Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 10:22pm
6th Apr 2024 10:22pm
Legalized Addiction
You probably see what the photographer photographed
A variety of liquor bottles ready for purchase and consumption
I sorta see that too
Many see this image and think of people partying, having a good time,
getting drunk and maybe fucking their lover or some total stranger,
alcohol has that effect
Many people use it to relax after a hard days work or school
Some may see alcohol as a crutch, a friend,
something they can turn to when life gets to heavy or complex
Millions rely on alcohol to wash away their memories, their...
A variety of liquor bottles ready for purchase and consumption
I sorta see that too
Many see this image and think of people partying, having a good time,
getting drunk and maybe fucking their lover or some total stranger,
alcohol has that effect
Many people use it to relax after a hard days work or school
Some may see alcohol as a crutch, a friend,
something they can turn to when life gets to heavy or complex
Millions rely on alcohol to wash away their memories, their...
#motivational
#alcohol
#addiction
#support
#nonfiction
197 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 11:29am
4th Apr 2024 11:29am
Loneliness Is More Hazardous to Your Health Than Obesity or Smoking
This isn't a story or a poem. This is real life. I'm writing this because many friends and family members I know are suffering. This problem has become drastically worse since 2020. We all know why...
Loneliness plays a role in many chronic health conditions, including pain, drug or alcohol abuse and depression. Recent studies have linked loneliness to an increased risk for Alzheimer's disease, heart attack and stroke, and lower survival rates for breast cancer patients. Studies have also shown that people who are lonely are more likely to experience:
Higher levels of...
Loneliness plays a role in many chronic health conditions, including pain, drug or alcohol abuse and depression. Recent studies have linked loneliness to an increased risk for Alzheimer's disease, heart attack and stroke, and lower survival rates for breast cancer patients. Studies have also shown that people who are lonely are more likely to experience:
Higher levels of...
#loneliness
#friendship
#MentalHealth
#support
#nonfiction
216 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 9:56am
23rd Mar 2024 9:56am
Play With Fire....You know the rest
A 38 year old woman in America doused herself in gasoline and lit herself on fire in protest of one of those yearly Miss America Beauty Pageant's. Before lighting the match, the woman shouted slogans criticizing the pageant's exploitation of woman. Her last words were reportedly, "WATER! WATER! WATER!!"
#fire
#fiction
#ShortStory #support
#ShortStory #support
142 reads
2 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
19th Mar 2024 1:04am
19th Mar 2024 1:04am
HAMMOCK STRINGS (4-17-1994; Galveston Island Texas)n a
spring birds sing
wind chimes ring
a sleepy breeze
comes over me
as i cocoon myself away
so effortlessly disconnected
from timeless hours
especially when
i need to most
now peacefully cradled
so weightlessly away
i drift suspended
in all these tranquil
hammock strings
which have recently
become
a sudden
healing necessity
in my life
especially when
i need them most
in which
i sail...
wind chimes ring
a sleepy breeze
comes over me
as i cocoon myself away
so effortlessly disconnected
from timeless hours
especially when
i need to most
now peacefully cradled
so weightlessly away
i drift suspended
in all these tranquil
hammock strings
which have recently
become
a sudden
healing necessity
in my life
especially when
i need them most
in which
i sail...
#inspirational
#peace
#gratitude
#support
#healing
155 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2024 10:57pm
3rd Mar 2024 10:57pm
Habitual Dependence
Will you catch me this time if I fall?
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
The dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
The dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
#love
#marriage
#addiction #support
#addiction #support
279 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 1:43pm
27th Feb 2024 1:43pm
Lend Your Hand
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#motivational
#inspirational
#rhyming
#uplifting
#support
160 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Feb 2024 12:55pm
25th Feb 2024 12:55pm
Friendship
If you need to talk
I'll always be there for you
Your special to me
I'll always be there for you
Your special to me
#courage
#friendship
#uplifting
#support
#haiku
232 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Feb 2024 9:41pm
20th Feb 2024 9:41pm
Soul Friend
affections are funny
they grow and wane over time
from furious flames to cooling embers
but my love remains constant
I don't have to like you to see beauty
your soul's scars tell me so much about you
gentle truth, I share my honesty
from one soul to another
sacred promise I will always be your friend
secrets of faith
we have trusted each other facts over our lives
never to ever be used as weapons
I keep your privacy down deep
in the sanctity and bond of friendship
it is an honor to know you ...
they grow and wane over time
from furious flames to cooling embers
but my love remains constant
I don't have to like you to see beauty
your soul's scars tell me so much about you
gentle truth, I share my honesty
from one soul to another
sacred promise I will always be your friend
secrets of faith
we have trusted each other facts over our lives
never to ever be used as weapons
I keep your privacy down deep
in the sanctity and bond of friendship
it is an honor to know you ...
#love
#friendship
#support
#admiration
#respect
265 reads
14 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Feb 2024 1:36am
19th Feb 2024 1:36am
BENEATH THE DEEPNESS
BENEATH the deepness of your mind and heart and soul. ✍️ WHAT are you feeling when you decide to think with your heart and not with your mind. For do you open up your heart and close your eyes and mind, as you wear it on your selves 🤔 for do you truly believe the words that comes from out of their mouth 🤔 To express their love for you, without no real communications and commitment and no real consistency, with honest truth and genuine trust. I'm just going through this out in the wind of self consciousness of what you need and want in the world of REAL reality...
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
#lover
#support
203 reads
0 Comments
Zephlin347
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 3:22pm
6th Feb 2024 3:22pm
A New Desire, A New Tomorrow
I won't depart, even as we drift away,
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
#happiness
#love
#patience
#LongDistanceRelationship
#support
307 reads
2 Comments
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 11:40pm
5th Feb 2024 11:40pm
That's why
Your smile, your warmth
your love, your desire
your fire, your drive
that's why
your love, your desire
your fire, your drive
that's why
#love
#lover
#support
306 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Jan 2024 11:03am
26th Jan 2024 11:03am
Cockayne
Where I currently reside
Is filled with murder and suicide
Polluted lakes and streams
Sad reality is what it seams
Tainted death and polluted lands
Oceans toxic as well as the sand
Sooner then later change is what we need
Mother earth is dying, this is my final plea
Is filled with murder and suicide
Polluted lakes and streams
Sad reality is what it seams
Tainted death and polluted lands
Oceans toxic as well as the sand
Sooner then later change is what we need
Mother earth is dying, this is my final plea
#hope
#earth
#pollution #support
#pollution #support
178 reads
10 Comments
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