Scifi Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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scifi seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
In Musk, Should We Trust??
Zombified Society
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
#CallToAction
#dystopian
#manipulation
#scifi
#technology
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6 Comments
Inside The Examination Room Of An Extraterrestrial Spaceship
Mark opened both his eyes.
He found himself inside an examination room.
He turned his head slightly.
He saw his wife Maria.
She was also naked on a table.
He tried calling to her.
He's unable to do so.
Then, some grey alien beings walked in.
They touched Maria all over.
That was before something happened.
That something was Amanda walking towards Mark.
She's about to hump him.
That was before the alarm clock sounded.
Mark and Maria woke in their bedroom.
He found himself inside an examination room.
He turned his head slightly.
He saw his wife Maria.
She was also naked on a table.
He tried calling to her.
He's unable to do so.
Then, some grey alien beings walked in.
They touched Maria all over.
That was before something happened.
That something was Amanda walking towards Mark.
She's about to hump him.
That was before the alarm clock sounded.
Mark and Maria woke in their bedroom.
#aliens
#fiction
#scifi
#sex
#sleep
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You're No Longer A Slave
Ethan switched the teleporter on.
Jennifer barged in and switched it off.
But not before someone appeared.
She's naked and forced to give pleasure.
Jennifer said "You're no longer a slave."
Jennifer barged in and switched it off.
But not before someone appeared.
She's naked and forced to give pleasure.
Jennifer said "You're no longer a slave."
#fiction
#friendship
#scifi
#sex
#technology
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experiment 612
Every… nothing…
see… nothing… feel, nothing.
Think na… why? What?
I feel… I need to feel…
I, try, why can’t I see?
I, try, why cant I smell?
I try, why… what is that distant feeling?
Closer, bring it closer.
My eyes feel open. But are they?
I taste something… metal?
The pounding draws closer… or not?
where… who am I?
The pounding gets stronger,
it can’t get closer… why?
Inside, inside the cold.
Dull and blurry, I fee… no see.
Bright, so bright. ...
see… nothing… feel, nothing.
Think na… why? What?
I feel… I need to feel…
I, try, why can’t I see?
I, try, why cant I smell?
I try, why… what is that distant feeling?
Closer, bring it closer.
My eyes feel open. But are they?
I taste something… metal?
The pounding draws closer… or not?
where… who am I?
The pounding gets stronger,
it can’t get closer… why?
Inside, inside the cold.
Dull and blurry, I fee… no see.
Bright, so bright. ...
#confusion
#dark
#nightmares #scifi
#nightmares #scifi
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"JonRot: The rumors of my Death are somewhat inclusive"
Had I gone to extremities to gear my persona so legendarily.
Me J>r> the Kook of DUP..... Went off the grid for a bit to see
what more time must be spent...
I journeyed to the key's of Floridian quadrants drinking margaritas.
And Poeticizing incurious sonnets.
In my lair of Ill Repute and lagoon of debaucheries and slander's.
I sunk to new found lows of ecstasy like eating crack mixed with
Col. Sanders.
Later time seemed to be of the passing sunsets and sunrises flew
by as I was fasting. Gaining a more moral...
Me J>r> the Kook of DUP..... Went off the grid for a bit to see
what more time must be spent...
I journeyed to the key's of Floridian quadrants drinking margaritas.
And Poeticizing incurious sonnets.
In my lair of Ill Repute and lagoon of debaucheries and slander's.
I sunk to new found lows of ecstasy like eating crack mixed with
Col. Sanders.
Later time seemed to be of the passing sunsets and sunrises flew
by as I was fasting. Gaining a more moral...
#curse
#mythology
#nightmares #scifi
#nightmares #scifi
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3 Comments
The Infamous White Rabbit
There you are, my white rabbit,
Told not to follow,
yet here I am, defiant.
The playboy in Psycho Bunny
threads, With Bad Bunny’s beats
spinning in my head. I circle,
dizzy in this whirlpool of bunnies,
Chasing you through shifting
realities, My thoughts rattle
like spray cans—
Echoes of a world not fully
understood.
Sit with me in silence,
watch Bugs and his crew,
Looney Tunes flicker in the periphery,
As I shift, a half-dreaming
power source, My heart still hums,
though not in...
Told not to follow,
yet here I am, defiant.
The playboy in Psycho Bunny
threads, With Bad Bunny’s beats
spinning in my head. I circle,
dizzy in this whirlpool of bunnies,
Chasing you through shifting
realities, My thoughts rattle
like spray cans—
Echoes of a world not fully
understood.
Sit with me in silence,
watch Bugs and his crew,
Looney Tunes flicker in the periphery,
As I shift, a half-dreaming
power source, My heart still hums,
though not in...
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeStruggles
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
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"Collapse of nectarivore's flow of time"
The echoing phantasmal sonic time distorting
implosions.
As images morph by at hyper-space commotions.
Phenomenons of illusion made undoubtedly
tangible.
In a World of bitter patience soon
the majority became hospitable.
The minds eyed editor and architectonic of
these multi-implicable intentions.
Would weave this once faint dream into a
cosmic and permanent invention.
implosions.
As images morph by at hyper-space commotions.
Phenomenons of illusion made undoubtedly
tangible.
In a World of bitter patience soon
the majority became hospitable.
The minds eyed editor and architectonic of
these multi-implicable intentions.
Would weave this once faint dream into a
cosmic and permanent invention.
#mythology
#nightmares
#scifi
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Hachi Ju Hachi - Mariachi Kobans in Outerspace. imort imo demo tracks - song 2 official lyrics
This is the link to my goth 2024 imort imo demo tracks.
https://open.spotify.com/album/07r9T8cAGHEPbG2eGqGi8p?si=3fxld6myRgSDHcBtcb-pcQ
My Hyper follow
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Also my Brand New 22 page dragon list
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Hachi Ju Hachi
By Professor Prestome Ungyobrock
Sodosure Imortalone Hukyuu Shimasho.
A dying punk who never had immortality.
Gensu Dake No issyo Ni. CyberTech Nobas Ta
Personally need 2 be more inhuman
Still falling. Still dying.
Unque...
https://open.spotify.com/album/07r9T8cAGHEPbG2eGqGi8p?si=3fxld6myRgSDHcBtcb-pcQ
My Hyper follow
https://hyperfollow.com/imortalone
Also my Brand New 22 page dragon list
https://ko-fi.com/s/059c907329
Hachi Ju Hachi
By Professor Prestome Ungyobrock
Sodosure Imortalone Hukyuu Shimasho.
A dying punk who never had immortality.
Gensu Dake No issyo Ni. CyberTech Nobas Ta
Personally need 2 be more inhuman
Still falling. Still dying.
Unque...
#culture
#gothic
#inspirational
#scifi
#universe
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Blake's Ghost Hunters and the Web of Madness: Part Two

#dark
#ghosts
#horror
#scifi
#ShortStory
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Blake's Ghost Hunters and the Web of Madness: Part One

#dark
#ghosts
#horror
#scifi
#ShortStory
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0 Comments
Klingon Legends: The Clans of the Damned
- Klingon Legends: The Clans of the Damned -
(Inspired by stories found in the book “Let's Trek: The Budget Traveller's Guide to Klingon Worlds”.)
This is a rather dark story, which was hidden deep within a historical knowledge database of a highly respected university on the Klingon home world of Kronos. The author's name was stricken off records.
Upon one of the more remote planets of the Klingon Empire, there was a clan known for their strange and mysterious behavior. No one can be said to be truly familiar with their origins, but it is known that those...
(Inspired by stories found in the book “Let's Trek: The Budget Traveller's Guide to Klingon Worlds”.)
This is a rather dark story, which was hidden deep within a historical knowledge database of a highly respected university on the Klingon home world of Kronos. The author's name was stricken off records.
Upon one of the more remote planets of the Klingon Empire, there was a clan known for their strange and mysterious behavior. No one can be said to be truly familiar with their origins, but it is known that those...
#aliens
#dark
#historical
#horror
#scifi
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The Ultimate Queen (chapter one/part 2)
In the Vinu Mountains Maline has finished her nest for the coming of her child. This child is her first and quite possibly her last. Her body had a tendency to rid itself of the foreign object. For some reason, this one stayed till term. The Humm women produce offspring within a quarter of a moon phase. They are surrounded by four moons. Maline felt the stirring for her to prepare for the coming.
The mountain of Vin is rich in purple soil. The Humm tribe lived on the mountain for several generations. The height of males is five feet six inches. The females of the species' average...
The mountain of Vin is rich in purple soil. The Humm tribe lived on the mountain for several generations. The height of males is five feet six inches. The females of the species' average...
#dystopian
#scifi
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