Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scary
scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Clock Tower Hillshire Pt 1

#dark
#horror
#narrative
#scary
#ShortStory
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The Woodland Burrows

#anxiety
#night
#nightmares #scary
#nightmares #scary
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Beach House
The scene unfolds on sand,
yellowish brown and tossed all around.
The sound of waves slams the rocks surrounding,
wooden pieces that form a house.
Beach house sits atop this place of scenery displayed.
Two stories tall encompassed by white picket walls and
a porch that wraps around.
Upon entering the door, a sense of silence
becomes known.
The opening room is filled with sky high views,
comfortable seating, and liquor bar to boot.
All seems well settling into this luxury,
till darkness falls on this beauty. ...
yellowish brown and tossed all around.
The sound of waves slams the rocks surrounding,
wooden pieces that form a house.
Beach house sits atop this place of scenery displayed.
Two stories tall encompassed by white picket walls and
a porch that wraps around.
Upon entering the door, a sense of silence
becomes known.
The opening room is filled with sky high views,
comfortable seating, and liquor bar to boot.
All seems well settling into this luxury,
till darkness falls on this beauty. ...
#beach
#dark
#home #scary
#home #scary
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Musty Wallpaper #2
In the shadows of the night, where the wind moans,
stands a dark and solemn castle.
Inside there are secrets from a dark past
and echoes of screams in a late lament.
The dark hallways stained with blood
They tell stories of unhappy love.
In the main hall a feast of horror
where death dances in macabre fervor.
Candles flicker, shadows come to life,
the full moon looks on pale and haughty.
In the broken mirror reflections of pain
reveal scenes of ancient gore.
The clock strikes, midnight has arrived.
Spirits...
stands a dark and solemn castle.
Inside there are secrets from a dark past
and echoes of screams in a late lament.
The dark hallways stained with blood
They tell stories of unhappy love.
In the main hall a feast of horror
where death dances in macabre fervor.
Candles flicker, shadows come to life,
the full moon looks on pale and haughty.
In the broken mirror reflections of pain
reveal scenes of ancient gore.
The clock strikes, midnight has arrived.
Spirits...
#horror
#mirror
#nightmares
#scary
#storm
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Someday
I awaken to this room.
A room with no view.
A view never present,
due to blank walls that are like a canvas.
The confines consist of tables, chairs,
and a camera.
Therefore, someone was watching from somewhere.
Building my intense feelings was
nothing more than the sound of breathing.
Breathing not my own, emanating
from the speakerphone.
The phone cut and pointless,
left me with little chance to escape this
crazy fortress.
My mind wonders where might I be?
Spiraling away into insanity it would...
A room with no view.
A view never present,
due to blank walls that are like a canvas.
The confines consist of tables, chairs,
and a camera.
Therefore, someone was watching from somewhere.
Building my intense feelings was
nothing more than the sound of breathing.
Breathing not my own, emanating
from the speakerphone.
The phone cut and pointless,
left me with little chance to escape this
crazy fortress.
My mind wonders where might I be?
Spiraling away into insanity it would...
#dark
#mystery
#scary #ShortStory
#scary #ShortStory
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Finger or Two
Finger yourself here
I don't care who's watching you
Did you get the snot?
I don't care who's watching you
Did you get the snot?
#haiku
#scary
#TruthOfLife
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The Concerto of The Abyss By FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
The Preparation of the Intro
As the orchestra prep to propose to the bride
As she is the mother of darkness
Mother of all as you saw. It doesn't matter at all
This tale is too involved in the marriage to the abyss
A sinister awakening of her
Sleep on her hellhound fur
But what occurs is the fact
That this marriage is madness
The necessary sadness
To be a gift of all. The Fall of the Living Fallen
But dead and rotten
The prestige of the conductor's baton
That heaven and hell is in his command
As we see it in close demand...
As the orchestra prep to propose to the bride
As she is the mother of darkness
Mother of all as you saw. It doesn't matter at all
This tale is too involved in the marriage to the abyss
A sinister awakening of her
Sleep on her hellhound fur
But what occurs is the fact
That this marriage is madness
The necessary sadness
To be a gift of all. The Fall of the Living Fallen
But dead and rotten
The prestige of the conductor's baton
That heaven and hell is in his command
As we see it in close demand...
#gothic
#scary
#ShortStory #tragedy
#ShortStory #tragedy
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panic syndrome
This mania of mine
to leave
the curtains open…
No suspicions.
No setbacks.
There is nothing more.
Five hundred grams
of flour
any six eggs
etc.
Beat it all
and mix
with fresh cheese…
All
so sweet,
so light.
New clothes,
open doors.
Belts.
Chastity.
My mania
to keep
the curtains
open
and the taps
shut.
to leave
the curtains open…
No suspicions.
No setbacks.
There is nothing more.
Five hundred grams
of flour
any six eggs
etc.
Beat it all
and mix
with fresh cheese…
All
so sweet,
so light.
New clothes,
open doors.
Belts.
Chastity.
My mania
to keep
the curtains
open
and the taps
shut.
#anxiety
#dark
#death
#evil
#scary
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Bishop's Ferry

#evil
#horror
#scary
#seductive
#sex
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Sometimes, A Nude Portrait Is Not A Good Idea.
Make this portrait be done quick because
my husband's birthday party is
tomorrow and I wish to
show him how sexy I
could still be. Why are
you naked? Please
get away
from me!
Stop!
my husband's birthday party is
tomorrow and I wish to
show him how sexy I
could still be. Why are
you naked? Please
get away
from me!
Stop!
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#scary
#sensual
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Mr Oblong's Body Parts For Endless Press Studios By FD Ravenskraft
Mr Oblong's Body Parts
For Endless Press Studios
By FD Ravenskraft
Drop the Body on the floor
By The fucking chamber door
The brutality upon the shores
Of the dirty nights of flight
The madness stares upon me
You see the bleeding heart is caught
By Oblong's torture chamber
I'm not your saviour
You have become his next favour
Heads. Torsos. Legs for sale
Coming for the smoker of hell
Butt cheeks tenderized and marinade
Drinking a bottle of Gatorade
Throw away the infected parts infested with AIDS ...
For Endless Press Studios
By FD Ravenskraft
Drop the Body on the floor
By The fucking chamber door
The brutality upon the shores
Of the dirty nights of flight
The madness stares upon me
You see the bleeding heart is caught
By Oblong's torture chamber
I'm not your saviour
You have become his next favour
Heads. Torsos. Legs for sale
Coming for the smoker of hell
Butt cheeks tenderized and marinade
Drinking a bottle of Gatorade
Throw away the infected parts infested with AIDS ...
#gothic
#mystery
#scary #tragedy
#scary #tragedy
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The Shadows of The Trees by FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
In the Darkest Beginning
The breeding of the birth of trees
Comes into a darker path
Mother nature rages war against
Humanity for their cruelty
Their disrespect cost an uproar among the Gods
The reality of twisted ancients that breathe
Within them to kill everything at sight
To take back the beauty of mothers' attended
The obsession with killing humanity is a Just
Without disgust.
The Order is a must
The Trees devour the soil in blood
The carcass of humanity is being left by crows
After the animals tear them to shreds ...
The breeding of the birth of trees
Comes into a darker path
Mother nature rages war against
Humanity for their cruelty
Their disrespect cost an uproar among the Gods
The reality of twisted ancients that breathe
Within them to kill everything at sight
To take back the beauty of mothers' attended
The obsession with killing humanity is a Just
Without disgust.
The Order is a must
The Trees devour the soil in blood
The carcass of humanity is being left by crows
After the animals tear them to shreds ...
#gothic
#mystery
#narrative #scary
#narrative #scary
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