,
a guiding star in the night
shining brighter than you know.
Never forget the battles you've won,
each step forward is a victory,
your journey is a testament
to the resilience of your spirit.
Never surrender to the shadows,
for within you lies a fire,
a flame that will burn eternally...
#hope
#strength
#success
#suicide
#uplifting
148 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 4:58pm
4th Jan 2025 4:58pm
declaration of independence
(Visual)
#confessional
#healing
#SelfWorth #uplifting
#SelfWorth #uplifting
231 reads
12 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2023 5:17pm
2nd Nov 2023 5:17pm
Laughter
The other day I made my son read a tricky tongue twister of a poem
And he laughed like he hadn’t laughed in such a long time
He struggled and spat and tried and spat some more all over the phone
It was a verse full of elaborate alliteration and constant rhyme
In the mornings my wife and I have interesting conversations
I wake her up with quips and gags saying things that are kind of…improper
I even make myself the butt of the joke and walk into them
As she laughs I’m left I wondering why I’m not such a panty dropper
Everyday I send...
And he laughed like he hadn’t laughed in such a long time
He struggled and spat and tried and spat some more all over the phone
It was a verse full of elaborate alliteration and constant rhyme
In the mornings my wife and I have interesting conversations
I wake her up with quips and gags saying things that are kind of…improper
I even make myself the butt of the joke and walk into them
As she laughs I’m left I wondering why I’m not such a panty dropper
Everyday I send...
#happiness
#love
#children
#family
#uplifting
257 reads
4 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
8th Feb 2023 00:53am
8th Feb 2023 00:53am
Peace
I seek the peaceable things
Love and friendship
And the quiet places
Where only nature speaks
The wonder of stars and moonlight's glow
Early morning mists rising above the river
And lowlands soft covered
By threadbare wisps of white
Dew silvered lawns and fields
Now covered in winters frosty sheen
That pregnant breath between night and day
When stillness lies
The sun warm and up on high
Glimpsed between the trees
Still waiting for their leaves
A good book or the good book ...
Love and friendship
And the quiet places
Where only nature speaks
The wonder of stars and moonlight's glow
Early morning mists rising above the river
And lowlands soft covered
By threadbare wisps of white
Dew silvered lawns and fields
Now covered in winters frosty sheen
That pregnant breath between night and day
When stillness lies
The sun warm and up on high
Glimpsed between the trees
Still waiting for their leaves
A good book or the good book ...
#peace
#uplifting
456 reads
8 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
4th Jun 2023 4:47pm
4th Jun 2023 4:47pm
Sun Goddess
Grey, it's a poor man's blue
It's my eyes, without you.
~
A window pane, revealing
through the frost of the glass
A light unknown; be known
A sun, unsurpassed
Winter held and winter chilled
as my eyes bled away all vision
But a ray of light, now in sight
touched within my prison
She laid her flower down to ground
with the moisture of my kiss
And this said sun, known but to one;
I blessed it with my tenderness
Her softest light, a touch of gold
to value all that she may handle ...
It's my eyes, without you.
~
A window pane, revealing
through the frost of the glass
A light unknown; be known
A sun, unsurpassed
Winter held and winter chilled
as my eyes bled away all vision
But a ray of light, now in sight
touched within my prison
She laid her flower down to ground
with the moisture of my kiss
And this said sun, known but to one;
I blessed it with my tenderness
Her softest light, a touch of gold
to value all that she may handle ...
#uplifting
#metaphor
502 reads
11 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 10:02pm
16th Apr 2024 10:02pm
Baby Skins
Carried away by winds
As a ballet
Baby skins of roses
With wings of scarves
Of shade on a tree
Embroidering a kiss
In the twilight's cinema
Annexing a dream
Over the horizon
Communicating with soul
Softly spoken
Like the Oil of Olay
As a ballet
Baby skins of roses
With wings of scarves
Of shade on a tree
Embroidering a kiss
In the twilight's cinema
Annexing a dream
Over the horizon
Communicating with soul
Softly spoken
Like the Oil of Olay
#happiness
#inspirational
#uplifting
224 reads
4 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 10:25am
4th Nov 2024 10:25am
Student Teacher Poem
Sorry madam, I can’t you follow
Don’t move son, I’ll come to your row.
I can’t understand a word from your mouth
Next time I’ll bring my PC and a mouse.
English makes me look stupid and ill at ease
Well then, I’ll teach you English in Chinese.
Teacher, teacher I have lost my book
Never, ever instead use your face book.
Blessed having connexion in our classroom
A pity! for your smart phone you have no room.
Studies, homework and revision yet, not ready for the exam
Sacrifice...
Don’t move son, I’ll come to your row.
I can’t understand a word from your mouth
Next time I’ll bring my PC and a mouse.
English makes me look stupid and ill at ease
Well then, I’ll teach you English in Chinese.
Teacher, teacher I have lost my book
Never, ever instead use your face book.
Blessed having connexion in our classroom
A pity! for your smart phone you have no room.
Studies, homework and revision yet, not ready for the exam
Sacrifice...
#learning
#motivational
#success #uplifting
#success #uplifting
122 reads
6 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 1:02am
25th Jan 2024 1:02am
a great chap
those who knew him said that it would be an absolute disaster if he went on the stage, since he couldn’t act for toffee and indeed, appeared to be chewing one, when trying to speak his lines.
the first night didn’t go well. some in the audience began to smirk, others to titter, which is not so good in the closing scenes of macbeth, but it didn’t matter, he thought none the worse of them, at the death ..
the first night didn’t go well. some in the audience began to smirk, others to titter, which is not so good in the closing scenes of macbeth, but it didn’t matter, he thought none the worse of them, at the death ..
#uplifting
110 reads
0 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 10:34pm
26th Jan 2025 10:34pm
Old Dancing Girls
They congregate at the side of the stage
in the two thousand seat venue
dancing
without a care
There are too many cares in the world
Los Angeles incinerating
Blizzards in Florida
An unhinged, dangerous president
Hundreds more I could list
Thousands
The old dancing girls have divorces
Double digit dress sizes
Wrinkles
Financial problems
Arthritis
Cancer remissions
Cancer recurrences
One lost her beloved 90-year-old mother
two months ago
Followed by...
in the two thousand seat venue
dancing
without a care
There are too many cares in the world
Los Angeles incinerating
Blizzards in Florida
An unhinged, dangerous president
Hundreds more I could list
Thousands
The old dancing girls have divorces
Double digit dress sizes
Wrinkles
Financial problems
Arthritis
Cancer remissions
Cancer recurrences
One lost her beloved 90-year-old mother
two months ago
Followed by...
#aging
#dance
#uplifting
98 reads
8 Comments
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