Poems About Sleep by Top Critiquers
#sleep
Poems about sleep by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 8:12pm
21st Jul 2024 8:12pm
I'm So Tired
Oh baby well I want your love
yeah baby your the one I love
after work it's such a hard hard day,
I come home and I hear you say
Oh baby (3x)
Oh baby I want you to love me
When I had such a heartache today
and everyday well it's just the same
work and slave just to earn my keep,
make a man want to starve and weep
yeah girl when I work so hard
oh baby I'm so tired
yeah baby not right now
oh baby I'm so tired
Oh baby well I want your love
yeah baby your the one I love
after work it's such a...
yeah baby your the one I love
after work it's such a hard hard day,
I come home and I hear you say
Oh baby (3x)
Oh baby I want you to love me
When I had such a heartache today
and everyday well it's just the same
work and slave just to earn my keep,
make a man want to starve and weep
yeah girl when I work so hard
oh baby I'm so tired
yeah baby not right now
oh baby I'm so tired
Oh baby well I want your love
yeah baby your the one I love
after work it's such a...
#girlfriend
#job
#LifeStruggles
#lyrics
#sleep
78 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
5th Jan 2019 5:02pm
5th Jan 2019 5:02pm
be fell
a dozen grappling insects
work on small kingdoms
around their earth, arranging
her morning skirts into lichens—
breathing least with darkness
as she-moths among stars;
white seeds vanished in fire-light
I tenderly slept, heard nothing
but water; remembered thoughts—
the trees, perfect branches
birds by my bed; night pockets
took me – before something dark
floated between luminous
rose and river stone—
at times, they
— all so full of doom— ...
work on small kingdoms
around their earth, arranging
her morning skirts into lichens—
breathing least with darkness
as she-moths among stars;
white seeds vanished in fire-light
I tenderly slept, heard nothing
but water; remembered thoughts—
the trees, perfect branches
birds by my bed; night pockets
took me – before something dark
floated between luminous
rose and river stone—
at times, they
— all so full of doom— ...
#dreams
#spiritual
#sleep
1011 reads
11 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
16th Jun 2023 11:02am
16th Jun 2023 11:02am
My Heart Keeper
could i...
watch
you
sleep
just
being
rhere
hearing
your
breathing
feeling it
soothing
me
knowing...
you
felt
safe
with
me
watching
watch
you
sleep
just
being
rhere
hearing
your
breathing
feeling it
soothing
me
knowing...
you
felt
safe
with
me
watching
#love
#sleep
#admiration
416 reads
5 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
28th Nov 2020 5:41am
28th Nov 2020 5:41am
I See Her in Dreams
I see her in dreams every night,
With heavenly angelic eyes
Covered in beauty and delight
Like the most glorious sunrise,
And I bask in this solemn rite
That only a dream can comprise.
Captivated by a bright smile,
I cannot help but fall in love,
For the splendor lasts a while
As if it’s been sent from above,
Her appearance is so tactile
It’s surely what dreams are made of.
I long to sleep just for the chance
To behold this sheer fantasy
In her attraction there’s a trance
More profound than an endless sea, ...
With heavenly angelic eyes
Covered in beauty and delight
Like the most glorious sunrise,
And I bask in this solemn rite
That only a dream can comprise.
Captivated by a bright smile,
I cannot help but fall in love,
For the splendor lasts a while
As if it’s been sent from above,
Her appearance is so tactile
It’s surely what dreams are made of.
I long to sleep just for the chance
To behold this sheer fantasy
In her attraction there’s a trance
More profound than an endless sea, ...
#love
#beauty
#dreams
#sleep
#LordByron
551 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
14th Oct 2023 8:41am
14th Oct 2023 8:41am
I SLEEP SO WELL
I sleep so well
au naturel.
If you're no prude,
it means in nude -
no negligees
nor mere PJs.
Feeling so free
in nudity,
sleeping as God
made this fair bod,
skin next to silk
warm like mum's milk,
so assuring
of deep resting.
au naturel.
If you're no prude,
it means in nude -
no negligees
nor mere PJs.
Feeling so free
in nudity,
sleeping as God
made this fair bod,
skin next to silk
warm like mum's milk,
so assuring
of deep resting.
#night
#rhyming
#sleep #sensual
#sleep #sensual
183 reads
7 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 11:25pm
16th Jan 2024 11:25pm
Women Ask Men to Scoot Over
Usually it's in bed
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
#women
#men
#dialogue
#sleep
#PowerOfWords
209 reads
26 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2024 1:45am
22nd Aug 2024 1:45am
i slept
i slept
more than
slumber
needed
to be,
and in
those
moments
i dreamed
and in
those times
i had
no fears,
i was
relatively
content
with myself,
but what
will i be
tomorrow?
more than
slumber
needed
to be,
and in
those
moments
i dreamed
and in
those times
i had
no fears,
i was
relatively
content
with myself,
but what
will i be
tomorrow?
#determination
#dreams
#happiness
#sleep
#success
83 reads
4 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
8th Dec 2019 7:18am
8th Dec 2019 7:18am
Sleep
Dream easy.
Sleep for rest.
Dont let thoughts deprive your zest.
Be sleepy.
Redeem your best.
Dont let memories cease your quest.
Seek darkness.
May light be the test.
Dont let the world be an unwanted guest.
Forget sorrows.
They sink the chest.
Dont let worries invite stress.
Drift swiftly.
Your mind is suppressed.
Dont deny so much emptiness.
Sleep for rest.
Dont let thoughts deprive your zest.
Be sleepy.
Redeem your best.
Dont let memories cease your quest.
Seek darkness.
May light be the test.
Dont let the world be an unwanted guest.
Forget sorrows.
They sink the chest.
Dont let worries invite stress.
Drift swiftly.
Your mind is suppressed.
Dont deny so much emptiness.
#sleep
462 reads
6 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 12:47pm
26th Aug 2024 12:47pm
etcetera
Lost in dreams of yesterday's whispers
escaping into nature's fragrant beans
among trees, memories of ghosts
and calliopes of falling leaves
through the eye of an hourglass
drifting, white as snow of omens
on a Ouija planchette... etcetera
escaping into nature's fragrant beans
among trees, memories of ghosts
and calliopes of falling leaves
through the eye of an hourglass
drifting, white as snow of omens
on a Ouija planchette... etcetera
#dreams
#inspirational
#sleep #WritingPoetry
#sleep #WritingPoetry
97 reads
4 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
14th Mar 2024 1:26am
14th Mar 2024 1:26am
Plum Purple Night
My Florida sequins sun
Deliriously sparkles
Like a disco globe
Reflecting heat
Splitting dreams into
Relentless mirages
Of 17 beaches
Wearing waves
Of fallen lavender
Sowing black red
Drifting seeds
In the fertile blue
Raining upside down
Draining Tampa Bay
Flooding the sky
With lullabies of incense
Warm and waiting
For a Plum Purple Night
Of 17 chances
To medicate the stars
With welcomed fragrance
Curing their insomnia
Deliriously sparkles
Like a disco globe
Reflecting heat
Splitting dreams into
Relentless mirages
Of 17 beaches
Wearing waves
Of fallen lavender
Sowing black red
Drifting seeds
In the fertile blue
Raining upside down
Draining Tampa Bay
Flooding the sky
With lullabies of incense
Warm and waiting
For a Plum Purple Night
Of 17 chances
To medicate the stars
With welcomed fragrance
Curing their insomnia
#anxiety
#sleep
457 reads
26 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
17th Feb 2024 6:33am
17th Feb 2024 6:33am
That Loud Trumpet Sound (Snoring)
I will briefly elaborate on this medical related issue in detail, with much regard for a conversation on my Blog Live comments, which lead to a heated discussion about the throes of snoring, and is it unfair for the person who snores, significant other must adjust their lifestyle to adapt on behalf of love, a sense of commitment, or the two of you are not sure which direction to progress forward.
My blog addressed the seriousness of snoring, and if there is any help to the person who must endure that hollowed bedroom saluting throughout the night.
...
My blog addressed the seriousness of snoring, and if there is any help to the person who must endure that hollowed bedroom saluting throughout the night.
...
#dreams
#sun
#water #sleep
#water #sleep
233 reads
5 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
16th Jun 2024 10:41pm
16th Jun 2024 10:41pm
In a Coma State Dream Chapter 1
#anxiety
#sleep
77 reads
2 Comments
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