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Deflower Me
I blossom
only for you...
Unfolding these soft petals
in sweet surrender
I unfurl to bare my treasure
Just for you, my connoisseur
Enter me
O'honey bee
Deflower me
Saccharine nectar I offer
'come ', oh please 'come'
Leave me
quivering in ecstasy
as you
defile me
Suck me, oh, suck me hard
until I wilt
with pleasure.
Published 5th Jan 2021
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5th Jan 2021 3:13pm
I found this quite romantic at how you surrender yourself willingly to your lover for those intimate moments.
Definitely added to my list.
Definitely added to my list.
5th Jan 2021 4:32pm
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your kind thoughts on this piece. I'm so honoured by the RL add. Much thanks 😊🌷
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5th Jan 2021 9:42pm
Wow! A beautiful wake-up call for bees. This is definitely and UP creating poem. Thanks.Peace, oral
5th Jan 2021 9:45pm
Thank you so much for your gracious words. Always nice to see you dropping by 😊
5th Jan 2021 9:47pm
6th Jan 2021 00:31am
A very thought provoking spill nicely composed dear poetess..respect 😁 if I didn't know better I think I just want to heaven 😇
6th Jan 2021 4:44am
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6th Jan 2021 6:24am
Like this way of a woman portraying herself to a lover as a flower opening up to the bee. Brought pictures to mind as I read it.
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10th Jan 2021 10:34am
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10th Jan 2021 10:35am
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3rd Feb 2021 6:59pm
Thank you, I really appreciate your kind comment. :)
And thanks a lot for the RL add of my other piece. 😊🌷
And thanks a lot for the RL add of my other piece. 😊🌷
4th Feb 2021 4:47pm
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5th Feb 2021 7:15pm
Thanks once again for dropping by, dear poet. I'm much honoured by the RL add 😊
6th Feb 2021 3:19pm
Awesome just Awesome. Sensual, erotic and loving a perfect write
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
6th Feb 2021 8:08pm
Such sweet comments😊 I really appreciate you visiting my page... And thanks a lot for adding this piece to your reading list 🌷
9th Feb 2021 6:41pm
You truly have a way with words!!! You create a beautiful picture of what you write, which is a gift in its self. Such a romantic, gentle, and beautiful peace✊🏽✊🏽
10th Feb 2021 4:15pm
That's so kind of you to leave such a positive n wonderful review, dear libra.
You have left me in the seventh heaven with your comments. 😊
Thanks a lot for visiting my page n adding this piece to your reading list🌹🌹🌹
You have left me in the seventh heaven with your comments. 😊
Thanks a lot for visiting my page n adding this piece to your reading list🌹🌹🌹
11th Feb 2021 8:15pm
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17th Feb 2021 5:34am
Deflower me , so innocently written with waves of gaining experience and fulfilling desires of eternity. wonderfully written and expressed. Keep it up.
Anonymous
24th Feb 2021 6:54am
May all the flowers bloom for you,Indreamz! Xo Love it.
13th May 2021 3:01am
13th May 2021 8:51am
Thanks a lot for such encouraging words. Very much appreciate you stopping by 😊🌷
5th Jun 2021 5:55pm
5th Jun 2021 6:30pm
Thank you for visiting my page, dear poet.
I very much appreciate your comment and the RL add. Much thanks 😊🌹
I very much appreciate your comment and the RL add. Much thanks 😊🌹
15th Jun 2021 3:13pm
Yes, this is still my favorite poem by you. A dream creator. Hugs and peace, oral
15th Jun 2021 8:09pm
27th Jun 2021 8:41pm
opportunity of enjoying such beautiful poetry comes but just once
sad again now doesn't cum still rld
sad again now doesn't cum still rld
28th Jun 2021 8:34am
10th Aug 2021 3:04pm
It will be wonderful to explore what's in that garden of yours
Maybe it's like one of those places that once a person has been to they never want to leave
Very stimulating
Maybe it's like one of those places that once a person has been to they never want to leave
Very stimulating
14th Aug 2021 6:08pm
Another very intoxicating and enticing write. Love your word choice 😘
Great write!
Great write!
14th Aug 2021 6:58pm
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24th Sep 2021 8:55am
Your words are like rose petals showered on me😊... Thanks for your lovely review, dear DW🌹
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31st Jan 2022 1:50pm
This is a bold expression of your engaging love, I salute your openness.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
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