Symbolism by Top Critiquers Poems
#symbolism
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 8:53am
24th Dec 2024 8:53am
A Path To Walk
A path to walk, would that be fate?
that fear of dark, would I abate?
souls of profound bonds seldom found
barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground
quiet calls to trace in timeless rate.
Would inner rhythm dictate
heart abode or be it blind date?
or just to a world be spellbound?
A path to walk
To each step there should be a date
for every choice time wouldn't wait
roamers seek not the Self imbound
on divine journeys, souls unbound
feed heart and open wide mind's gate
A path to walk.
that fear of dark, would I abate?
souls of profound bonds seldom found
barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground
quiet calls to trace in timeless rate.
Would inner rhythm dictate
heart abode or be it blind date?
or just to a world be spellbound?
A path to walk
To each step there should be a date
for every choice time wouldn't wait
roamers seek not the Self imbound
on divine journeys, souls unbound
feed heart and open wide mind's gate
A path to walk.
#metaphor
#MyInspiration
#spiritual
#symbolism
#WritingPoetry
66 reads
6 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 3:27am
31st Aug 2024 3:27am
giving birth (poetry)
you have
gave birth,
not to
something
new, but
something
old,
you are
the mother,
you are
the father,
each word
is breath,
each line
becomes
age,
now you
place them
out there,
on
their own.
gave birth,
not to
something
new, but
something
old,
you are
the mother,
you are
the father,
each word
is breath,
each line
becomes
age,
now you
place them
out there,
on
their own.
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#symbolism
#uplifting
130 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
15th Nov 2023 1:41am
15th Nov 2023 1:41am
curse
obviously the only way out is through the door marked exit, but what if
it’s a trick, no one expects it to be
anything other than what it says, but what if it isn’t what it says, what if it simply leads to something worse ..
it’s a trick, no one expects it to be
anything other than what it says, but what if it isn’t what it says, what if it simply leads to something worse ..
#symbolism
131 reads
1 Comment
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2022 7:22am
2nd Dec 2022 7:22am
Major Arcana
don't fear the Tower card
let the unstable dwelling
in which you were barely welcomed
burn to the ground
since you are not in it
you will not die
you will be reborn
and as the smoke clears
you will see
not patches of blue sky
but a heaven's worth
and without that massive cold structure
a magnificent view
let the unstable dwelling
in which you were barely welcomed
burn to the ground
since you are not in it
you will not die
you will be reborn
and as the smoke clears
you will see
not patches of blue sky
but a heaven's worth
and without that massive cold structure
a magnificent view
#relationships
#MovingOn
#symbolism
559 reads
12 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
5th Jan 2021 1:38pm
5th Jan 2021 1:38pm
Deflower Me
I blossom
only for you...
Unfolding these soft petals
in sweet surrender
I unfurl to bare my treasure
Just for you, my connoisseur
Enter me
O'honey bee
Deflower me
Saccharine nectar I offer
'come ', oh please 'come'
Leave me
quivering in ecstasy
as you
defile me
Suck me, oh, suck me hard
until I wilt
with pleasure.
only for you...
Unfolding these soft petals
in sweet surrender
I unfurl to bare my treasure
Just for you, my connoisseur
Enter me
O'honey bee
Deflower me
Saccharine nectar I offer
'come ', oh please 'come'
Leave me
quivering in ecstasy
as you
defile me
Suck me, oh, suck me hard
until I wilt
with pleasure.
#erotic
#lover
#lust #symbolism
#lust #symbolism
1514 reads
61 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
10th May 2024 2:43pm
10th May 2024 2:43pm
Uncategorized kind of stupidity
"Just a poem in my back mind that wants to free itself,
no grudge , no hatred, just friendship aimed"
live stupid, but leave me " clever "
be stupid, and do it to perfection
leave nothing to wrong interpretation.
cool down, and be stupidly stupid
your lack of manners, of self respect
your irresponsible demeanor is shame..
do it so deep, to unimaginable maximum
then, no one ever would blame thee.
so, you can not hide your true core
Much fake alibis make me heartsore
your honesty is only thing to...
no grudge , no hatred, just friendship aimed"
live stupid, but leave me " clever "
be stupid, and do it to perfection
leave nothing to wrong interpretation.
cool down, and be stupidly stupid
your lack of manners, of self respect
your irresponsible demeanor is shame..
do it so deep, to unimaginable maximum
then, no one ever would blame thee.
so, you can not hide your true core
Much fake alibis make me heartsore
your honesty is only thing to...
#dystopian
#emotional
#philosophical #symbolism
#philosophical #symbolism
128 reads
2 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
21st May 2024 11:57pm
21st May 2024 11:57pm
No
There is nothing more weak
And pathetic
And comic
And dark
As the figure of my father
He is cheap
Like a eaten
Crusped
Apple
And I am his daughter.
And pathetic
And comic
And dark
As the figure of my father
He is cheap
Like a eaten
Crusped
Apple
And I am his daughter.
#confessional
#conflict
#father
#metaphor
#symbolism
141 reads
2 Comments
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