Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crazycatlady
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 1:10am
23rd Nov 2024 1:10am
Don’t bite the hand that feeds
Don’t bite the hand that feeds”
is what my mother said to me
Food gives us life and pleasure
in health and sickness and
freedom and leisure
Fresh produce off our land
Lovingly laboured by our
farmers hand
It isn’t a romantic fantasy
living in the beautiful scenery
The troubles, toils, hardships
and labour
in weather conditions
we wouldn’t favour
It’s what our food has grown upon
with dedication and commitment
far outdone.
So as I recall the respect instilled in me
“Don’t bite the hand that feeds” ...
is what my mother said to me
Food gives us life and pleasure
in health and sickness and
freedom and leisure
Fresh produce off our land
Lovingly laboured by our
farmers hand
It isn’t a romantic fantasy
living in the beautiful scenery
The troubles, toils, hardships
and labour
in weather conditions
we wouldn’t favour
It’s what our food has grown upon
with dedication and commitment
far outdone.
So as I recall the respect instilled in me
“Don’t bite the hand that feeds” ...
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational #support
#motivational #support
41 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 9:16am
20th Nov 2024 9:16am
Metronome
You are my metronome
I’m a beat off and i swim in my head
Your steady rhythm puts me back into
Real that I should pay attention to
You are the dorsal fin you keep me straight
I’m into my own beat just a beat off
Living in my truths that I lie to me
I come back to you you set the rhythm
The rhythm between me and you and then some
Metronome ticks within me now
You set the rhythm I lay it down
Rhythm and rhyme and why r h y
You take me back into myself ...
I’m a beat off and i swim in my head
Your steady rhythm puts me back into
Real that I should pay attention to
You are the dorsal fin you keep me straight
I’m into my own beat just a beat off
Living in my truths that I lie to me
I come back to you you set the rhythm
The rhythm between me and you and then some
Metronome ticks within me now
You set the rhythm I lay it down
Rhythm and rhyme and why r h y
You take me back into myself ...
#honesty
#lyrics
#motivational
#music
#support
53 reads
0 Comments
ProudToPlease
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 8:15pm
14th Nov 2024 8:15pm
Please Join My Self-Destruction
#evil
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#lust
#support
56 reads
1 Comment
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 8:57pm
11th Nov 2024 8:57pm
To The Woman Who Asked What I Meant
What I want
is to be your Man
I wish to be your choice
and preference
when sexual satisfaction is the thing you seek
I wish to be that person with whom you feel most protected and unafraid when in the face of danger
With me
is where I want you to be the most relaxed and comfortable
as you refresh,
recharge,
and reboot
I want to be that person with whom you feel safest from judgement and condescension when you indulge in the free expression of your innermost thoughts and ideas
I will try not...
is to be your Man
I wish to be your choice
and preference
when sexual satisfaction is the thing you seek
I wish to be that person with whom you feel most protected and unafraid when in the face of danger
With me
is where I want you to be the most relaxed and comfortable
as you refresh,
recharge,
and reboot
I want to be that person with whom you feel safest from judgement and condescension when you indulge in the free expression of your innermost thoughts and ideas
I will try not...
#happiness
#honesty
#love
#respect
#support
97 reads
5 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 6:42pm
31st Oct 2024 6:42pm
Teufel Hunden
The metals on my chest proudly displayed, for the Marines who could not be here today.
The red stripe down my leg strutted with honor, for the leadership that I led that did not falter.
Dress blues and white hats, gold belt buckles and pressed pants.
Like Cinderella, we Marines also have a ball, on November 10 to remember when we were all called.
Happy Marine Corps Birthday to every Devil Dog.
Semper Fidelis, to those who died but still stand tall.
The red stripe down my leg strutted with honor, for the leadership that I led that did not falter.
Dress blues and white hats, gold belt buckles and pressed pants.
Like Cinderella, we Marines also have a ball, on November 10 to remember when we were all called.
Happy Marine Corps Birthday to every Devil Dog.
Semper Fidelis, to those who died but still stand tall.
#military
#soldiers
#support
#war
#love
70 reads
1 Comment
GabyCamargoMiaw
G
G
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 7:27pm
19th Oct 2024 7:27pm
Lost Boy
Among the shadows where the silence breathes,
A lost boy walks, torn like autumn leaves
With haunted eyes, echoes of pain
Looking for shelter down the pouring rain
Once a dreamer in a world so vile,
Now, a wanderer with nowhere to hide
He's endured the harm of many hearts unkind,
Yet his spirit wishes for a chance to rise
Through nights of darkness, inhaling your fear,
Crystal ghosts haunt you; I feel you near
Each scar a story, each tear a song,
In a world that feels so painfully wrong
Stolen...
A lost boy walks, torn like autumn leaves
With haunted eyes, echoes of pain
Looking for shelter down the pouring rain
Once a dreamer in a world so vile,
Now, a wanderer with nowhere to hide
He's endured the harm of many hearts unkind,
Yet his spirit wishes for a chance to rise
Through nights of darkness, inhaling your fear,
Crystal ghosts haunt you; I feel you near
Each scar a story, each tear a song,
In a world that feels so painfully wrong
Stolen...
#addiction
#drugs
#healing
#homelessness
#support
225 reads
3 Comments
Just-Rob
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 10:27pm
15th Oct 2024 10:27pm
Stay
I'm right here
You need only reach out
I am beside you
Ill stand with you throughout
When you feel lost
I will search until you're found
If you should fall
You'll never hit the ground
Should you be overwhelmed
With fear and doubt
My strength and resolve is yours
You won't go without
You'll never walk alone
As you journey through this land
We will face the trials
Together hand in hand
I know you dont like promises
But I swear this much is true
If you will allow me...
You need only reach out
I am beside you
Ill stand with you throughout
When you feel lost
I will search until you're found
If you should fall
You'll never hit the ground
Should you be overwhelmed
With fear and doubt
My strength and resolve is yours
You won't go without
You'll never walk alone
As you journey through this land
We will face the trials
Together hand in hand
I know you dont like promises
But I swear this much is true
If you will allow me...
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships #support
#relationships #support
229 reads
1 Comment
oldmanG
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 9:08pm
8th Oct 2024 9:08pm
Umbrella
I’ll be your umbrella
When dark skies are above you
I’ll be a quiet shoulder you can lay your head upon
When things are not looking so rosy
If you need a place to hide out in
When your feelings are too strong
I’ll be there for you today tomorrow and any day after
If you need a hand up or a pair of hands
To lift the boulders that stand before you
And they block your path to greatness
I’ll be your umbrella
When dark skies are above you
I’ll be a quiet shoulder you can lay your head upon
When things are not looking so rosy
If you need a place to hide out in
When your feelings are too strong
I’ll be there for you today tomorrow and any day after
If you need a hand up or a pair of hands
To lift the boulders that stand before you
And they block your path to greatness
I’ll be your umbrella
#admiration
#gratitude
#love #support
#love #support
78 reads
0 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 4:56pm
7th Oct 2024 4:56pm
The Lines We Cross
There is a line in the sand that states:
"This is how the world works."
And it is a fine line.
No one can touch it.
The sand is crowded,
with people as far as the eye can see.
All remaining firmly behind the line.
Some even avert their gaze,
as if even looking,
could cause great pain.
Yet sometimes,
in the quiet of night,
there is laughter in the air.
It laughs at the absurdity,
that words in the sand,
control us.
And there is a heavy mist in the air,...
"This is how the world works."
And it is a fine line.
No one can touch it.
The sand is crowded,
with people as far as the eye can see.
All remaining firmly behind the line.
Some even avert their gaze,
as if even looking,
could cause great pain.
Yet sometimes,
in the quiet of night,
there is laughter in the air.
It laughs at the absurdity,
that words in the sand,
control us.
And there is a heavy mist in the air,...
#humankind
#inspirational
#LifeStruggles
#support
#wisdom
130 reads
1 Comment
oldmanG
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 6:03am
5th Oct 2024 6:03am
Rancid Love
My love is rancid
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
#forgiveness
#love
#respect #support
#respect #support
83 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 5:47am
4th Oct 2024 5:47am
Suddenly it Happens
It happened to sudden
I didn’t see it coming
It crept up on me and stained my family
Lost one that I love
I can’t breathe I’m hyperventilating
Just lowered one I love
But it happens real sudden
Before you can get your balance
Doesn’t make it any easier
I just lost someone that I love and adore
Didn’t think it be this soon
So I am not prepared for this
But don’t get down everyone has their day
Think about how you used to laugh and sing about
Don’t know how to end this song
Because...
I didn’t see it coming
It crept up on me and stained my family
Lost one that I love
I can’t breathe I’m hyperventilating
Just lowered one I love
But it happens real sudden
Before you can get your balance
Doesn’t make it any easier
I just lost someone that I love and adore
Didn’t think it be this soon
So I am not prepared for this
But don’t get down everyone has their day
Think about how you used to laugh and sing about
Don’t know how to end this song
Because...
#karma
#love
#sacrifice #support
#sacrifice #support
96 reads
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oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 9:35pm
2nd Oct 2024 9:35pm
And You and I
And you and I
And you and I we set across this life together
And you and I we’ll sail the seas of us forever
And you and I we will settle down in the cold
And you and I will keep each other warm
And you and I will rise to the sunshine of our love
And you and I will make breakfast get us ready for the grueling day
And you and I will think of each other when we’re not thinking
And you and I will be Jane and Tarzan in the trees
And you and I will ride out any tough times
Even the ones that...
And you and I we set across this life together
And you and I we’ll sail the seas of us forever
And you and I we will settle down in the cold
And you and I will keep each other warm
And you and I will rise to the sunshine of our love
And you and I will make breakfast get us ready for the grueling day
And you and I will think of each other when we’re not thinking
And you and I will be Jane and Tarzan in the trees
And you and I will ride out any tough times
Even the ones that...
#happiness
#honesty
#respect #support
#respect #support
66 reads
0 Comments
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