Uplifting by Top Critiquers Poems
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uplifting by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 7:57am
16th Sep 2024 7:57am
It's Got A Soprano's Vibe To It
After much deliberation. I, Damian DeadLove, being of sound mind and soul have come to a conclusion. I know what every writer has in common now, okay it could just be a theory, but please hear me out here. If anything it sounds cool but I’ll let you be the judge of that.
Can I get a drumroll, please?? We expose demons and slay them!! Told you it was pretty cool. Now some of you might be saying, “Your just now figuring that out, Damian?” Well I do walk to my own drumbeat, and sometimes I’ve been known to fall out of time. It happens more than I’d like to admit.
...
Can I get a drumroll, please?? We expose demons and slay them!! Told you it was pretty cool. Now some of you might be saying, “Your just now figuring that out, Damian?” Well I do walk to my own drumbeat, and sometimes I’ve been known to fall out of time. It happens more than I’d like to admit.
...
#satirical
#uplifting
148 reads
22 Comments
Her
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 5:32am
26th Mar 2024 5:32am
To My Knees
The dreams I had
Are nothing
Compared to
What I’ve been given
Once I got back up
Are nothing
Compared to
What I’ve been given
Once I got back up
#hope
#breakup
#uplifting
203 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 8:27pm
27th Dec 2024 8:27pm
Have you smiled today?
Smiling for myself
Pleasure is what you create
Just one life to give
Pleasure is what you create
Just one life to give
#happiness
#senryu
#uplifting
58 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 2:18am
23rd Dec 2024 2:18am
rest assured
an artistry in the spilling of words onto the page
finessing the thoughts
stringing them together in a way to make one feel
deeply and passionately with tempo, rhythm and rhyme
sublime feeling when you get it just right
troubling the depths stirring emotions
connecting with one another
we poets are a different breed
hunting for just the right word play
something soft to fall on the ears
it's in the versed I find God
sleepiness of soul and I'm dreaming
ladybug sunshine and starlit horizons
my mind turns happiness over...
finessing the thoughts
stringing them together in a way to make one feel
deeply and passionately with tempo, rhythm and rhyme
sublime feeling when you get it just right
troubling the depths stirring emotions
connecting with one another
we poets are a different breed
hunting for just the right word play
something soft to fall on the ears
it's in the versed I find God
sleepiness of soul and I'm dreaming
ladybug sunshine and starlit horizons
my mind turns happiness over...
#happiness
#spiritual
#uplifting
59 reads
9 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
17th Mar 2024 5:32pm
Collage - A New Calling
Pieces
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
Scraps
Cutoffs
Electric Bill Envelope
Blue boxes
Anything and everything
No rules
A journey to places unknown
Landscape
Art sake
My take
#identity
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
#art
232 reads
28 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
27th Dec 2023 8:59am
27th Dec 2023 8:59am
TO THE 'CREOLE LARA CROFT'
If the picture is you,
then I say: "Good on you
for maintaining a shape
to make a man go ape,
with you alone smitten
and by lust's bug bitten,
succumbing to your charms
then fall into your arms.
You need no hip gun to
knock out a man - you
are all your very own
most erotic weapon.
You'll see, come, and conquer,
leaving him spent after!"
then I say: "Good on you
for maintaining a shape
to make a man go ape,
with you alone smitten
and by lust's bug bitten,
succumbing to your charms
then fall into your arms.
You need no hip gun to
knock out a man - you
are all your very own
most erotic weapon.
You'll see, come, and conquer,
leaving him spent after!"
#women
#rhyming
#uplifting
223 reads
1 Comment
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Sep 2020 10:06pm
6th Sep 2020 10:06pm
Aviation
( After Alice Fulton )
I once had reason to fear
humans in general—
people are people, individual
as their unpredictable demeanor
regardless of upbringing
I've experienced them
in farmhouse pigsties
to Buckingham Palace—
often unable to tell a difference
aside from clothes or conduct.
I once observed various groups
in a museum:
The elite,...
I once had reason to fear
humans in general—
people are people, individual
as their unpredictable demeanor
regardless of upbringing
I've experienced them
in farmhouse pigsties
to Buckingham Palace—
often unable to tell a difference
aside from clothes or conduct.
I once observed various groups
in a museum:
The elite,...
#inspirational
#humankind
#uplifting #AliceFulton
#uplifting #AliceFulton
696 reads
52 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 3:28am
26th Dec 2024 3:28am
When the tears fall silently
For sure through the process of life someone else, may walk into your life, 💕 leaving an impressive place in your own thoughts. Wondering if this is the one with insight and a spiritual soul of there heart. 💖 FOR sure it's gonna make you smile, yet you wonder could this be really real, or just more of the same mind games 😤 that so many still like to play. 🤔 To leave you alone and broken, like a shattered glass of broken pieces, 😭 THAT will never heal as those memories of the past, behind you have you feeling trap in ways that becomes, completely...
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#LifeStruggles
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
47 reads
0 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
10 COMMANDMENTS FOR POETS
1. THOU SHALL write to please self.
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
#uplifting
143 reads
13 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 2:00pm
16th Dec 2024 2:00pm
True Colors
To read from the last stanza up.
#spiritual
#uplifting
161 reads
20 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 2:39am
2nd Apr 2024 2:39am
Celebrity Dream Sequence
Like a coniferous willow
the cedar loves to droop
because that's its peccadillo
like Paltrow with her Goop.
And she as well sports dangle limbs,
as a fine lady will,
enough to warrant Gwyneth hymns...
if she would pay the bill.
But her rare beauty I would praise
as much as any tree
if by some luck she might upraise
her torso kit for me.
And then proceed to throw it off
to give my hands a chance
to take advantage of that doff,...
the cedar loves to droop
because that's its peccadillo
like Paltrow with her Goop.
And she as well sports dangle limbs,
as a fine lady will,
enough to warrant Gwyneth hymns...
if she would pay the bill.
But her rare beauty I would praise
as much as any tree
if by some luck she might upraise
her torso kit for me.
And then proceed to throw it off
to give my hands a chance
to take advantage of that doff,...
#LifeChangingMoment
#uplifting
#admiration
#ThrillSeeking
#PersonalGrowth
205 reads
4 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 5:36am
21st Oct 2024 5:36am
haikus and senryus
my secret
if i loved her more
i would have to let her know
but it's my secret
no more heartbreaks
you're only lonely
that's the way you choose to live
with no more heartbreaks
she wore moonlight
she looked so lovely
wearing nothing but moonlight
she wore it all night
winter's cold
i don't mind the cold
when winter comes around
let it pass by spring
hopeful flowers
the bad weather came
the flowers withstood it all
keeping...
if i loved her more
i would have to let her know
but it's my secret
no more heartbreaks
you're only lonely
that's the way you choose to live
with no more heartbreaks
she wore moonlight
she looked so lovely
wearing nothing but moonlight
she wore it all night
winter's cold
i don't mind the cold
when winter comes around
let it pass by spring
hopeful flowers
the bad weather came
the flowers withstood it all
keeping...
#emotional
#haiku
#minimalist
#senryu
#uplifting
95 reads
6 Comments
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