Poems About Rivers Seeking Honest Critique
#river
Poems about rivers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
25th Feb 2022 00:01am
25th Feb 2022 00:01am
EDDIES
The river created you
Because she has no time
For people who are stuck
To try to stick
Themselves to her
Because she has no time
For people who are stuck
To try to stick
Themselves to her
#river
#nature
#MovingOn
260 reads
2 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
24th Feb 2022 11:56pm
24th Feb 2022 11:56pm
WORDS IN SEARCH OF ME
I am the heart
Of the river
In search
Of the sea
Of the river
In search
Of the sea
#river
#sea
#WritingPoetry
280 reads
2 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
18th Feb 2022 4:00am
18th Feb 2022 4:00am
Wedded Forever
moisture
and meditation
waves
rhythmic or chaotic
threatening to engulf
yet buoying supporting
pond surface flat reflective
mirroring
moisture
and meditation
depths dark secretive
enticing
currents gentle or forceful
unidirectional
yet sometimes forked
leading to parallel paths
moisture
and meditation
(C) 2022 Raibeart Bruis
and meditation
waves
rhythmic or chaotic
threatening to engulf
yet buoying supporting
pond surface flat reflective
mirroring
moisture
and meditation
depths dark secretive
enticing
currents gentle or forceful
unidirectional
yet sometimes forked
leading to parallel paths
moisture
and meditation
(C) 2022 Raibeart Bruis
#river
#water
#meditation
282 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
4th Feb 2022 9:52pm
4th Feb 2022 9:52pm
RIPPLES IN THE POND
Sitting here in this moment of peace and tranquility, as I glaze off into the horizon as I exchange my thoughts so freely, with the calmness of the breeze whispering through the water. Yet it is here I feel entwine in the mirror reflection, that reflects off the ripples in the water staring up back at me. For even as I stare up into the distant skies, I could see the differences between the characters in the clouds, just floating silently creating situations of shapes and patterns. But yet WHY IS IT WE NEVER TAKE THE TIME AND PATIENCE, TO LEARN THAT TRANQUILITY IS ALL AROUND US. FOR WHY DO WE...
#river
#sky
#clouds
#nature
#mountains
435 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
14th Jan 2022 4:51pm
14th Jan 2022 4:51pm
silent river
There comes a point where we need to stop just pulling people out of the river.
We need to go upstream and find out why they're falling in."—Desmond Tutu.
so easily
you pull me in,
calm, cool, calculated;
so greedily
you make me sin,
damn fool, captivated.
and yet you spare me
not one glance,
altho so nearly
i would dance
the...
We need to go upstream and find out why they're falling in."—Desmond Tutu.
so easily
you pull me in,
calm, cool, calculated;
so greedily
you make me sin,
damn fool, captivated.
and yet you spare me
not one glance,
altho so nearly
i would dance
the...
#death
#river
#silence
#fate
#travel
440 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 8:17pm
28th Nov 2021 8:17pm
TO ESCAPE FROM THE WORLD
Sometimes it is worth and necessary that we step, out the door to escape to that far away place. Nestle between the mountains and streams of our imagination, that runs through the valley hidden behind the skies and clouds. That secret universe lock in a world where, there is no time or space only your own imagination. To be awaken and felt, as your consciousness awakens the process of the moment. Where we can find the right place Nestle in the past and future and present that the visionary world becomes of a modern day life. Where we are equal yet not the same, as we each think differently as...
#forest
#river
#clouds
#nature
#mountains
381 reads
0 Comments
Wornwolf
Poem Published
12th Oct 2021 9:53am
12th Oct 2021 9:53am
The water
Water is amazing thing,
Brought her closest to peace,
Rather it roaring or silent as can be,
Cloud cover, sunshine, or moonlit,
Let me drift,swim,put feet in or just sit and gaze upon the water,
It brings calmness to my brain and soul,
Bit by bit strings of words unravel and unwind,
Emotions, thoughts so intertwine,
Ocean, rivers, waterfalls, channels, creeks, bayou, ponds, lakes and puddles,
Even rain falling fast from the sky,
Believe in when I say, can always let the water wash away,
Allow your mind to be silent,
Or let the...
Brought her closest to peace,
Rather it roaring or silent as can be,
Cloud cover, sunshine, or moonlit,
Let me drift,swim,put feet in or just sit and gaze upon the water,
It brings calmness to my brain and soul,
Bit by bit strings of words unravel and unwind,
Emotions, thoughts so intertwine,
Ocean, rivers, waterfalls, channels, creeks, bayou, ponds, lakes and puddles,
Even rain falling fast from the sky,
Believe in when I say, can always let the water wash away,
Allow your mind to be silent,
Or let the...
#river
#sea
#beach
#nature
#travel
364 reads
2 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
28th Aug 2021 12:48pm
28th Aug 2021 12:48pm
River Phoenix
Chaos as a constant.
I shall.
Open armed embrace.
Defiance & harmony.
Guiding the river.
Winding where it needs to wind.
Cut strait where it needs to be cut strait.
And giving over
In order
To feel alive
Sometimes
Like you -
At this time
Surging in my veins,
Surfacing in my blood stream
An art work
Expressed in fire work
Whispering to a great work
& a guardian angel
As a black clad goddess
Dancing in contours of goddess
Across...
I shall.
Open armed embrace.
Defiance & harmony.
Guiding the river.
Winding where it needs to wind.
Cut strait where it needs to be cut strait.
And giving over
In order
To feel alive
Sometimes
Like you -
At this time
Surging in my veins,
Surfacing in my blood stream
An art work
Expressed in fire work
Whispering to a great work
& a guardian angel
As a black clad goddess
Dancing in contours of goddess
Across...
#beauty
#river
#fire #water
#fire #water
357 reads
8 Comments
StaticEyes
Poem Published
10th Aug 2021 1:49pm
10th Aug 2021 1:49pm
Grasping Spring
Porotic bones of fallen seasons
pierce winter's ash,
welcoming Aurora's spreading warmth.
Her marmalades mixing marigold
as reflections dance
upon rivers of fractured glass,
their toes enflaming indigos
where brackish blackness
once consumed the purest blues.
Algid hands reach forth,
skeletal,
feeding the emerald skin
of another verdant spring
still slightly out of reach
and yet, they know
better days
are just around the bend.....
pierce winter's ash,
welcoming Aurora's spreading warmth.
Her marmalades mixing marigold
as reflections dance
upon rivers of fractured glass,
their toes enflaming indigos
where brackish blackness
once consumed the purest blues.
Algid hands reach forth,
skeletal,
feeding the emerald skin
of another verdant spring
still slightly out of reach
and yet, they know
better days
are just around the bend.....
#river
#spring
#nature #dawn
#nature #dawn
496 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
20th Jun 2021 11:51pm
20th Jun 2021 11:51pm
it needs more digging
turns out they've discovered a diplodocus print on the south bank of the thames, although not
the original painting
the original painting
#city
#river
#funny
#art
#historical
350 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
9th Jun 2021 6:59am
9th Jun 2021 6:59am
gently flows the river
a garland cinquain
gently
through the rushes,
from its cradle creeping,
comes a cool and sparkling fountain
singing.
singing,
flows the river,
where the children gather
from her bosom perch and mullets,
wide-eyed.
wide-eyed
sun, descending
to its evening ocean,
paints the skies with hints of golden
colours.
colours
of the rainbow
melt into the ocean,
where from mountain toil its rest comes
sweetly.
sweetly,
on the seashore, ...
gently
through the rushes,
from its cradle creeping,
comes a cool and sparkling fountain
singing.
singing,
flows the river,
where the children gather
from her bosom perch and mullets,
wide-eyed.
wide-eyed
sun, descending
to its evening ocean,
paints the skies with hints of golden
colours.
colours
of the rainbow
melt into the ocean,
where from mountain toil its rest comes
sweetly.
sweetly,
on the seashore, ...
#river
#sea
#nature #fate
#nature #fate
378 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
6th Jun 2021 00:21am
6th Jun 2021 00:21am
melancholy by the thames
he wonders how many
have thrown themselves in at this very spot where he idly
sits, skimming stones ..
have thrown themselves in at this very spot where he idly
sits, skimming stones ..
#suicide
#river
#despair
383 reads
2 Comments
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