Poems About Regret Seeking Honest Critique
#regret
Poems about regret seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
faithmairee
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:32pm
Yesterday 10:32pm
Someday (You're Gonna Pay)
Someday You're gonna pay
For all of your evil ways
Someday, someway
You're gonna regret that
You threw our love away
I would never say
I told you so
When you went astray
You were making a mistake
Playing a foolish game
Even though you hurt me so
I forgive you in my heart
Wish you all the best
It was just so sad
Watching the way you changed
For all of your evil ways
Someday, someway
You're gonna regret that
You threw our love away
I would never say
I told you so
When you went astray
You were making a mistake
Playing a foolish game
Even though you hurt me so
I forgive you in my heart
Wish you all the best
It was just so sad
Watching the way you changed
#regret
#forgiveness
#heartbroken
30 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
25th Jun 2022 11:36pm
25th Jun 2022 11:36pm
WHEN THE PAIN GOES DEEPER
Why is it that you are just like those visions, that still continue to be awaken within me. Yet the deepness of my soul and mind screams in these silently dreams. Provoking pieces of evidences that is like opening a book once close. A book of the past lies coming back, from the deepness of the darkness of what is now fragments. As pieces of my heart and soul, but with broken tears still under the layers of layers of hurt and pain.That eventually become invisible to see, upon the surface of my skin hidden behind my eyes. For I loved you with all my heart, yet I was blindsided by your words....
#sadness
#regret
#heartbroken
#disappointment
#emptiness
62 reads
0 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
25th Jun 2022 11:20am
25th Jun 2022 11:20am
Box Full Of Matches
I've skated through this
torrid life
a pyro
stench of gasoline everywhere
ready and willing to ignite
to burn down in a blaze of fucking glory
I have this neat trick
place the match head down
on the striker
using the thumb of my left hand to hold it
flick it with my right
it flares
a shooting flame that dazzles
through the air
they come closer
to see the spectacle
unaware
unsuspecting
combusting on impact
I hold them as they igniite
my arms and chest a ...
torrid life
a pyro
stench of gasoline everywhere
ready and willing to ignite
to burn down in a blaze of fucking glory
I have this neat trick
place the match head down
on the striker
using the thumb of my left hand to hold it
flick it with my right
it flares
a shooting flame that dazzles
through the air
they come closer
to see the spectacle
unaware
unsuspecting
combusting on impact
I hold them as they igniite
my arms and chest a ...
#regret
#greed
#emptiness
71 reads
0 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
18th Jun 2022 3:38am
18th Jun 2022 3:38am
Remind Me
You stole my sanity
she beats
her fists against me
as if she wants it back
naked
a pulsing nerve
her tits bounce with each hit
she’s rabid
and the cure is to batter me
with her demons
because it seems I’ve stolen
her ability to run from them
she’s decided my thick chest is home
an island to...
she beats
her fists against me
as if she wants it back
naked
a pulsing nerve
her tits bounce with each hit
she’s rabid
and the cure is to batter me
with her demons
because it seems I’ve stolen
her ability to run from them
she’s decided my thick chest is home
an island to...
#sadness
#regret
136 reads
9 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
17th Jun 2022 7:43am
17th Jun 2022 7:43am
Too Many
#regret
#emptiness
71 reads
3 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
14th Jun 2022 11:51am
14th Jun 2022 11:51am
Sunset Sinks Into The Crying Ocean
a globe of fire flickering out
last rays are bright but offer
no warmth
drinks glide down my throat
in an abundance of ice
the cold comfort of fermented
sanity
a light buzz as the sun cuts through
the glint of waves
rocks crunch beneath my toes
I sit beside the esky
reflecting
a choppy sea of things I should have said
regrets tight around my throat
a noose
a slow burn
that has seen the world turn
a new way to measure things that are gone
I should have...
last rays are bright but offer
no warmth
drinks glide down my throat
in an abundance of ice
the cold comfort of fermented
sanity
a light buzz as the sun cuts through
the glint of waves
rocks crunch beneath my toes
I sit beside the esky
reflecting
a choppy sea of things I should have said
regrets tight around my throat
a noose
a slow burn
that has seen the world turn
a new way to measure things that are gone
I should have...
#regret
#breakup
92 reads
0 Comments
ursa
Poem Published
11th Jun 2022 8:44pm
11th Jun 2022 8:44pm
Seen From The Skies
Our statement stood
we couldn’t see them
in this dark night;
our evening’s serum
hindered sight
and their reflection,
brightly designed
for our protection
safety pylons
blared at us to
STOP.
In any case
we hit them hard,
our car spun forward
rubber screeching,
we start screaming,
sparks kept flying-
we closed our eyes
-before we knew it,
we went up in flame.
we couldn’t see them
in this dark night;
our evening’s serum
hindered sight
and their reflection,
brightly designed
for our protection
safety pylons
blared at us to
STOP.
In any case
we hit them hard,
our car spun forward
rubber screeching,
we start screaming,
sparks kept flying-
we closed our eyes
-before we knew it,
we went up in flame.
#regret
#dark
#death #risk
#death #risk
52 reads
6 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
7th Jun 2022 6:39pm
7th Jun 2022 6:39pm
Naked Thoughts Of Ruin and Contemplation
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because there was nothing else to be done and no where else to turn
I lay belly down enshrouded in darkness to write
pins and needles tingling in my unruly fingers
squinting to find a place between the lines
shadows are a tapestry of understanding drifting between
cognizant and illusion
honesty sticks to my throat like honey
sweet and thick with the richness
of a million hours of unacknowledged back breaking effort
sorrow never sounded so beautiful as the buzz of...
because there was nothing else to be done and no where else to turn
I lay belly down enshrouded in darkness to write
pins and needles tingling in my unruly fingers
squinting to find a place between the lines
shadows are a tapestry of understanding drifting between
cognizant and illusion
honesty sticks to my throat like honey
sweet and thick with the richness
of a million hours of unacknowledged back breaking effort
sorrow never sounded so beautiful as the buzz of...
#regret
139 reads
9 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
5th Jun 2022 5:33am
5th Jun 2022 5:33am
Whiskey Fixes Everything
Bar doors crack open
the way stale beer nuts crunch
beneath your teeth
a scatter of broken dreams
that fled their drinking buddies
then melted to the door-seals trying to escape
a fluro light flickers
static buzz
the way your brain wires after
the first couple
where senses dial themselves to 11
and whiskey feels like your soul
glowing warm in the centre of your chest
just to the right of your heart
the grime and grit
go down like a cheap prostitute
one that swallows for the right...
the way stale beer nuts crunch
beneath your teeth
a scatter of broken dreams
that fled their drinking buddies
then melted to the door-seals trying to escape
a fluro light flickers
static buzz
the way your brain wires after
the first couple
where senses dial themselves to 11
and whiskey feels like your soul
glowing warm in the centre of your chest
just to the right of your heart
the grime and grit
go down like a cheap prostitute
one that swallows for the right...
#regret
#emptiness
161 reads
7 Comments
Oohloulala
Loulou
Loulou
Poem Published
29th May 2022 3:10am
29th May 2022 3:10am
Second guesser
I look at old photos of myself young and wonder..
Why the hell did you deviate from them cells that made you Lou at that time?
Your metamorphism not for positive but negative, inwardly crawling inside like a reverse butterfly, you wish back to cocoon, older, comforted curled in a foetus position in the womb, did you blossom too soon?
I ponder.
I see my skin starting to turn to crepe paper around my eyes,
the fragility a reminder of the passing of time,
how quick in glimpses and passages of slow i've witnessed my life go.
80 weeks...
Why the hell did you deviate from them cells that made you Lou at that time?
Your metamorphism not for positive but negative, inwardly crawling inside like a reverse butterfly, you wish back to cocoon, older, comforted curled in a foetus position in the womb, did you blossom too soon?
I ponder.
I see my skin starting to turn to crepe paper around my eyes,
the fragility a reminder of the passing of time,
how quick in glimpses and passages of slow i've witnessed my life go.
80 weeks...
#anxiety
#regret
#aging
103 reads
6 Comments
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
28th May 2022 4:11am
28th May 2022 4:11am
Melting pot toxic
We came from different upbringings about relationships
I thought we understood how toxic relationships could be based on what we went through
I expressed my concerns that were swept out of mind & I was silenced by tears
You expressed your concerns with aggression as if you were trying to taunt
You were willing to take casualties if it meant I'd suffer in front if you
We both endured a lot in the past but only one has learned from it
Each chance I chose to submit your manipulation was the strongest
Your...
I thought we understood how toxic relationships could be based on what we went through
I expressed my concerns that were swept out of mind & I was silenced by tears
You expressed your concerns with aggression as if you were trying to taunt
You were willing to take casualties if it meant I'd suffer in front if you
We both endured a lot in the past but only one has learned from it
Each chance I chose to submit your manipulation was the strongest
Your...
#regret
#gratitude
#respect #bittersweet
#respect #bittersweet
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0 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
28th May 2022 00:24am
28th May 2022 00:24am
Time Is A Grinding Wheel, Till We're Nothing But Ash
KA
he whispers, with a half smirk
because fate is a rugged charming bastard
who glows the coal-fire of a cigarette
plumes of smoke are
wishes from the ashtray
they disappear into nothing
a million molecules
blown to pieces
the same as doc, from the buck of a .380
only the wisp of smoke swirled from the hole then disappeared
the rest
a torrent
a smear
a stain
the stench of shit and bad blood
lost in time
for now he was numb
three fifths of his blood stream whiskey
she was brooding...
he whispers, with a half smirk
because fate is a rugged charming bastard
who glows the coal-fire of a cigarette
plumes of smoke are
wishes from the ashtray
they disappear into nothing
a million molecules
blown to pieces
the same as doc, from the buck of a .380
only the wisp of smoke swirled from the hole then disappeared
the rest
a torrent
a smear
a stain
the stench of shit and bad blood
lost in time
for now he was numb
three fifths of his blood stream whiskey
she was brooding...
#regret
#shame
#emptiness
122 reads
4 Comments
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