Poems About the Universe Seeking Friendly Advice
#universe
Poems about the universe seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 11:25am
24th Jan 2025 11:25am
the future has stars in it
I see his indigo silhouette
a lonely astronaut
untethered
reaching for the man in the moon
Sometimes I wonder
if I just imagined him
treading dawn
as the electric dark
gives way to unholy sunshine
I'm learning to see
through the fire
and over the walls
but I'm numb to the inferno
that rages around us
heralding a future
we can't set right
I think he's got the right idea
my indigo astronaut
dialling off world in the hopes
the stars hold something more
for...
a lonely astronaut
untethered
reaching for the man in the moon
Sometimes I wonder
if I just imagined him
treading dawn
as the electric dark
gives way to unholy sunshine
I'm learning to see
through the fire
and over the walls
but I'm numb to the inferno
that rages around us
heralding a future
we can't set right
I think he's got the right idea
my indigo astronaut
dialling off world in the hopes
the stars hold something more
for...
#moon
#scifi
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
95 reads
2 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 7:07am
24th Jan 2025 7:07am
Coincidence V Conditions
When conditions are right things happen
good and bad.
Hubris fools us into thinking we can adjust conditions to suit our moods,by
simply ignoring the truth that conditions brought the mood on.
For you to find your soul mate requires thousands of years, lives and conditions that had to be met first.
For a cloud to form or an earthquake to occur, the conditions have to arise.They have to be right for manifestation to occur.
To fall in love or into darkness need the right conditions to arise.
Ergo
Nothing arises by itself. ...
good and bad.
Hubris fools us into thinking we can adjust conditions to suit our moods,by
simply ignoring the truth that conditions brought the mood on.
For you to find your soul mate requires thousands of years, lives and conditions that had to be met first.
For a cloud to form or an earthquake to occur, the conditions have to arise.They have to be right for manifestation to occur.
To fall in love or into darkness need the right conditions to arise.
Ergo
Nothing arises by itself. ...
#universe
50 reads
3 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 8:48pm
19th Jan 2025 8:48pm
Rainbow
How can she devour the rainbow I whispered?
How can she vomit red ink?
And all of this…
Me in-between!
How can it be my dream?
Colorful!
Even real!
The tissue of colour, griping my skin deep.
How can she vomit red ink?
And all of this…
Me in-between!
How can it be my dream?
Colorful!
Even real!
The tissue of colour, griping my skin deep.
#universe
44 reads
2 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 9:54pm
15th Jan 2025 9:54pm
Stars
As i opened the window,
At night,
Looking at the stars.
Bright dots in the sky.
So much stars!
And me?
A snowflake for a while…
At night,
Looking at the stars.
Bright dots in the sky.
So much stars!
And me?
A snowflake for a while…
#universe
63 reads
4 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 8:15pm
14th Jan 2025 8:15pm
Apple
Oh apple!
How do i see you today?
All but a delusion!
I thought you were red?
How do i see you today?
All but a delusion!
I thought you were red?
#universe
65 reads
4 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 8:15pm
8th Jan 2025 8:15pm
Wonderer
A system error!
Beauty beyond compare.
Seems my destiny is settled.
I am the wonderer!
Beauty beyond compare.
Seems my destiny is settled.
I am the wonderer!
#universe
67 reads
6 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 1:31am
7th Jan 2025 1:31am
Cumulus
Today the clouds borrowed the sun.
It was their turn to shine.
It was their turn to shine.
#universe
57 reads
2 Comments
bcpoet
Lawrence
Lawrence
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 2:33am
3rd Jan 2025 2:33am
Ordinary Everyday
ordinary everyday
awake and then asleep
to wake again but not to stay
subconsciously we keep
fantasizing tantalizing
carrots on a stick
motivatingly inspiring
like a candle's wick
whose quiet flame is just the same
as the inner light
shining through the sometimes pain
in both day and night -
breathing in and breathing out
awake, asleep, among
all the beings hereabout -
the children of the Sun
moving ever onwards
electrically embraced
spinning forwards towards
what we each...
awake and then asleep
to wake again but not to stay
subconsciously we keep
fantasizing tantalizing
carrots on a stick
motivatingly inspiring
like a candle's wick
whose quiet flame is just the same
as the inner light
shining through the sometimes pain
in both day and night -
breathing in and breathing out
awake, asleep, among
all the beings hereabout -
the children of the Sun
moving ever onwards
electrically embraced
spinning forwards towards
what we each...
#universe
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0 Comments
3Y3S-THVT-S33
Electra
Electra
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 9:24pm
1st Jan 2025 9:24pm
Love Isn't Always Like the Poets Say.
Ugh.
Poets only write about love.
Love poems make me sick.
So, when I do write about love,
I don't write to an unknown lover.
I just write about Love herself.
Her raw and broken form.
I feel her deeply because she flourishes within me,
She's not as put together as the poets say.
She gets dragged round like a rag doll,
And sort of treated like a pet.
They speak of her as if she is Desire,
But most poets don't know,
She is actually Unknown.
She is the Storm,
Not the Sun or the Light.
She is the Breaking.
She...
Poets only write about love.
Love poems make me sick.
So, when I do write about love,
I don't write to an unknown lover.
I just write about Love herself.
Her raw and broken form.
I feel her deeply because she flourishes within me,
She's not as put together as the poets say.
She gets dragged round like a rag doll,
And sort of treated like a pet.
They speak of her as if she is Desire,
But most poets don't know,
She is actually Unknown.
She is the Storm,
Not the Sun or the Light.
She is the Breaking.
She...
#emotions
#love
#universe #war
#universe #war
104 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
TOE
Great minds can explain the large and small scale structure of the universe through general relativity and quantum theory.
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
#universe
50 reads
3 Comments
bcpoet
Lawrence
Lawrence
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 9:50pm
12th Dec 2024 9:50pm
Tetrahedrons Parallel
tetrahedrons parallel
subatomic charge
in the worlds invisible
as seen from this, the large
between the ultra-violet
and the infrared
between first inhalation
and when at last we're dead
again within the Bardo
ecstatically to dream
that we're awake in heaven,
or that's how it will seem
time going on forever
as we disappear
becoming one together
with all to us that's near
as tetrahedrons parallel
subatomic charge
what was almost invisible
begins to seem quite large
...
subatomic charge
in the worlds invisible
as seen from this, the large
between the ultra-violet
and the infrared
between first inhalation
and when at last we're dead
again within the Bardo
ecstatically to dream
that we're awake in heaven,
or that's how it will seem
time going on forever
as we disappear
becoming one together
with all to us that's near
as tetrahedrons parallel
subatomic charge
what was almost invisible
begins to seem quite large
...
#universe
28 reads
0 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 1:46pm
8th Dec 2024 1:46pm
Desolation
Wolves howl
As the shrieking cold of winter
Brushes over the barren lands
beneath the endless time continuum
Of the starry night
Aurora Borealis paints the skies
In cool relief
Until the darkness is no more
in the dawn’s early morning light
As the shrieking cold of winter
Brushes over the barren lands
beneath the endless time continuum
Of the starry night
Aurora Borealis paints the skies
In cool relief
Until the darkness is no more
in the dawn’s early morning light
#stars
#universe
#winter
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