Poems About Temptation by Top Critiquers
#temptation
Poems about temptation by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 3:29pm
3rd Feb 2024 3:29pm
Sangraal Asunder
It wasn't Eve who first ate the naughty fruit
or over-stoked it with a repeating dart
love god launched from Cupid's competition shoot
aimed at every heart.
Nay! It was man who first snorkeled muffs apart
and strapped them to his face, like a mask, for gas,
to sample it like a patisserie tart
served among an ass.
The aroma yield was as no other
and brought unto the man an enchanted bliss
which compelled him to forthwith fetch another,
kiss by non-stop kiss!
The practice was misattributed as...
or over-stoked it with a repeating dart
love god launched from Cupid's competition shoot
aimed at every heart.
Nay! It was man who first snorkeled muffs apart
and strapped them to his face, like a mask, for gas,
to sample it like a patisserie tart
served among an ass.
The aroma yield was as no other
and brought unto the man an enchanted bliss
which compelled him to forthwith fetch another,
kiss by non-stop kiss!
The practice was misattributed as...
#ForbiddenLove
#temptation
265 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 11:27pm
20th Sep 2024 11:27pm
bottlecap: grudge match
you know I'm not one to hold a grudge
but I have a bone of contention
I should probably bring up
you can make me pay for it later
{please do...}
I
need
your
hot
sweaty
sex
it's what we do best
but it's been a minute
between your moods & my own
time slipped away
& I can only handle so much...
tending to the itch all alone
we've neglected our beasts
I don't know about yours
but mine...
she
is
ravenous
only so much solo touch
before I need...
but I have a bone of contention
I should probably bring up
you can make me pay for it later
{please do...}
I
need
your
hot
sweaty
sex
it's what we do best
but it's been a minute
between your moods & my own
time slipped away
& I can only handle so much...
tending to the itch all alone
we've neglected our beasts
I don't know about yours
but mine...
she
is
ravenous
only so much solo touch
before I need...
#alcohol
#erotic
#lover #temptation
#lover #temptation
358 reads
18 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Aug 2024 11:59am
25th Aug 2024 11:59am
Alice after Alice
cat over wall
moonlight over the cat
night that is already a fact
Alice grows up alone
Alice doesn't see the cat
Alice travels by jet
Alice eats vegetables
Alice hates meat
even more cat meat
Alice doesn't drink tea
doesn't even wear hats
lives on the streets
her body on the moon
Alice doesn't live now
Alice never dates
has wrinkles
lost faith
Alice is alone
like a cat
who laughs
suspended in light
laughing in the moonlight
forgotten bottle
sleeping in a bar
moonlight over the cat
night that is already a fact
Alice grows up alone
Alice doesn't see the cat
Alice travels by jet
Alice eats vegetables
Alice hates meat
even more cat meat
Alice doesn't drink tea
doesn't even wear hats
lives on the streets
her body on the moon
Alice doesn't live now
Alice never dates
has wrinkles
lost faith
Alice is alone
like a cat
who laughs
suspended in light
laughing in the moonlight
forgotten bottle
sleeping in a bar
#alcohol
#anxiety
#honesty
#scary
#temptation
127 reads
4 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 1:09pm
4th Jan 2025 1:09pm
Great Catch! (Lapping it up)
What a great catch,
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
#admiration
#lust
#seductive
#temptation
#romantic
251 reads
23 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
26th Jun 2023 3:31am
26th Jun 2023 3:31am
You Can't Resist
You Can't Resist
#lust
#temptation
#morality
904 reads
4 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 3:30pm
5th Apr 2024 3:30pm
Teacher's pet
In the depths of night
"At a friend's house"
When shadows dance
Between the sheets
Our secret romance
A student's needs
So pure and true
Within these walls
Teacher's infatuation
Our passion grew
My body yearning
And heart entranced
Our desires...
A forbidden chance
Together we'll defy
My passion filled...
A flame that burns
Our secret kept
And bodies aligned
Through the year
Eyes that glow,
with lust and fire
Teacher, student,
Learning to submit
Forever inspired
"At a friend's house"
When shadows dance
Between the sheets
Our secret romance
A student's needs
So pure and true
Within these walls
Teacher's infatuation
Our passion grew
My body yearning
And heart entranced
Our desires...
A forbidden chance
Together we'll defy
My passion filled...
A flame that burns
Our secret kept
And bodies aligned
Through the year
Eyes that glow,
with lust and fire
Teacher, student,
Learning to submit
Forever inspired
#lust
#confessional
#learning
#crush
#temptation
556 reads
36 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 10:39pm
10th Apr 2024 10:39pm
NaKeD WoMb
In a seance with a tombstone
resurrecting the lonely dead
tasting creation to be fed
from Eden's naked womb
in still waters as shadows lay
echoing torrents of pain
barren embryos and dogbane
resurrecting the lonely dead
tasting creation to be fed
from Eden's naked womb
in still waters as shadows lay
echoing torrents of pain
barren embryos and dogbane
#dark
#shadows
#silence #temptation
#silence #temptation
198 reads
0 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2023 2:34am
23rd Feb 2023 2:34am
Lion Tub
You're the only one I know
that bathes in swirling darkness.
It's your ebony hair, murking the depths
Coloring the lion-tub water
into something sinister.
Supported by its four paws,
it holds itself up, and open to you.
In this low light,
it absorbs the night, around you.
Its back is broken, widened
into a pool, for the blood of rain
as you languish from its mouth
to its hind quarters.
It had roared, at first
a deep throated metallic growl.
But as it bled, as bathwater for you ...
that bathes in swirling darkness.
It's your ebony hair, murking the depths
Coloring the lion-tub water
into something sinister.
Supported by its four paws,
it holds itself up, and open to you.
In this low light,
it absorbs the night, around you.
Its back is broken, widened
into a pool, for the blood of rain
as you languish from its mouth
to its hind quarters.
It had roared, at first
a deep throated metallic growl.
But as it bled, as bathwater for you ...
#sensual
#temptation
811 reads
26 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 1:24am
30th Jun 2024 1:24am
it's safer this way
looking out my living
room window at the
outside world
the window and I
do not speak with
each other
but we have a quiet
understanding
it keeps the outside
world from getting in
and keeps me from
getting out
the window is wiser
than the world and
I...
and knows that is
for the best
room window at the
outside world
the window and I
do not speak with
each other
but we have a quiet
understanding
it keeps the outside
world from getting in
and keeps me from
getting out
the window is wiser
than the world and
I...
and knows that is
for the best
#misunderstood
#temptation
180 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 8:47pm
20th Dec 2024 8:47pm
A Thousand Years From Forever Seven
The Waterloo Palace Hightower
Below Sea Level
Full Moon Before The Ascend
The Temptation Of Immortality
Lilith
There are words circulating in the underworld of your arrival my Angelic Queen
We know of the Serer who has the power to fulfil the Waterloo’s divine dreams
You are an embryo to the dark world you have fallen from the energy of Mother Nature’s Earth
Within your Darkness, the Queens of Hades will speak to you before your rebirth
I...
Below Sea Level
Full Moon Before The Ascend
The Temptation Of Immortality
Lilith
There are words circulating in the underworld of your arrival my Angelic Queen
We know of the Serer who has the power to fulfil the Waterloo’s divine dreams
You are an embryo to the dark world you have fallen from the energy of Mother Nature’s Earth
Within your Darkness, the Queens of Hades will speak to you before your rebirth
I...
#mythology
#temptation
#water
241 reads
4 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 3:38pm
29th Dec 2024 3:38pm
when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
i was
smelling
like an angel
when i
touched
his
talented tongue
pleasant lips
and
gorgeous cock...
when
i kissed
the night
and tasted
his
hanging moon
through
my personal hell
that was filled
with sparkling wine...
smelling
like an angel
when i
touched
his
talented tongue
pleasant lips
and
gorgeous cock...
when
i kissed
the night
and tasted
his
hanging moon
through
my personal hell
that was filled
with sparkling wine...
#sensual
#sex
#temptation
378 reads
24 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
9th May 2024 4:41pm
9th May 2024 4:41pm
uncovered
The slump of
your shoulders
foreshadows the
way the night softly
covers our feet
like a blanket
filled with holes
in peak winter
I want to cover
you as softly as
this night,
and etch
the sheetprints
of my skin
on yours
I want to shiver
as my hands find
home against
your chest
with midnight’s
sparse remains
forgotten
on
the floor
and I want ...
your shoulders
foreshadows the
way the night softly
covers our feet
like a blanket
filled with holes
in peak winter
I want to cover
you as softly as
this night,
and etch
the sheetprints
of my skin
on yours
I want to shiver
as my hands find
home against
your chest
with midnight’s
sparse remains
forgotten
on
the floor
and I want ...
#lover
#sensual
#temptation
325 reads
31 Comments
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