Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Today 12:42pm
Today 12:42pm
Cum here and watch
#girlfriend
#orgasm
#sex
#uplifting
#wife
24 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 10:55am
16th Jan 2025 10:55am
Sunday Morning
It was a typical Sunday morning.
With the sunset going down,sunshine forming.
A Sunday morning is never boring with you.
So have some tea with me,too.
Let me pour you some mint,honey tea.
And let the negative emotions flee.
As the moon goes down,sun comes up.
And the sun shines,staying put.
Maybe some music in the background.
Like lofi, electric beats.
A cup of tea,a good book.
Under the warm,cozy sheets.
It was a Sunday morning for me.
And everyone let me be.
I woke up from peaceful slumber.
...
With the sunset going down,sunshine forming.
A Sunday morning is never boring with you.
So have some tea with me,too.
Let me pour you some mint,honey tea.
And let the negative emotions flee.
As the moon goes down,sun comes up.
And the sun shines,staying put.
Maybe some music in the background.
Like lofi, electric beats.
A cup of tea,a good book.
Under the warm,cozy sheets.
It was a Sunday morning for me.
And everyone let me be.
I woke up from peaceful slumber.
...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#uplifting
16 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 7:23pm
15th Jan 2025 7:23pm
I will never forget
One night in August 2024 I took a walk down to the beach to hear the teenagers roll into shore
I smelled smoke
I looked across the street
Someone had nailed a bum to the neon lit 7-11 sign
His body formed the sign of the cross
He had been torched
There he was, crackling and burning against the night sky
He was the first saint I had ever seen
I smelled smoke
I looked across the street
Someone had nailed a bum to the neon lit 7-11 sign
His body formed the sign of the cross
He had been torched
There he was, crackling and burning against the night sky
He was the first saint I had ever seen
#motivational
#nonfiction
#spiritual
#summer
#uplifting
50 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 10:57am
15th Jan 2025 10:57am
Sexual Freedom!
#confessional
#motivational
#sex
#uplifting
#women
129 reads
8 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 5:48pm
12th Jan 2025 5:48pm
Weeping Skies
Please pray for Los Angeles!!!
The skies are so gray,
with such a dark gloom,
I can smell the rain,
I hope it comes very soon.
The air is so windy,
The Clouds are set,
Hoping Raindrops fall,
Thus far, nothing yet.
The gray Skies are ready,
Perception predicts Rain,
Of All of the burning Forrest,
I pray this in Jesus Name.
Los Angeles is now Burning,
As an arsonist runs free,
Oh, Please stop these fires,
I beg this and I plea.
As the burning slows down,
It's a sad...
The skies are so gray,
with such a dark gloom,
I can smell the rain,
I hope it comes very soon.
The air is so windy,
The Clouds are set,
Hoping Raindrops fall,
Thus far, nothing yet.
The gray Skies are ready,
Perception predicts Rain,
Of All of the burning Forrest,
I pray this in Jesus Name.
Los Angeles is now Burning,
As an arsonist runs free,
Oh, Please stop these fires,
I beg this and I plea.
As the burning slows down,
It's a sad...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
34 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:49am
12th Jan 2025 2:49am
Thanks for watching over me
I write these words ✍️ from pen to paper, as well l give thanks to GOD ALMIGHTY, 😇 for what he has done for me 🙏 over my journey and travel and walk. FOR I am grateful as I am yes thankful 🙏 as I am blessed ❤️ in more ways than one to still, being here right here in now. I truly thank my faith and my perseverance for not giving up without a future fight, for sure I would rather be on my feet than being on my knees for he isn't ready for me to come home 🏡 For sure I am a firm believer that it ain't over when you lose, it's over when...
#BestFriend
#LifeAsAWriter
#relationships
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
61 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 11:19pm
11th Jan 2025 11:19pm
What the world needs now
As we enter into a new year in 2025 let's ask ourselves, what the world really 🌎 needs now 🤔 at this very moment in time. FOR do we really need the immigrants and maggots with there hands out demanding, more assistance when they are getting a $3,000 credit card and $4,000 for food, and they don't even have an apartment due to the fact they live in in property that was supposed to be for the American citizen? YET have an apartment just going from shelter to shelter. 🤨 For now we welcome a new change of not, having to deal with the Democrats party, who have slowly...
#corruption
#emotional
#politics
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:12pm
11th Jan 2025 2:12pm
CENTER OF BALANCE
It's true that in this life we may never truly know what someone else, is going through in there own personal life. FOR example we all have a moment of a want and need of a helping hand from time to time ⌚ For sure it cost you nothing to have a good heart ❤️ and even a deeper spiritual soul 🙏 to connect on a positive level of energy and strength and understanding. For we all need that equal level of the center of balance of life and love. ❤️ THAT will affect us in ways that we may never truly understand, but that's alright to need and want not that...
#friendship
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
39 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 10:19pm
9th Jan 2025 10:19pm
The gathering of spirits
It is here and now that we gather in this space and time in front of the tree of life, as we speak and exchange thoughts and insight, and spiritual subconsciousness of an awakening, of our lives together as one entity still standing and in the process of peace and tranquility and harmony. For it's true that we as ENTITY'S, that we have been gifted spiritually to be able to be able to bless and to guide you upon this Earthly journey and travel and walk through your lives 🙏 As we shine the heavenly Halo's upon your 🗣️ heads and spiritual shoulders, placing our hands as an...
#courage
#emotional
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:10pm
8th Jan 2025 7:10pm
Invoke Happiness
I stabbed myself repeatedly in the stomach about 3 times
there was no pain
there was no blood
instead, a greenish black goo oozed out onto the floor
A sign of relief
I was eradicating all negative energy from my body
this built up from years of anger, hostility, rage, hatred, tension and bitterness
surrounding yourself with people who bring you down
make a change, create and release the positive vibes within
associate with like minded individuals who love to invoke happiness
there was no pain
there was no blood
instead, a greenish black goo oozed out onto the floor
A sign of relief
I was eradicating all negative energy from my body
this built up from years of anger, hostility, rage, hatred, tension and bitterness
surrounding yourself with people who bring you down
make a change, create and release the positive vibes within
associate with like minded individuals who love to invoke happiness
#fiction
#horror
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
65 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:34am
7th Jan 2025 11:34am
All my entire life
It's funny when I think about it knowone I've ever been with, gave me what I've been getting from you. 🤔 But it's not to say that me myself and I didn't realize that, I had it then like I know now. FOR sure it was my fault I messed it up the amazing relationships then, for I didn't know that I had it then like I know now in my life. For let me be the first to say I am to blame cause back then, I've been hurt and lied and cheated on, by the very someones who I thought I could trust. YET that became a lie in so many ways, that my own heart became as cold as ice, with no feelings or...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 9:42pm
6th Jan 2025 9:42pm
That Purple Blob Named Grimace
Is he a taste bud or a milkshake?
Everyone loves that happy, purple blob Grimace
He's a McDonald character that loves milk shakes
Back when he debuted in 1971, he was called Evil Grimace
Evil Grimace was sinister
A villain who would steal milkshakes from children
He was mean, had four arms and no charm at all
Children were frightened
Some children believed if they ordered a milk shake, that evil Grimace would steal it out of their hands
The 4-armed Grimace was also a coke fiend
Besides stealing milk shakes and tormenting kids,...
Everyone loves that happy, purple blob Grimace
He's a McDonald character that loves milk shakes
Back when he debuted in 1971, he was called Evil Grimace
Evil Grimace was sinister
A villain who would steal milkshakes from children
He was mean, had four arms and no charm at all
Children were frightened
Some children believed if they ordered a milk shake, that evil Grimace would steal it out of their hands
The 4-armed Grimace was also a coke fiend
Besides stealing milk shakes and tormenting kids,...
#children
#evil
#food
#PopCulture
#uplifting
45 reads
6 Comments
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