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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
10th May 2024 2:43pm
10th May 2024 2:43pm
Uncategorized kind of stupidity
"Just a poem in my back mind that wants to free itself,
no grudge , no hatred, just friendship aimed"
live stupid, but leave me " clever "
be stupid, and do it to perfection
leave nothing to wrong interpretation.
cool down, and be stupidly stupid
your lack of manners, of self respect
your irresponsible demeanor is shame..
do it so deep, to unimaginable maximum
then, no one ever would blame thee.
so, you can not hide your true core
Much fake alibis make me heartsore
your honesty is only thing to...
no grudge , no hatred, just friendship aimed"
live stupid, but leave me " clever "
be stupid, and do it to perfection
leave nothing to wrong interpretation.
cool down, and be stupidly stupid
your lack of manners, of self respect
your irresponsible demeanor is shame..
do it so deep, to unimaginable maximum
then, no one ever would blame thee.
so, you can not hide your true core
Much fake alibis make me heartsore
your honesty is only thing to...
#dystopian
#emotional
#philosophical #symbolism
#philosophical #symbolism
111 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2022 7:22am
2nd Dec 2022 7:22am
Major Arcana
don't fear the Tower card
let the unstable dwelling
in which you were barely welcomed
burn to the ground
since you are not in it
you will not die
you will be reborn
and as the smoke clears
you will see
not patches of blue sky
but a heaven's worth
and without that massive cold structure
a magnificent view
let the unstable dwelling
in which you were barely welcomed
burn to the ground
since you are not in it
you will not die
you will be reborn
and as the smoke clears
you will see
not patches of blue sky
but a heaven's worth
and without that massive cold structure
a magnificent view
#relationships
#MovingOn
#symbolism
538 reads
12 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
15th Nov 2023 1:41am
15th Nov 2023 1:41am
curse
obviously the only way out is through the door marked exit, but what if
it’s a trick, no one expects it to be
anything other than what it says, but what if it isn’t what it says, what if it simply leads to something worse ..
it’s a trick, no one expects it to be
anything other than what it says, but what if it isn’t what it says, what if it simply leads to something worse ..
#symbolism
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1 Comment
Duice
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 1:25am
8th Sep 2024 1:25am
Deck of Cards (AfterSexDilemma collab)
AfterSexDilemma:
Falling to the ground, Big Bang,
That's the sound.
A big man balancing on a tricycle,
Dancing like a clown.
High in the Sefirot trying not to drop.
Opened my mouth couldn't get it to stop.
Pressure boiling in with hot steam,
Makes my ears pop.
The fish in the sky are going dry.
Start to flip flop.
High on my mind wasting time on the clock.
I'm in decline, getting behind, still in line,
Want fame from the tick tock.
The...
Falling to the ground, Big Bang,
That's the sound.
A big man balancing on a tricycle,
Dancing like a clown.
High in the Sefirot trying not to drop.
Opened my mouth couldn't get it to stop.
Pressure boiling in with hot steam,
Makes my ears pop.
The fish in the sky are going dry.
Start to flip flop.
High on my mind wasting time on the clock.
I'm in decline, getting behind, still in line,
Want fame from the tick tock.
The...
#collaboration
#escape
#satirical
#symbolism
#uplifting
189 reads
2 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
21st May 2024 11:57pm
21st May 2024 11:57pm
No
There is nothing more weak
And pathetic
And comic
And dark
As the figure of my father
He is cheap
Like a eaten
Crusped
Apple
And I am his daughter.
And pathetic
And comic
And dark
As the figure of my father
He is cheap
Like a eaten
Crusped
Apple
And I am his daughter.
#confessional
#conflict
#father
#metaphor
#symbolism
122 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
8th Jul 2023 11:34am
8th Jul 2023 11:34am
Sky Clad
...second sight. That gift of vision includes not only power to see distant or future events,
but the viewless forms of air.” - Robert Lang
Tis said that Myrrdin lived his life backwards
And what is backwards
The opposite of what you know to be right
Or, not in prophetic foretellings
But seeing after, manifestations of second sight
***
To see you sky clad 'neath summer stars
Skin illumed by the rising moon
New and full, it's danse summons you
Where fires blaze between set stones
*
We...
but the viewless forms of air.” - Robert Lang
Tis said that Myrrdin lived his life backwards
And what is backwards
The opposite of what you know to be right
Or, not in prophetic foretellings
But seeing after, manifestations of second sight
***
To see you sky clad 'neath summer stars
Skin illumed by the rising moon
New and full, it's danse summons you
Where fires blaze between set stones
*
We...
#love
#dreams
#mystery #symbolism
#mystery #symbolism
267 reads
7 Comments
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