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experiment 612

Every… nothing…
see… nothing… feel, nothing.
Think na… why? What?
 
I feel… I need to feel…
 
I, try, why can’t I see?
I, try, why cant I smell?
I try, why… what is that distant feeling?
 
Closer, bring it closer.
 
My eyes feel open. But are they?
I taste something… metal?
The pounding draws closer… or not?
 
where… who am I?
 
The pounding gets stronger,
it can’t get closer… why?
Inside, inside the cold.
 
Dull and blurry, I fee… no see.
 
Bright, so bright.
Something covers my eyes,  
my fingers feel smooth metal.
 
Hurts, everything is pain.
 
I hear them breathe. It’s so loud.
My skin is cold, but burning.
I try to break my ears, too much noise.
 
I don’t like this. I need it to stop.
 
The noise gets worse.
I cover my eyes, the glass is cold.
My eyes ajust to the dark… too much noise.
 
I feel weak…  
 
my hand slides away…
My vision goes dark…
my hearing begeans to fade.
 
“atleast this one moved”
 
the pain faded. My senses were gone.
I was alone, in the dark for years.
I felt myself fade, slowly.  
 
Back to nothing…
Written by bignp
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Author's Note
of the 2 poems i ever wrote this is the one i remember the most. :/
in intro excerpt from a story i tried to write back in the early 2010s. rewritten to be about a beta AI assistant robot.
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