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Start your morning with a smile
Bleed all over me
Can't resist my sadist ways
You're pain gives me joy
Can't resist my sadist ways
You're pain gives me joy
Published 7th Sep 2024
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7th Sep 2024 3:21pm
The way I read this is that you are asking your partner to tell you what is going on with them. Like you are checking in to see if they are alright before heading out for the day. Nicely Done. Fia xoxo
7th Sep 2024 8:29pm
That was a nice remark but unfortunately this haiku was much more deviant. More or less I was saying that I enjoy someone's pain & misery. That gives me strength to smile & laugh.
7th Sep 2024 3:48pm
Well, I'll let you remove all my hangnails and zits every morning. Since you're so willing
7th Sep 2024 8:29pm
