Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scary
scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Talk About A Bad Dream
Debi Sue was still sleeping.
But she woke up via creaking door.
An insane naked man entered.
He laughed while tearing her clothes off.
She screamed and woke up all alone.
But she woke up via creaking door.
An insane naked man entered.
He laughed while tearing her clothes off.
She screamed and woke up all alone.
#dark
#fiction
#nightmares
#scary
#sex
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On Her Knees Crying Scarlet Tears
After leaving work,
Lisa saw a woman on
her knees crying scarlet tears.
Lisa lifted her
up and saw with shock that she
had no eyes before she lunged.
Lisa saw a woman on
her knees crying scarlet tears.
Lisa lifted her
up and saw with shock that she
had no eyes before she lunged.
#death
#fear
#fiction
#scary
#zombies
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One Dream I Had With A Succubus In It
She moved slowly towards me.
That bitch grew sharp fangs and growled.
I suddenly woke up screaming.
That bitch grew sharp fangs and growled.
I suddenly woke up screaming.
#dialogue
#fiction
#monsters
#scary
#sex
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She Turned Into A Werewolf
A werewolf slashed David dead.
Afterwards, it's bloodthirsty glance looked at Kathy.
She turned into a werewolf.
Afterwards, it's bloodthirsty glance looked at Kathy.
She turned into a werewolf.
#dark
#death
#fiction
#scary
#werewolves
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Shadowed Mortality
Shadowed Mortality”
Spilling skylines of sterling stars slowly align
Three wishes be granted only one at a time
Behind my silhouette chill of lonely embrace
Frozen in judgement staring into blank space
Pierced by stoic sorrow misery closes tomorrow
A heart echoes void, suffocating breath shallow
Digging into my soul revolting back desolation
Agony warps & twists a mind lilly desecration
Reflection diffuses burning honesty line by line
My testimony a sacrament to thee pulped wine
Thy...
Spilling skylines of sterling stars slowly align
Three wishes be granted only one at a time
Behind my silhouette chill of lonely embrace
Frozen in judgement staring into blank space
Pierced by stoic sorrow misery closes tomorrow
A heart echoes void, suffocating breath shallow
Digging into my soul revolting back desolation
Agony warps & twists a mind lilly desecration
Reflection diffuses burning honesty line by line
My testimony a sacrament to thee pulped wine
Thy...
#dark
#fear
#scary
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2 Comments
No deposit, No return
Psychopathic killer out on the street
Killing for pleasure is what feeds his needs
In the name of his leader he does his crime
You'll never hide, there is no more time
You can't control your muscles or brain
The gas controls you, driving you insane
Now you're moving spastically around
Your legs can't bear you, you're falling to the ground
Your eyes are burning in your head
Spontaneous diarrhea is what you get
Blood is flowing out of your ear
There is no hope, the end is near
Chemical gas is his favorite game ...
Killing for pleasure is what feeds his needs
In the name of his leader he does his crime
You'll never hide, there is no more time
You can't control your muscles or brain
The gas controls you, driving you insane
Now you're moving spastically around
Your legs can't bear you, you're falling to the ground
Your eyes are burning in your head
Spontaneous diarrhea is what you get
Blood is flowing out of your ear
There is no hope, the end is near
Chemical gas is his favorite game ...
#dark
#death
#evil
#horror
#scary
133 reads
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We Didn't Know She's Really A Vampire
I know that it's crazy.
We found out Crystal Hargitay's in town.
I let George seduce her.
I got myself ready with my camcorder.
She sank fangs into his naked skin.
We found out Crystal Hargitay's in town.
I let George seduce her.
I got myself ready with my camcorder.
She sank fangs into his naked skin.
#dialogue
#fiction
#scary
#sex
#vampires
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Still Being Afraid Of The Dark
Kate was taking a shower.
Suddenly, the power went out on her.
That made her scream loud.
Suddenly, the power went out on her.
That made her scream loud.
#dark
#emotional
#fiction
#home
#scary
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A World in Chains
How do you uncage a mind—
When the world is in chains?
Your tongue twists knives into brushstrokes,
measuring tape strangling wild winds,
trying to tame, frame, name—
caging the sky in a box too small for its storms.
Cemented thought-cracks splitting—
shards of why, / dissecting the veins of a butterfly’s cry,
your hands scalp the storm,
make a map from the scream—
like naming a star cages its fire.
You gut the unknown, call it science—
burn the art, call it proof—
turn passion into puzzles,
art into...
When the world is in chains?
Your tongue twists knives into brushstrokes,
measuring tape strangling wild winds,
trying to tame, frame, name—
caging the sky in a box too small for its storms.
Cemented thought-cracks splitting—
shards of why, / dissecting the veins of a butterfly’s cry,
your hands scalp the storm,
make a map from the scream—
like naming a star cages its fire.
You gut the unknown, call it science—
burn the art, call it proof—
turn passion into puzzles,
art into...
#art
#scary
#WritingPoetry
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4 Comments
The Others
As I previously mentioned she was encountering "Them"
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
#aging
#evil
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
118 reads
6 Comments
Walls, sheets, curtains, all white...
In the silence of the night shadows creep.
Whispers of the unknown stir the soul.
A chill descends, fingers cold and thin,
tugging at the edges of sanity.
The walls breathe a pulse within the stone.
Echoes of footsteps, unseen yet near.
Eyes in the darkness, staring, unblinking.
A presence felt, but never seen.
The air grows thick, a suffocating dread.
Heartbeat pounding like a distant drum.
A flicker of light reveals a hollow face.
Fleshless grin, frozen in eternal scream.
Hands reach from the void,...
Whispers of the unknown stir the soul.
A chill descends, fingers cold and thin,
tugging at the edges of sanity.
The walls breathe a pulse within the stone.
Echoes of footsteps, unseen yet near.
Eyes in the darkness, staring, unblinking.
A presence felt, but never seen.
The air grows thick, a suffocating dread.
Heartbeat pounding like a distant drum.
A flicker of light reveals a hollow face.
Fleshless grin, frozen in eternal scream.
Hands reach from the void,...
#anxiety
#apathy
#emptiness
#ghosts
#scary
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Them
She moves around with caution
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
#aging
#confusion
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
107 reads
15 Comments
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