Scary by Top Critiquers Poems
#scary
scary by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The Phantom Villian And A Queen With A Cat In Her Hat
It was the strangest thing I'd ever seen
The dead cat in her hat
Lying next to the queen
A lantern was lit
That exposed where her brain had exploded
And left her twisted body quite eroded
It's so hard to be sure
What actually happened that night
To make the queen and her cat
Be brutally bludgeoned like that
For the kitty's eyes were missing
And it's tongue had turned black
Was it the queen or her cat
That first met their demise
No one could tell from the Queen's half opened eyes
Which one was the intended...
The dead cat in her hat
Lying next to the queen
A lantern was lit
That exposed where her brain had exploded
And left her twisted body quite eroded
It's so hard to be sure
What actually happened that night
To make the queen and her cat
Be brutally bludgeoned like that
For the kitty's eyes were missing
And it's tongue had turned black
Was it the queen or her cat
That first met their demise
No one could tell from the Queen's half opened eyes
Which one was the intended...
#death
#evil
#cats
#scary
#horror
334 reads
9 Comments
fickle
darkness plight will you see me tonight?
conflicted feelings say maybe
I consult the stars and they say yes
oblations given for my shadow
who summons the ferocity of you
I am gentle and say no, don't touch
wisdom understands this
sullen reprisal says damn it
I can't figure you in this equation
listless time is staggering on
in truth I am dying one day at a time
the cards fall and I see the joker
I'm wearing a poker face
you'll never know me, little tenderness
I am scary disturb my darkness and...
conflicted feelings say maybe
I consult the stars and they say yes
oblations given for my shadow
who summons the ferocity of you
I am gentle and say no, don't touch
wisdom understands this
sullen reprisal says damn it
I can't figure you in this equation
listless time is staggering on
in truth I am dying one day at a time
the cards fall and I see the joker
I'm wearing a poker face
you'll never know me, little tenderness
I am scary disturb my darkness and...
#dark
#gothic
#scary #StreamOfConsciousness
#scary #StreamOfConsciousness
338 reads
1 Comment
Abstract
sitting in this spider web
I feel the creepy
...crawlers...
dark...
in this corner
night lurkers sing
blissed
by the Chinese tradition
waves of sound infusing
cocoon of my heart
the claw sinks in
syncs...
time relays
until
death do us part
I feel the creepy
...crawlers...
dark...
in this corner
night lurkers sing
blissed
by the Chinese tradition
waves of sound infusing
cocoon of my heart
the claw sinks in
syncs...
time relays
until
death do us part
#night
#shadows
#music
#scary
#insomnia
570 reads
10 Comments
Cat and Mouse
Trying to read you
Not easy
Cat and mouse
Gatekeeper
Keeps bag of cheese close by
Cuts off a piece
The cat and mouse each want it
He watches amused
One is a sadist
One is a hunter
One is elusive
Not easy
Cat and mouse
Gatekeeper
Keeps bag of cheese close by
Cuts off a piece
The cat and mouse each want it
He watches amused
One is a sadist
One is a hunter
One is elusive
#dark
#evil
#scary #nightmares
#scary #nightmares
349 reads
16 Comments
Slayer
#dark
#evil
#Halloween #scary
#Halloween #scary
107 reads
2 Comments
BILLY - THE REVOLUTIONIST!
I feel like a revolutionist today, folks!
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
#hate
#rejection
#scary
#despair
#disappointment
378 reads
34 Comments
Nightmare From Hell
In my nightmares
I see myself
pounding my oldest
brother's face into
the concrete to the
point where I can't stop
I wake up pissed off
At the whole freaking world
Taking my anger out
on everyone including
My famiy which
isn't good for my soul
I see myself
pounding my oldest
brother's face into
the concrete to the
point where I can't stop
I wake up pissed off
At the whole freaking world
Taking my anger out
on everyone including
My famiy which
isn't good for my soul
#dark
#death
#evil
#scary
#nightmares
472 reads
2 Comments
Sipping Anesthesia
Welcome to my anesthesia, a lonely puppeteer
my quill for a corpse in dark schizophrenia
of a broken mind lusting for the light
a maniacal creeping thunder with a face of onion skin
menacing shadows touched by fingers of paranoia
of a lonely generic puppeteer with the bearings of strings
masquerading walking in molasses of the twilight's lipstick
sipping anesthesia through a straw
my quill for a corpse in dark schizophrenia
of a broken mind lusting for the light
a maniacal creeping thunder with a face of onion skin
menacing shadows touched by fingers of paranoia
of a lonely generic puppeteer with the bearings of strings
masquerading walking in molasses of the twilight's lipstick
sipping anesthesia through a straw
#dark
#scary
#WritingPoetry
214 reads
4 Comments
The Bloody Hit
Hell.. I do not know what me and my Gee was getting into
All I know we were supposed to have met the Crips and their crew
The exchange of the payoff dope was near a cemetery
I’m from the hood and we make a drive pickup in the night, strapped up, and in solidarity
Out the Hummer me and my boys
Pulling back the hammer on our weapons of some high-powerful toys
The scene looked like a set up from the start
Fog swirling around my Vera Wang stilettos, we knee deep in the dusk of dark
I told my crew...
All I know we were supposed to have met the Crips and their crew
The exchange of the payoff dope was near a cemetery
I’m from the hood and we make a drive pickup in the night, strapped up, and in solidarity
Out the Hummer me and my boys
Pulling back the hammer on our weapons of some high-powerful toys
The scene looked like a set up from the start
Fog swirling around my Vera Wang stilettos, we knee deep in the dusk of dark
I told my crew...
#Halloween
#scary
#horror #zombies
#horror #zombies
259 reads
Halloween fun
#scary
83 reads
2 Comments
Groans of Halloween
Groans of Halloween
The gust of the wind never reached my window.
Yet the lights flickered on and off.
A flash of lightning could be seen from afar.
The roar of hollowing groans.
It was a deafening sound that was getting closer and closer
They moaned in sheer agony, they stirred, they all uprose
Not a word was spoken, only eyes that glowed in fright.
The site was strange; could I be dreaming, perhaps?
To have seen the dead rise was not what my mind could comprehend
Where the hell did they come from? Was it through...
The gust of the wind never reached my window.
Yet the lights flickered on and off.
A flash of lightning could be seen from afar.
The roar of hollowing groans.
It was a deafening sound that was getting closer and closer
They moaned in sheer agony, they stirred, they all uprose
Not a word was spoken, only eyes that glowed in fright.
The site was strange; could I be dreaming, perhaps?
To have seen the dead rise was not what my mind could comprehend
Where the hell did they come from? Was it through...
#fiction
#scary
115 reads
3 Comments
those three children
We used to study in metro city and live in college hostel there.
Annual exams were coming and we used to study at night
Dinner was early at night, now I was hungry while reading
Me and my friend went out to for tea with the permission of the warden.
our college campus was huge so We took the cycles and just reached half a kilometer
n we saw from a distance that some people were going round and round in circle with some burning thing on their heads
We got a bit scared because we've never seen anything like this before
Nevertheless, we went ahead with some...
Annual exams were coming and we used to study at night
Dinner was early at night, now I was hungry while reading
Me and my friend went out to for tea with the permission of the warden.
our college campus was huge so We took the cycles and just reached half a kilometer
n we saw from a distance that some people were going round and round in circle with some burning thing on their heads
We got a bit scared because we've never seen anything like this before
Nevertheless, we went ahead with some...
#scary
#ghosts
207 reads
10 Comments
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