Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Aug 2020 11:48pm
24th Aug 2020 11:48pm
dunno how you feel
watching a seagull on the beach audibly struggling for breath
and yet otherwise quite still and outwardly calmly awaiting its death ..
and yet otherwise quite still and outwardly calmly awaiting its death ..
#universe
399 reads
5 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2023 9:00pm
22nd Aug 2023 9:00pm
Touch me...
Touch me....
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads. ...
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads. ...
#lust
#universe
#lover
#passion
#orgasm
1202 reads
46 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
24th Jul 2024 4:06am
24th Jul 2024 4:06am
superposition
if Schrodinger was blind
he would not be able to
observe the cat being
either alive or dead
poor cat
what a state of super-
position to be left in
molecules scattered
everywhere
with no mouse to
chase
he would not be able to
observe the cat being
either alive or dead
poor cat
what a state of super-
position to be left in
molecules scattered
everywhere
with no mouse to
chase
#universe
159 reads
6 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 9:16pm
16th Jan 2024 9:16pm
The Wish of Universal Annihilation
Those who are fascinated by forbidden lore
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
#dark
#universe
#apocalypse
356 reads
5 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 5:36pm
2nd Apr 2025 5:36pm
Scorpion
May the emptiness
of broken words be
filled with sweet
understanding
may the soft branches
of the sky break
and may the whole earth
shine like white stars
N ohhh !!! one day
i saw scorpion
the supernatural
extraordinary realm
of the vast universe
like precious pearls
locked in a shell
like a priceless diamond
of a priceless necklace
Antares...
the brightest star
of this scorpion
this aura flows
best in the heart
of the creamy sky
like a pink...
of broken words be
filled with sweet
understanding
may the soft branches
of the sky break
and may the whole earth
shine like white stars
N ohhh !!! one day
i saw scorpion
the supernatural
extraordinary realm
of the vast universe
like precious pearls
locked in a shell
like a priceless diamond
of a priceless necklace
Antares...
the brightest star
of this scorpion
this aura flows
best in the heart
of the creamy sky
like a pink...
#sky
#universe
97 reads
6 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
18th Jul 2019 5:05pm
18th Jul 2019 5:05pm
The Incidental Poet
what moves the quill?
life itself
the trials..the tribulations
the triumphs
triangulated on a poetic canvass
questioning death
the afterlife....etc etc
so many places to go
but admittedly
everything ain't for show n tell
not for public consumption
no matter how much it consumes
my everyday thoughts
some poems will remain forever un-written..
etched in blood
chiseled in cauterized braille
on a sacrificial heart
but with that said...
life itself
the trials..the tribulations
the triumphs
triangulated on a poetic canvass
questioning death
the afterlife....etc etc
so many places to go
but admittedly
everything ain't for show n tell
not for public consumption
no matter how much it consumes
my everyday thoughts
some poems will remain forever un-written..
etched in blood
chiseled in cauterized braille
on a sacrificial heart
but with that said...
#anxiety
#birth
#universe
#LifeAsAWriter
#SelfDiscovery
473 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
Abyssus
"And if you gaze long enough into the abyss, the abyss also gazes into you" - Nietzsche
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
#astronomy
#dreams
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
108 reads
11 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 00:39am
7th Apr 2024 00:39am
Vietnam Medic
Vietnam Medic
hills of Vietnam
where medic
bandages wounds
of Odin’s warriors
as jungle blues
Sing from radio
In cool air
Of mountain Gods
Upon steep slopes
Rising from bamboo forest
In thatched roof hut
where small TV
Projects ghostly cinema
Of moon walkers
In 1969
For idyllic medicine man
Under roof of heaven
With occasional gunfire
To keep him honest
© 2024 by John Hindle
hills of Vietnam
where medic
bandages wounds
of Odin’s warriors
as jungle blues
Sing from radio
In cool air
Of mountain Gods
Upon steep slopes
Rising from bamboo forest
In thatched roof hut
where small TV
Projects ghostly cinema
Of moon walkers
In 1969
For idyllic medicine man
Under roof of heaven
With occasional gunfire
To keep him honest
© 2024 by John Hindle
#war
#universe
#moon
#nature
#peace
210 reads
3 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
10th Jul 2022 8:06pm
10th Jul 2022 8:06pm
Eternal sunset and lakes of fury
Brightly she shines in our night sky;
her name the goddess of love.
Once Earth's twin –
similar in size and structure –
her hellish heat
and sulphuric sky
have rendered her an evil monster.
Cloaked in a carbon dioxide blanket,
her acid rain, violent volcanoes
and lakes of lava run rampant;
their heat unable to escape
the scorching surface.
No seasons serve to cool or calm.
Even the night
offers little respite
from the soaring heat
and you could be...
her name the goddess of love.
Once Earth's twin –
similar in size and structure –
her hellish heat
and sulphuric sky
have rendered her an evil monster.
Cloaked in a carbon dioxide blanket,
her acid rain, violent volcanoes
and lakes of lava run rampant;
their heat unable to escape
the scorching surface.
No seasons serve to cool or calm.
Even the night
offers little respite
from the soaring heat
and you could be...
#sun
#universe
#environment
#astronomy
#nonfiction
468 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2023 3:11am
23rd Jul 2023 3:11am
Our Scanners Probed A Comet
Our scanners probed a
comet that zoomed its way past
our ship still in space.
comet that zoomed its way past
our ship still in space.
#universe
#haiku
#fiction
#dialogue
#scifi
201 reads
4 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 11:00pm
15th Mar 2025 11:00pm
Graffiti
You come stubborn.
Computer graffiti!
Fire pool!
Dazzling!
Shocking!
Soothing!
You leave me without words…
Little I am.
So little,
As i try to grasp.
You dazzle.
Shock!
Soothe!
And over again.
Computer graffiti!
Fire pool!
Dazzling!
Shocking!
Soothing!
You leave me without words…
Little I am.
So little,
As i try to grasp.
You dazzle.
Shock!
Soothe!
And over again.
#universe
72 reads
2 Comments
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