Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems
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spiritual by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Endless Night
Today I returned
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
#betrayal
#night
#religion
#rhyming
#spiritual
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Spiritual Warfare
Seduction lives on the wicked side of town
Concrete jungle with snakes lurking around
Street jesters forced to don an empty frown
Corporate hacks make deals on holy ground
Human cattle used as labor for the machine
Until artificial intelligence replaces all people
New opportunities lean toward the obscene
Wealthy beasts service him inside his steeple
New age sycophants bow to a demonic god
He’s evil incarnate in the finest designer suit
Built a kingdom with countless acts of fraud
Spiritual warfare’s a seed still producing...
Concrete jungle with snakes lurking around
Street jesters forced to don an empty frown
Corporate hacks make deals on holy ground
Human cattle used as labor for the machine
Until artificial intelligence replaces all people
New opportunities lean toward the obscene
Wealthy beasts service him inside his steeple
New age sycophants bow to a demonic god
He’s evil incarnate in the finest designer suit
Built a kingdom with countless acts of fraud
Spiritual warfare’s a seed still producing...
#spiritual
#war
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19 Comments
cherish
little hope in expression of dreams
to live in the light of exploration
reaching heights unseen
in my mind rise
it is with great desire I reach out
delving into spirit of the unknown
sacred art in understanding
to live is to grow
secret faith is to listen
to whipering souls with knowledge
sanctifying my body in all I do
simple pleasures are embraced
and I realize life is good
not to be taken for granted
breathe into the day inspiration
and be filled on the wonderments the world has to offer ...
to live in the light of exploration
reaching heights unseen
in my mind rise
it is with great desire I reach out
delving into spirit of the unknown
sacred art in understanding
to live is to grow
secret faith is to listen
to whipering souls with knowledge
sanctifying my body in all I do
simple pleasures are embraced
and I realize life is good
not to be taken for granted
breathe into the day inspiration
and be filled on the wonderments the world has to offer ...
#beauty
#humankind
#love #spiritual
#love #spiritual
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4 Comments
Visualisation
welcome
In my bones is a memory of yours
here in the meadow sits a woman
a man a child
here is where you are
a thread runs through you
from your crown into your throat
through the back of your head
it runs a visible light floats
slowly
from the back of your head
down into your throat
hoarse voices might speak
there a narrow passage
might open
follow the line
weave gold silver
lunar stared orb
sunlight
weave into your heart
the sound of your name
imagine that...
In my bones is a memory of yours
here in the meadow sits a woman
a man a child
here is where you are
a thread runs through you
from your crown into your throat
through the back of your head
it runs a visible light floats
slowly
from the back of your head
down into your throat
hoarse voices might speak
there a narrow passage
might open
follow the line
weave gold silver
lunar stared orb
sunlight
weave into your heart
the sound of your name
imagine that...
#motivational
#spiritual
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2 Comments
A Night in the Museum
I was attending a meeting
hosting a keynote speaker
whom I did not know
During the presentation
the internet connection was lost
and I found myself sitting
next to the speaker
discussing potential options
for a better connection
A fundraiser was suggested
while he politely asked
if I was a Sociologist
At that time, the host
a gangly old man, obviously
frustrated by our discourse
abruptly blurted out:
"We don't use oracle cards...
hosting a keynote speaker
whom I did not know
During the presentation
the internet connection was lost
and I found myself sitting
next to the speaker
discussing potential options
for a better connection
A fundraiser was suggested
while he politely asked
if I was a Sociologist
At that time, the host
a gangly old man, obviously
frustrated by our discourse
abruptly blurted out:
"We don't use oracle cards...
#dreams
#religion
#spiritual #universe
#spiritual #universe
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Gate of serenity
Come and become relaxed in vibes that will affect the very, foundation of your true spiritual existence. For let's take a silent walk through, the forest of the trees of life. For don't be afraid of learning what is necessary to learn, about thyself as we go deeper than deep into the deepness of your own mind and heart. Yet as you go through the process of just eliminate what we don't want and need, you replaced it with positivity as that is what you want and need to feel, the deepness of the affect that this place has upon you. For just stop and look and listen, not to your heart but listen...
#emotional
#faith
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Lava
Your words, thick fire of molten lava
oozes over the surface of my skin.
I'm throbbing in the womb where life begins.
Sufficiently drenched in desire and sin.
I want you so deeply in.
I need, I crave.
Insanity pervades.
Lips of shiny pink copper
wait to feed on your breath.
To suck on your soul.
In my hollow.
The lava gets me Everytime.
oozes over the surface of my skin.
I'm throbbing in the womb where life begins.
Sufficiently drenched in desire and sin.
I want you so deeply in.
I need, I crave.
Insanity pervades.
Lips of shiny pink copper
wait to feed on your breath.
To suck on your soul.
In my hollow.
The lava gets me Everytime.
#lust
#sex
#spiritual
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NATURISM MAKES A PRISM,
Naturism
makes a prism
through which to see
the nudity
of the body,
not as dirty
but quite worthy
in harmony
with creation.
Inspiration -
appreciate
God did create
first humans nudd,
saw "very good" *
in what He made
and thus displayed
in the garden
of his Eden.
* "So God created man in his own image, in the image of God he created him, male and female...God saw all that he had made, and it was very good.....The man and his wife were both naked, and they felt no...
makes a prism
through which to see
the nudity
of the body,
not as dirty
but quite worthy
in harmony
with creation.
Inspiration -
appreciate
God did create
first humans nudd,
saw "very good" *
in what He made
and thus displayed
in the garden
of his Eden.
* "So God created man in his own image, in the image of God he created him, male and female...God saw all that he had made, and it was very good.....The man and his wife were both naked, and they felt no...
#happiness
#inspirational
#nature #spiritual
#nature #spiritual
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3 Comments
This Life
In spite of all the danger
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
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12 Comments
IMPOTENCY OF LIES
TRUTH
I've never forgotten
the lessons I learned from
the Dharma taught by
Tibetan Buddist priests
in my quest for enlightenment
and reality.
I've recently been resurrecting
and meditating on a principle
related to Yin-Yang, the power
and role of opposites:
There is light and darkness,
Day and night,
Good and evil.
Truth and lies.
Etched in my cranium
are the words from a
teacher:
"A lie has never liberated
anyone, it may make it seem
to be so for a moment, but
in the end, will be...
I've never forgotten
the lessons I learned from
the Dharma taught by
Tibetan Buddist priests
in my quest for enlightenment
and reality.
I've recently been resurrecting
and meditating on a principle
related to Yin-Yang, the power
and role of opposites:
There is light and darkness,
Day and night,
Good and evil.
Truth and lies.
Etched in my cranium
are the words from a
teacher:
"A lie has never liberated
anyone, it may make it seem
to be so for a moment, but
in the end, will be...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#sacrifice
#tradition
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7 Comments
Freaks, Weirdos and Misfits
Community
Art purpose
My family
Presented
4 all of us
Who feel like
Outsiders
Yeah
You know who you are
This is 4 you
Welcome to my madness
It’s my purpose
In stunning technicolor
Have a seat
Let me pour you a drink
Stay awhile….
Art purpose
My family
Presented
4 all of us
Who feel like
Outsiders
Yeah
You know who you are
This is 4 you
Welcome to my madness
It’s my purpose
In stunning technicolor
Have a seat
Let me pour you a drink
Stay awhile….
#art
#dialogue
#LifeAsAWriter
#passion
#spiritual
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32 Comments
Don't ask humans for certain definitions!
The headlines being how they are, I decided to try a modest work around for the customary music group search response for the idiom "third eye blind" in order to get something like a sturdy definition for the much journalistically bandied term..."woke"...and behold, up came this well worded answer from artificial intelligence via quora.com and ChatGPT...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical #morality
#philosophical #morality
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