Poems About Regret Seeking Honest Critique
#regret
Poems about regret seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 8:52pm
21st Dec 2024 8:52pm
I had my outburst with you
I had my outburst with you
you don't see eye to eye
with both have different opinion about things
it is sad that has to be this away
You don't care about me at all
You only care about yourself
I need to be a poet
Because that is who I want to be
I will never stop being a poet
And limit the hours I spend on my computer
It is not a good Idea
you don't see eye to eye
with both have different opinion about things
it is sad that has to be this away
You don't care about me at all
You only care about yourself
I need to be a poet
Because that is who I want to be
I will never stop being a poet
And limit the hours I spend on my computer
It is not a good Idea
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#loneliness
#regret
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 1:49pm
20th Dec 2024 1:49pm
Dirty Little Secret
I regret, not telling you I love you,
When you needed it.
I forget, I always needed you,
And I didn't see it.
I'm losing it; the one I see through.
That I reflect.
When you needed it.
I forget, I always needed you,
And I didn't see it.
I'm losing it; the one I see through.
That I reflect.
#love
#regret
193 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:13am
20th Dec 2024 11:13am
Identity
I bait my own trap
I'll wait for myself to walk in and trip the mine
I'll wait for myself to walk in and trip the mine
#identity
#myself
#regret #SelfReflection
#regret #SelfReflection
110 reads
15 Comments
Miss_Haides
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:51am
20th Dec 2024 4:51am
Eight Hours At A Time
I didn't get the chance to dream, to imagine.
To live.
To understand life,
and now at the halfway point
I think before I find out anything.
I will just slowly die.
I can escape living eight hours at a time.
I can escape responsibility eight hours at a time
I can escape anything eight hours at a time
I can run run run.
Until I slowly die
This seems right.
To be numb.
To stop before significance.
Before recognition.
Hiding waiting
The end will come.
Yes, It will come.
Incrementally. ...
To live.
To understand life,
and now at the halfway point
I think before I find out anything.
I will just slowly die.
I can escape living eight hours at a time.
I can escape responsibility eight hours at a time
I can escape anything eight hours at a time
I can run run run.
Until I slowly die
This seems right.
To be numb.
To stop before significance.
Before recognition.
Hiding waiting
The end will come.
Yes, It will come.
Incrementally. ...
#apathy
#depression
#emptiness
#loneliness
#regret
114 reads
3 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:15am
20th Dec 2024 4:15am
Koan 2
I had.
Things.
To say.
But
I've.
Lost my mind.
Things.
To say.
But
I've.
Lost my mind.
#apathy
#confusion
#regret
80 reads
0 Comments
s0_obscen3
s0_Obscene
s0_Obscene
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 7:56pm
19th Dec 2024 7:56pm
And cut
if not you then who if not them than you
pick a side let it slide
snide lies
let time fly by
like a stut t ter why
cant I fly
I'm out of time
bye
pick a side let it slide
snide lies
let time fly by
like a stut t ter why
cant I fly
I'm out of time
bye
#bittersweet
#denial
#disappointment
#regret
#rejection
115 reads
3 Comments
dnzmemn66
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 6:15pm
19th Dec 2024 6:15pm
Deep
Deep into my darkness
The silence is so loud
From the deeds i’ve done
To the battles i’ve won
Nothing makes me proud
I wish I could start over
To have another try
But if I did
The reality is
It would all be one big lie
Time and space won’t let me
Try these things again
What I need to do
Is realize
It’s in the journey
That we find the win
So don’t lament past doings
For there is folly in regret
Look ahead to another day
It may be your best one yet
The silence is so loud
From the deeds i’ve done
To the battles i’ve won
Nothing makes me proud
I wish I could start over
To have another try
But if I did
The reality is
It would all be one big lie
Time and space won’t let me
Try these things again
What I need to do
Is realize
It’s in the journey
That we find the win
So don’t lament past doings
For there is folly in regret
Look ahead to another day
It may be your best one yet
#hope
#regret
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 10:23am
17th Dec 2024 10:23am
Torpor.
Everything is empty inside.
And I see your passing face.
Somewhere down the line.
I thought I knew you.
But maybe it was just the image.
I had in my mind.
This is the wasted space.
I take up.
Starving myself as punishment.
Just can't connect.
And be.
Pro social.
And I see your passing face.
Somewhere down the line.
I thought I knew you.
But maybe it was just the image.
I had in my mind.
This is the wasted space.
I take up.
Starving myself as punishment.
Just can't connect.
And be.
Pro social.
#apathy
#regret
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Mercurial
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:34am
15th Dec 2024 3:34am
Let Go.
I just put my hand over my head and thought,
There's so much to the hand than the hand itself,
What if it was cut off and grief sets in,
Consumed by anger and succumbed to sadness,
All the days you took it for granted, now it is separate from your body,
You yearn for the attachment...you take a look at it, taking it closer,
Touching yourself, smelling it, seeing it for what it is, the softness,
The uniqueness of each finger, the beauty of your nails, femininity of your thumb,
The feeling is intense than when it was intact.
In your memories, the...
There's so much to the hand than the hand itself,
What if it was cut off and grief sets in,
Consumed by anger and succumbed to sadness,
All the days you took it for granted, now it is separate from your body,
You yearn for the attachment...you take a look at it, taking it closer,
Touching yourself, smelling it, seeing it for what it is, the softness,
The uniqueness of each finger, the beauty of your nails, femininity of your thumb,
The feeling is intense than when it was intact.
In your memories, the...
#gratitude
#grief
#regret
#strength
#TimeHeals
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2 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 3:45pm
14th Dec 2024 3:45pm
Ben vindo
God's children
Ben vindo
To a beautiful day
Let's not waste that day
By sleep in
If we sleep in we will
Not sleep at night
So we must enjoy this day
That our father gave to us
Here on earth
yes we are having the Summer
Here on earth
that our father create for us
With his holy hands
Also We took a look in the sky
And there was no sign of rain
We don't like the rain at all
Because when it is raining
There is lighting and thunder
The noise of lightning and thunder
Wake
us up when we are...
Ben vindo
To a beautiful day
Let's not waste that day
By sleep in
If we sleep in we will
Not sleep at night
So we must enjoy this day
That our father gave to us
Here on earth
yes we are having the Summer
Here on earth
that our father create for us
With his holy hands
Also We took a look in the sky
And there was no sign of rain
We don't like the rain at all
Because when it is raining
There is lighting and thunder
The noise of lightning and thunder
Wake
us up when we are...
#boredom
#dark
#regret
#rejection
#sadness
90 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 9:35am
13th Dec 2024 9:35am
Rage Inside
Gotta rage inside
Can’t let him out
Catch a spark
And now it’s happening
Starts as a small hill
Turns into a mountain
Simple convo turns to anger
Wanted to dig deep and find out why I am
Learned that having No guidance
And being by myself
Stops you from forming
Your soon to be adult mind
Had no mentor to straighten me out
When you live in your head
It can’t turn out good
So I’m compulsive and have a hair trigger
Not what I saw but it’s what I’m living
Can’t let him out
Catch a spark
And now it’s happening
Starts as a small hill
Turns into a mountain
Simple convo turns to anger
Wanted to dig deep and find out why I am
Learned that having No guidance
And being by myself
Stops you from forming
Your soon to be adult mind
Had no mentor to straighten me out
When you live in your head
It can’t turn out good
So I’m compulsive and have a hair trigger
Not what I saw but it’s what I’m living
#anger
#dark
#regret #shame
#regret #shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:28am
11th Dec 2024 7:28am
I am glad you want me
I am glad you want me
Ally
To be your friend
Maybe forever
I will be fine with it
I don't want you to think
That I am a hopeless case
I am trying my best
Taking care of me
Because there is nobody
Else who will take care of me
And I am quite able to do it
Also I am now in my senior years
And I just love to live in my
Senior years
I had lost some of my hearing
That is why
I need to use my hearing aid
I already got used to it
I already have some cataract
On my left eye
Also I need glasses for...
Ally
To be your friend
Maybe forever
I will be fine with it
I don't want you to think
That I am a hopeless case
I am trying my best
Taking care of me
Because there is nobody
Else who will take care of me
And I am quite able to do it
Also I am now in my senior years
And I just love to live in my
Senior years
I had lost some of my hearing
That is why
I need to use my hearing aid
I already got used to it
I already have some cataract
On my left eye
Also I need glasses for...
#anxiety
#disappointment
#fear
#jealousy
#regret
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