Rhyming Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#rhyming
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Today 6:55pm
Today 6:55pm
Boredom Prevails
#boredom
#dirty
#funny
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
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3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 12:17pm
11th Jan 2025 12:17pm
I won't rest
In life I was silenced
never free by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
never free by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
#freedom
#revenge
#rhyming #silence
#rhyming #silence
54 reads
9 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 5:31am
7th Jan 2025 5:31am
Waterfall Blackout Roadkill - Seussinator Nominclature #1
When a blackout came to fall
upon the backwater town of Watermill
a troll made a backfill in the hole atop the waterfall.
It has to do with a waterfall, the blackout, and roadkill swill.
Read on to hear
the fallout of it all.
The Watermill Roadkill Grill & Watering Hole
atop the waterfall in our town called Watermill
was forced to close because of a troll
who turned their road kill into black water swill.
So they called me,
head of the Watermill Troll Control Patrol.
We drove up the hill to see the...
upon the backwater town of Watermill
a troll made a backfill in the hole atop the waterfall.
It has to do with a waterfall, the blackout, and roadkill swill.
Read on to hear
the fallout of it all.
The Watermill Roadkill Grill & Watering Hole
atop the waterfall in our town called Watermill
was forced to close because of a troll
who turned their road kill into black water swill.
So they called me,
head of the Watermill Troll Control Patrol.
We drove up the hill to see the...
#rhyming
22 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:19am
5th Jan 2025 2:19am
Kissers
There are slow kisser
There are fast kissers
There are hard kissers
There are soft kissers
There are the oh hell I got to kisser
Then there ae the hell yea I’ma kisser
There are the giggle kisser
There are the nervous kisser
There are the peak a bo kisser
Then there is the neck kisser
There is the down below kisser (Fav)
There is the accidental head butt, teeth tap, kisser
Let's not forget the dry kisser
Or wet kisser
Whatever you are, you are the perfect kisser for somebody, Mwah
There are fast kissers
There are hard kissers
There are soft kissers
There are the oh hell I got to kisser
Then there ae the hell yea I’ma kisser
There are the giggle kisser
There are the nervous kisser
There are the peak a bo kisser
Then there is the neck kisser
There is the down below kisser (Fav)
There is the accidental head butt, teeth tap, kisser
Let's not forget the dry kisser
Or wet kisser
Whatever you are, you are the perfect kisser for somebody, Mwah
#rhyming
103 reads
24 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 9:43pm
2nd Jan 2025 9:43pm
I Like To Chase ( A rap)
#rhyming
80 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 12:58pm
1st Jan 2025 12:58pm
It can happen
When will this be over?
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#identity
#rhyming
#sex
67 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
Your two front teeth
#Christmas
#lyrics
#parody
#rhyming
#satirical
105 reads
8 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 10:22am
21st Dec 2024 10:22am
Besma
Besma, rhyme old poetess
The word for her a charming princess
Poetry is her valiant knight
A guiding Muse who pops at night
So obsessive she is about spelling
With a genuine flair for creative writing
Her forte is the soulful human touch
So elated when praised as such
Watching romance and action films her leisure
Reading and listening to music for her a pleasure
Horror movies make her heart sink
For sci-fi stories she has no flowing ink
To serve and enlighten, her wish and dream
With Love, peace and joy Humanity will...
The word for her a charming princess
Poetry is her valiant knight
A guiding Muse who pops at night
So obsessive she is about spelling
With a genuine flair for creative writing
Her forte is the soulful human touch
So elated when praised as such
Watching romance and action films her leisure
Reading and listening to music for her a pleasure
Horror movies make her heart sink
For sci-fi stories she has no flowing ink
To serve and enlighten, her wish and dream
With Love, peace and joy Humanity will...
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#myself
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
87 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:18am
19th Dec 2024 11:18am
The Passion Dominates
The locking of our lips has a burn that becomes uncontrollable
Let the passion dominate, where nothing else is negotiable
Our teasing & pleasing creates an intoxicating, exhilarated desire
Making our time spent together more beloved before we expire
Our desirous fires rage endlessly
Undeniable and unrelenting
Makes our orgasmic pleasure we share worth all the repenting
You're a delicate beauty that my heart utterly loves & adores
While I am away from you, my loneliness seems to have no cure
An enigma that encompasses...
Let the passion dominate, where nothing else is negotiable
Our teasing & pleasing creates an intoxicating, exhilarated desire
Making our time spent together more beloved before we expire
Our desirous fires rage endlessly
Undeniable and unrelenting
Makes our orgasmic pleasure we share worth all the repenting
You're a delicate beauty that my heart utterly loves & adores
While I am away from you, my loneliness seems to have no cure
An enigma that encompasses...
#erotic
#love
#lover
#rhyming
#sensual
279 reads
16 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 8:24am
19th Dec 2024 8:24am
The Gift Of Muse And The Grace To Inspire
If I have to poetry see and define
My words would shrink and stop to ink
My thoughts would be unable to align
And in confusion I would rather sink..
Visions in words would learn how to speak
Words marvellously moulded by a wordsmith
Far reaching charm a poet would constantly seek
Unique gems adeptly crafted by a goldsmith..
It’s the power to paint and portray
Compose a tune.. an ambient so rare
An art gallery, a rich tapestry to display
Masters of words of sublime flair..
Much more.. the magic of poetry ...
My words would shrink and stop to ink
My thoughts would be unable to align
And in confusion I would rather sink..
Visions in words would learn how to speak
Words marvellously moulded by a wordsmith
Far reaching charm a poet would constantly seek
Unique gems adeptly crafted by a goldsmith..
It’s the power to paint and portray
Compose a tune.. an ambient so rare
An art gallery, a rich tapestry to display
Masters of words of sublime flair..
Much more.. the magic of poetry ...
#art
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
87 reads
6 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 1:05am
19th Dec 2024 1:05am
Want More
The ocean waves keep crashing on the shore
I’ve been told to accept less, but I want more
The moonlight is the only guide that I need; a steady comfort to protect me when I bleed
I write my own destiny; this is what I swore.
Love hurts, but loneliness kills
My goal has been accomplished with the blood that I’ve spilt.
Come and push me into the water; let it ooze in my pores
Even when my lips say “stop”, I keep on wanting more
I’m told that I ask too much, that I should accept what I have
I don’t expect empty souls to ever understand. ...
I’ve been told to accept less, but I want more
The moonlight is the only guide that I need; a steady comfort to protect me when I bleed
I write my own destiny; this is what I swore.
Love hurts, but loneliness kills
My goal has been accomplished with the blood that I’ve spilt.
Come and push me into the water; let it ooze in my pores
Even when my lips say “stop”, I keep on wanting more
I’m told that I ask too much, that I should accept what I have
I don’t expect empty souls to ever understand. ...
#faith
#hope
#rhyming
#sacrifice
#strength
87 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 11:06am
17th Dec 2024 11:06am
Yuletide Sadness
Every year the winds get colder
Their screams cut like knives
Shadows follow my winter walks
Bitter voices carol the night
Dreams of days when the fire would warm me
You were there inside the flame
But you are gone and the years grow bitter
My soul is withered and wrapped with pain
Drifting in my fever there's sadness
Calling me to come back home
Ghosts that dance inside my head
Forever chill that haunts my bones
Dreams of nights where the world seemed alive
That there was time to catch my fall
But I am left with that...
Their screams cut like knives
Shadows follow my winter walks
Bitter voices carol the night
Dreams of days when the fire would warm me
You were there inside the flame
But you are gone and the years grow bitter
My soul is withered and wrapped with pain
Drifting in my fever there's sadness
Calling me to come back home
Ghosts that dance inside my head
Forever chill that haunts my bones
Dreams of nights where the world seemed alive
That there was time to catch my fall
But I am left with that...
#Christmas
#dark
#holiday
#rhyming
#sadness
91 reads
9 Comments
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