Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 12:55pm
14th Jun 2024 12:55pm
Worry
I worry
Waking from a restless sleep
My mind is immediately filled with thoughts
Three kids on her own
Deadbeat dad
Trying to be strong
Working hard
Overwhelmed
Five heart attacks
Congestive heart failure
Body failing her
Living alone
Feeling hopeless
Trapped in her body
Shackled by anxiety
Dragging herself forward
Unrelenting pain
Feeling invisible
Full of self doubt
Looking for a remedy
Stricken with trauma
Missing a fathers love
Barely treading...
Waking from a restless sleep
My mind is immediately filled with thoughts
Three kids on her own
Deadbeat dad
Trying to be strong
Working hard
Overwhelmed
Five heart attacks
Congestive heart failure
Body failing her
Living alone
Feeling hopeless
Trapped in her body
Shackled by anxiety
Dragging herself forward
Unrelenting pain
Feeling invisible
Full of self doubt
Looking for a remedy
Stricken with trauma
Missing a fathers love
Barely treading...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#love #support
#love #support
257 reads
9 Comments
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
13th Jun 2024 5:44am
13th Jun 2024 5:44am
From Dark To Dim
I think its pretty clear from my writes
The dark subject matter
That I was in a really bad place when I found DU
I needed an outlet badly
I needed to know that I wasnt alone
I was wallowing in self loathing
Death seemed like the only relief possible
In a little under 2 months this place has become quite a boon to me
Seeing others show support and share how they relate has been so therapeutic
My blunt nature and direct approach got me into some trouble
I briefly walked away because I questioned if I belonged here ...
The dark subject matter
That I was in a really bad place when I found DU
I needed an outlet badly
I needed to know that I wasnt alone
I was wallowing in self loathing
Death seemed like the only relief possible
In a little under 2 months this place has become quite a boon to me
Seeing others show support and share how they relate has been so therapeutic
My blunt nature and direct approach got me into some trouble
I briefly walked away because I questioned if I belonged here ...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#gratitude
#respect #support
#respect #support
283 reads
14 Comments
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
13th Jun 2024 00:54am
13th Jun 2024 00:54am
Keep Swimming
Watching her go through this journey
Seeing the strength she has even at her young age
I feel honored to even be a small part of the growth
Im amazed at how she has managed to keep her kindness
She can turn to the darkness understandably
Yet she loves and cares for others
Even in the absence of feeling it herself at times
She reminds me of my daughters and I don't want her to feel alone
She reminds me of myself and how much I wanted my dad to love me
I know she has so much to offer this world
I can't sit by idle...
Seeing the strength she has even at her young age
I feel honored to even be a small part of the growth
Im amazed at how she has managed to keep her kindness
She can turn to the darkness understandably
Yet she loves and cares for others
Even in the absence of feeling it herself at times
She reminds me of my daughters and I don't want her to feel alone
She reminds me of myself and how much I wanted my dad to love me
I know she has so much to offer this world
I can't sit by idle...
#courage
#friendship
#kindness
#strength
#support
232 reads
4 Comments
QuietusQuill
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 11:59pm
12th Jun 2024 11:59pm
Y el magnus, nos une
Donde el polvo hace eco
vagar en brisas sedosas
a la luz de tu trono
encarcelame,
no en tu seno
ni en tu corazón
pero
encarcelame
en la garganta
solo ahí,
puedo
filtro y enriquezco tu sangre
diseñando tu pasión
y el magnus, nos une
y morir con dignidad y contento
ve suavemente,
hambriento,
mi media ala
sobre el aliento
goteando de la catedral
de sueños levitantes.
vagar en brisas sedosas
a la luz de tu trono
encarcelame,
no en tu seno
ni en tu corazón
pero
encarcelame
en la garganta
solo ahí,
puedo
filtro y enriquezco tu sangre
diseñando tu pasión
y el magnus, nos une
y morir con dignidad y contento
ve suavemente,
hambriento,
mi media ala
sobre el aliento
goteando de la catedral
de sueños levitantes.
#relationships
#romantic
#support
164 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 5:47pm
12th Jun 2024 5:47pm
The Light
I allowed you to take liberties
For your own comfortability
As I realize what I had seen
Was someone,who is in between.
Between, this world and the next,
Clawing my way out with “life” nets.
I refuse to receive a scar
Because my body has enough of its own
I do not need to see more of who you are
Because my soul is my own
Reveling in your debauchery
Revealing the conspiracy
Not seeing what I see
Not accepting the words that flows freely
I must be the understanding one
I must...
For your own comfortability
As I realize what I had seen
Was someone,who is in between.
Between, this world and the next,
Clawing my way out with “life” nets.
I refuse to receive a scar
Because my body has enough of its own
I do not need to see more of who you are
Because my soul is my own
Reveling in your debauchery
Revealing the conspiracy
Not seeing what I see
Not accepting the words that flows freely
I must be the understanding one
I must...
#depression
#hope
#inspirational
#sadness
#support
75 reads
17 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 3:00pm
6th Jun 2024 3:00pm
Trapped Within
The child inside is terrified
Misshapen intent
Quick to doubt
An injustice
Afraid to feel
A silent crime
Killing his mind
Stop wasting his time
Love and understanding
Vital to his fragile existence
Misshapen intent
Quick to doubt
An injustice
Afraid to feel
A silent crime
Killing his mind
Stop wasting his time
Love and understanding
Vital to his fragile existence
#honesty
#identity
#MentalHealth #support
#MentalHealth #support
166 reads
9 Comments
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2024 00:29am
3rd Jun 2024 00:29am
A Small Piece of Good
Crazy how quickly the darkness can come flooding back in
No matter how close in reach, I can never get a win
Its been days of highs and then the voices begin
Popping this thin bubble of serenity like a pin
Its like I need to believe all the negative and the hate
So words of condemnation take on extra weight
They say Im a piece of shit and I offer no debate
It causes me to withdraw into a hell that I create
I want to do good but somehow it always turns out bad
I want to make people happy yet they always end up sad
I want...
No matter how close in reach, I can never get a win
Its been days of highs and then the voices begin
Popping this thin bubble of serenity like a pin
Its like I need to believe all the negative and the hate
So words of condemnation take on extra weight
They say Im a piece of shit and I offer no debate
It causes me to withdraw into a hell that I create
I want to do good but somehow it always turns out bad
I want to make people happy yet they always end up sad
I want...
#death
#depression
#despair
#hope
#support
376 reads
14 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2024 4:15am
2nd Jun 2024 4:15am
Gratitude
The coffee threatens
to jump from the
oversized mug
that my trembling
hands struggle
to negotiate.
you put a blanket
over my shoulders
and sit next to me
and we stare without words
at some dreamscape,
like a forlorn shore
or an autumn forest in a
Carolina park,
I sigh heavily
and you nod
in my peripheral vision
and we get it.
soft breezes
move my hair
just enough
to make it tickle ...
to jump from the
oversized mug
that my trembling
hands struggle
to negotiate.
you put a blanket
over my shoulders
and sit next to me
and we stare without words
at some dreamscape,
like a forlorn shore
or an autumn forest in a
Carolina park,
I sigh heavily
and you nod
in my peripheral vision
and we get it.
soft breezes
move my hair
just enough
to make it tickle ...
#friendship
#healing
#love #support
#love #support
325 reads
33 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
31st May 2024 3:38pm
31st May 2024 3:38pm
Invitation
Once upon a time
In a world we once known
There was a castle that stood
With a secret down below
It was made of stone
And craved with rock
Only the dark ones know
What’s behind the lock
Tonight
there is a treat to behold
A claiming of sorts
A soul to a soul to a soul
They all have come
To see the sight
The old ways are new
In flickering candlelight
So be my guest
See a delight
But I must warn you
This will not be a pure sight
Leave behind
What you think you...
In a world we once known
There was a castle that stood
With a secret down below
It was made of stone
And craved with rock
Only the dark ones know
What’s behind the lock
Tonight
there is a treat to behold
A claiming of sorts
A soul to a soul to a soul
They all have come
To see the sight
The old ways are new
In flickering candlelight
So be my guest
See a delight
But I must warn you
This will not be a pure sight
Leave behind
What you think you...
#BDSM
#friendship
#support
88 reads
21 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
26th May 2024 3:35am
26th May 2024 3:35am
seasons of plenty
Give justice to the weak and the fatherless; maintain the right of the
afflicted and the destitute. Rescue the weak and the needy; deliver
them from the hand of the wicked.”―Psalm 82:3-4 ESV
fountains of water
to quench the dry earth
mountains of laughter
to publish my mirth
then shall the nations
rejoice in the south
and ample rations
of praise fill my mouth
...
afflicted and the destitute. Rescue the weak and the needy; deliver
them from the hand of the wicked.”―Psalm 82:3-4 ESV
fountains of water
to quench the dry earth
mountains of laughter
to publish my mirth
then shall the nations
rejoice in the south
and ample rations
of praise fill my mouth
...
#kindness
#poverty
#support
#vulnerability
#weakness
137 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th May 2024 10:28pm
25th May 2024 10:28pm
Mind Control
Entering my mind
Hearing silence stops all time
There's nothing to find
Hearing silence stops all time
There's nothing to find
#haiku
#identity
#memories #support
#memories #support
154 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th May 2024 10:41am
10th May 2024 10:41am
Impoverished Addict
Ghetto calling
So hungry
So thirsty
On fire
Calling your name
Rancid stench
Glass shard womb
The atmosphere suffocates
The voices
The fear
Monkey climbing up your leg
If the shoe fits, curl up and die in it
So hungry
So thirsty
On fire
Calling your name
Rancid stench
Glass shard womb
The atmosphere suffocates
The voices
The fear
Monkey climbing up your leg
If the shoe fits, curl up and die in it
#addiction
#poverty
#support
152 reads
4 Comments
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