Rhyming Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#rhyming
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 9:55pm
10th Apr 2024 9:55pm
Cemetary Whore
She creeps around the graveyard
eyes any man that enters
lures them in with her stare
angelic beauty
demonic cutie
succumb to her craving
salacious, not behaving
mausoleum is unlocked
clothes removed, but their socks
loves the power she pulls from beyond
like a magician, waving her wand
men are fooled, time and time again
I don't need possession, as I enter her den
Scorching beauty, I want to fuck
She turns away, no such luck
She wants men who can plant a seed ...
eyes any man that enters
lures them in with her stare
angelic beauty
demonic cutie
succumb to her craving
salacious, not behaving
mausoleum is unlocked
clothes removed, but their socks
loves the power she pulls from beyond
like a magician, waving her wand
men are fooled, time and time again
I don't need possession, as I enter her den
Scorching beauty, I want to fuck
She turns away, no such luck
She wants men who can plant a seed ...
#dark
#women
#rhyming #graveyard
#rhyming #graveyard
121 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 9:12pm
10th Apr 2024 9:12pm
There time will come
In life I was silenced, never free
by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
#silence
#rhyming
#freedom #revenge
#freedom #revenge
65 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 11:36am
10th Apr 2024 11:36am
One Day
Birds swim
Fish fly
Reptiles talk
Insects cry
The sun is black
Fire is chill
Humans are mutes
Mind altering pills
Fish fly
Reptiles talk
Insects cry
The sun is black
Fire is chill
Humans are mutes
Mind altering pills
#drugs
#rhyming
80 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 00:29am
10th Apr 2024 00:29am
Distant Shores
The night came on all dismal and dark
the sea acting ever so violent
by the rapid wind howling hark
I long to vanish, to flee
Higher and higher the seas did surge
gale winds louder and louder
vessel consuming water, partly submerged
with torn and shivering sails
Up ahead bleak hills and barren sands
lighthouse flashing so bright
grateful our vessel spotted land
home is where I want to be
the sea acting ever so violent
by the rapid wind howling hark
I long to vanish, to flee
Higher and higher the seas did surge
gale winds louder and louder
vessel consuming water, partly submerged
with torn and shivering sails
Up ahead bleak hills and barren sands
lighthouse flashing so bright
grateful our vessel spotted land
home is where I want to be
#dark
#sea
#storm
#rhyming
#fiction
43 reads
2 Comments
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 7:29am
9th Apr 2024 7:29am
SiLver LiNiNg ( CLOUDy)
Silver lining
Is what I'm finding while
Storms engage ruin a parade sabotaging everything made like memories fade into forgotten footage of steps with unknown distances past always follows last having the task of numbering days that amount to years with a constant count giving a report to time agenda age the BODY and MIND spending life
For different types of people that all share the same air
ClouDy covers proudly tears attached to gears grinding a feeling of mountain climbing to a peak sigh language no words to speak hands that explain there are many Cloudy days ...
Is what I'm finding while
Storms engage ruin a parade sabotaging everything made like memories fade into forgotten footage of steps with unknown distances past always follows last having the task of numbering days that amount to years with a constant count giving a report to time agenda age the BODY and MIND spending life
For different types of people that all share the same air
ClouDy covers proudly tears attached to gears grinding a feeling of mountain climbing to a peak sigh language no words to speak hands that explain there are many Cloudy days ...
#rhyming
54 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 10:57am
8th Apr 2024 10:57am
Betrayal
The Day I returned
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
#betrayal
#night
#religion
#spiritual
#rhyming
64 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 10:47am
8th Apr 2024 10:47am
Foreverness
Within my flesh
My spirit torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
My spirit torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
#dark
#death
#rhyming
#weakness
#vulnerability
49 reads
8 Comments
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 9:59am
7th Apr 2024 9:59am
DREAM all iN mY MiND
Dream all in my MinD
Wide awake easily I followed the signs
Wallowing through time my spoken word rhyme with a pattend design so every line shines
No shade only displayed after being made
It echoes around sound then it catches the last bus out of town leaving formats like "Welcome" door mat outside in the Pouring rain greetings inside the brain transitional landscape of fermented grapes and a bunch of 1970's cassette tapes that require thanking depositing like banking deciding riding home on a poem
Following closely is a ending from BEHIND ...
Wide awake easily I followed the signs
Wallowing through time my spoken word rhyme with a pattend design so every line shines
No shade only displayed after being made
It echoes around sound then it catches the last bus out of town leaving formats like "Welcome" door mat outside in the Pouring rain greetings inside the brain transitional landscape of fermented grapes and a bunch of 1970's cassette tapes that require thanking depositing like banking deciding riding home on a poem
Following closely is a ending from BEHIND ...
#rhyming
57 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 8:22pm
5th Apr 2024 8:22pm
My Most Failed Possession
Drunk skunk, wish you weren't the one
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, You are worthless like an animal
Labeled "rejected" on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything...
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, You are worthless like an animal
Labeled "rejected" on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything...
#kindness
#murder
#evil
#rhyming
#metaphor
61 reads
4 Comments
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 4:21am
4th Apr 2024 4:21am
POEM[eD] <-EVERY DIRECTION
Poem(eD) Every Direction
I wander and roamed
With all that I
owned
Maybe just thoughts of the brightest future sought walking on pallets of sad ballots whistled by many kids who all got displaced underneath the grid
Homeless verses aloneness while Dark tones verses lighter tones fully applying what is known
Does moss gather on a rolling stone?
This poem or telephone with many lines like traffic signs giving directions upon selection emersed in confections making it sweet call forwarding for your favorite Day of the week ...
I wander and roamed
With all that I
owned
Maybe just thoughts of the brightest future sought walking on pallets of sad ballots whistled by many kids who all got displaced underneath the grid
Homeless verses aloneness while Dark tones verses lighter tones fully applying what is known
Does moss gather on a rolling stone?
This poem or telephone with many lines like traffic signs giving directions upon selection emersed in confections making it sweet call forwarding for your favorite Day of the week ...
#rhyming
75 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 7:36am
3rd Apr 2024 7:36am
ROLLING AND ROCKING
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming #passion
#rhyming #passion
159 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 7:14am
3rd Apr 2024 7:14am
HER LABIA
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming #passion
#rhyming #passion
159 reads
2 Comments
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