Poems About Regret Seeking Honest Critique
#regret
Poems about regret seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 1:50pm
7th Mar 2025 1:50pm
How Should I Answer
Another man’s trash is considered another man’s treasure
So spread her legs and enjoy my sloppy-second pleasure,
“With the additional prizes of headaches and hell
Because I refuse to live any longer in a free roaming jail,
“In the beginning a motherfucka thought he was winning
However, my dumb ass was only losing time and slipping,
“Blinded by a sweet attitude and blindsided by flesh
All along I was a pawn in bullshit and mess,
“Got caught up in the feeling and her squealing
She saying ‘I love you’ while I...
So spread her legs and enjoy my sloppy-second pleasure,
“With the additional prizes of headaches and hell
Because I refuse to live any longer in a free roaming jail,
“In the beginning a motherfucka thought he was winning
However, my dumb ass was only losing time and slipping,
“Blinded by a sweet attitude and blindsided by flesh
All along I was a pawn in bullshit and mess,
“Got caught up in the feeling and her squealing
She saying ‘I love you’ while I...
#regret
#relationships
51 reads
4 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 11:18pm
6th Mar 2025 11:18pm
Another Place and Time
What would my life be if.........
I didn't have responsibilities
like paying my utilities
no playing taxi for my friends
going to places where the earth ends
No working hard to get my pay
we could chill in bed all day
In another place and time
life would be so fine
we would share a love divine
In another place and time
No picking up kids from school
just we two by a pool
no constant trips to the grocery store
means more time with the one i adore
no...
#bittersweet
#regret
#sadness
91 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 1:10pm
5th Mar 2025 1:10pm
It's not my problem, it's yours
#anxiety
#birth
#choices
#regret
#sex
47 reads
15 Comments
nostalgic_being10
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 7:02pm
4th Mar 2025 7:02pm
Paintings
Wounds that continue to grow in size,
Over the years, animosity accumulated.
Falsehoods that I wasn't hurt— but I was.
Self-loathing monologues, now familiarized.
Even after painted lines, I remain hungry, unsatisfied.
Sadness turned into anger,
Bid farewell when numbness replaced her.
For hollow and numb—that’s what my remains are called now.
How did I get here?
I am not certain how.
At first, I thought an act overtook my mind
Desires to be special, like an actress who prettily cries.
Then, my passion for painting...
Over the years, animosity accumulated.
Falsehoods that I wasn't hurt— but I was.
Self-loathing monologues, now familiarized.
Even after painted lines, I remain hungry, unsatisfied.
Sadness turned into anger,
Bid farewell when numbness replaced her.
For hollow and numb—that’s what my remains are called now.
How did I get here?
I am not certain how.
At first, I thought an act overtook my mind
Desires to be special, like an actress who prettily cries.
Then, my passion for painting...
#anxiety
#despair
#emptiness #regret
#emptiness #regret
48 reads
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 2:37pm
2nd Mar 2025 2:37pm
Let's stop pretending
From then to now what changed before our eyes 👁️👁️ As we are facing the truth of the deepness of the nonsense, that seems to take over what we see and hear 😞 YET it seems that there is no escaping from the negativity, and drama and confusion of some people's, mindset, as well as we see their heart has become bitter and cold as ice. For sure we use to be able to connect, on a positive level of common sense with intelligent, and knowledge with deep inner conversations 😞 YET that seems not to exist anymore, for now it's has become a thing of the...
#anger
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#regret
61 reads
2 Comments
NoQuarter
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 2:30am
2nd Mar 2025 2:30am
Aftertaste
You left an agonizing feeling
in the pit of my stomach.
Not a hurtful one,
not an angry one,
one like I'd eaten greasy food,
and had to stop just before the vomit.
Your splurge of words, coming
back to haunt me.
An oily dissatisfaction oozing~
to the spew they are,
they were,
and will be.
in the pit of my stomach.
Not a hurtful one,
not an angry one,
one like I'd eaten greasy food,
and had to stop just before the vomit.
Your splurge of words, coming
back to haunt me.
An oily dissatisfaction oozing~
to the spew they are,
they were,
and will be.
#disappointment
#regret
104 reads
4 Comments
Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 11:31am
1st Mar 2025 11:31am
EVENTIDE
Sky intro the STORM not willing to hide...Incoming tide, always pulls the unwanted in...EVENTIDE hues of dusk, not to trust. ENDING day, last of ENDING light of sight. Crawling on the otherside beanth of earth's belly of another kind of hell your shoes fill & fell upon. Paint strokes a crepuscular sky...Twilight maelstrom image...Darken visual depths...Dark holds such a abyss of discovery. Succumbing is the dimension of a sunset, well knowing it's place & time the universe has given the light of warmth. Fangs that punch the piercing swallowed taste of metallic red of blood, reign...
#bittersweet
#dark
#despair
#fear
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 1:54pm
16th Feb 2025 1:54pm
Polvo Brazileiro
I am also proud
To belong to the
Polvo Brazileiro
Also many years when
I was born one Brazilian
Polvo
I lived in São Paulo
I had been robed while walking
In the street of São Paulo
And it is not safe to walking in São Paulo
You also could be killed in the street in São Paulo
Also in São Paulo you can't drive you car with you
Window open
I never liked living in São Paulo
When I was just a teenager
I moved out of São Paulo
To Canada
I love living in Canada
At least it is safe to walk on the streets ...
To belong to the
Polvo Brazileiro
Also many years when
I was born one Brazilian
Polvo
I lived in São Paulo
I had been robed while walking
In the street of São Paulo
And it is not safe to walking in São Paulo
You also could be killed in the street in São Paulo
Also in São Paulo you can't drive you car with you
Window open
I never liked living in São Paulo
When I was just a teenager
I moved out of São Paulo
To Canada
I love living in Canada
At least it is safe to walk on the streets ...
#emptiness
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
#shame
39 reads
0 Comments
ChloesPoeticInk
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 12:20pm
14th Feb 2025 12:20pm
Goodbye
Rest In Peace to Myself.
The final call has been made, and with it, a quiet goodbye to what's been.
The Last salute offered to the memories, the moments, and the pieces of me that once lived here.
It's time to let go, to rest in the stillness that follows the end of a chapter.
The journey has closed, and the silence speaks now, but in that silence, there's peace.
The past is no longer mine to carry. It's time to rest.
Goodbye.
The final call has been made, and with it, a quiet goodbye to what's been.
The Last salute offered to the memories, the moments, and the pieces of me that once lived here.
It's time to let go, to rest in the stillness that follows the end of a chapter.
The journey has closed, and the silence speaks now, but in that silence, there's peace.
The past is no longer mine to carry. It's time to rest.
Goodbye.
#bittersweet
#despair
#loneliness
#regret
#sadness
101 reads
1 Comment
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 00:19am
14th Feb 2025 00:19am
Devolution
Idiots have merged with neo-nazis
to make this world an uglier place
spawning a planet of...idiotzis
with overpriced egg on each beef-wit face;
faces that turn their noses up at books
since the time that they save with every ban
they can spend kissing the ass of the crooks
who kiss the ass of the crook with the tan,
all to enable a future of hate,
where forward pay is all a game of blame
which...NEVER...has been a romantic trait
but only a counterproductive aim
that leads to the puniest short term gain,
of...
to make this world an uglier place
spawning a planet of...idiotzis
with overpriced egg on each beef-wit face;
faces that turn their noses up at books
since the time that they save with every ban
they can spend kissing the ass of the crooks
who kiss the ass of the crook with the tan,
all to enable a future of hate,
where forward pay is all a game of blame
which...NEVER...has been a romantic trait
but only a counterproductive aim
that leads to the puniest short term gain,
of...
#greed
#grief
#hate #regret
#hate #regret
182 reads
8 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 4:26pm
13th Feb 2025 4:26pm
He Is Poison
You are the king of poisons my arsenic.
Giving you one night would be
like ingesting cyanide death to the
soul in minutes.
Careful young women, some
men come to steal your hearts
and blacken your soul, nothing more.
They'll drain your beauty and watch
you convulse their Strychnine,
enjoying your dying misery.
Be warned and careful who you
bring to bed. He will give you
spiritual death, draining your
vitality and leaving you hollow.
Before you take his hand...
Giving you one night would be
like ingesting cyanide death to the
soul in minutes.
Careful young women, some
men come to steal your hearts
and blacken your soul, nothing more.
They'll drain your beauty and watch
you convulse their Strychnine,
enjoying your dying misery.
Be warned and careful who you
bring to bed. He will give you
spiritual death, draining your
vitality and leaving you hollow.
Before you take his hand...
#disappointment
#lust
#regret
#sex
#UnrequitedLove
112 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
It is so hard to live without you my father
It is so hard to live without you
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#shame
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