Poems About the Universe Seeking Friendly Advice
#universe
Poems about the universe seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
TOE
Great minds can explain the large and small scale structure of the universe through general relativity and quantum theory.
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
#universe
38 reads
3 Comments
bcpoet
Lawrence
Lawrence
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 9:50pm
12th Dec 2024 9:50pm
Tetrahedrons Parallel
tetrahedrons parallel
subatomic charge
in the worlds invisible
as seen from this, the large
between the ultra-violet
and the infrared
between first inhalation
and when at last we're dead
again within the Bardo
ecstatically to dream
that we're awake in heaven,
or that's how it will seem
time going on forever
as we disappear
becoming one together
with all to us that's near
as tetrahedrons parallel
subatomic charge
what was almost invisible
begins to seem quite large
...
subatomic charge
in the worlds invisible
as seen from this, the large
between the ultra-violet
and the infrared
between first inhalation
and when at last we're dead
again within the Bardo
ecstatically to dream
that we're awake in heaven,
or that's how it will seem
time going on forever
as we disappear
becoming one together
with all to us that's near
as tetrahedrons parallel
subatomic charge
what was almost invisible
begins to seem quite large
...
#universe
19 reads
0 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 1:46pm
8th Dec 2024 1:46pm
Desolation
Wolves howl
As the shrieking cold of winter
Brushes over the barren lands
beneath the endless time continuum
Of the starry night
Aurora Borealis paints the skies
In cool relief
Until the darkness is no more
in the dawn’s early morning light
As the shrieking cold of winter
Brushes over the barren lands
beneath the endless time continuum
Of the starry night
Aurora Borealis paints the skies
In cool relief
Until the darkness is no more
in the dawn’s early morning light
#stars
#universe
#winter
62 reads
1 Comment
bcpoet
Lawrence
Lawrence
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 11:29pm
3rd Dec 2024 11:29pm
Magnetic Fields
minute by minute,
hour by hour
day after day,
the Sun shares its power
with electric fingers
reaching through space
bringing something that lingers
as we each face
magnetic fields swirling
moving us on
spinning and twirling
carried along
we're all in motion
all of the time
in a plasma ocean
in which we find
all the many lifetimes
every birth -
all the rhythms and rhymes
here on the Earth...
hour by hour
day after day,
the Sun shares its power
with electric fingers
reaching through space
bringing something that lingers
as we each face
magnetic fields swirling
moving us on
spinning and twirling
carried along
we're all in motion
all of the time
in a plasma ocean
in which we find
all the many lifetimes
every birth -
all the rhythms and rhymes
here on the Earth...
#earth
#universe
47 reads
0 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
Abyssus
"And if you gaze long enough into the abyss, the abyss also gazes into you" - Nietzsche
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
#astronomy
#dreams
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
66 reads
11 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 3:30am
21st Nov 2024 3:30am
the Tao
Horton got it right
We are a mere speck
Of a speck
Of a speck, et cetera
We can’t begin to fathom
Why we can’t fathom
What we can’t fathom
A million miles up there
Does not even begin
To touch the surface
Of the surface
The sun and the moon
Barely (in)significant
In its course
No comparison, immeasurable
There are no boundary lines
It does not break nor bend
There is no pre-emptive design
There is no end
You have no answers
There is no end
We are a mere speck
Of a speck
Of a speck, et cetera
We can’t begin to fathom
Why we can’t fathom
What we can’t fathom
A million miles up there
Does not even begin
To touch the surface
Of the surface
The sun and the moon
Barely (in)significant
In its course
No comparison, immeasurable
There are no boundary lines
It does not break nor bend
There is no pre-emptive design
There is no end
You have no answers
There is no end
#moon
#philosophical
#spiritual
#Taoism
#universe
84 reads
4 Comments
GN101
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 9:04am
20th Nov 2024 9:04am
Under the Succinct Glow
Can you fight, can you live?
Where I’ve left my words to rattle is inconsequential now
Now that dusk falls into our little brains, misty memories become inane
Conscience is indeed science, no wonder after so much effort we fall dormant into our graves
Waggling tongues, criticism consumed and eventually overcome…
There is no shadow of a poor critic when one truly reflects
Reflects
Own worst critic
Fortify
Seek them out, strike them down
Beat it, into the decay of leaf litter, gnawing...
Where I’ve left my words to rattle is inconsequential now
Now that dusk falls into our little brains, misty memories become inane
Conscience is indeed science, no wonder after so much effort we fall dormant into our graves
Waggling tongues, criticism consumed and eventually overcome…
There is no shadow of a poor critic when one truly reflects
Reflects
Own worst critic
Fortify
Seek them out, strike them down
Beat it, into the decay of leaf litter, gnawing...
#universe
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0 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
10 Wondrous Senryu Poems
Lost in Confusion:
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
#haiku
#metaphor
#senryu
#stars
#universe
60 reads
2 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:14am
11th Nov 2024 10:14am
10 Senryu Poems Part 2
Dimensional View:
Light exiting planes
Angular parallelogram
Diametric prisms
Inconsiderate:
Simple ignorance
Generalized complexion
Abusing wisdom
Considerate:
The pursuit of peace
Principle validity
Simplifies wisdom
Other Side of the Coin:
Disposed ironic
Conceptive inquisition
Answers profoundly
Opinions Opposed:
Hypocrite denies
Satirical infamy
Indefinitely
...
Light exiting planes
Angular parallelogram
Diametric prisms
Inconsiderate:
Simple ignorance
Generalized complexion
Abusing wisdom
Considerate:
The pursuit of peace
Principle validity
Simplifies wisdom
Other Side of the Coin:
Disposed ironic
Conceptive inquisition
Answers profoundly
Opinions Opposed:
Hypocrite denies
Satirical infamy
Indefinitely
...
#earth
#haiku
#senryu
#stars
#universe
82 reads
0 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 7:14am
11th Nov 2024 7:14am
Atmospheric Gathering
Planetary orb
Singular crescent eclipse
Befallen angle
Dimensional folds
Through complex entanglement
Radial shadows
Positions of stars
Behind rationality
Vastly vivacious
Still to creation
Oneness brightened vibrantly
Suspension alike
A flowing conduct
Amassing oscillation
Vector valence waves
Atomic shell force
Noetic enlightenment
Lucid ionic
Consciousness betwixt
Mechanical division
Manifest being
Global energy ...
Singular crescent eclipse
Befallen angle
Dimensional folds
Through complex entanglement
Radial shadows
Positions of stars
Behind rationality
Vastly vivacious
Still to creation
Oneness brightened vibrantly
Suspension alike
A flowing conduct
Amassing oscillation
Vector valence waves
Atomic shell force
Noetic enlightenment
Lucid ionic
Consciousness betwixt
Mechanical division
Manifest being
Global energy ...
#earth
#haiku
#senryu
#stars
#universe
57 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 7:29am
5th Nov 2024 7:29am
The world is going backwards.
Them between that's all is paper the of thickness the, other the on Hell and paper of
side one on Heaven wrote I if.
side one on Heaven wrote I if.
#universe
67 reads
2 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 1:57am
5th Nov 2024 1:57am
WTF (why the fuss)
Love does not need to Like.
If we don't have words that name things then do they still exist?If a noun was nothing would it still be something?
Who put that thought in my mind because it wasn't me?As soon as my eyes opened in popped a thought and then another and another.Always thinking but thoughts aren't real and have no power..So who gives thoughts power?
Why do we cry when crying changes nothing?Did crying ever bring anyone back?
Eyes can only see, they can't interpret.Your mind not your brain does that.So is mind more valuable than a brain?...
If we don't have words that name things then do they still exist?If a noun was nothing would it still be something?
Who put that thought in my mind because it wasn't me?As soon as my eyes opened in popped a thought and then another and another.Always thinking but thoughts aren't real and have no power..So who gives thoughts power?
Why do we cry when crying changes nothing?Did crying ever bring anyone back?
Eyes can only see, they can't interpret.Your mind not your brain does that.So is mind more valuable than a brain?...
#universe
57 reads
5 Comments
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