Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scary
scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Nightmare Within A Steam Room
Aurora opened her eyes and found herself
sitting naked in a sauna before the door
opened and some stud stepped in and sank his fangs
into her neck before she woke up screaming loud.
sitting naked in a sauna before the door
opened and some stud stepped in and sank his fangs
into her neck before she woke up screaming loud.
#dreams
#fiction
#scary
#sensual
#vampires
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RICHARD'S FINAL MOMENTS
#evil
#horror
#scary
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Tough Love
#BDSM
#scary
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
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In Father’s Room
The house on Gorton Street had been one of several whose streets led down to the docks in times gone by, labourers’ houses whose doors and windows were flush with the walls so that the buildings looked like great rectangular blocks, with no adornments. The house appeared in black-and-white films, from the days when an MP’s wife warned that we shouldn’t give the working-class coal because they’ll just store it in their bathtubs. Children would play with sticks and hoops and dollies made from socks while women with scarves around their heads called them in, hauled laundry, and brought home...
#evil
#scary
#ghosts #horror
#ghosts #horror
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What Made Her Scream In Terror
She opened her eyes
and saw her naked body
covered with sweat just
before she sat up and looked
at the charred corpse of some guy.
and saw her naked body
covered with sweat just
before she sat up and looked
at the charred corpse of some guy.
#death
#fiction
#scary
#tanka
#sensual
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ENTHEOGENESIS, A CHANGA TRIP
It was the second calling from the sacred spirit molecule. The first calling, years ago, resulted into a smooth exciting initiation with me going just across the nearest dimension without any interaction.
A tiny sachet of magic greenery was yet to be burnt in the triangle shaped pocket of a black bong.
I tried to make myself comfortable but my heart rate was too high. That was weird, because I always approach any psychedelic experience with curiosity and joy but with no expectation, picturing it as a blank paper that is about to be drawn. But this time it was different. Panic...
A tiny sachet of magic greenery was yet to be burnt in the triangle shaped pocket of a black bong.
I tried to make myself comfortable but my heart rate was too high. That was weird, because I always approach any psychedelic experience with curiosity and joy but with no expectation, picturing it as a blank paper that is about to be drawn. But this time it was different. Panic...
#identity
#death
#spiritual
#scary
#fear
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Wake Up From That Nightmare Screaming With Fright
After taking a shower,
Gail walked over to a
mirror, dropped the
towel and stared at
her naked reflection
before seeing Robert
creeping towards her
with a sharp knife
which made her wake
up from that nightmare
screaming with fright.
Gail walked over to a
mirror, dropped the
towel and stared at
her naked reflection
before seeing Robert
creeping towards her
with a sharp knife
which made her wake
up from that nightmare
screaming with fright.
#gothic
#fiction
#scary
#FreeVerse
#sensual
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Dollhouse
The little girl opened up the walls.
She ran excitedly down the halls.
To open up her dollhouse.
The dolls all became back plastic,and put on their dresses.
Wearing their dollfaces.
And bright color, happy smiles.
She picked up one of them.
And she played all day.
Then,at the end of the day,she puts them away.
They turn back into their true form.
They walk out of the dollhouse at midnight.
And they head down to the kitchen.
Trying not to make a noise.
They weren't hiding behind their masks anymore. ...
She ran excitedly down the halls.
To open up her dollhouse.
The dolls all became back plastic,and put on their dresses.
Wearing their dollfaces.
And bright color, happy smiles.
She picked up one of them.
And she played all day.
Then,at the end of the day,she puts them away.
They turn back into their true form.
They walk out of the dollhouse at midnight.
And they head down to the kitchen.
Trying not to make a noise.
They weren't hiding behind their masks anymore. ...
#music
#scary
#horror
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Incident Report from November 10
Incident Report
Date: November 10
Time: 1:07 a.m.
Location: South Dallas, Apartment of Lauryn Xxxxxxxxx
Incident: Intruder Report
Reporting Officer: Officer Johnson
Narrative:
On November 10, at approximately 1:07 a.m., Officer Johnson responded to a reported intrusion at the apartment of Lauryn Xxxxxxxx in South Dallas. Ms. Xxxxxxxx was the sole occupant of the residence.
Upon arrival, Officer Johnson observed that the front door of the apartment was slightly ajar. Ms. Xxxxxxxxxx, who initiated the call...
Date: November 10
Time: 1:07 a.m.
Location: South Dallas, Apartment of Lauryn Xxxxxxxxx
Incident: Intruder Report
Reporting Officer: Officer Johnson
Narrative:
On November 10, at approximately 1:07 a.m., Officer Johnson responded to a reported intrusion at the apartment of Lauryn Xxxxxxxx in South Dallas. Ms. Xxxxxxxx was the sole occupant of the residence.
Upon arrival, Officer Johnson observed that the front door of the apartment was slightly ajar. Ms. Xxxxxxxxxx, who initiated the call...
#scary
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Only yesterday
Looking back is easier than moving forward
when everything important is toward
the past, pointing like a sick joke
choking your lungs like acrid smoke.
Life cannot be lived in reverse,
alas, this is love's true curse
to know that the end will eventually come
and you can only play dumb,
pretending that your happy with the situation
knowing but not preventing devastation
Yesterday's sunset and sunrise
were just your hopes and dreams in disguise
as you watch them come and go
never truly being able to know
which...
when everything important is toward
the past, pointing like a sick joke
choking your lungs like acrid smoke.
Life cannot be lived in reverse,
alas, this is love's true curse
to know that the end will eventually come
and you can only play dumb,
pretending that your happy with the situation
knowing but not preventing devastation
Yesterday's sunset and sunrise
were just your hopes and dreams in disguise
as you watch them come and go
never truly being able to know
which...
#sadness
#dark
#scary #despair
#scary #despair
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dangling
Life doesn't have plots and subplots and denouements. It's just a
big collection of loose ends and dangling threads that never get
explained.”—Grant Morrison
on the wing, a sparrow hawk,
his feather rudder dancing with the wind;
or, tiptoeing on his stalk,
a lily-bloom with water woes to mind.
teetering upon his edge,
a child unwary of his pending fall;
deep misgivings for his pledge,
...
big collection of loose ends and dangling threads that never get
explained.”—Grant Morrison
on the wing, a sparrow hawk,
his feather rudder dancing with the wind;
or, tiptoeing on his stalk,
a lily-bloom with water woes to mind.
teetering upon his edge,
a child unwary of his pending fall;
deep misgivings for his pledge,
...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#scary
#risk
#weakness
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Tapestry of Her Soul
#lust
#dark
#erotic
#scary
#seductive
239 reads
9 Comments
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