Rhyming Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#rhyming
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 2:27pm
5th Mar 2025 2:27pm
Have a f**ked up righteous day!
#CallToAction
#LifeChangingMoment
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 1:04am
5th Mar 2025 1:04am
The Caboose
She was on her way to the quickie mart
Picking up grape soda and some pop tarts
Would you believe she has no money
Figures, she works for a pimp named Sunny
She takes her earnings and blows it all away
Another Friday night, time to get laid
Two weeks later, Sunny is getting fed up
Time is money, she's taking a piss in a cup
Sick and tired of all the abuse
Her ass is referred to as "The Caboose"
How will she know when the time is right
Keep her in the dark, she's a fugly sight
Hopping on the train, leaving far...
Picking up grape soda and some pop tarts
Would you believe she has no money
Figures, she works for a pimp named Sunny
She takes her earnings and blows it all away
Another Friday night, time to get laid
Two weeks later, Sunny is getting fed up
Time is money, she's taking a piss in a cup
Sick and tired of all the abuse
Her ass is referred to as "The Caboose"
How will she know when the time is right
Keep her in the dark, she's a fugly sight
Hopping on the train, leaving far...
#abuse
#rhyming
#SelfDiscovery
#sex
#ShortStory
62 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:48pm
27th Feb 2025 1:48pm
Beware!!
Isolated house far from reach
Prophecy, torture and death unleashed
Life behind these walls
Demented voices call
Blood is all you crave
Mentally deranged & insane
Bodies hang from meat-hooks
Human flesh peeled and cooked
House by the cemetery
Basement is a mortuary
Walk among the tombstones
Rotting flesh, decaying bones
Some buried alive
No one hears their cries
Maggots pour in eating your flesh
A slow agonizing death
Insane family pray for their souls
Funeral’s over, the casket’s closed
Another...
Prophecy, torture and death unleashed
Life behind these walls
Demented voices call
Blood is all you crave
Mentally deranged & insane
Bodies hang from meat-hooks
Human flesh peeled and cooked
House by the cemetery
Basement is a mortuary
Walk among the tombstones
Rotting flesh, decaying bones
Some buried alive
No one hears their cries
Maggots pour in eating your flesh
A slow agonizing death
Insane family pray for their souls
Funeral’s over, the casket’s closed
Another...
#dark
#death
#evil
#horror
#rhyming
85 reads
26 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
Make it a great day!
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#inspirational
#motivational
#rhyming
#support
#uplifting
98 reads
15 Comments
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Paul S...
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:02am
27th Feb 2025 1:02am
how does your city grow
city was grey of an evening
until there was electricity and neon
adverts and car lights
and lamp posts, and oh, I don’t know
perhaps pretty maids all in a row
until there was electricity and neon
adverts and car lights
and lamp posts, and oh, I don’t know
perhaps pretty maids all in a row
#rhyming
82 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 10:27pm
21st Feb 2025 10:27pm
Crystal Winter Sky
The day moves so slowly
Frozen in it's breath
Sun goes down so lonely
In the distant frosty west
Cold, malevolent winds are blowing
All hope has gone away
While fading life is flowing
Into a wintry, snowy haze
Icicles frozen in time
A snow angel spreads her wings to fly
Church bells and gongs chime
Hands reach out into a crystal winter sky
Frozen in it's breath
Sun goes down so lonely
In the distant frosty west
Cold, malevolent winds are blowing
All hope has gone away
While fading life is flowing
Into a wintry, snowy haze
Icicles frozen in time
A snow angel spreads her wings to fly
Church bells and gongs chime
Hands reach out into a crystal winter sky
#heaven
#nature
#rhyming
#spiritual
#winter
86 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 8:33pm
20th Feb 2025 8:33pm
An Elementary Rhyme For No Reason
Spitting out vulgarity
When asked for charity
A motionless bird
Is often never heard
Pick up the loose crumbs
Moisten the tips of your thumbs
Remove your ear from the door
Nothing you haven't heard before
Someone's lazy brown eye
Is looking at me below the sky
Beyond the glass
Is a pain in your ass
There's a reason mom hides
That deadly bottle of formaldehyde
If you'd like to catch snowflakes
Keep a pail nearby for heaven sake
Chocolate is man's best friend
Had...
When asked for charity
A motionless bird
Is often never heard
Pick up the loose crumbs
Moisten the tips of your thumbs
Remove your ear from the door
Nothing you haven't heard before
Someone's lazy brown eye
Is looking at me below the sky
Beyond the glass
Is a pain in your ass
There's a reason mom hides
That deadly bottle of formaldehyde
If you'd like to catch snowflakes
Keep a pail nearby for heaven sake
Chocolate is man's best friend
Had...
#dark
#hell
#magic
#rhyming
#tragedy
80 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 11:40am
20th Feb 2025 11:40am
Jump My Bone
#cars
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
#rhyming
178 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 8:22pm
19th Feb 2025 8:22pm
Titillation
Short is life
Filled with things
Who knows what for
I'll never earn my wings
I think I fulfilled my knowledge
By the age of nine
I guess I could better myself
If I could expand my mind
Some new kind of thrill
Need what I ain't had
Some new kind of rush
I need to go crazy mad
Like a child sucks their mom
Like your daughter eating Jill
This guy needs
Some new kind of thrill
I'm looking, I'm searching
I want something never had before
I'm looking, I'm searching
Something greater...
Filled with things
Who knows what for
I'll never earn my wings
I think I fulfilled my knowledge
By the age of nine
I guess I could better myself
If I could expand my mind
Some new kind of thrill
Need what I ain't had
Some new kind of rush
I need to go crazy mad
Like a child sucks their mom
Like your daughter eating Jill
This guy needs
Some new kind of thrill
I'm looking, I'm searching
I want something never had before
I'm looking, I'm searching
Something greater...
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
72 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
I feel fine
Take a trip through my magic ocean
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
#dreams
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
10 Comments
A_hidden_talent
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 1:25am
19th Feb 2025 1:25am
Valentine's Plea
Valentine's day sucks
For those who are alone..
Just like me..
So I'm writing this poem.
My friends laugh
And call me stupid..
Because I'm not a big believer
In the one called cupid!
I've been on some sites
And I'm still looking..
So If I sound interesting
Let's do a booking! (go for a date)
I'm a hopeless romantic
To the core..
And the more you get to know me
My feelings will outpour
So if you're looking for someone
Who's tall and handsome
Please let me know,
I won't...
For those who are alone..
Just like me..
So I'm writing this poem.
My friends laugh
And call me stupid..
Because I'm not a big believer
In the one called cupid!
I've been on some sites
And I'm still looking..
So If I sound interesting
Let's do a booking! (go for a date)
I'm a hopeless romantic
To the core..
And the more you get to know me
My feelings will outpour
So if you're looking for someone
Who's tall and handsome
Please let me know,
I won't...
#honesty
#love
#relationships #rhyming
#relationships #rhyming
61 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 2:03pm
16th Feb 2025 2:03pm
The Carnival Bizarre
Dissecting the spectacle
limbless woman with tentacles
contortionists jump on trampolines
masturbating in your wet dreams
Clowns perform, drunk with sorrow
fortunes read, no more tomorrow’s
freaks shock as you watch in awe
kids frightened running towards the door
Threw-up up food after some rides
sawdust, lysol, you feel like your gonna die
at last, the show is about to begin
large audience, the lights turned dim
Animals dance, balance, and sway
lion tamer controls, keeping them at bay
cigar tossed as a...
limbless woman with tentacles
contortionists jump on trampolines
masturbating in your wet dreams
Clowns perform, drunk with sorrow
fortunes read, no more tomorrow’s
freaks shock as you watch in awe
kids frightened running towards the door
Threw-up up food after some rides
sawdust, lysol, you feel like your gonna die
at last, the show is about to begin
large audience, the lights turned dim
Animals dance, balance, and sway
lion tamer controls, keeping them at bay
cigar tossed as a...
#dreams
#happiness
#nightmares
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
81 reads
14 Comments
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