Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scary
scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Like A Scene From Some Horror Movie
After she got done
with taking her shower, Rose
heard a window getting smashed.
She ran out of the
bathroom and saw some nutcase
ready to use a steak knife.
with taking her shower, Rose
heard a window getting smashed.
She ran out of the
bathroom and saw some nutcase
ready to use a steak knife.
#murder
#death
#home
#fiction
#scary
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Styx's Ripples
Deep underground
Where the bodies are buried
Fall asleep to the sound
Rhythmic, rowing the ferry
Souls being carried
From where they were found
Frightened and wary
Quick glances around
What’s next may be scary
Their ghosts may be drowned
Stay composed, but just barely
Try not to look down
Anxiety heightens, tensions tightly wound
Where angels tread nary
Fears spoken aloud
Matters not if you’re very
Obscure or renowned
Ferryman ignores queries
To fate we are bound ...
Where the bodies are buried
Fall asleep to the sound
Rhythmic, rowing the ferry
Souls being carried
From where they were found
Frightened and wary
Quick glances around
What’s next may be scary
Their ghosts may be drowned
Stay composed, but just barely
Try not to look down
Anxiety heightens, tensions tightly wound
Where angels tread nary
Fears spoken aloud
Matters not if you’re very
Obscure or renowned
Ferryman ignores queries
To fate we are bound ...
#anxiety
#dark
#death
#scary
#mythology
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Forbidden Treats
a Halloween tale
It’s been eleven autumns since
the toffee apples made their rounds
and all fell down, with two not getting up
again; the keening sounds
of parents filled the little neighbourhood,
but it’s been more than a decade now,
and trick or treaters must make good
the promise of sweets on Halloween night.
‘After all, McGillicuddy’s dead…’
kids heard their parents say behind doors,
the French teacher still in each head,
the night he went insane and gave
the apples a stench of bitter almonds,
ushering boys...
It’s been eleven autumns since
the toffee apples made their rounds
and all fell down, with two not getting up
again; the keening sounds
of parents filled the little neighbourhood,
but it’s been more than a decade now,
and trick or treaters must make good
the promise of sweets on Halloween night.
‘After all, McGillicuddy’s dead…’
kids heard their parents say behind doors,
the French teacher still in each head,
the night he went insane and gave
the apples a stench of bitter almonds,
ushering boys...
#Halloween
#scary
#ghosts #horror
#ghosts #horror
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Slayer
#dark
#evil
#Halloween #scary
#Halloween #scary
103 reads
2 Comments
Farter Starter
#Halloween
#scary
#funny #StephenKing
#funny #StephenKing
78 reads
2 Comments
BILLY - THE REVOLUTIONIST!
I feel like a revolutionist today, folks!
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
#hate
#rejection
#scary
#despair
#disappointment
369 reads
34 Comments
It Wore a Red Leather Dress
In my peripheral vision I saw a vision
The waving in the breeze of a red leather dress
Skin tight around the hips open all the way to those red leather boots
The temptation to peek made me nervous at first
Somehow her legs blended in so well I could barely see them.
Each step opened the slit down the back
Exposing two shadowy shapes of what I thought might be legs
But I just couldn't see below the knee
Until her red leather boots glowed underneath
I walk around but somehow her back stayed facing me
"Her" indeed, it was hard...
The waving in the breeze of a red leather dress
Skin tight around the hips open all the way to those red leather boots
The temptation to peek made me nervous at first
Somehow her legs blended in so well I could barely see them.
Each step opened the slit down the back
Exposing two shadowy shapes of what I thought might be legs
But I just couldn't see below the knee
Until her red leather boots glowed underneath
I walk around but somehow her back stayed facing me
"Her" indeed, it was hard...
#dark
#death
#scary #vampires
#scary #vampires
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9 Comments
Halloween fun
#scary
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2 Comments
The Whining
Years ago I got an offer to be the caretaker
Of the beautiful Overshook Hotel during the winter
So that October I packed up my wife and children
My laptop, some paper and my trusty old printer
On the drive up I kept thinking about my poetry
I could write and record my voice on cassette
But the kids started with the whining all the way up
Constantly asking “dad, dad, are we there yet?”
We had the entire hotel to ourselves
I could finally have some peace and quiet
I’d have a great time spittin’ rhymes
Eating...
Of the beautiful Overshook Hotel during the winter
So that October I packed up my wife and children
My laptop, some paper and my trusty old printer
On the drive up I kept thinking about my poetry
I could write and record my voice on cassette
But the kids started with the whining all the way up
Constantly asking “dad, dad, are we there yet?”
We had the entire hotel to ourselves
I could finally have some peace and quiet
I’d have a great time spittin’ rhymes
Eating...
#Halloween
#scary
#funny #horror
#funny #horror
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Halloween Shower Scene
If you want to see me in the shower
You must step beyond the translucent curtain
No peekaboo for you, it's all in or keep out
Let your wet splash down like the first autumn rain
Cleanse my metal with your soft dirty hands
Covered in the lather of coconut creme
Scrub every inch of my shining armor
With your teasing and tantalizing tongue
Don't stop my screaming until you are done
The Halloween full Moon arouses my curse
Where the wolf hiding within is released to do worse
The hunger to taste your sweet candy coating ...
You must step beyond the translucent curtain
No peekaboo for you, it's all in or keep out
Let your wet splash down like the first autumn rain
Cleanse my metal with your soft dirty hands
Covered in the lather of coconut creme
Scrub every inch of my shining armor
With your teasing and tantalizing tongue
Don't stop my screaming until you are done
The Halloween full Moon arouses my curse
Where the wolf hiding within is released to do worse
The hunger to taste your sweet candy coating ...
#sex
#erotic
#spiritual
#scary
#dirty
274 reads
9 Comments
They're All Going to Laugh at You
#Halloween
#scary
#funny
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Dumbwaiter
a horror short
Jeanette could hear ropes through the walls. Even with a corridor separating her bedroom and living-cum-dining room. They were moving up and down, creaking as they chafed against rusted braces.
It was past midnight. She sighed, climbed out of bed, and went looking for the key to the lock that she’d used to seal the antique dumbwaiter in her flat. The dumbwaiter communicated with a disused cellar.
She found the key in a drawer but on going to the living room stopped as she heard a bump behind the two little doors, which bounced in their frame...
Jeanette could hear ropes through the walls. Even with a corridor separating her bedroom and living-cum-dining room. They were moving up and down, creaking as they chafed against rusted braces.
It was past midnight. She sighed, climbed out of bed, and went looking for the key to the lock that she’d used to seal the antique dumbwaiter in her flat. The dumbwaiter communicated with a disused cellar.
She found the key in a drawer but on going to the living room stopped as she heard a bump behind the two little doors, which bounced in their frame...
#death
#evil
#scary #horror
#scary #horror
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