Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 8:20pm
1st Oct 2024 8:20pm
Focus, and let the world know who you are
Use all of your mind & all of your soul
Give it all your heart, intelligence is smarts
You have so much to give, don't throw it all away
Someday, you'll have your way
It will come to you
Give it all your heart, intelligence is smarts
You have so much to give, don't throw it all away
Someday, you'll have your way
It will come to you
#happiness
#identity
#inspirational
#motivational
#uplifting
81 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 7:25pm
30th Sep 2024 7:25pm
Walk Away
I'm watching you shoot your mouth off
The bullets are flying and hitting everyone in the heart
You need an audience to fuel yourself
It makes you want to continue
It drives your ego
Your fulfillment
Your ability to belittle and ridicule
You can give two fucks on who your talking to
As long as your in control
Not me though
I know better
I know that when your running your mouth,
I'll protect myself with one thing you absolutely hate
Turn the other way & walk away
The bullets are flying and hitting everyone in the heart
You need an audience to fuel yourself
It makes you want to continue
It drives your ego
Your fulfillment
Your ability to belittle and ridicule
You can give two fucks on who your talking to
As long as your in control
Not me though
I know better
I know that when your running your mouth,
I'll protect myself with one thing you absolutely hate
Turn the other way & walk away
#bullying
#hate
#ignorance
#inspirational
#uplifting
90 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 11:07am
28th Sep 2024 11:07am
You bit the hand that fed you one too many times
How can I see when I haven't saw anything but a worthless piece of shit?
You are what you eat, you shit grinning pig.
Get the fuck out of my life!
You are what you eat, you shit grinning pig.
Get the fuck out of my life!
#betrayal
#hate
#love
#minimalist
#uplifting
116 reads
10 Comments
Roguenarak
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 11:44pm
22nd Sep 2024 11:44pm
Seven Livers
They had lived many lives, betrayed many dogmas
Carelessly of drama, shame now a silly diorama
Portraying a world of talking socks, empty puppets
Clueless in the face of the mighty's many rackets
Oh they live on today, and tomorrow again
In their pockets packets of love and fresh water
Shooting stars that burn, acknowledging the pain
Knowing it's the means to make their lives matter
For who wants to live an existence of no troubles?
Broken hearts and bodies, emerge from the rubbles
Standing at the ready and prepared...
Carelessly of drama, shame now a silly diorama
Portraying a world of talking socks, empty puppets
Clueless in the face of the mighty's many rackets
Oh they live on today, and tomorrow again
In their pockets packets of love and fresh water
Shooting stars that burn, acknowledging the pain
Knowing it's the means to make their lives matter
For who wants to live an existence of no troubles?
Broken hearts and bodies, emerge from the rubbles
Standing at the ready and prepared...
#determination
#freedom
#success
#uplifting
#rhyming
98 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 8:35pm
21st Sep 2024 8:35pm
Be Kind
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no reason to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no reason to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#inspirational
#motivational
#uplifting
67 reads
8 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 7:57am
16th Sep 2024 7:57am
It's Got A Soprano's Vibe To It
After much deliberation. I, Damian DeadLove, being of sound mind and soul have come to a conclusion. I know what every writer has in common now, okay it could just be a theory, but please hear me out here. If anything it sounds cool but I’ll let you be the judge of that.
Can I get a drumroll, please?? We expose demons and slay them!! Told you it was pretty cool. Now some of you might be saying, “Your just now figuring that out, Damian?” Well I do walk to my own drumbeat, and sometimes I’ve been known to fall out of time. It happens more than I’d like to admit.
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Can I get a drumroll, please?? We expose demons and slay them!! Told you it was pretty cool. Now some of you might be saying, “Your just now figuring that out, Damian?” Well I do walk to my own drumbeat, and sometimes I’ve been known to fall out of time. It happens more than I’d like to admit.
...
#satirical
#uplifting
147 reads
22 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 4:43am
16th Sep 2024 4:43am
Stepping Stones
Through this life of trails and trubation, whether you want to live your life in drama and confusion and chaos. Always along with the deepness of your own personal, hurt and pain that seems to haunt you eventually. Stealing your own night dreams. 🥱 Yet we are still not willing to give up on the righteousness, moments of tranquility with quiteness of your own thoughts of peace. A genuine sense of what you really need and want in your life and world. For sure there are sometimes, you have to learn the hard way and I know that sounds, raw and uncut straight forward attitude with...
#courage
#redemption
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#uplifting
153 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 4:06am
8th Sep 2024 4:06am
Backstage
Backstage is here..
#uplifting
233 reads
20 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 1:25am
8th Sep 2024 1:25am
Deck of Cards (AfterSexDilemma collab)
AfterSexDilemma:
Falling to the ground, Big Bang,
That's the sound.
A big man balancing on a tricycle,
Dancing like a clown.
High in the Sefirot trying not to drop.
Opened my mouth couldn't get it to stop.
Pressure boiling in with hot steam,
Makes my ears pop.
The fish in the sky are going dry.
Start to flip flop.
High on my mind wasting time on the clock.
I'm in decline, getting behind, still in line,
Want fame from the tick tock.
The...
Falling to the ground, Big Bang,
That's the sound.
A big man balancing on a tricycle,
Dancing like a clown.
High in the Sefirot trying not to drop.
Opened my mouth couldn't get it to stop.
Pressure boiling in with hot steam,
Makes my ears pop.
The fish in the sky are going dry.
Start to flip flop.
High on my mind wasting time on the clock.
I'm in decline, getting behind, still in line,
Want fame from the tick tock.
The...
#collaboration
#escape
#satirical
#symbolism
#uplifting
189 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 10:58am
7th Sep 2024 10:58am
Start your morning with a smile
Bleed all over me
Can't resist my sadist ways
You're pain gives me joy
Can't resist my sadist ways
You're pain gives me joy
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#senryu
#uplifting
100 reads
4 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 1:02pm
4th Sep 2024 1:02pm
Slow and Steady
I rise with the sun
I aim to be the number one
You can catch me at a low, but my journey has just begun
I’ve made some mistakes
My skin’s tough; I won’t break
I soldier on through the blows; slow and steady wins the race
I aim to be the number one
You can catch me at a low, but my journey has just begun
I’ve made some mistakes
My skin’s tough; I won’t break
I soldier on through the blows; slow and steady wins the race
#motivational
#rhyming
#strength #uplifting
#strength #uplifting
124 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 1:47pm
2nd Sep 2024 1:47pm
NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE
A BLANK CANVAS...For It is necessary for me to be able, to share my thoughts with honesty, and truth and trust. FOR sure there will come a few minutes later 🤔 THAT I have to go through a process of being, able to release the deepness of my own mind thoughts. 🖊️ For example there are those moments, that I have to do some raw and uncut inner soul searching. Yet on a mentally and emotionally and physically, and spiritually levels of self consciousness connections. For the elders say that each day is a day of learning, something about thyself that we thought, we didn't even...
#inspirational
#motivational
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
104 reads
0 Comments
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