Poems About the Sun Seeking Honest Critique
#sun
Just-Rob
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 5:00pm
28th Jun 2024 5:00pm
Figure In The Distance
I see a figure in the distance and it draws me in
Feels like forever I've been walking in this desolate land
Her hair sways in the slight breeze that blows across the open wasteland
She motions for me to come to her and I feel like Ive been found
I fight through the exhaustion and quicken my pace
As I crest a hill I look up to see how much farther I have to go
There is no one around for miles and miles
I scan the horizon for some sign of life, something to move towards
Im alone again in this...
Feels like forever I've been walking in this desolate land
Her hair sways in the slight breeze that blows across the open wasteland
She motions for me to come to her and I feel like Ive been found
I fight through the exhaustion and quicken my pace
As I crest a hill I look up to see how much farther I have to go
There is no one around for miles and miles
I scan the horizon for some sign of life, something to move towards
Im alone again in this...
#dystopian
#FeelingLost
#hope #sun
#hope #sun
193 reads
3 Comments
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2024 3:26am
23rd Jun 2024 3:26am
Sun Beam That Aims To Only Beam At Opaque
Luminous, blooming like love of cupid
in a lair, walking stupid
Light muted, every surface feuded with,
see a mirror and shoot it,
take on two way glass too quick,
too equipped to nail it's unscrewing,
still glued to it's
untimely undoing and all who back
the tracking of me,
thee who sold trackers,
any
who built bits for the equipment,
step up
or stay stewing like dweebs,
I am energy wasted,
please,
evade
me,
please, or a least step back a bit,
I wish not for my presence to...
in a lair, walking stupid
Light muted, every surface feuded with,
see a mirror and shoot it,
take on two way glass too quick,
too equipped to nail it's unscrewing,
still glued to it's
untimely undoing and all who back
the tracking of me,
thee who sold trackers,
any
who built bits for the equipment,
step up
or stay stewing like dweebs,
I am energy wasted,
please,
evade
me,
please, or a least step back a bit,
I wish not for my presence to...
#sun
125 reads
0 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 6:23pm
19th Jun 2024 6:23pm
Strange Fruit In The Renewal Of Sacred Celebration
Earth tone, the melanin jazz that sings throughout my veins
The protective barriers when, Come By Here My Lord provided no cooling rain
Such a blessed skin to be, beautiful to adorn, it reproduces in so many shades
From Bronze, to Honey, Brown Sugar, and the sweetest taste of marmalade
You could say I am not that dark
Most will say, we all bleed the same when given our own foundational spark
Yesteryears denied me my rights, my land, and my mule
That old Constitution creed and the three fifth...
The protective barriers when, Come By Here My Lord provided no cooling rain
Such a blessed skin to be, beautiful to adorn, it reproduces in so many shades
From Bronze, to Honey, Brown Sugar, and the sweetest taste of marmalade
You could say I am not that dark
Most will say, we all bleed the same when given our own foundational spark
Yesteryears denied me my rights, my land, and my mule
That old Constitution creed and the three fifth...
#freedom
#humankind
#moon
#sun
#water
281 reads
6 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 12:51pm
19th Jun 2024 12:51pm
The Sun
No question, the Sun is my best friend.
Nourishing my hungry essence.
In my dreams, full of ghoulish dead ends,
I always reach out to your fluorescence.
You witness my entire sinful shame.
You burn all the dirt that's within me;
Your sphere's observed all human games;
your ages of wisdom; please, forgive me.
Vedic hymns containing the Word
glorify Surya's golden spinning flame.
Angelic wings are framing him; guards;
My medulla conducts its starry fame.
selfless, humble and masculine,
Our Sun is meditating for...
Nourishing my hungry essence.
In my dreams, full of ghoulish dead ends,
I always reach out to your fluorescence.
You witness my entire sinful shame.
You burn all the dirt that's within me;
Your sphere's observed all human games;
your ages of wisdom; please, forgive me.
Vedic hymns containing the Word
glorify Surya's golden spinning flame.
Angelic wings are framing him; guards;
My medulla conducts its starry fame.
selfless, humble and masculine,
Our Sun is meditating for...
#dawn
#dreams
#God
#Hindu
#sun
149 reads
2 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 3:59am
19th Jun 2024 3:59am
Island Sunset
She’s got lustful eyes
Hiding behind an angel face
Gently rubbing her thighs
Tender skin softest lace
One night of seduction
Could last a lifetime
Pleasure the only function
For these partners in crime
Our bodies dance electric
Closer towards release
Flowing in divine metric
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
Hiding behind an angel face
Gently rubbing her thighs
Tender skin softest lace
One night of seduction
Could last a lifetime
Pleasure the only function
For these partners in crime
Our bodies dance electric
Closer towards release
Flowing in divine metric
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
#sun
300 reads
14 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 6:42pm
9th Jun 2024 6:42pm
Angry Sun
I scorch for fun
The prodigal son.
Destroying all in my midst.
Every law I break,
My family; ashamed.
I don't take it,
Serious.
Im in search of lust.
For the latest trend.
All the slaves in cuffs,
Are jealous,
I am free of their revenge.
I roam about,
For, I am, allowed.
God creates the sin.
He casts me out,
Screams and shouts.
Through him,
I ascend.
Still I scorch for fun,
Like an angry sun.
I envelop all within.
Like ants on the run,
The...
The prodigal son.
Destroying all in my midst.
Every law I break,
My family; ashamed.
I don't take it,
Serious.
Im in search of lust.
For the latest trend.
All the slaves in cuffs,
Are jealous,
I am free of their revenge.
I roam about,
For, I am, allowed.
God creates the sin.
He casts me out,
Screams and shouts.
Through him,
I ascend.
Still I scorch for fun,
Like an angry sun.
I envelop all within.
Like ants on the run,
The...
#faith
#sun
#ThrillSeeking
166 reads
11 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 10:39am
9th Jun 2024 10:39am
The Abomination
Unfold the sky.
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
#moon
#stars
#sun
176 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Jun 2024 10:34pm
8th Jun 2024 10:34pm
Mm.. Midnight At The Oasis
Arched rainbows cover the skies
That spiritual element when he parts these melanin toned thighs
The abyss lays open before me
He softly whispers in my ear as he gyrates deeper inside for that beautiful tease
This Angel Queen, a Yoruba Goddess who has his heart, covets that mind to the powers that be
Our intellects thrive in union, not upon windows panes, give it sunshine, devoid to ever grow weary
Oh, my love, a tender caress, spoken words of spiritual incantations, to ease the famine of such a long awaited dreary
An explosion from the...
That spiritual element when he parts these melanin toned thighs
The abyss lays open before me
He softly whispers in my ear as he gyrates deeper inside for that beautiful tease
This Angel Queen, a Yoruba Goddess who has his heart, covets that mind to the powers that be
Our intellects thrive in union, not upon windows panes, give it sunshine, devoid to ever grow weary
Oh, my love, a tender caress, spoken words of spiritual incantations, to ease the famine of such a long awaited dreary
An explosion from the...
#love
#moon
#passion
#seductive
#sun
456 reads
15 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st May 2024 2:09am
21st May 2024 2:09am
Midnight May
Brightest May, with the sun borne breeze,
I love to watch the way you play
with every bird up in the trees
in all the glory of your day!
I see your youth in each new leaf
as antidote for feeling old
and reassurance that all grief
will somehow be by you consoled.
Your hearty clover, now in bloom,
breeds whilom thoughts of maypole dance
and happy memories exhume
as soil for some fresh romance.
And when your wind declines to chime
I'll build a fire in the pit
to watch your moon rise, just in time,
as...
I love to watch the way you play
with every bird up in the trees
in all the glory of your day!
I see your youth in each new leaf
as antidote for feeling old
and reassurance that all grief
will somehow be by you consoled.
Your hearty clover, now in bloom,
breeds whilom thoughts of maypole dance
and happy memories exhume
as soil for some fresh romance.
And when your wind declines to chime
I'll build a fire in the pit
to watch your moon rise, just in time,
as...
#astronomy
#moon
#stars #sun
#stars #sun
160 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
18th May 2024 2:53am
18th May 2024 2:53am
Rooted And Blessed In My Exposure
So many young lives I have been a Nightingale unto, nursing wicked choices
Trying to find that beautiful spark in the dark, somewhat opened eyes, bathed in stone hearts, give rises to maddening voices
Changed in the matter of moments with treating the elements of a torn soul
In the cradle of time my pouring streams never cease its universal flow
It patrols on within the depths by my Creator, blessed on the current where it softly consoles
Regrets confessed from mouths, praying, hoping, humanity needing to be reassured lifespan will get better at any...
Trying to find that beautiful spark in the dark, somewhat opened eyes, bathed in stone hearts, give rises to maddening voices
Changed in the matter of moments with treating the elements of a torn soul
In the cradle of time my pouring streams never cease its universal flow
It patrols on within the depths by my Creator, blessed on the current where it softly consoles
Regrets confessed from mouths, praying, hoping, humanity needing to be reassured lifespan will get better at any...
#humankind
#spiritual
#moon
#rebirth
#sun
371 reads
5 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
13th May 2024 00:38am
13th May 2024 00:38am
The Commencing Of Mother Nature’s Soil
Happy Mother’s Day
To
All The
Mothers
Grandmothers
Stepmothers
Adopted Mothers
Foster Mothers
It was partly cloudy in New York, however the Sun managed to peak through
To
All The
Mothers
Grandmothers
Stepmothers
Adopted Mothers
Foster Mothers
It was partly cloudy in New York, however the Sun managed to peak through
#earth
#passion
#sun
#water
#wind
302 reads
5 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
28th Apr 2024 00:41am
28th Apr 2024 00:41am
Beach Feet
My feet are exactly
Where they want to be
At the beach
Where they want to be
At the beach
#beach
#sun
129 reads
9 Comments
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