Poems About Regret Seeking Honest Critique
#regret
Poems about regret seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:53am
5th Jan 2025 2:53am
Missed Opportunity
She first saw him at the mall buying clothes.
He noticed her the first day of school.
She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty!
They were both new students.
They had no classes together.
They passed sometimes in the hall.
Omg, his cologne! Dreamy!
I wish I had the nerve to talk to her!
Day, weeks, and months passed by...
they graduated. He heard she got married.
He married a girl from church.
Years went by, and they thought of
each other as a regret for a...
He noticed her the first day of school.
She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty!
They were both new students.
They had no classes together.
They passed sometimes in the hall.
Omg, his cologne! Dreamy!
I wish I had the nerve to talk to her!
Day, weeks, and months passed by...
they graduated. He heard she got married.
He married a girl from church.
Years went by, and they thought of
each other as a regret for a...
#LifeStruggles
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:24pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:24pm
I caught up with you my father
I caught up with you my father
With my prayers lately
Every single night I pray to you my father
I am sorry that took me some time to
Make some time for me to pray to you
It was because I was doing too much
With my life
And only thinking of me all the time
And also putting me first before you
I must tell you father that you are more important
Than me
And I will stop being selfish
Because to tell you the truth
I was not so happy with my life
And I wanted more material things for me
That I could never afford
Because...
With my prayers lately
Every single night I pray to you my father
I am sorry that took me some time to
Make some time for me to pray to you
It was because I was doing too much
With my life
And only thinking of me all the time
And also putting me first before you
I must tell you father that you are more important
Than me
And I will stop being selfish
Because to tell you the truth
I was not so happy with my life
And I wanted more material things for me
That I could never afford
Because...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#loneliness
#regret
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:54am
3rd Jan 2025 11:54am
4:36 AM
4:36 am, still can't sleep
I think I did everything completely wrong
All I know is...
When you use to touch me
I would think of all of those different men
Fucking my sister & mother at the same time
My hatred towards them, came out towards you
You're in a much better place now
And so am I
One day if i ever get out, I will visit you, for sure
I think I did everything completely wrong
All I know is...
When you use to touch me
I would think of all of those different men
Fucking my sister & mother at the same time
My hatred towards them, came out towards you
You're in a much better place now
And so am I
One day if i ever get out, I will visit you, for sure
#dark
#memories
#regret #sleep
#regret #sleep
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10 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 1:10pm
2nd Jan 2025 1:10pm
Mein geliebter GOTT
Mein geliebter GOTT
You gave us a wonderful world
For us to live
After you made heaven and earth
Also you had created us after you
Made heaven and earth
The earth you made it
Very well
With flowers by the ocean
Also by the ocean was plenty
Of trees
Some birds you made with your
Holy hands
They already fished their food
To eat
Now they are resting on the tree
Branches
And also singing for us
Their beautiful songs
I personally enjoy hearing the birds
Singing
Now the end of the day ...
You gave us a wonderful world
For us to live
After you made heaven and earth
Also you had created us after you
Made heaven and earth
The earth you made it
Very well
With flowers by the ocean
Also by the ocean was plenty
Of trees
Some birds you made with your
Holy hands
They already fished their food
To eat
Now they are resting on the tree
Branches
And also singing for us
Their beautiful songs
I personally enjoy hearing the birds
Singing
Now the end of the day ...
#dark
#fear
#hate
#loneliness
#regret
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 11:46am
2nd Jan 2025 11:46am
You don't understand me
From woman to man and man to woman. There will come a time in each of our lives, that we will come to that fork in the road, of trails and tribulations. For I'm not alright and neither are you, not willing to understand the deepness of my hurt, and spiritual pain when you ignore my cries, when I try to reach out to you. 😭 Treating me like I was one of your tools, out of your tool box 🤨 when you are done using me. 😞 For you were never like that before when we first got together, for you told me it was love at first seeth and that you was happy, that we met with real...
#confusion
#disappointment
#emptiness
#regret
#rejection
108 reads
4 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 5:34pm
1st Jan 2025 5:34pm
Jen and Cole - short scene
Given Jen’s childlike facial features, Cole was surprised at the tangy taste of animality in her moist sacred folds. Moments later, he was again astonished by the practiced craft with which she mounted him—smooth and athletic. Jen’s fingers danced lightly on Cole’s cock before directing him inside with precision and efficiency. Before he completely comprehended her proximity, they were bound together in the raw act of fornication.
Jen was slight, barely 100-pounds he guessed. Viewing her shape, he imagined lifting her total weight with ease at the gym. But what he quickly realized...
Jen was slight, barely 100-pounds he guessed. Viewing her shape, he imagined lifting her total weight with ease at the gym. But what he quickly realized...
#lust
#regret
#sex
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1 Comment
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 9:06pm
31st Dec 2024 9:06pm
Intuition abandon me finally
Intuition abandon me
Finally
Today
But before
I had the intuition that
I never did enough for my Father
That was very bad
I never had prayed enough
Every night for my Father
Because I was always tired
So I just went straight to bed
To sleep
Suddenly now I started to feel guilty
And I know that is not a good thing
I know that I have to change
And make some time
For me to pray for my Father
Finally
Today
But before
I had the intuition that
I never did enough for my Father
That was very bad
I never had prayed enough
Every night for my Father
Because I was always tired
So I just went straight to bed
To sleep
Suddenly now I started to feel guilty
And I know that is not a good thing
I know that I have to change
And make some time
For me to pray for my Father
#disappointment
#emptiness
#fear
#jealousy
#regret
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 6:47pm
31st Dec 2024 6:47pm
Koan 8
Everything.
Seems so.
Pointless.
As though.
Nothing.
Improved.
Years spent.
Refining.
My writing.
For what?
Comments.
Live chats.
Everything.
Transitionary.
Liminal.
Passions.
Are what.
You can't stop.
Doing.
Even if you think it's futile.
Seems so.
Pointless.
As though.
Nothing.
Improved.
Years spent.
Refining.
My writing.
For what?
Comments.
Live chats.
Everything.
Transitionary.
Liminal.
Passions.
Are what.
You can't stop.
Doing.
Even if you think it's futile.
#grief
#regret
#sadness #shame
#sadness #shame
126 reads
2 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 11:58pm
30th Dec 2024 11:58pm
Koan 8
Love was.
Something.
I used to.
Long.
For.
Now.
It's just.
A sentimental.
Performative.
Poorly done.
Art.
Piece.
Something.
I used to.
Long.
For.
Now.
It's just.
A sentimental.
Performative.
Poorly done.
Art.
Piece.
#denial
#grief
#regret #rejection
#regret #rejection
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 9:43am
30th Dec 2024 9:43am
Koan 7
Every.
Waking.
Moment.
I long.
For the still.
Sound.
Of.
Silence.
Waking.
Moment.
I long.
For the still.
Sound.
Of.
Silence.
#regret
#sadness
73 reads
1 Comment
oldmanG
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 5:07am
29th Dec 2024 5:07am
Feelin 17 Again
Feel 17 again
In my basement are
Some plastic weights
Wrapped in vinyl
Faking King Kong
Push it up just enough
Get an electric sunburst
And an Amp to spare
Impatient youth
Looks at the axe
With respect
Doesn’t bother to
Put in the time
Friend says how about a trade
Your sunburst for my ganja
Not a thought rattling round
Says you have a deal
Give up my dreams at 17
For Bob Marley
Turn back the clock
Let time stand still ...
In my basement are
Some plastic weights
Wrapped in vinyl
Faking King Kong
Push it up just enough
Get an electric sunburst
And an Amp to spare
Impatient youth
Looks at the axe
With respect
Doesn’t bother to
Put in the time
Friend says how about a trade
Your sunburst for my ganja
Not a thought rattling round
Says you have a deal
Give up my dreams at 17
For Bob Marley
Turn back the clock
Let time stand still ...
#bittersweet
#marijuana
#music
#regret
#teens
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 2:56pm
26th Dec 2024 2:56pm
Someone like my father
Someone like my Father
Is the one that made me
60 years ago
With his holy hands
And placed me 60 years ago
In the planet earth
I already got used to the
Planet earth
And also
I am living my life
Here on the planet earth
The hot weather is living me
Lethargic
Is the one that made me
60 years ago
With his holy hands
And placed me 60 years ago
In the planet earth
I already got used to the
Planet earth
And also
I am living my life
Here on the planet earth
The hot weather is living me
Lethargic
#anxiety
#despair
#emptiness
#jealousy
#regret
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