Uplifting by Top Critiquers Poems
#uplifting
uplifting by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 7:57am
16th Sep 2024 7:57am
It's Got A Soprano's Vibe To It
After much deliberation. I, Damian DeadLove, being of sound mind and soul have come to a conclusion. I know what every writer has in common now, okay it could just be a theory, but please hear me out here. If anything it sounds cool but I’ll let you be the judge of that.
Can I get a drumroll, please?? We expose demons and slay them!! Told you it was pretty cool. Now some of you might be saying, “Your just now figuring that out, Damian?” Well I do walk to my own drumbeat, and sometimes I’ve been known to fall out of time. It happens more than I’d like to admit.
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Can I get a drumroll, please?? We expose demons and slay them!! Told you it was pretty cool. Now some of you might be saying, “Your just now figuring that out, Damian?” Well I do walk to my own drumbeat, and sometimes I’ve been known to fall out of time. It happens more than I’d like to admit.
...
#satirical
#uplifting
202 reads
22 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
Door to a new world
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
108 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 10:56pm
27th Mar 2025 10:56pm
flower
in the sacrosanct disturbia
wandering through unsolicted
my soul breaks the surface of doubt
gentle need takes hold
and I know I want
my greed beholds beauty
with a deep exhale, I appreciate life
depressed states come and go
but my fascination with life only grows
pain makes me disassociate
still I cling to faith in something
even if it is a flower
who had the power to bloom today
turning her happy face to the sunshine
my disposition is lifted
and I get in sync with the rhythm of life ...
wandering through unsolicted
my soul breaks the surface of doubt
gentle need takes hold
and I know I want
my greed beholds beauty
with a deep exhale, I appreciate life
depressed states come and go
but my fascination with life only grows
pain makes me disassociate
still I cling to faith in something
even if it is a flower
who had the power to bloom today
turning her happy face to the sunshine
my disposition is lifted
and I get in sync with the rhythm of life ...
#uplifting
91 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:03pm
Yesterday 10:03pm
A work of art
Ash to ash and dust to dust, we are only ENTITY'S of our former self, born to live only to die, like a precious flower 🌷 that only needs the Sun and Water to survive. But yet beneath the surface of our skin, as the blood flows through our veins inner locking our heart ❤️ to our brain 🧠 and to the deepness of our minds thoughts. 🤔 We are here and now in this space without time, to accept our fate and the spiritual subconsciousness of ourselves. For it's true that we are only human, and we have a choice of how we want to live our life story ✍️...
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#redemption
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
28 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 00:04am
13th Apr 2025 00:04am
The Great Big Canvas
When the grand fire in the sky goes to sleep
In the darkness comes a different kind of light
It watches us closer with that pale mystic hue
That glows softly and feels cooler in the night
But behind it there are others that seem further away
Twinkling like faint sparkles amidst ocean waves
They must be the gods who come to visit us in dreams
Those figures we must capture and illustrate in caves
Those distant lonely lights seem to send us a message
Telling tales and stories we have yet to understand
As we ponder and wonder about...
In the darkness comes a different kind of light
It watches us closer with that pale mystic hue
That glows softly and feels cooler in the night
But behind it there are others that seem further away
Twinkling like faint sparkles amidst ocean waves
They must be the gods who come to visit us in dreams
Those figures we must capture and illustrate in caves
Those distant lonely lights seem to send us a message
Telling tales and stories we have yet to understand
As we ponder and wonder about...
#inspirational
#stars
#universe
#uplifting
#WritingPoetry
42 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
27th Dec 2023 8:59am
27th Dec 2023 8:59am
TO THE 'CREOLE LARA CROFT'
If the picture is you,
then I say: "Good on you
for maintaining a shape
to make a man go ape,
with you alone smitten
and by lust's bug bitten,
succumbing to your charms
then fall into your arms.
You need no hip gun to
knock out a man - you
are all your very own
most erotic weapon.
You'll see, come, and conquer,
leaving him spent after!"
then I say: "Good on you
for maintaining a shape
to make a man go ape,
with you alone smitten
and by lust's bug bitten,
succumbing to your charms
then fall into your arms.
You need no hip gun to
knock out a man - you
are all your very own
most erotic weapon.
You'll see, come, and conquer,
leaving him spent after!"
#women
#rhyming
#uplifting
284 reads
1 Comment
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 4:58pm
4th Jan 2025 4:58pm
declaration of independence
(Visual)
#confessional
#healing
#SelfWorth #uplifting
#SelfWorth #uplifting
303 reads
12 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
10th Jan 2017 7:15pm
10th Jan 2017 7:15pm
Return To Life
take my hand
and let me lead you
back into the land
of the living
dry those tears
wipe off the dust
put that smile
back on
the past is
over and done
pick up the pieces
and glue them
together
they might
not fit like
they used to do
but it’s in the cracks
where the light enters you
and let me lead you
back into the land
of the living
dry those tears
wipe off the dust
put that smile
back on
the past is
over and done
pick up the pieces
and glue them
together
they might
not fit like
they used to do
but it’s in the cracks
where the light enters you
#hope
#uplifting
1545 reads
56 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
10 COMMANDMENTS FOR POETS
1. THOU SHALL write to please self.
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
#uplifting
317 reads
13 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Sep 2020 10:06pm
6th Sep 2020 10:06pm
Aviation
( After Alice Fulton )
I once had reason to fear
humans in general—
people are people, individual
as their unpredictable demeanor
regardless of upbringing
I've experienced them
in farmhouse pigsties
to Buckingham Palace—
often unable to tell a difference
aside from clothes or conduct.
I once observed various groups
in a museum:
The elite,...
I once had reason to fear
humans in general—
people are people, individual
as their unpredictable demeanor
regardless of upbringing
I've experienced them
in farmhouse pigsties
to Buckingham Palace—
often unable to tell a difference
aside from clothes or conduct.
I once observed various groups
in a museum:
The elite,...
#inspirational
#humankind
#uplifting #AliceFulton
#uplifting #AliceFulton
770 reads
52 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 12:56pm
19th Nov 2024 12:56pm
Lets Fight Together
Never let the darkness consume your light,
hold on to the whispers of hope,
embrace the strength within your soul
for you are needed, loved... cherished.
Never believe the lies of despair,
your existence is a beacon,
a guiding star in the night
shining brighter than you know.
Never forget the battles you've won,
each step forward is a victory,
your journey is a testament
to the resilience of your spirit.
Never surrender to the shadows,
for within you lies a fire,
a flame that will burn eternally...
hold on to the whispers of hope,
embrace the strength within your soul
for you are needed, loved... cherished.
Never believe the lies of despair,
your existence is a beacon,
a guiding star in the night
shining brighter than you know.
Never forget the battles you've won,
each step forward is a victory,
your journey is a testament
to the resilience of your spirit.
Never surrender to the shadows,
for within you lies a fire,
a flame that will burn eternally...
#hope
#strength
#success
#suicide
#uplifting
180 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 2:39am
2nd Apr 2024 2:39am
Celebrity Dream Sequence
Like a coniferous willow
the cedar loves to droop
because that's its peccadillo
like Paltrow with her Goop.
And she as well sports dangle limbs,
as a fine lady will,
enough to warrant Gwyneth hymns...
if she would pay the bill.
But her rare beauty I would praise
as much as any tree
if by some luck she might upraise
her torso kit for me.
And then proceed to throw it off
to give my hands a chance
to take advantage of that doff,...
the cedar loves to droop
because that's its peccadillo
like Paltrow with her Goop.
And she as well sports dangle limbs,
as a fine lady will,
enough to warrant Gwyneth hymns...
if she would pay the bill.
But her rare beauty I would praise
as much as any tree
if by some luck she might upraise
her torso kit for me.
And then proceed to throw it off
to give my hands a chance
to take advantage of that doff,...
#LifeChangingMoment
#uplifting
#admiration
#ThrillSeeking
#PersonalGrowth
257 reads
4 Comments
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