Scifi Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scifi
scifi seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Why I Write Science Fiction
I am an author,
Mostly of non-fiction works,
They are where I live.
I also write poems,
About themes deeply rooted,
In my heart and soul.
Yet of all I write,
I'm arguably most free,
In my SF worlds.
Past, present, future,
Coexist in harmony,
Unchained from what is.
False utopias,
Unmasked as dystopias,
Clung to by blind fools.
Imagination,
Freed from mind-forged manacles,
Can discover truth.
Physics' laws repealed,
Coloring outside the box,
Of what's...
Mostly of non-fiction works,
They are where I live.
I also write poems,
About themes deeply rooted,
In my heart and soul.
Yet of all I write,
I'm arguably most free,
In my SF worlds.
Past, present, future,
Coexist in harmony,
Unchained from what is.
False utopias,
Unmasked as dystopias,
Clung to by blind fools.
Imagination,
Freed from mind-forged manacles,
Can discover truth.
Physics' laws repealed,
Coloring outside the box,
Of what's...
#scifi
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Minor distractions
Wait beyond the earth is doomed.
Sun grew hungry, thus consumed.
Further wait until time tires.
Watch as all motion expires.
Unstitch all that has been sewn.
Witness that which can't be known.
Mould a shape that's yet unseen.
Remake all that has not been.
Sun grew hungry, thus consumed.
Further wait until time tires.
Watch as all motion expires.
Unstitch all that has been sewn.
Witness that which can't be known.
Mould a shape that's yet unseen.
Remake all that has not been.
#scifi
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Am I Really Your Wife Or Just A Lab Rat?!
She walked into her
husband's laboratory
to say she's ready for
that intimate evening
and became shocked.
What shocked her is
a chick who looks like
her inside a clone pod
followed by another
and one clone more.
husband's laboratory
to say she's ready for
that intimate evening
and became shocked.
What shocked her is
a chick who looks like
her inside a clone pod
followed by another
and one clone more.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#marriage
#scary
#scifi
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Oh, Man !
Some of the people i meet
Are so deeply depressed
And the rest of the street
Are so tightly stressed
Some habits i know
Dramatically reversed
From Omega to Alpha
A playback regressed
The morning becomes night
Sleeping starts at 7 . a.m
And the dark turns to light
Wasting health late in night clubs
'' Am i...
Are so deeply depressed
And the rest of the street
Are so tightly stressed
Some habits i know
Dramatically reversed
From Omega to Alpha
A playback regressed
The morning becomes night
Sleeping starts at 7 . a.m
And the dark turns to light
Wasting health late in night clubs
'' Am i...
#apocalypse
#curse
#dystopian
#nightmares
#scifi
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Realized What Happened To Him Last Night
Bo woke in a hotel.
He saw a woman in the mirror.
That UFO changed his sex.
He saw a woman in the mirror.
That UFO changed his sex.
#fiction
#mirror
#scifi
#sensual
#suffering
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Hate To Interrupt Your Bath
Hate to interrupt
your bath, Princess Leia.
Your services are needed.
Okay, Three-Pea-Oh.
Let the Hoth base commanders
know that I will be right there.
your bath, Princess Leia.
Your services are needed.
Okay, Three-Pea-Oh.
Let the Hoth base commanders
know that I will be right there.
#dialogue
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#scifi
#sensual
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Distant Travels
As my mind reflects
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
#aliens
#identity
#memories
#scifi
#universe
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Artificial Inheritance- NaPoWriMo 22
When they came for the processes
automating into infinity,
I said nothing.
For the machine work will set you free
When they came for the vehicles
self driving onwards into the future,
I said nothing.
For car rides can be done without a care
When they came for the artwork
algorithms melding pictures together,
I said nothing.
For in bulk designs are art for the artist’s sake
When they came for the identities
generating faces to make new actors,
I said nothing.
For all can have the cyberworld as their...
automating into infinity,
I said nothing.
For the machine work will set you free
When they came for the vehicles
self driving onwards into the future,
I said nothing.
For car rides can be done without a care
When they came for the artwork
algorithms melding pictures together,
I said nothing.
For in bulk designs are art for the artist’s sake
When they came for the identities
generating faces to make new actors,
I said nothing.
For all can have the cyberworld as their...
#NaPoWriMo2024
#scifi
#technology
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Inter-Planet Janet and the Alien Doomsday Device

#forgiveness
#childhood
#sex
#aliens
#scifi
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One of Two
que of revival eons old, in time I waited
appalled by what passed for life
visions X's two, in the secret dawn, risen
primordial nothingness begat the emptiness of being
companions startling in nature awoke me cruelly during Dreamtime
tender to the touch with an immortal fever I burned
sure just out of echoes reach the others resided
where did I originate?
I sent sonar through space, searching
travailing in agony with dreams
pushing out to connect
I came in contact with a barrier
I could go no further ...
appalled by what passed for life
visions X's two, in the secret dawn, risen
primordial nothingness begat the emptiness of being
companions startling in nature awoke me cruelly during Dreamtime
tender to the touch with an immortal fever I burned
sure just out of echoes reach the others resided
where did I originate?
I sent sonar through space, searching
travailing in agony with dreams
pushing out to connect
I came in contact with a barrier
I could go no further ...
#angels
#scifi
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He Said That It Was Supposed To Be A Harmless Little Experiment
Zayna woke up
one Sunday
and discovered
that she had somehow been
stripped naked and sleeping
in Leopold's bedroom
due to the tonic Gabe gave his guests.
one Sunday
and discovered
that she had somehow been
stripped naked and sleeping
in Leopold's bedroom
due to the tonic Gabe gave his guests.
#friendship
#fiction
#mystery
#sensual
#scifi
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Cosmic Beings
I saw today aliens wearing bad toupee's
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
#sex
#drugs
#fiction
#aliens
#scifi
169 reads
10 Comments
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