Poems About Support by Top Critiquers
#support
Poems about support by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Starsrite
With respect to the webmiss here, since this site is closing down...
Many here are asking for direction to a new site. And/or asking where will so and so be posting, etc.
So, I propose that a consensus is taken, for those who want to stick together as DUPers, in a new site.
I nominate Starsrite. I haven't joined yet, but I will be. SamNash did a really great job creating it.
It's a well done site, and isnt so big that we will get lost in the masses like in Allpoetry and the like. And as a bonus, Adelphina will be joining Starsrite too! What!
Writers...
Many here are asking for direction to a new site. And/or asking where will so and so be posting, etc.
So, I propose that a consensus is taken, for those who want to stick together as DUPers, in a new site.
I nominate Starsrite. I haven't joined yet, but I will be. SamNash did a really great job creating it.
It's a well done site, and isnt so big that we will get lost in the masses like in Allpoetry and the like. And as a bonus, Adelphina will be joining Starsrite too! What!
Writers...
#friendship
#support
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20 Comments
I don't write poems (with Reading)
I don't write poetry ...
They spell Me,
They lead me to themselves,
They are my teachers ...
Obediently lying down under my mind,
They carry words from somewhere ...
And I take off like a bird every time,
not afraid to fall. ..
Listening to the azure silence,
I lose myself somewhere in it
And I find in myself
That heaven or hell which lay in my soul,
That gave itself to me
And gave those words -
They are like raindrops
From the heart falling on the leaf.,.
Drawing the world,
Love and hate, darkness and...
They spell Me,
They lead me to themselves,
They are my teachers ...
Obediently lying down under my mind,
They carry words from somewhere ...
And I take off like a bird every time,
not afraid to fall. ..
Listening to the azure silence,
I lose myself somewhere in it
And I find in myself
That heaven or hell which lay in my soul,
That gave itself to me
And gave those words -
They are like raindrops
From the heart falling on the leaf.,.
Drawing the world,
Love and hate, darkness and...
#WritingPoetry
#support
#admiration
#respect
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
1174 reads
64 Comments
In The Arms Of An Angel
Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death,
I will fear no evil;
For You are with me;
Your rod and Your staff, they comfort me
Lead me always to the light as my breath at times may become shallow
Bless over my mind when my words are too weak to manifest upon my delayed swallow
Receive me, thy Lord, as the cord of my life returns to the cocoon of my existence
My astral traveling, a star dust in the stratosphere interwoven of many placentas
I have been reborn, may Deja vu moments allow me to connect the...
I will fear no evil;
For You are with me;
Your rod and Your staff, they comfort me
Lead me always to the light as my breath at times may become shallow
Bless over my mind when my words are too weak to manifest upon my delayed swallow
Receive me, thy Lord, as the cord of my life returns to the cocoon of my existence
My astral traveling, a star dust in the stratosphere interwoven of many placentas
I have been reborn, may Deja vu moments allow me to connect the...
#support
#cancer
#spiritual #angels
#spiritual #angels
591 reads
Stripped and Strip Mined
Stripped and Strip Mined
The straps
that she
stripped
surely
shaped
her secluding;
She was
fully
prepared
for the day.
Not a single
wrong
thing,
she was perfectly
braided....
her bearing
and social
array.
The last
of all,
as if
"too tall,"
were the reason
for her
curious
appeal.
She allowed
everything
from Shakespeare
to De Sade,
traded up
comics
In...
The straps
that she
stripped
surely
shaped
her secluding;
She was
fully
prepared
for the day.
Not a single
wrong
thing,
she was perfectly
braided....
her bearing
and social
array.
The last
of all,
as if
"too tall,"
were the reason
for her
curious
appeal.
She allowed
everything
from Shakespeare
to De Sade,
traded up
comics
In...
#honesty
#gratitude
#support
428 reads
6 Comments
i am struggling to discern the Universe, TOO
oft times when warriors
of various themes -- maybe quests
not certain of ever succeeding
nevertheless,
still keeping to keeping on
to growth and self fulfillment
despite having to bear the burden of others
in one's self Keep.
when one who has been soooooooo
long a Friend, who a warrior defends
turns their back on
it hurts even the warrior.
i know this to be true:
some do not possess the FORGIVENESS gene.
It just is not in their DNA.
Still, the...
of various themes -- maybe quests
not certain of ever succeeding
nevertheless,
still keeping to keeping on
to growth and self fulfillment
despite having to bear the burden of others
in one's self Keep.
when one who has been soooooooo
long a Friend, who a warrior defends
turns their back on
it hurts even the warrior.
i know this to be true:
some do not possess the FORGIVENESS gene.
It just is not in their DNA.
Still, the...
#friendship
#support
#historical #nonfiction
#historical #nonfiction
578 reads
6 Comments
You
When you meet someone,
Who is exactly what they say they are.
Someone terrible.
And they turn out to be,
The nicest person you've ever met.
I think that person,
Is the most special person,
I've ever met.
Thank you.
Who is exactly what they say they are.
Someone terrible.
And they turn out to be,
The nicest person you've ever met.
I think that person,
Is the most special person,
I've ever met.
Thank you.
#support
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2 Comments
I can't tell you it's love
You call me
looking for answers
but wanting reassurances
that your heart beats the right way
and that your boyfriend
isn't a manipulative
semi-violent fucktard
unable to manage his insecurities
I tell you our childhoods
make us colourblind
and that for all the good green days
the red shine brighter
than your eyes (and heart)
can see
I would tell you
you're codependent
but you already know that
and it would make me a hypocrite
There are too many reasons
we stay when...
looking for answers
but wanting reassurances
that your heart beats the right way
and that your boyfriend
isn't a manipulative
semi-violent fucktard
unable to manage his insecurities
I tell you our childhoods
make us colourblind
and that for all the good green days
the red shine brighter
than your eyes (and heart)
can see
I would tell you
you're codependent
but you already know that
and it would make me a hypocrite
There are too many reasons
we stay when...
#abuse
#BestFriend
#DomesticViolence #support
#DomesticViolence #support
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2 Comments
Warrior & Princess
The dragon's haze
In reptile scales
Depicts gravity
Spinning my eyes
With sensual whirlwind
Taking my breath away
In fleshly wonder
To experience the fire
Of darkened fallout
Graven pits
Lest confession
Consequent disposition
A captivating commitment
Instant tempest perpetuity
That certainly dissapates
Along with time
The cravings of desire
To smoke and ashes
Rising in the air
Infinitely miniscule
Mystical and mythical
My golden quest
Purifying in...
In reptile scales
Depicts gravity
Spinning my eyes
With sensual whirlwind
Taking my breath away
In fleshly wonder
To experience the fire
Of darkened fallout
Graven pits
Lest confession
Consequent disposition
A captivating commitment
Instant tempest perpetuity
That certainly dissapates
Along with time
The cravings of desire
To smoke and ashes
Rising in the air
Infinitely miniscule
Mystical and mythical
My golden quest
Purifying in...
#happiness
#kindness
#love
#marriage
#support
146 reads
4 Comments
In This Place
In this place I am one.
I know this fair strand.
For countless times have I walked it.
And numberless are the sands.
Familiar to me as the salt air breezes,
Known and unknown,
We are one.
Each made for the other…
Two limestone stacks stand offshore
Some say there stand two brothers; others, there two sisters bathe.
To my mind come the words of a simple phrase:
We are one together, yet separate and single.
I have watched them all my days
...
I know this fair strand.
For countless times have I walked it.
And numberless are the sands.
Familiar to me as the salt air breezes,
Known and unknown,
We are one.
Each made for the other…
Two limestone stacks stand offshore
Some say there stand two brothers; others, there two sisters bathe.
To my mind come the words of a simple phrase:
We are one together, yet separate and single.
I have watched them all my days
...
#love
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
#support
645 reads
4 Comments
boo
boo what's up with your reality?
you skew it so hard
all the ride or die love you
I'm in it for a minute
you turned my head
I must admit I care for you too
I don't know how you did it
got to my soul undercover style
I'm good at keeping people out
it's all about me, me, me
I'm not good at making or keeping friends
it's trust issues...
first I don't trust me to do right by you
I have a bad track record
if something is good I ruin it
maybe I like ugly
I don't know what it is about you
I...
you skew it so hard
all the ride or die love you
I'm in it for a minute
you turned my head
I must admit I care for you too
I don't know how you did it
got to my soul undercover style
I'm good at keeping people out
it's all about me, me, me
I'm not good at making or keeping friends
it's trust issues...
first I don't trust me to do right by you
I have a bad track record
if something is good I ruin it
maybe I like ugly
I don't know what it is about you
I...
#love
#friendship
#support
560 reads
7 Comments
The Net
Majestically spanning San Francisco and Sausalito
stands one of the world's most famous landmarks
and one of the world's most utilized final stops
Who are these infrequent flyers?
These sad and lonely diers?
Students
Teachers (believe me, I get it)
the jilted, the lonely, the ill
so many reasons
always one less
than reasons to live
Recently, a safety net was added
285 feet in the sky
Taxpayers are arguing about it
It's a concept they just don't get
calling it a waste of their money
to save just...
stands one of the world's most famous landmarks
and one of the world's most utilized final stops
Who are these infrequent flyers?
These sad and lonely diers?
Students
Teachers (believe me, I get it)
the jilted, the lonely, the ill
so many reasons
always one less
than reasons to live
Recently, a safety net was added
285 feet in the sky
Taxpayers are arguing about it
It's a concept they just don't get
calling it a waste of their money
to save just...
#responsibility
#suicide
#support
128 reads
6 Comments
life death and football
it’d be awful to to die today,
he wrote, since Dartford are
playing Dover today, and he’d be annoyed
not to know the result
he wrote, since Dartford are
playing Dover today, and he’d be annoyed
not to know the result
#inspirational
#support
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1 Comment
DU Poetry : Poems About Support by Top Critiquers