Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scary
scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Others
As I previously mentioned she was encountering "Them"
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
#aging
#evil
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
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6 Comments
Walls, sheets, curtains, all white...
In the silence of the night shadows creep.
Whispers of the unknown stir the soul.
A chill descends, fingers cold and thin,
tugging at the edges of sanity.
The walls breathe a pulse within the stone.
Echoes of footsteps, unseen yet near.
Eyes in the darkness, staring, unblinking.
A presence felt, but never seen.
The air grows thick, a suffocating dread.
Heartbeat pounding like a distant drum.
A flicker of light reveals a hollow face.
Fleshless grin, frozen in eternal scream.
Hands reach from the void,...
Whispers of the unknown stir the soul.
A chill descends, fingers cold and thin,
tugging at the edges of sanity.
The walls breathe a pulse within the stone.
Echoes of footsteps, unseen yet near.
Eyes in the darkness, staring, unblinking.
A presence felt, but never seen.
The air grows thick, a suffocating dread.
Heartbeat pounding like a distant drum.
A flicker of light reveals a hollow face.
Fleshless grin, frozen in eternal scream.
Hands reach from the void,...
#anxiety
#apathy
#emptiness
#ghosts
#scary
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8 Comments
Them
She moves around with caution
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
#aging
#confusion
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
68 reads
15 Comments
The Ring
To: Anybody
Once there was an girl that was named Samara. And she had a father who didn't care about her. So one day her mom who loves her drowned her in the dark well. And then there was a girl that was not Samara. And she had a boyfriend, basically. They watched this movie; got a call. The call said, " you will die in 7 days".
And the girl fell into the well, and was never to be seen again. Same as the boy. The end.
From, somebody.
Once there was an girl that was named Samara. And she had a father who didn't care about her. So one day her mom who loves her drowned her in the dark well. And then there was a girl that was not Samara. And she had a boyfriend, basically. They watched this movie; got a call. The call said, " you will die in 7 days".
And the girl fell into the well, and was never to be seen again. Same as the boy. The end.
From, somebody.
#nightmares
#scary
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4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity's ass whooping!
#hurt
#lust
#scary
84 reads
4 Comments
10 Things you can do with his or her remains
1) Feed the homeless
2) Make wallets, belts
3) If they have beautiful hair, scalp them and make wigs to sell
4) Props for a horror film you create and self release
5) Leave parts in restaurant bathrooms, especially fast food joints
6) UPS to relatives for a visit
7) Watch em rot
8) Use their blood & organs to create a masterpiece of art
9) Pack them in suitcases and throw them on a Greyhound
10) Become a cannibal and eat them. Bring some relatives or friends over and tell them your creating this explosive, cuisine from somewhere in the world....
2) Make wallets, belts
3) If they have beautiful hair, scalp them and make wigs to sell
4) Props for a horror film you create and self release
5) Leave parts in restaurant bathrooms, especially fast food joints
6) UPS to relatives for a visit
7) Watch em rot
8) Use their blood & organs to create a masterpiece of art
9) Pack them in suitcases and throw them on a Greyhound
10) Become a cannibal and eat them. Bring some relatives or friends over and tell them your creating this explosive, cuisine from somewhere in the world....
#food
#horror
#murder
#satirical
#scary
102 reads
11 Comments
Come One, Come All
Welcome to a place you have never seen before
A place that you will find seems so familiar
You see, the grizzly truth is that this place has always been
It always has and always will be all within
Right this way I'll be your guide
Through the darkest reaches of your mind
Soon you'll see what it's like inside
Everything you've always tried to hide
Don't you fret, don't close your eyes
You've had this coming for a very long time
Don't you worry, it will all be fine
After all, everybody here wants to die
All within,...
A place that you will find seems so familiar
You see, the grizzly truth is that this place has always been
It always has and always will be all within
Right this way I'll be your guide
Through the darkest reaches of your mind
Soon you'll see what it's like inside
Everything you've always tried to hide
Don't you fret, don't close your eyes
You've had this coming for a very long time
Don't you worry, it will all be fine
After all, everybody here wants to die
All within,...
#dark
#evil
#fear
#nightmares
#scary
102 reads
9 Comments
Anyone getting this for Xmas this year?
Besides Big Brother, who else will create a profile on you?
#evil
#minimalist
#scary
#science
#technology
97 reads
15 Comments
Latest Victim Of A Jack The Ripper Wannabe
Linda came home from partying.
Someone turned the lights off on her.
Her corpse was found slashed.
Someone turned the lights off on her.
Her corpse was found slashed.
#dark
#death
#fiction
#home
#scary
66 reads
0 Comments
What She Saw Before Getting Raped
April suddenly heard a
crash, turned off the
water and stepped out
of the shower to see
Derek get slammed
against a wall like some
rag doll by a muscle
bound brute in the nude.
She screamed loudly
as he moved himself
closer towards his
latest helpless victim.
crash, turned off the
water and stepped out
of the shower to see
Derek get slammed
against a wall like some
rag doll by a muscle
bound brute in the nude.
She screamed loudly
as he moved himself
closer towards his
latest helpless victim.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#home
#scary
#sex
90 reads
0 Comments
To Heaven
#dark
#drugs
#horror
#scary
#sex
120 reads
5 Comments
Nude Sunbather Massacre
Linda was sunbathing outside naked.
That's before she saw Mark with daggers.
She screamed before he slashed.
That's before she saw Mark with daggers.
She screamed before he slashed.
#death
#fiction
#scary
#sex
#summer
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