Poems About Regret Seeking Honest Critique
#regret
Poems about regret seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
johnnyscarlotti
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 4:48pm
26th Jan 2025 4:48pm
f**k utah [redux]
#anger
#dark
#frustration
#regret
#sadness
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TheVORTEXRETURNS
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:42am
19th Jan 2025 2:42am
“To BE Young Again”
To not let the parables of rhyme
undo my feeble amorist and verse.
To not let the seething weariness of
time and test. Undo the span
of an unending curse.
To not see the cryptic patterns that leapt beneath the morrows.
To not let memories of my fading quest.
Feed my nightmarish sorrows.
To be young again. Oh how this thought makes me cower. For I know of its price and grandiose deals undoubtedly. The tragedies of this feeble wielding deal. A canker upon morality. As the truth would seem so forgotten with finality becoming so unreal.
undo my feeble amorist and verse.
To not let the seething weariness of
time and test. Undo the span
of an unending curse.
To not see the cryptic patterns that leapt beneath the morrows.
To not let memories of my fading quest.
Feed my nightmarish sorrows.
To be young again. Oh how this thought makes me cower. For I know of its price and grandiose deals undoubtedly. The tragedies of this feeble wielding deal. A canker upon morality. As the truth would seem so forgotten with finality becoming so unreal.
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#loneliness
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 00:17am
19th Jan 2025 00:17am
Foi Deus
Foi Deus
That made us
With his holy hands
Many years ago
Foi Deus
That placed us here
On earth to live
For a long time
We just love to live
On earth
Meu Deus
Also you have the power
In your hands to heal the sick
Yes the sick people
Have been calling for you
Please go and heal them
Because you have the power to heal
I am sure
Meu Deus
The sick is always praying for you
Every single night
Before they go to sleep
Yes they sleep all through the night
Without waking up
And they...
That made us
With his holy hands
Many years ago
Foi Deus
That placed us here
On earth to live
For a long time
We just love to live
On earth
Meu Deus
Also you have the power
In your hands to heal the sick
Yes the sick people
Have been calling for you
Please go and heal them
Because you have the power to heal
I am sure
Meu Deus
The sick is always praying for you
Every single night
Before they go to sleep
Yes they sleep all through the night
Without waking up
And they...
#anger
#anxiety
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 1:58am
17th Jan 2025 1:58am
Talk about
Talk about
Our health
Because none of us
Are looking after our health
We are letting our health
Go down hill
We have lots of things
That are wrong with us
We have a peace maker
Because we have bad heart
Also we have asthma
We have to use our puffer
Also we have allergies
Dust, pollen , and cat hair
We have limited amount of money to live
So we must watch carefully our money
We don't want to end up
Like the poor people
That are living in the streets
We need also to pay our rent every month
Where...
Our health
Because none of us
Are looking after our health
We are letting our health
Go down hill
We have lots of things
That are wrong with us
We have a peace maker
Because we have bad heart
Also we have asthma
We have to use our puffer
Also we have allergies
Dust, pollen , and cat hair
We have limited amount of money to live
So we must watch carefully our money
We don't want to end up
Like the poor people
That are living in the streets
We need also to pay our rent every month
Where...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#loneliness
#regret
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Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 8:04pm
16th Jan 2025 8:04pm
Regrets
It was at a campground in Virginia Beach... Fat boy took us camping. It was my first time. It was a small tent that barely held us and our sleeping bag. Fat Boy was about 350 lbs and I was heavier right then at about 200. This was summer 1994 and very hot.
We got there at 4pm. We stocked munchies for two days in the car. No room in the tent. We had stopped on the way at a Ponderosa and he had pigged out. After the tent was up he went to shit in the woods. I pointed out the bathrooms but he wanted to shit in the woods. I found out later that he had a boyfriend who followed us...
We got there at 4pm. We stocked munchies for two days in the car. No room in the tent. We had stopped on the way at a Ponderosa and he had pigged out. After the tent was up he went to shit in the woods. I pointed out the bathrooms but he wanted to shit in the woods. I found out later that he had a boyfriend who followed us...
#regret
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Hellarchy
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 5:30am
15th Jan 2025 5:30am
The Source
Life's been cruel to me so far
If I could catch a falling star
I wouldn't wash away my scars
I'd piece together all the shards
Of broken glass
Shattered years past
Filthy memories left unbathed
But no one walks away unscathed
Long ago I got the point
Aching bones and creaking joints
Any comfort is a privilege
Afforded only by indifference
I see the light
Can't close the distance
Sprinting toward sweet deliverance
Long after my feet are blistered
Where most would yield,...
If I could catch a falling star
I wouldn't wash away my scars
I'd piece together all the shards
Of broken glass
Shattered years past
Filthy memories left unbathed
But no one walks away unscathed
Long ago I got the point
Aching bones and creaking joints
Any comfort is a privilege
Afforded only by indifference
I see the light
Can't close the distance
Sprinting toward sweet deliverance
Long after my feet are blistered
Where most would yield,...
#dark
#denial
#loneliness
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 5:34pm
14th Jan 2025 5:34pm
Loneliness
Loneliness
I spend every day
I don't see anybody
That I know
When I am walking outside
I walk around the block
I think everybody still sleeping
Be cause it is early in the morning
Today is raining
I am also wearing
My raining jacket
And I have an umbrella with me
The umbrella is keeping me dry
Now I finally return home
I went to my living room
I turn my computer on
I finally started to write
Some poems for my Father
All my poems have different feelings
That comes out of my heart
The night...
I spend every day
I don't see anybody
That I know
When I am walking outside
I walk around the block
I think everybody still sleeping
Be cause it is early in the morning
Today is raining
I am also wearing
My raining jacket
And I have an umbrella with me
The umbrella is keeping me dry
Now I finally return home
I went to my living room
I turn my computer on
I finally started to write
Some poems for my Father
All my poems have different feelings
That comes out of my heart
The night...
#anger
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 8:19am
13th Jan 2025 8:19am
Every hour I am thinking of you My father
Every hour
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
It is not too hot
It is a little cooler
With a little breeze
I am having no problem coping
With it
I just like it better that way
I hope it is going to stay like that
For a while
I don't like when it is...
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
It is not too hot
It is a little cooler
With a little breeze
I am having no problem coping
With it
I just like it better that way
I hope it is going to stay like that
For a while
I don't like when it is...
#bittersweet
#boredom
#fear
#greed
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 00:03am
13th Jan 2025 00:03am
Some kind of ghosts
Some kind of ghosts
Are living in my dreams
But I don’t know if it is the ghost of the past, the ghost of the present, or The ghost of future
Also they have a scary face
And that is all I know
Because I already seen their faces
And it gives me nightmares
That frightens me
Now I am having a problem
Going back to sleep
I hate having night mares
Every single night
I have no Idea why
This is happening to me
Every single night
I not like having the nightmares
I keep having
Every single night
I am getting fed...
Are living in my dreams
But I don’t know if it is the ghost of the past, the ghost of the present, or The ghost of future
Also they have a scary face
And that is all I know
Because I already seen their faces
And it gives me nightmares
That frightens me
Now I am having a problem
Going back to sleep
I hate having night mares
Every single night
I have no Idea why
This is happening to me
Every single night
I not like having the nightmares
I keep having
Every single night
I am getting fed...
#anger
#anxiety
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
Marie
What a shame
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
#bittersweet
#fear
#greed
#regret
#sadness
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StillisinInk
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:01pm
8th Jan 2025 7:01pm
To My Old Self....
To my old self,
I apologize for turning out this way.
You held high hopes for the future —
I crushed them down,
all in vain.
one by one,
broke the promises we made,
lost your essence,
realized it too late.
Will I disappoint you,
if I became the adult we hated?
In moments of loneliness and despair,
I wish you were here,
to heal the wounds
with your love and care.
I tried to be
what we wished for,
but nothing ever seemed to work.
I brought more trouble.
I asked you to leave,
just to...
I apologize for turning out this way.
You held high hopes for the future —
I crushed them down,
all in vain.
one by one,
broke the promises we made,
lost your essence,
realized it too late.
Will I disappoint you,
if I became the adult we hated?
In moments of loneliness and despair,
I wish you were here,
to heal the wounds
with your love and care.
I tried to be
what we wished for,
but nothing ever seemed to work.
I brought more trouble.
I asked you to leave,
just to...
#bittersweet
#memories
#regret
#sadness
#SelfReflection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Never too late
Never too late
To make new
Friends in our
Lives
Because we
Just have
A few friends
And we want
To increase the number
Of friends
We are going
To take our
Time making new friends
Because we feel that
We should not rush
Making friends
Yes we need to
Chose our friends
And hope that
Our friends will accept
Us the way we are
We are choosing
The middle class
People to be our
Friends
And not the rich
People
Because they
Hate the middle
Class people
To make new
Friends in our
Lives
Because we
Just have
A few friends
And we want
To increase the number
Of friends
We are going
To take our
Time making new friends
Because we feel that
We should not rush
Making friends
Yes we need to
Chose our friends
And hope that
Our friends will accept
Us the way we are
We are choosing
The middle class
People to be our
Friends
And not the rich
People
Because they
Hate the middle
Class people
#boredom
#grief
#loneliness
#regret
#shame
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