Rhyming Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#rhyming
YOU MAKE ME FEEL
#erotic
#rhyming
#sex
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-UMPING
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#rhyming
#sex
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BRING HER ON
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming #seductive
#rhyming #seductive
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Their out there, just be aware
God told me to slay you, so I can stay alive
I slay children
I enjoy to see them in pain
I slay children
Bounded in shackles & chains
I slay children
Lure them in with colorful gum
I slay children
Their last day of having fun
I'll detonate the school bus
Blast out the tires
Explosion so grand
Kids dead from the fire
You all need to die
and that's the price you pay
I'm taking away your precious one
Could be tomorrow or maybe today
I have no regrets
I have no remorse ...
I slay children
I enjoy to see them in pain
I slay children
Bounded in shackles & chains
I slay children
Lure them in with colorful gum
I slay children
Their last day of having fun
I'll detonate the school bus
Blast out the tires
Explosion so grand
Kids dead from the fire
You all need to die
and that's the price you pay
I'm taking away your precious one
Could be tomorrow or maybe today
I have no regrets
I have no remorse ...
#hate
#children
#death
#rhyming
#MentalHealth
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Be Happy, with respect
I see you get a rush
when you make your girlfriend cry
Is this the only way
that provides you you're high
Stop playing the field
She adored you from the start
You're her true love
Quit tearing out her heart
You'll regret
that day will soon come
She'll leave you once and for all
You'll feel broken, you'll become a chump
when you make your girlfriend cry
Is this the only way
that provides you you're high
Stop playing the field
She adored you from the start
You're her true love
Quit tearing out her heart
You'll regret
that day will soon come
She'll leave you once and for all
You'll feel broken, you'll become a chump
#happiness
#love
#girlfriend
#rhyming
#respect
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R.D. Burman..Hindi Film Music Legend
Burman created musical scores
1961 to 1994
Defined the Bollywood sound in all of India
Over 300 scores released, now there's some trivia
Teesri Manzil
Pyar Ka Mausam
Padosan
Jewel Thief...to name a few
Burman fused Indian Classical, Jazz and Rock
Circus, Mariachi, Bossa Nova even some Bach
Spaghetti Westerns, Action, Crime & Romance
Thrillers, Drama, Musicals with song & dance
Apna Desh
Aap Ki Kasam
Sholay
Ghar....to name some more
Married Asha Bhosle in 1980
Was a singer, not...
1961 to 1994
Defined the Bollywood sound in all of India
Over 300 scores released, now there's some trivia
Teesri Manzil
Pyar Ka Mausam
Padosan
Jewel Thief...to name a few
Burman fused Indian Classical, Jazz and Rock
Circus, Mariachi, Bossa Nova even some Bach
Spaghetti Westerns, Action, Crime & Romance
Thrillers, Drama, Musicals with song & dance
Apna Desh
Aap Ki Kasam
Sholay
Ghar....to name some more
Married Asha Bhosle in 1980
Was a singer, not...
#rhyming
#PopCulture
#admiration
#culture
#nonfiction
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COITUS INTERRUPTIS PROPOSITIONIS
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
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OH, I COULD HAVE FUN WITH YOU
Oh, I could have fun with you!
What naughty things we'd get up to!
Tell what you'd like me to do.
You're willing? I'll see it through!
What naughty things we'd get up to!
Tell what you'd like me to do.
You're willing? I'll see it through!
#erotic
#rhyming
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Admire My Tatts
God you look so fucking cool
Sporting that new tattoo
Is it possible if i can look like you?
A rejected member of Motley Crue
Is it because your pet bird died
Write some scripture on your side
Pretty flowers that make you cry
Moisturize them before the skin dries
Pop culture assholes, lack intellect
Short-lived trends, burn in a fiery wreck
Stupid slogans, politically correct
Tiring image, trip to the the dermatologist
I have no sexy tattoo's
Glad I'll never be like you
Looking like a fucking...
Sporting that new tattoo
Is it possible if i can look like you?
A rejected member of Motley Crue
Is it because your pet bird died
Write some scripture on your side
Pretty flowers that make you cry
Moisturize them before the skin dries
Pop culture assholes, lack intellect
Short-lived trends, burn in a fiery wreck
Stupid slogans, politically correct
Tiring image, trip to the the dermatologist
I have no sexy tattoo's
Glad I'll never be like you
Looking like a fucking...
#hate
#rhyming
#satirical
#honesty
#ignorance
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Pervert in my cellar
#sex
#rhyming
#funny
#SelfDiscovery
#orgasm
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Andy Kaufman...Genius
Insisted he wasn't a comedian, jokes he hated
A song & dance man, he has often stated
Early comedy clubs thought he was a hack
Foreign man revealed, they wanted him back
First season of Saturday Night Live
Mighty Mouse performed, in 1975
Elvis impersonation was well respected
Flawless in delivery, absolute perfection
Latka Gravas introduced on taxi, a TV show
Tony Clifton was Andy, in case you didn't know
Jerry Lawler brought him to Memphis
Andy's character was smug & pretentious
Wrestling...
A song & dance man, he has often stated
Early comedy clubs thought he was a hack
Foreign man revealed, they wanted him back
First season of Saturday Night Live
Mighty Mouse performed, in 1975
Elvis impersonation was well respected
Flawless in delivery, absolute perfection
Latka Gravas introduced on taxi, a TV show
Tony Clifton was Andy, in case you didn't know
Jerry Lawler brought him to Memphis
Andy's character was smug & pretentious
Wrestling...
#rhyming
#funny
#admiration
#respect
#nonfiction
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Cemetary Whore
She creeps around the graveyard
eyes any man that enters
lures them in with her stare
angelic beauty
demonic cutie
succumb to her craving
salacious, not behaving
mausoleum is unlocked
clothes removed, but their socks
loves the power she pulls from beyond
like a magician, waving her wand
men are fooled, time and time again
I don't need possession, as I enter her den
Scorching beauty, I want to fuck
She turns away, no such luck
She wants men who can plant a seed ...
eyes any man that enters
lures them in with her stare
angelic beauty
demonic cutie
succumb to her craving
salacious, not behaving
mausoleum is unlocked
clothes removed, but their socks
loves the power she pulls from beyond
like a magician, waving her wand
men are fooled, time and time again
I don't need possession, as I enter her den
Scorching beauty, I want to fuck
She turns away, no such luck
She wants men who can plant a seed ...
#dark
#women
#rhyming #graveyard
#rhyming #graveyard
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