Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique
#rainbow
Poems about rainbows seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Other Side of The Rainbow
Is there a pot of gold on the other side
After enduring our storms along this ride
Will we hang glide with angelic wings
In paradise, where everyday is Spring
Seeing is believing so only time will tell
Sooner or later it'll be clearly revealed
Will we all be healed of mortal afflictions
And rehabbed from our sinful addictions
Receiving final prescription on judgement day
Able to stay in glory or abhorrently cast away
Or will we replay the game in a different form
As energy dissipates & generates a new norm
After enduring our storms along this ride
Will we hang glide with angelic wings
In paradise, where everyday is Spring
Seeing is believing so only time will tell
Sooner or later it'll be clearly revealed
Will we all be healed of mortal afflictions
And rehabbed from our sinful addictions
Receiving final prescription on judgement day
Able to stay in glory or abhorrently cast away
Or will we replay the game in a different form
As energy dissipates & generates a new norm
#rainbow
#rebirth
#heaven
#addiction
#healing
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Rainbow Love
Rainbow love
A striking banner above
How I chase him fast
Outrunning weather forecast
To catch a ray of
His rainbow love
A distant illusion
I know won’t last
I ask “why bother?”
As I look for another
Rainbow love
Waiting to shove
The storm in my eyes
A striking banner above
How I chase him fast
Outrunning weather forecast
To catch a ray of
His rainbow love
A distant illusion
I know won’t last
I ask “why bother?”
As I look for another
Rainbow love
Waiting to shove
The storm in my eyes
#love
#boyfriend
#rainbow
#UnrequitedLove
#FeelingLost
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double rainbow
There is this friend I kiss like all the time.
And she's going to kill me without even giving it a try.
She's going to rip out my heart just by looking at me like a precious gemstone from afar.
I love the way she smiles and it weirds me out.
I feel confused and I worry I'm going too far.
And that's the thing it's already too late for worries like that because I have already gone too far when we slept in my bed.
I'm not confused about whether I love her or not.
I’m just not sure what type of love it really is.
...
And she's going to kill me without even giving it a try.
She's going to rip out my heart just by looking at me like a precious gemstone from afar.
I love the way she smiles and it weirds me out.
I feel confused and I worry I'm going too far.
And that's the thing it's already too late for worries like that because I have already gone too far when we slept in my bed.
I'm not confused about whether I love her or not.
I’m just not sure what type of love it really is.
...
#friendship
#rainbow
#ForbiddenLove
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Drizzling
The morn seems so forlorn
as it now appears
with its fine veil of tears
outside my fogged window
Even June and its warmth
cannot even hope
to help me cope
with this cold laden sadness
For the bold summer sun
with all its festive fun
is somewhere hiding
forever banished
As all my joy vanished
behind the drab grey curtain
stretched ever high
across my darkening sky
Even the morning dew
is able to see through
this cascade of rain
to now witness my pain
as it now appears
with its fine veil of tears
outside my fogged window
Even June and its warmth
cannot even hope
to help me cope
with this cold laden sadness
For the bold summer sun
with all its festive fun
is somewhere hiding
forever banished
As all my joy vanished
behind the drab grey curtain
stretched ever high
across my darkening sky
Even the morning dew
is able to see through
this cascade of rain
to now witness my pain
#sadness
#depression
#loneliness
#rain
#rainbow
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Killing the Catch
Asbestos kind of love.
Tiny particles
filling the heart
and lungs
destroying slowly
never really knowing
the actual long term
damage it will cause.
Tiny particles
filling the heart
and lungs
destroying slowly
never really knowing
the actual long term
damage it will cause.
#love
#rainbow
#fairies #honesty
#fairies #honesty
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Lower Highs and Lower Lows
Rainbow sliding
Down I go, smiling
Lo and behold;
Empty pot of gold
Down I go, smiling
Lo and behold;
Empty pot of gold
#hope
#rainbow
#drugs
#addiction
#disappointment
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Arc-En-Ciel
Such a perfect distraction
this atmospheric refraction
while this multihued arc
bends ...
as if She pretends
to let us catch it
making me stop mid step
if only for a
moment
like She spilled Her paint
across the blued canvas sky
just to draw out a sigh
from those of us below
before signing Her name
this atmospheric refraction
while this multihued arc
bends ...
as if She pretends
to let us catch it
making me stop mid step
if only for a
moment
like She spilled Her paint
across the blued canvas sky
just to draw out a sigh
from those of us below
before signing Her name
#rainbow
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Rainbow
Based on an actual event
The end of the rainbow descended to the low side of the mountain
I glanced at its beautiful colours as I drove down the wet road
An unexpected thing happened when we got close to the rainbow
The end of the rainbow was standing right in the middle of the road
And the light of the rainbow shone brightly in the moderate rain
It was still visible even at a distance of less than 3 metres away
The gray minibus slowly drove through the end of the rainbow
Perhaps the people in the motor vehicles behind us saw...
The end of the rainbow descended to the low side of the mountain
I glanced at its beautiful colours as I drove down the wet road
An unexpected thing happened when we got close to the rainbow
The end of the rainbow was standing right in the middle of the road
And the light of the rainbow shone brightly in the moderate rain
It was still visible even at a distance of less than 3 metres away
The gray minibus slowly drove through the end of the rainbow
Perhaps the people in the motor vehicles behind us saw...
#beauty
#rain
#rainbow #mountains
#rainbow #mountains
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In Time, I Will
You were lying in bed on the ward.
We spoke on the phone after visiting hours.
And we texted each other in the night.
I wanted you to brighten up my heart
And place a rainbow in my grey sky.
You sincerely said, “In time, I will.”
I honestly didn’t expect you to say this,
But your response comforted me.
And I waited for you to keep your word.
Even though you meant the things you said,
You were unable to fulfil your desires.
Perhaps you weren’t thinking straight.
You made a promise that you couldn’t keep, ...
We spoke on the phone after visiting hours.
And we texted each other in the night.
I wanted you to brighten up my heart
And place a rainbow in my grey sky.
You sincerely said, “In time, I will.”
I honestly didn’t expect you to say this,
But your response comforted me.
And I waited for you to keep your word.
Even though you meant the things you said,
You were unable to fulfil your desires.
Perhaps you weren’t thinking straight.
You made a promise that you couldn’t keep, ...
#love
#sky
#rainbow #night
#rainbow #night
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Kaleidoscopia
I want to see it all
the beautiful rainbow
now able to fully flow
twisting all about to blend
Without any clear end
curved colors bent
with their energy spent
in a most geometric way
A melange of night and day
spinning
finally beginning
to solve the Euclidian quest
Discovering what is best
in these scattered gems
ever swirling
unfurling all their vivid beauty
For this art and its true duty
its true raison d'etre
to stimulate the mind
by...
the beautiful rainbow
now able to fully flow
twisting all about to blend
Without any clear end
curved colors bent
with their energy spent
in a most geometric way
A melange of night and day
spinning
finally beginning
to solve the Euclidian quest
Discovering what is best
in these scattered gems
ever swirling
unfurling all their vivid beauty
For this art and its true duty
its true raison d'etre
to stimulate the mind
by...
#rainbow
#nature
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Forever In Prismed
I truly want to be
locked up in the glass
letting the white light pass
then duly separate ...
Unleashing the rainbow
the sweet chromatic flow
of all the colors in their place
R-O-G-Y-B-I-V
For as long as I may live
arcing across the sky
not afraid to ask why
all the world is not blue
With room for any hue
that wishes to confess
wishes now to express
its own inner beauty
Avoiding all this distraction
with some light refraction
surrounded by magic spells ...
locked up in the glass
letting the white light pass
then duly separate ...
Unleashing the rainbow
the sweet chromatic flow
of all the colors in their place
R-O-G-Y-B-I-V
For as long as I may live
arcing across the sky
not afraid to ask why
all the world is not blue
With room for any hue
that wishes to confess
wishes now to express
its own inner beauty
Avoiding all this distraction
with some light refraction
surrounded by magic spells ...
#love
#LGBT
#rainbow #tolerance
#rainbow #tolerance
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Rhetorical Life of Punk and Other
The latter days of Junk St, all the little
punks who threw such vexation
about, are becoming (to) their own
extinction. not to worry
anymore
but for
some
bran'new
badboys
y'can't
even see ...
punks who threw such vexation
about, are becoming (to) their own
extinction. not to worry
anymore
but for
some
bran'new
badboys
y'can't
even see ...
#sex
#death
#rain
#rainbow
#gratitude
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique