Poems About the Sea by Top Critiquers
#sea
fishing
are there more sea gulls or
boats floating
in the marina, he wondered
at the sheer
pointlessness of the
thought to himself
it might be nice to know
the answer
boats floating
in the marina, he wondered
at the sheer
pointlessness of the
thought to himself
it might be nice to know
the answer
#sea
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maestro
the moon gently descended
on the roof of the earth,
the stars glistened with glee
as the maestro
orchestrated the cosmic
symphony
and the stars sang in
synchronicity.
the moon followed
the notes
of the shooting stars
darting across the skies,
thus creating a
beautiful rhapsody
to which the sea danced
in rhythmic low and highs...
as if in trance,
bewitched by the moonlight,
the wind whispered love tunes...
as the music reached ...
on the roof of the earth,
the stars glistened with glee
as the maestro
orchestrated the cosmic
symphony
and the stars sang in
synchronicity.
the moon followed
the notes
of the shooting stars
darting across the skies,
thus creating a
beautiful rhapsody
to which the sea danced
in rhythmic low and highs...
as if in trance,
bewitched by the moonlight,
the wind whispered love tunes...
as the music reached ...
#love
#moon
#music
#sea
#stars
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Sea Of Love
Close your eyes and listen to the calling of my heart, no longer echoing from the depth
Within my powers, in my dreams, you still do keep them all wet
Inch your cosmic energy a little closer, unleash your eighth dimensional insight
What's done in the dark to thrive will need the light
Kings of honor, are erected grand, and remain rooted tall
His mission, intermingled with Earth, is prosperity for all
In the benediction of his incantations, you have given the star dust of our evolving beings, love to stir ...
Within my powers, in my dreams, you still do keep them all wet
Inch your cosmic energy a little closer, unleash your eighth dimensional insight
What's done in the dark to thrive will need the light
Kings of honor, are erected grand, and remain rooted tall
His mission, intermingled with Earth, is prosperity for all
In the benediction of his incantations, you have given the star dust of our evolving beings, love to stir ...
#sea
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we're only real in the ephemeral prints we leave behind
I put my feet in the ocean
and for a moment it feels
like freedom
the foamy waves washing away
my momentary troubles
It's a rare moment
where I can just be
in this open space
of wind and salt and sand
cold water
and washed up sea shells
I collect them
some beautiful
some broken
some both
and it feels like history
and life in my hands
the past, present
and future in one moment
it feels like a metaphor for life
though maybe the air
is making me feeling ...
and for a moment it feels
like freedom
the foamy waves washing away
my momentary troubles
It's a rare moment
where I can just be
in this open space
of wind and salt and sand
cold water
and washed up sea shells
I collect them
some beautiful
some broken
some both
and it feels like history
and life in my hands
the past, present
and future in one moment
it feels like a metaphor for life
though maybe the air
is making me feeling ...
#identity
#sea
#nature #SelfReflection
#nature #SelfReflection
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I Am The Song Of Her Nautilus
I Am The Song
Of Her Nautilus
Sweethearts loiter by the sea in the maritime province of the old country for centuries of sunsets over La Mer until Papa tells Galatea it is time to go to the city and seek her fortune there. But when her shore is engulfed by Neptune’s fury her island is adrift in the waves. Galatea and her man wear only their wedding clothes when like refugees from the lost continent of Atlantis they abandon the sinking land of uncertainty as they step foot upon the terra firma of marriage. But he loves the land more than her and chooses to live on one of...
Of Her Nautilus
Sweethearts loiter by the sea in the maritime province of the old country for centuries of sunsets over La Mer until Papa tells Galatea it is time to go to the city and seek her fortune there. But when her shore is engulfed by Neptune’s fury her island is adrift in the waves. Galatea and her man wear only their wedding clothes when like refugees from the lost continent of Atlantis they abandon the sinking land of uncertainty as they step foot upon the terra firma of marriage. But he loves the land more than her and chooses to live on one of...
#FallingInLove
#love
#mermaids
#scifi
#sea
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restless of flame
how that
sun seems
to reflect
on the
water like
bright
flowers,
its restless
of flame
discontented,
non-stopping
whimsy
purpose
and joy,
its
expressing
deep
purpose
filled
meaning.
sun seems
to reflect
on the
water like
bright
flowers,
its restless
of flame
discontented,
non-stopping
whimsy
purpose
and joy,
its
expressing
deep
purpose
filled
meaning.
#nature
#sea
#sky #sun
#sky #sun
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Blue Jean Sea
Wondering if you’ll hold
A breathing note you can fold
Stuff in your Blue Jean Sea
With deep pockets and frayed edges
Of white trickling foam
Weep and seep your salt into me
Whitecap crests like hands
Too heavy to touch a beach sun
Fingertip tides so high
Raise me into your water palm
From miles of haunted shoreline
Erase my sunken footsteps
My black hair will be your keratin cape
Cloaking each drowned living memory
My soaked lungs will help you breathe
A sigh of relief in...
A breathing note you can fold
Stuff in your Blue Jean Sea
With deep pockets and frayed edges
Of white trickling foam
Weep and seep your salt into me
Whitecap crests like hands
Too heavy to touch a beach sun
Fingertip tides so high
Raise me into your water palm
From miles of haunted shoreline
Erase my sunken footsteps
My black hair will be your keratin cape
Cloaking each drowned living memory
My soaked lungs will help you breathe
A sigh of relief in...
#sea
#ghosts
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Uncommon Ocean comp entry
She, the blueberry sapphire queen
Beneath the misty moon set dream
Neptune you're a cruel bastard
North east south and westward
Calling to the unquiet souls
To come and sail within your folds
Beneath the misty moon set dream
Neptune you're a cruel bastard
North east south and westward
Calling to the unquiet souls
To come and sail within your folds
#sea
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Old Men and the Sea
I’ve seen the fisherman,
that Papa Hemmingway once wrote about
and heard the tales that they’d spin out
at night when they had hung their purse seines
up to dry.
Did they speak of mermaids then
and one-eyed whales,
and willing Cuban whores
who'd rut for days?
Ah yes, they did,
But only to the gullible
who'd stand them drinks
in recompense for being swayed
within the magic of their words.
Oh, how these winking men,
these old salt-lying piscators,
were sly.
that Papa Hemmingway once wrote about
and heard the tales that they’d spin out
at night when they had hung their purse seines
up to dry.
Did they speak of mermaids then
and one-eyed whales,
and willing Cuban whores
who'd rut for days?
Ah yes, they did,
But only to the gullible
who'd stand them drinks
in recompense for being swayed
within the magic of their words.
Oh, how these winking men,
these old salt-lying piscators,
were sly.
#sea
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Crumbling
salt spray, november gray
nothing stops the tide
heeding call of the milky way
nothing stops the tide
sea relentless, wave on wave
we're boulders...
boulders ground to sand
my walls are crumbling
my will is crumbling
my words are crumbling
my mind is crumbling
(can you hear me, crumbling?)
tightrope, balancing
quicksand at my feet
beach face washed with salt again
quicksand at my feet
waters rising, take a breath
there's seaweed...
seaweed in my hair
my...
nothing stops the tide
heeding call of the milky way
nothing stops the tide
sea relentless, wave on wave
we're boulders...
boulders ground to sand
my walls are crumbling
my will is crumbling
my words are crumbling
my mind is crumbling
(can you hear me, crumbling?)
tightrope, balancing
quicksand at my feet
beach face washed with salt again
quicksand at my feet
waters rising, take a breath
there's seaweed...
seaweed in my hair
my...
#depression
#death
#sea #beach
#sea #beach
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Spring Scenery
Sand, water, salt and sky
Blue oceanic laughter
The ice cream van
Bleating seagulls
Clusters of rocks
The solitary garden at the foot of the cliff
Church bells ring
Chimes from far away
Fanfares, near whispers
A choir of angels
Sounds carrying over the water
Through fields
As the sun sets
Painting the sky magenta
Blue oceanic laughter
The ice cream van
Bleating seagulls
Clusters of rocks
The solitary garden at the foot of the cliff
Church bells ring
Chimes from far away
Fanfares, near whispers
A choir of angels
Sounds carrying over the water
Through fields
As the sun sets
Painting the sky magenta
#sea
#nature
#peace #meditation
#peace #meditation
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Enchanted Eden
In a garden filled with magical dark sorceress, mystical forces, in a land far medieval beyond the Christian ✝️ crusades!!
War wizards, and warlocks lined up, and all set to fall in, ready the battalion, and organize the brigade!!
Well orchestrated and formulated, out to conquer and dominate taking prisoners, and captives turning them into slave's!!
Lust driven! Given in, to forbidden sins,
Filled with wickedness, in chains ⛓ being whipped!!
Forced into submission, an made obedient your natural thoughts, is...
War wizards, and warlocks lined up, and all set to fall in, ready the battalion, and organize the brigade!!
Well orchestrated and formulated, out to conquer and dominate taking prisoners, and captives turning them into slave's!!
Lust driven! Given in, to forbidden sins,
Filled with wickedness, in chains ⛓ being whipped!!
Forced into submission, an made obedient your natural thoughts, is...
#sea
#storm
#ForbiddenLove
#witches
#manipulation
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Sea by Top Critiquers